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Writefags, link your work in-thread so it can be added to the archive instead of posting for long stories (e.g. rentry.org). This is to prevent them from getting lost between threads. Drawfags, feel free to post original art. People especially appreciate it when you give them meaningful feedback and criticism, so make sure to do so. It is simple, and both writefags and drawfags will love you for it.
>I'm interested in writing, but I don't know where to start!
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>What happened to /tg/'s Weekend Smut Threads?
It's been more than three years. /tg/ used host their weekend smut threads years ago, but some anons were against it, believing smut threads to be not "true" /tg/ or disliking erotic fanfiction in general. As a result, any smut thread was spammed with so many shitposts that the threads stopped all together. More specifically, threads were banned because the shitposters kept ban-evading and spammed false threads all day long. As a result, the mods gave up and set the threads tagged with '/wst/' on autosage. This is not exclusive to /tg/, however. Many other boards like /v/, /tv/, and /co/ had anons shitposting in order to purge writers.
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Stories From Last Thread

The Blade Bids the Bettor
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The Kiss of the Vampire (on an Elf's Pussy)
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Warhammer 40k: Milk and Honey
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Patience and Irmengard story
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>>9167321
You've heard of Khow (Khornate Cow) but have you seen the Sl'ow (Slaaneshite Cow)?
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>>9167331
>Yes. If you're not going to remove your Xenos jewelry then we need to cover it up in Imperial iconography.
Assuming this is a legit Rogue Trader wedding I can only imagine what Yriliet had to have gone through to agree to this.
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>>9167336
Yes, she did such perverted things like... handholding
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To the person asking about my Admech OC, here's a quick rundown
Her name is Nashira-27. She's a Collegia Titanica burnout who joined the Secutarii, then briefly piloted a titan after the princeps and moderati were sniped by a psyker. She fried her mind and body in the process. To the secutarii and skitarii, she's a folk hero, but to the overseers of the Collegia Titanica, she posed too much of a problem to put back into service, so she was given an honorary position as a pencil pusher, and offered up to a passing Rogue Trader at the first opportunity, improving relations between the forge world and the Trader's dynasty.
She doesn't fit in with the decadence of a RT's usual retinue, but she's the helmswoman of his ship, and strikes out on ground expeditions whenever they make port. She was originally just a curiosity for the trader to parade around at parties, but they have a soft spot for one another. She's got a mean streak, but does what she's told.
That's the gist. She's from a lewd RT game, so I can answer more if people care
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OP, I appreciate you making new threads when the old one's reached its bump limit, but please just clear the 'stories from the previous thread' post of older stories, some of these have been in the last 4 OPs.
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>>9167342
>lewd RT game
That must have been something.
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>>9167347
I adding new stories as they are posted here - 4 recent ones. If i clean older, we'll have only two. I can copypaste all that shitstorm what we have in previous, if you really want that deranged story about the guy who been cucked by tyranids
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>>9167315
Variant
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>>9167325
More likely than you think!
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>>9167898
AMAZING! Now all we are lacking is the T'au (Tzeentch Cow) and the Now (Nurgle Cow) and we'll have the entire collection!

We're ignoring the Malow (Malal Cow) because cats aren't cows.
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>>9167331
The blush on the ears is disgustingly cute. I love elfdar ears bros.
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>>9167894
You can post all the xenophilia and mass rape you want, but if someone describes it as what it is, everyone loses their minds. Why is that?
If I am cucked by tyranids, so are all of you, the difference is that you like it.
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>>9167972
Thanks for posting a very accurate depiction of anons in this thread listening to your cuck fantasies
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slaanesh worshippers/daemons with serpentine mutations=hell yeah
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>>9167972
>tau interrogators with their tits out
Clearly they were just disappointed the human turned out to be a chaoscuck not a stars belong to humanity chad.
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>>9167492
It was enjoyable enough. A lot of the usual friction that comes with a lewd game where players often had different ideas of how/when to include their kinks in the session, but I could generally look past that since it just comes with the territory. At times it was mostly myself and the GM actually progressing the plot.
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>>9168029
>Acolyte single-handedly tyring to complete the mission as the rest of the squad keeps on a) fucking, or b) getting fucked.
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>>9168043
pov: you are kyganil

maybe I should commission some art of stern in that dark eldar gladiator bikini armour...
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>>9168046
Any more art of Stern would be welcome. Daemonifuge and Redeemer were the only Warhammer comics I read when I was younger, really tainted how I thought Warhammer fiction was supposed to be written. Until I read Shira Calpurina and it changed again.

Regardless; Stern and Kyganil fucked in the Black Library. I hold this as canon and it up to GW to prove me wrong.
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>>9168046
>sob in dark eldar armour
I should take some time to continue my worldbuilding about sob auxiliary in deldar wych cult
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>>9168067
Have you decided whether their armor follows Owlcats game-canon of Drucchi armor having pain-spikes on the inside?
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>>9168071
Sure they have armour with pain-spikes, these mon-keigh must support their masters by their own masochistic pain
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>>9167319
ACTUAL STORIES FROM LAST THREAD

Professional Service
Human/human, threesome, necromunda
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/82152486/

A Yoke of Scale and Shadow
Human/snek, noncon, Age of Sigmar
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/73467886

A Man's Ruin
Human/snek, noncon, WHFB
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/30256911

Snakecharmer
Human/sslyth, consensual, lots of cum, Rogue Trader
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/27758404
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>>9168081
not much of a fan of dark eldar, but the idea of a sister of battle getting down with some eldar is kind of appealing, and seeing some in craftworld colors and shit would be pretty neat.
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>>9167210

I have a bit of Sslyth action in this one.
Hopefully nobody accuses me of being safe horny.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/43153531/chapters/108454684

Also I'm still chipping away at Downward Mobility occasionally and I'll start posting chapters once I'm done with the story arc I'm working on.
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>>9168097
>Sister Famulous attempting to convert a Craftworld Eldar
Interested in both the setup and the vignettes that would cause.
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>>9168097
Alaitoc have agents everywhere in the galaxy, so it can be exist that agent is not a eldar
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R8 my tau waifus, the femboy is Shas'El Pin'Gas and the grill is Por'La Te'Ta.
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>>9168141
These are lurid beings of giving and receiving pleasure made in the shape of T'au. If these things were living beings before, they are now parodies of hyper-sexualization that exist for the sake of others.

You have done good work in the name of Slaanesh. You will grow another vagina tonight.
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>>9168046
Like this one?
I have to admit that the fully covered topside + completly exposed lower body is hot and makes sense.
>>9168067
>>9168071
>>9168081
>hahha guys, wouldn't it be hot if these holy, most loyal sisters got corrupted and betrayed everything they believed in because Ecclasiarchy just couldn't provide enough hot bondage sex, mright? Us mon-keighs are just that silly and weak, haha
You guys aren't beating the cuck allegations
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>>9168046
You talking about this? I think she looks good in it. Still funny they gave her a helmet with integrated Wych ponytail so that they could dunk on the visiting Archon that their champion was killed by a human.
Definitely don't think this was the only instance of Wyches getting dunked on by humans.
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>>9168167
>>hahha guys, wouldn't it be hot if these holy, most loyal sisters got corrupted and betrayed everything they believed in because Ecclasiarchy just couldn't provide enough hot bondage sex, mright? Us mon-keighs are just that silly and weak, haha
Emm, based?
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>>9168173
I miss the old geedubs.
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>>9168029
>At times it was mostly myself and the GM actually progressing the plot.
God I know that feel. It's like when playing call of cthulhu, and few players always, without flaw asking the APP scores of every npc that gets introduced.
What sort of characters were other players playing?
And was there any particular reason why she's acting so yandereish in >>9166516 ?
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>>9168167
None of those guys I care about what sounds good or bondage related smut.
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>>9168054
>>9168173
Daemonifuge was all over the place story-wise, even if it's not bad. It was carried mostly by great Kev Walker art. Dude was so good that he even made the 'crude 3d models interposed with regular art' not look completly hideous.

And Redeemer was also nuts, but in a good way. Crazy, diabolic evil but still kinda competant fanatic would have much more energy than some brother Dimitrius expy or some 'timid guard conscript' that too often gets used in fics and lewd art
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>>9168167
>>9168173
precisely, I would love to see art of her in that
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>>9168143
Great, hope it's on my forehead to mimic my waifus.
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>>9168333
It will be inside your current vagina so you can get fucked while being fucked.
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>>9167898
BEEG COW MEANS EXCESS MILK!!!

>>9167899
>Now all we are lacking is the T'au (Tzeentch Cow)
...Wait a minute...
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>>9168220
We had a would-be Inquisitor, an admech warrior, and a psyker mystic that was big into daemonology.
And the reason she's yandere in that picture is that it's a sort of 'what-if' scenario, where she (probably correctly) assessed the other party members and the various hangers-on of the RT's retinue as being hazardous, and eliminating them to protect him and more or less keep him captive and operating the dynasty as a regency. As an AdMech, she's very much obsessed with doing things with a brutal efficiency. She'd often make allusions to having these plans similar to Batman having contingencies, but were never enacted upon for obvious reasons. Were it a 1-on-1 game, or just a story, things could have reasonably gone that way.
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Primarch
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>>9168067
>worldbuilding
Is always hot. Tell me more; how that might've came to pass? Were they captured or did they join volunterily? What's their place on the battlefield, and how do they fulfill those tasks? Do they have any duties outside of battle?
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>>9168101
any sequel to the femstodes story planned?
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>>9168260
Redeemer was fun. It's been ages since I read it, but it was set on Necromunda right? One of my favourite settings in 40k.
>>9168395
DEldar are always kino. Always at their best when they're not just "mildly dommy but in a safe way."
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>>9168377
With how popular figure Sanguinius is in imperium, one would think his looks would be more often mimiced among population.
>>9168374
What sort of fetishes they had? The psyker mystic is kind of obvious, but the two others, no.
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>>9168141
I would normally kind of hate this sort of art, but it does oddly fit Tau. A little stout and pudgy, yet muscular. I prefer them to be more leg-focused than hips-focused, but the oddly cute alieness is well executed.
What caste do they belong to? The body dimophism of that isn't often played with as much as I would like.
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>>9168395
This is the story of wounded wych Maeldrazor from Cult of the Seventh Woe and a novitiate hospitaller (who will become Laeckhairiya) from Order of the Bloody Rose who has been raped by him in the midst of a pile of daemonic and dark eldar corpses to save his withered soul, about their sadistic authority and masochistic submission, which flared up again some time later when they met each other as a canoness and a succubus, It will be longpost shit
>a novitiate thanks to her fanaticism and repentance (for her failure that hidden from others) rises throught sister superior and palatine to canoness preceptor, but her forsed obession to torment and flagellation leads to an increase of repentias and penitent engines in addition to the already large number of sisters dominions and seraphims
>in one day wych who become a extravagant succubus found that canoness and make her a offer - she would become his concubine in exchange of her order
>succumbing to promises and sweetened by a passionate night, she began to introduce more inhuman flagellation for her subordinates - some of sister obediently take this torments, some of them suspected the canoness in heresy
>when the day of betrayment came, instead of the faithful sororitas' and their brute strength, dark eldars were met with lumps of pain, yearning to be opened and experience new dimensions of pain. Only a few who retained their sanity and loyalty attempted to fight near the shrine of the living saint, but Laeckhairiya, Maeldrazor, and the haemonculi corrupted the shrine, turning the place of the saint's resurrection into a cage for a future special pain engine
>when eldars and their mon-keigh toys returned to the dark city, haemonculi proposed to using experimental crystals that convert sororitas' psychic abilities and suffering into pain energy that could be consumed by nearby deldars and sororitas themselves by improving their combat skills
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>>9169074
>>9168395

>some of Maeldrazor's Syrens were dissatisfied with the number of whore-mon-keigh allowed to serve in the wych cult, and one of them attempted to kill Laeckhairiya. In a hard fight Laeckhairiya cut off syren's both her legs and arms and then cruely tortured with a eviscerator. Then she cut off syren's ears and tore her womb, and with these "trinkets" she offered to Maeldrazor her services as a new syren

And a little more bits to your question
>in an effort to find new faith and meaning in life, sororitas began to worship Khaine as a god and Vect as his messiah in the Dark City
>for first times, they were used as emotional support mon-keigh, but after proving themselves, girls were entrusted with their own combat missions during raids, mainly terrorizing the target population
>however, if dark eldar intrude into the Eye of Terror (Maeldrazor gained much profits carrying out this operations in Vect's interests), sororitas self-flagellation and torture intensify, so that deldars do not feel Slaanesh's influence on their souls
>Laeckhairiya and her chosens were part of the cult's arena performances. Although they were more clumsy than eldars, sight of a sororitas murderesses with torn flesh and specifically torment devices, got their own audience well enough to allow Maeldrazor to approve Laeckhairiya's first own successful performance
>Some sobs and their masochistic desires proved so attractive to exotic-seeking deldar patrons that they allowed girls to enhance their appearance to suit patron's needs
>They can often be found in the cult's brothels and drugs dens, in various price ranges, including Laeckhairiya, who can be found pleasing wealthy patrons. One of them was a Biel-tan autarch, who gifted her his eldar-ish eviscerator as a gesture for pleasfully nights

As i said, i need much more time to fit this thing up. also want to introduce the living saint pain engine
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>>9169074
source for that pic?
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>>9169092
Its my OC's. Art by https://x.com/norattart
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>>9169156
Sexy hair.
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>>9169074
>Sister gets rapesexed by this twink fuck because she was young and stupid and thought xenos had souls
>Waltzes through ecclesiarchial chain of command, into a position of authority, an organisation notorious of its lack of suspicion and tolerance on fallen members
(ok, maybe she channeled her rage from losing eldar fuckboy dick into hating aliens or something)
>Serves her entire order on silver platter to an enemy of humanity because decades-old memory of eldar dick is just that good
>Good enough to shove a reincarnating saint to their hands too because why not?
(I mean, it could be useful as anti-chaos weapon, to be honest, but otherwise that just seems like bragging rights)
>Adapts a completly new name & faith and wears fucking ear extensions. Even comes up with whole new heraldy to show her old allegiances in grasp of the enemy
(doesn't dressing as a complete eldarboo kind of diminish how hurtful an assault from traitorous sisters would be, though?)
>And when she's not too busy killing her fellow humans, she's all eager to slut it up with even non-edgy eldar - and propably whatever else hangs around comorragh.
>She's also strong enough to fight and kill wyches - which means her mass-scale betrayal was entirely founded on her preference on non-human men
Thanks, I already hate her with burning passion. Good job.
I mean, this is all something that deldar would totally do, if they were able. Using traitor sisters as cannon fodder is a devastating ability to have, especially against imperial defenders.

At least you had the composure to see that there's no way that the entire order would have surrendered wholly just because a canoness' repressed fetish is cucking the entire human race. Any chance that any of them are still be around, fighting the good fight?
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A canonical depiction of Fulgrim's left nipple
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>>9169373
I can see his ankle what a fucking slut.
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>>9169074
>>9169076
Feels like it would need it more work to go from "Leal worshippers of the Emperor" to "Leal worshippers of Khaine".
The entire pipeline, the journey, is what's going to grab people. What would have to happen and how would the SOBs rationalize it to have them convert. And how they'd continue recruiting afterwards.

The excess Penance Engines being turned into Pain-ance Engines is objectively good though.
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MILFy Commissar versus a Water Caste diplomat, both oiled up and naked, who's winning the twerkoff to ensure the loyalty of a troop of guardsmen - or to convert them to Gue'la auxiliaries?
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>>9169299
Glad than you
>hate her with burning passion
that's exactly the kind of treatment what she deserved. Betraying the Emperor over theological and governmental questions is one thing. Betraying your own kind over your own perversions and xenos cock is far worse
>At least you had the composure to see that there's no way that the entire order would have surrendered wholly just because a canoness' repressed fetish is cucking the entire human race
Fair point. Insta-losing to cock its a tyranid/genestealer thing, dark eldar raping their victims for process itself not for result
>Any chance that any of them are still be around, fighting the good fight?
You may not love it, but no one returns from Commorragh the same as they entered it. Some of SoBs joyfully surrendered to their new overlords, adopted their lifestyle and offered themselves as lovers and sex toys. Some found themselves useful in the wych cult's murderous practices. Some were broken and subjugated to the Canoness's desires and her vision. Those who remained unbroken even after humiliation tried to resist, and for that they were turned into pain engines and hybridated with khymerae. A few managed to escape to the Commorragh, to their possible worse or better fate. And perhaps a dozen still harbor a false hope of salvation, barely suspecting that quick death is the best fate what Imperium will give them
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>>9169633
>Feels like it would need it more work to go from "Leal worshippers of the Emperor" to "Leal worshippers of Khaine"
GeeDubs already did it for me - a bloodthirsty wych cult who are focused on cruel murdering or agony, and name was referred to one of Khaine's myth. Also they in official lore
>invaded World Eaters world and fought that hard that Khorne revived all of them and wyches allied with khornates to invade some Imperial shithole
>each 17 years they have a competition with harlequins in murdering, which ends in fights to the death between succubus and troupe master
So its no hard to lure the devastated and faithlossed fanatics into something that will fill the void in their wounded soul. This is how cults irl actually work: they convert those who have been abandoned to their faith, promising them something that will make them useful again.
Also this isn't just a question of reconversion, but also a matter of safety due to the Commoragh's only remained law about restricting psychic abilities. And it's better to direct the nuns' prays to someone who are close to their masters. Even if mad orange elf is bad, he's still better and fairer than others, at least to his followers, from the craftworlds to the backward exodites worlds
>The excess Penance Engines being turned into Pain-ance Engines is objectively good though.
In 10th ed the Everspiral coven, who are specified on pain engines, are named as close allies to the Cult of the Seventh Woe, so they now have enough willingly meat-things for their experiments
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>>9168711
yeah, tentatively.

basically Aerie took ownership of the femstodes to pay Kyrabran's hospital bill, but calls him back to train the toadie up so she can be turned out as a prostitute.

only thing that I really have clear is the start
>goes in to the room where they're keeping the toadie
>just suspended in mid air in a sensory deprivation field
>Waith how long has she been there?"
>"I dunno, since I bought her I guess. how long ago was that?"
>"She's been concious this entire time?"
>"Well, I mean, if you can really call whatever spark of life those things have 'Concious,' then yes."
>"oh no, that's hilarious."

then they shut off the sensory deprivation field and she drops to the floor and immediately starts screaming and sobbing.

haven't really decided what is going to happen after that.

there is also maybe going to be a conversation at the start where Lelith Hesperax is trying to convince Aerie to sell the toadie to her for an arena fight, and Aerie doesn't want to because she can make more money over time renting femstode hole than she can in a single sale, even to Lelith Hesperax.

She eventually convinces Lelith to leave her alone by pointing out that the match will have a lot more hype surrounding it once everyone knows there's a captive custodian in commorragh, (and secretly hoping that she can keep Lelith from pressing the issue until she eventually fixates on different target.)
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>>9169022
The femboy is shas, so that means fire caste, the female is por, so that means earth caste
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>>9169811
>You may not love it, but no one returns from Commorragh the same as they entered it.
True statement. Kind of hate how the RT crpg gave the place (and deldar as whole) aura loss. Or whatever people call it these days.
I was more referring to a chance that some might've avoided being abducted in first place... but it's kind of silly to think a sister would run or hide from a honourable last stand

>and hybridated with khymerae
That sounds just extra grotesque... considering khymerae are kind of semi-daemonic beasts from daemon worlds. And how exactly? Are the sisters just grafted with khymarae DNA to give them catgirl traits (flayed, sinewy lion-size cats, but still) or simply grafted (extra) animal limbs? Or simply put in charge of making such hybrids in "conventional" way? All equally
>barely suspecting that quick death is the best fate what Imperium will give them
Not necessarily. Any exit or entrance from webway would lie far from imperial control... and Sisters are bound to know what are the limits of aberrance. As long she can lie to herself, everything can be explained. Wandering repentia sisters aren't that uncommon among pilgrims in starways (the frothing berserkers are just a subset) and hardly anyone would question why such warrior would carry signs of torture. Even traits of 'abhumanity' could be passed on as reason for that pilgrimage in first place. It's all depending on dependings, but what world or ship struggling under deldar attention would turn down an able blade who knows her enemy well?

>>9169852
All and all I have to salute you on the deeper dive into lore. Hard to believe that the sigil itself just has a nice spot for a round symbol of another faction, but here we are.
Do you have anything else about the dude himself? We know what's going on her head quite well, but what about Maeldrazor? Why is he putting up with all these mon-keigh?
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>>9169299
You ever considered namefagging as "CuckedAnon"? It'd help eliminate that half-second lag between reading your posts and realizing this man has been cucked so many times IRL he has been mindbroken into seeing cuckshit everywhere.
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>>9169988
Not really. I post here because I enjoy the setting (or at least what it was), and enjoy erotic worldbuilding as a whole. 40k overall is rather interesting setting that is rarely utilized to fullest potential. At least when it comes to erotic fanworks.
The fact that I can identify and call out cucked narratives doesn't mean I enjoy them, or consider myself cucked.

Take this deldar worldbuilding for an example. It's literally nothing but fetishisation of human inferiority. A woman betraying literally everything because she prefers aliens sexually to her entire species. No, there is no single character that is actually cucked, but the wider context betrays it all.
>Imagine being one of the non-sister staff of their original monastery watching as the warriors you have served and looked up for your whole life collapse into needy sluts that give you up for capture just to fulfill their masochistic desires
>Imagine being one of the thousands of human captives that deldar take into comorragh all the time, and seeing holy sisters bouncing on cocks of your captors, selling themselves on their orders, propably torturing you directly as well, etc.
>Or seeing them on arena, serving as sideshow for the glee of their masters
>Or being just one of countless civilians watching as they kill and terrorize, just to help their masters take you as a torture-slave
>All this amplified by the fact how imperium plays up the idea of sisters being peak of piety and loyalty

I can't help but to be curious about what motivates such desire for betrayal, and that drives me to giving them some yarn from time to time.
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>>9169660
I'd have to say it's water caste.
>Firstly, Schola progenium upbringing and military service prioritizes atheltic excellence, which means even a milfy commissar would have an athletic and muscular ass
(not that exceptions might exist... see pic related)
>A water caste diplomat on the other hand might even have surgical alterations to further improve her performance
>Secondly, if the contest is indeed naked, a commissar will naturally lose the advantage of her uniform, which is big part of her authority - and doing something like twerking would only damage her authority further
>A water caste diplomat on the other hand is a filthy xenos. She loses no respect for performing a demeaning, naked erotic dance. Depending how pent-up the guardsmen are, it might even be best way to introduce herself to them
>Thirdly, the hooves and powerful legs of a tau would give her an advantage when it comes to this style of dance
Conclusion; the water caste diplomat wins. However, it's unlikely she could convert whole troop entirely, not without other leverage than her sex appeal - the imperial disdain for alien is too entrenched. If she can avoid being executed on spot by the commissar (who are notoriously sore losers), she will most likely be captured, and made into regimental slave.
It's still acceptable outcome from perspective of greater good. As a fixture of everyday life, she can still interact with potential future allies. Or at least convince them to see her species as something else than a target (of lasgun at least...)
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>>9169660
Best result is Commissar femdom the water caste and the troops run a train on her or both of them.
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>I'm not obssessed with being cucked
>I'm obsessed with cucks
>I expose myself to cuck-content regularly
>I'm not cuck coping
t. The words of a self-admitted cuckold
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>>9169920
Interesting; can we have previews on what this 'training' entails?
Any potential final buyers?
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>>9170124
Oh she's not getting sold, only rented out
Aerie is all about maintaining passive income streams whenever possible.

[spoiler]if i ever write that story to it's logical conclusion the eventual buyer would be Jaghati Khan

He would immediately marry her, not because JK has any sort of sexual predilections but because it would be a legal framework to prevent the Custodes from taking her back (She's already basically been stripped of her hypnoconditioning, they'd probably kill her or at least destroy her, and he wants the big muscle lady who can smash things with a halberd, so he can point her at things to smash (nonsexually))

though whether she was actually sold, or whether he was like, "I want that, give it to me," is an open question

Catalina would definitely force her daughter to do whatever a Son of the God Emperor tells her to do. Or, at least, she'd tell her to do this one thing in particular


[/spoiler]
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>>9170124
oh and as for the training, I'm of several minds
there's standard smut
there's also the body horror angle where she's essentially paralyzed from the neck down and there is a second CNS controlling her body, she can feel everything that is being done to her but can't move or even speak normally since her vocal cords and breathing aren't under her control.
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>>9170194
What is our dear old Warhawk up to, I wonder?
A ten-thousand year vacation in the Dark City? Free agent? Playing for the other team?
Also, I do recall that the Custardes are physically unable to go against Big E's will; if the boarding scene in The End And The Death were any indication
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>>9170202
my headcanon is that since he and Malys are both playthngs of Cegorach, they occasionally have to collaborate with one another, which is how he finds out Malys' body double owns a Custodes

As for the hypnoconditioning, GeeDubs likes to go with superlatives and absolutes but for my purposes the Dark Eldar are really just that good at torturing people, and they break the conditioning.

OTOH the Emperor might just be like, "oh well, whatever, she can sell hole for a few centuries. this doesn't interfere with my plans. actually, this is fine."

which is actually consistent with Catalina's interpretation of the Divine Imperative.
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>>9170279
Sounds like what's going on with Ephrael Stern and that one Inquisitor who got into the Black Library
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>>9170103
Maybe you are right, I should propably write about what I actually like. It could be healthier.
It's shame that most OC seems to be overtly concerned with themes of betrayal.
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>>9168192
This makes me wonder if Deldar would troll planetary online-forums.
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>>9170062
Ok, but what if she had prep time?
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>>9170559
Half the shitposts on the tau extranet is just them posting with the biosignatures of their captives. Dark eldar liveleak must go hard.
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>>9170559
>dark mechanicus hacked local political imageboard
>half of all posts are from kabal of the black heart HQ
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>>9170559
The posion tongue likes to mislead where the attack will come from and the broken sigil always do terror campaigns. So one day the entire board could just be flooded with torture porn and the next normal.
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>>9170945
If it's a 40k Imperium message board, flooding it with torture porn would be like pissing in an ocean of piss.

But can you imagine how bad the jannies would be in 40k internet? And i don't mean the custodes (unless.. )
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>>9171011
Officio assasorium has literal killer jannies. They can decimate entire planets as long as noosphere is available
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Apologies for the lack of contributions these past few months, I've been busy with other projects. I did mange to finish an old drawing I started over a year ago in case anybody is interested. I'll see if I can finish some more of the eldar ideas I've been putting on hold.
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>>9171174
1) Love her arms and how they look both sinewy and obviously grafted. You'd never be able to look at them and think they were a natural feature of her body.
2) Love girls that slink around on their tails
3) Why is she carrying a cock in a jar?
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>>9171174
Glad to see you're alive Lewd! Thats a big fucking dark eldar piece. Very nice. I look forward to your future works as always.

ps for a second I thought all the extra arms made a swastika which made me laugh
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>>9171174
Glad you are back
>I'll see if I can finish some more of the eldar ideas I've been putting on hold
Something with these freaks, r-right?
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Had an idea (and am kind of hoping someone will take it up as an art or writing suggestion).

Dark Eldar takes a squad of sister of battle captive and spends the first part of the story breaking them into slaves using pleasure and pain.

The second part of the story would have the dark eldar be convinced to abandon the commorite life style and join the corsairs or ynnari, where he then takes his slaves with him, though as time passes, they have an opportunity to undo their previous conditioning and form a considerably more wholesome relationship with their master
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>>9171174
The lack of female haemonculus and biophagus model continues to be a crime that GW commits against me specifically.
Incredible art.
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>>9169961
>And how exactly?
Between
>simply grafted (extra) animal limbs
and
>simply put in charge of making such hybrids in "conventional" way
>The beastmasters found repentia superiors' methods and cruel treatment to repentias interesting and offered their services in exchange for freedom of action with repentias and nuns who has been demoted for their betrayment
>Beastmasters began implanting dorsal claws and tentacles into repentias, flaying their skin, and growing beasts fangs. Those whose bodies rejected new organs and limbs were sent to khymerae cages to satisfy its needs
>Repentia superiors themselves were trained by beastmasters to tame newborn aggressive beasts and other pets what they have in cult's "zoo"

>Do you have anything else about the dude himself? Why is he putting up with all these mon-keigh?
>Maeldrazor is trueborn son of succubus and her farseer slave from Iybraesil, who has been ambushed and in an attempt to save his own life, send into succubus' mind a dream-promise that their child would rise her cult in the Dark City. Farseer's promises seduced Alzairagh, and she took him as her concubine
>During her pregnancy, she repeatedly moving outside Commorragh with her breeder, so that he could predict future attacks by her enemies in moment of her weakness
>Unfortunately for Alzairagh, child was born male, and even more unfortunate, she was forced to let the child's father live, as only he could suppress Maeldrazor's psychic abilities long enough that mother find a haemonculus who did necessary operations with his brains
>Maeldrazor doesn't know what happened with his father, but at least he cant find farseer's skull, skin, or soulstone in mother's trophy room or any other places
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New deveploments on the human boy x eldar lady MSpaint drawing front
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>>9171174
Do you have a twitter or something?
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>>9171457
>As he grew older, he finally became fit for the sole purpose for which most men are kept in wych cults - satisfying gladiatix's needs. However, thanks to his charm and unusual for Commorragh composure, what Maeldrazor inherited from his father, he became one of favorite and a desirable partner in their beds
>Maeldrazor compensated lack of his grace on the arenas with the cruelty instilled in him from childhood by his mother, who paid particular attention to it, as Alzairagh did not want to be disgraced by having a son as her heir
>One day,when cult's raid on an Imperial world was on the verge of failure due to a unsudden Chaos invasion, instead of escaping, Maeldrazor led his squad into the sewers,where he tried to find source of chaos corruption and his own glory. Instead, Maeldrazor was ambushed by Slaaneshi daemons and Herald of Slaanesh
>After a hard-fought battle, Maeldrazor finally murdered the exalted demoness, but he would not have emerged alive from that shithole if a lost novitiate hadn't found him barely crawling and moaning. But combat drugs still keeped living corpse alive, and helpless young Hospitaller had no chance of resistance.
>He spent hours molesting her, tormenting her flesh, and with each scream, Maeldrazor's withered body was restored, and in novitiate's tear-stained eyes monster began to acquire innatural beauty that her body and soul began to move toward her tormentor
>This disgusted xenos so much that he tortured novitiate even more intensely,simultaneously pumping her with any drugs what he scrounged from his kin's corpses, but masochistic whore held out long enough to satisfy him and as revard she gained the hottest kiss she ever had. Then Maeldrazor sentimentally took pity on novitiate and injected her a painkiller, leaving the whip before her as a reminding of their night
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>>9171497
>After this, Maeldrazor cut off herald's head he had killed and triumphantly carried trophy to Alzairagh, fibbing a little about the price of that murder and where are the rest
>Rumors of a male wych who had slain such a high-ranking daemon began to spread throughout the Commorraggh, and Alzairagh happily began to monetize it, promoting her son to as one of her Syren and exhibiting Maeldrazor on the arena for his own performances, as well as selling him as a manwhore and walking dildo to the wealthy and authoritous women of Commorragh and other daughters of the disparate eldar kind.However, Alzairagh herself was not averse to satisfying her lust with her son, both in private and in incestuous blood orgies on arenas
>Owning of such an asset allowed Alzairagh to open up new opportunities and gain resources she could not have obtained alone, allowing her cult and her authority in Commorragh to grow and raise
>But one day, Alzairagh's ambitions led her to attempt to challenge prima succubus for leading entire Cult of the Seventh Woe, which could bring Vect's and Lady Malys' wrath against her
>At the moment when Alzairagh was about to challenge prima succubus to a duel right before Vect's eyes, Maeldrazor had no choice but to cut off her head and seize power in his part of cult. He also had to pay Vect a compensation, as entire rebellion against his asset had been compromised by him right before
>As a succubus, Maeldrazor focused his arena performances on being as provocative as possible. He commanded many more male wyches than usual succubus in any cults, which undoubtedly demeaned other wych cults, because being a wych it was more feminine deal in deldar society. Maeldrazor also trained small squads of such xenos as Sslyths, whose matriarch became one of his bloodbride
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>>9171556
>When Maeldrazor heard about unusually sadomasochistic sororitas, he thought that if he could gain atleast a troop of such animals within his cult, he would be greatly successful
>So, he found that world and when in one deep night he stealthily intrude into sisters' shrine, and within some modest hall he saw a self-flagellating woman what he had abandoned among the corpses times ago
>Canoness noticed him too, but instead of taking revenge for her humiliation, she placed a whip into his hands and knelt, begging him to repeat everything he had done to her. He was shocked, but accepted her intimate invitation
>In that night, the idea of subjugating the entire sororitas order and bringing them into his cult was born in Maeldrazor's mind. An entire order of fanatical and broken mon-keigh, who would fall before him without a single shot and adopt everything he wanted, would cause a great stir in Commorragh and make him a legend
>After several similar meetings, Maeldrazor met his favorite mon-keigh again in the shrine cellars and offered her the chance to become his consort - an equal to him and any deldar in his cult - if she did everything she could to seduce sororitas. And she did this with his support and assistance of the haemonculi coven who had joined him. When that day came, Maeldrazor took his prize and canoness gained her true name
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>>9170478
Now that's a character I haven't seen in a long time
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>>9171600
so, are these sob all his slaves who he lends out to others?
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>>9171661
Such is the fate of slaves to be sold or used
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>>9171600
the the slave sisters have a name or something? Like, The Cult of Flaying Thorns? Would be cool to see them in force capturing other Sisters of battle to 'induct' into their ranks
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>>9171711
As i said above, my worldbuilding is still a wip. For now they are part of the Cult of the Seventh Woe as servants with unique heraldry. Maybe I'll take some time to give them their own regiment name, but they are still a part of the cult
>Would be cool to see them in force capturing other Sisters of battle to 'induct' into their ranks
They are definitely skilled in this
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>>9171600
That's an extensive background for sure.
Still leaves few questions:
>How exactly did a traumatized and raped novitate become a canoness? That's not a minor position, and requires not only absolute loyalty, but actual achievement
>If the process that started after canoness and Maeldrazor's meeting was longer and gradual, why didn't anyone notice anything? You mentioned that the order became suspect of heresy, so they should have been under loser scrutiny too... doubly so if they were in charge of a holy site related to living saints
>No seriously, how did no one notice haemonoculi doing their work over longer time period? Monasteries - let alone sited places - are not staffed by sororitas alone - even with servitors, there are hundreds of ecclessiarchal staff, even more visiting pilgrims and possibly even fraternal militia.
>What does the order that the sisters were part of think about their betrayal? Do they think they merely disappeared, wiped out by unknown attacker - or are they taking active measures about the thing? If deldar are flaunting their betrayal, it should definitely enrage ecclesiarchy
>>9171639
I have mostly forgotten about Mr-Culexus' in-depth character lore, desu. I do recall it was really good work.
And I like mordians. Tidally locked planets are cool (on other side at least)
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This is canon, desu
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>>9171037
Damn, sauce?
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>>9171928
Nvm I found it
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>>9171932
Mind sharing it? I don't have it myself.
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>>9172046
Artist is Mustard Gollum. There's no followup, but I'm totally tempted to make one myself. We need more non-bara 40gay
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>>9171174
i like this
good to see you, lewd
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>>9171426
so, anyway
https://archiveofourown.org/works/36086776/chapters/89961232
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>>9171266
>>9171268
Proper breast size for a sororitas.
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>>9171174
Would bang.
Also the design looks very cool over all.
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>>9171415
Kayleth and Ronahn both being tsundere doofuses for each other is definitely still on the menu. But first I should really finish this Michael Turner style Yvraine pinup I've been sitting on for over two years.
>>9171493
I don't have any socials but the OP usually is kind enough to post the archive. >>9167317
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They come in peace.
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>>9172618
>Kayleth and Ronahn both being tsundere doofuses for each other is definitely still on the menu
Good, good
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>>9171845
>How exactly did a traumatized and raped novitate become a canoness? That's not a minor position, and requires not only absolute loyalty, but actual achievement
She was lucky that sisters militant squad found the corpses of novitiate's squad who had been murdered by xenos or daemons, before they found her, and Sister Superior considered her survival in the bloodbath as Emperor’s blessing. Otherwise, she would have been executed. Her rise to canoness was aided by her fanaticism, hatred and pain-induced rage, which are welcome traits in the Order of the Bloody Rose
>If the process that started after canoness and Maeldrazor's meeting was longer and gradual, why didn't anyone notice anything?
Look at picrel, would you say that that beautiful and avesome girls, loyal servants of the God-Emperor are heretics? No one give a fuck if they will have a little more spikes inside and outside their bodies
>You mentioned that the order became suspect of heresy, so they should have been under loser scrutiny too... doubly so if they were in charge of a holy site related to living saints
Not entire order, but canoness herself at first. She justified her sadistic and bloody practices by citing the spread of heresy across nearby planetary systems and a desire to repent for the apostates’ sins before the God-Emperor. And canoness successfully fought against heretics and xenos raiders (whose coordinates and attack times had been leaked to her by Maeldrazor) during these period. Her disclosure as a heretic and a xenophile was hampered by the fact that rumours were also being fanned by local cardinal, whom canoness had previously exposed for financial corruption, and by conflicts that arose between them over the ownership of untouched territories on their shrine world. Reports from him and several other palatines were considered by the sector’s Ecclesiarchy as a elements of authority struggle and were dismissed as insignificant
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>>9172718
>No seriously, how did no one notice haemonoculi doing their work over longer time period? Monasteries - let alone sited places - are not staffed by sororitas alone - even with servitors, there are hundreds of ecclessiarchal staff, even more visiting pilgrims and possibly even fraternal militia.
Exactly. No one would notice a dozen tall, pale mutants-flagellants among the millions of pilgrims in a world where the Emperor's saint daughters widely practice self-flagellation
And the haemonculi themselves played their technical role, handing over parts of the Cage to canoness, which she was to install inside the monastery. The last person anyone would suspect is monastery's preceptor, who arranging "imperial sacred relics" in living saint's shrine. They also mixed incense with their poisons so that the pain, what sororitas' experienced during self-flagellation would be addictive and pleasurabl.
>What does the order that the sisters were part of think about their betrayal? Do they think they merely disappeared, wiped out by unknown attacker - or are they taking active measures about the thing? If deldar are flaunting their betrayal, it should definitely enrage ecclesiarchy
There's a "Heart and Soul" blslop story where sister of battle fights against heretics, and heretic leader revealed herself as traitoris sister of battle. Heretic leader's personality literally was been replaced by another sororitas who had taken the traitor's name, because sororitas can't be heretics, and that heretic leader try to kill her double
So, Laeckhairiya's entire order was stricken from all existing lists, but several other orders, by the Canoness Superior's decree, are still trying to find and burn these heretics, except only one - they want to catch Laeckhairiya alive. Shrine world has also been sentenced to Exterminatus, but Maeldrazor ensures that his bloodbride's domain remains untouched
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>>9172731
Both need bigger breasts
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>>9172116
>but I'm totally tempted to make one myself.
You should definetly do it, there's way too much space marine stuff, and I'm kind of tired of how tau have been drawn as femboys as of late.
An arrogant, aggressive but secretly insecure inquisitor twink getting dicked down by a composed and calm tau with huge dick could be interesting
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>>9172217
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/36086776/chapters/89961232
close, thanks anon.
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>>9172723
Ah yes, the "not funny, didn't happen" treatment. That will certainly make life harder for any straggler I detailed in >>9169961
>they want to catch Laeckhairiya alive
For what purpose, may I implore? Something harsher than mere stern scolding I'd imagine.
>Maeldrazor ensures that his bloodbride's domain remains untouched
So she still governs her desmen in realspace? What sort of place it is now, then - or is it just an empty site of sentimental value?

>>9172718
>Look at picrel, would you say that that beautiful and avesome girls, loyal servants of the God-Emperor are heretics?
That's a good point.
And damn, if lore-accurate repentias are hot. It's shame that most erotic art turns them into pin-up models. It's common with all sisters but even more appearent with repentias
The dimensions of being such pain-striken, flagellating berserker and psychological changes caused are rather interesting. I had thought about exploring it in fic form, detailing a ritual that would be awarded to repentias that fulfilled their oath of penitency, and allow them to return to regular service. It's kind of hack-eyed femdom, borne of many ideas and this post is already too long. Might detail it if people are interested.
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>>9172731
>Post-Cumrag the RT decides that Yrilet needs to be punished.
Both because she was a naughty bitch and also so that others don't take her punishment into her own hands
>But when it was told that her punishment was to have the skin lashed from her back, she made the classic mistake of agreeing too quickly.
So her punishment was handed over to Kibella to orchestrate. Leaving the Eldar's penance in her capable and experienced hands. Don't know why she decided she needed to be strung up along her xenos, but I don't want to countermand her when I gave her such wide latitude.
Don't know whether Yriliet will survive all 7 days of whatever else Kib's has in store for her.
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>>9172718
can you tell us more about what happened to the living saint?
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>>9172618
Dang thats a pretty sexy Yvraine
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>>9172809
She deserves it, desu
>Waah waah I was made to feel bad!
The knife-ear better hope Jae and Paqal don't join in. The latter was literally dismantled while Jae got her lungs ripped out and replaced tumourous lumps that could barely absorb oxygen.
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>>9172731
The series of images of Kibbles that isn't fit to be posted here is probably my favourite.
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>>9169019
They were all bottoms of some variety, and somewhat passive ones at that. The Warrior was into degradation and humiliation, which meant that pretty much everywhere we went there had to be an uncharacteristically mean person that Nashira had to ignore because she's a stalwart AdMech supremacist who wouldn't otherwise stand for one of her sisters of the cog being treated that way. But obviously I didn't want to ruin someone's good time, so I'd just advance the plot. They'd sometimes complain about me having the 'spotlight' though which was funny because all I was doing was following the plot and naturally getting more character progression because of it.
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>I hate saurus. I hate them. I hate their lizard faces. I hate their clubs. I hate their sticks. I hate when the sticks are next to the clubs and I hate when the clubs are next to the sticks. I hate that Kroq-gar pulls 2280 of them out of his scaly asshole and then descends on me like a Vogon at a poetry convention.
>I hate the Saurus auto-resolve meter. I hate it because it lies to me. It says I have a 50-50 chance of victory. This is patently false, because I have twenty units of skeletons who are held together with prit stik and prayer. I do not have twenty units of eight foot tall geckos constructed out of pectoral muscles and galvanised coffin nails.
>I hate that they shout bok at me. Bok is the Bristol Orienteering Klub, which is completely irrelevant to a battle in Lustria and should not be shouted repeatedly while eating a rank of tier one infantry like buffalo wings.
>I hate their morale. I hate that surrounding them simply prompts one of them to pull out a US general's helmet so he can make a speech about 'now we can attack in any direction'. I hate that their reaction to a devastating rear attack is to become somewhat peeved. I have looked a Saurus in his smug scaly face as an encirclement that would shatter any other early game infantry closed in.
>He went from :I to >:I , killed an extra two hundred skeletons because I had foolishly allowed all four sides of the Saurus unit to fight at once and then swallowed my Liche Priest like a slim jim.
>I hate that Kroq Gar is friends with the Rare Pepe next door, who also declares war once I've shot Kroq Gar unconscious for the tenth time. He also has Saurus only these ones are blue. Somehow this is worse.
>I hate that there are another ten Lizard factions. I hate that they will be in end game by the time I reach them. I hate that while I was writing this Kroq Gar picked up Khalida and smoked her like a cigar.
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>>9172839
I've always enjoyed Turner's art style but it's probably beyond my capabilities. But I eventually always gravitate back to my knock-off Shindol style for Yvraine.
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Professional Service

Kalli Coquette is an Escher with a problem. Her beloved plasma gun, Painted Harlot, has broken down, and she hasn't got enough cred to cover the cost of repairs. Luckily for her, her contacts among the Van Saar are more than willing to accept alternate methods of payment.

A sequel of sorts to Queens Don't Quit.

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necromunda - FreeformThreesome - F/M/MOral SexAnal SexVaginal SexConsensual SexTeachingPraise KinkCasual SexSex for FavorsCreampieFacialsBukkakeComeplayDouble PenetrationSweatStanding SexChokingImplied/Referenced IncestMissionary PositionCowgirl PositionBlow JobsCunnilingusPiercings
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>>9173625
Dumb mistake did not post the link
https://archiveofourown.gay/works/82152486/chapters/216201236#workskin
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>>9173626
>.gay
errr
>https://www.reddit.com/r/AO3/comments/1fd7xjw/archiveofourowngay/
Oh shit, its real?
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>>9173589
I really love the couple Turner style Machas you've done before, the ones with the very intricate gloves. I believe in you.
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>>9173589
I agree with the other guy, your turner style Macha is one of my favorites
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>>9172618
Really nice style, great to see more work from you. I really like the eyes and lips on Yvraine here, very sexy.
I know it isn't everyone's cup of tea, but would be nice to see you draw some eldar girls with some really huge breasts, like 3x size of their head.
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>>9173187
I'm glad to hear! Hopefully I'll get to draw her some more
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>>9172662
>Runic defense inscribed onto ovum preventing insemination
For what reason?
Is this the reason eldar are dying species?
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>>9173187
Which one is that?
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>>9174065
Knowing BlindWildCat it's propably guro
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>>9174095
Based. I'll have to look for that.
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>>9172801
>For what purpose, may I implore?
They have too many questions before sending her to custard's super gulag. Custodes will definitely be able to decide on Laeckhairiya's punishment. Atleast canoness superior had heard rumors from abbess while they were both on Terra about special punishment for mega heretics
>So she still governs her desmen in realspace? What sort of place it is now, then - or is it just an empty site of sentimental value?
More as a sentimental memento, adorned with symbols and monuments of their shared victory. Sometimes a nostalgic sexual decoration, sometimes a hunting ground with released prey
>The dimensions of being such pain-striken, flagellating berserker and psychological changes caused are rather interesting. I had thought about exploring it in fic form
Would be good to see it
>>9172822
wip currently, but
>Saint Telaria got caught in deldar Cage, when loyalist trying to summon her. Cage was bound her soul and body to reality
>Laeckhairiya brought her xenos lover and her chosens to engage in a bloody orgy before the eyes of a living saint, shouting blasphemies and showing the Emperor him(it?)self what they had abandoned humanity for
>Telaria's tortuge begun only when haemonculi bring her in their hellpit
>they murdered and resurrected her endlessly to discover her limits and weaknesses, but her soul still remained pure and her existance become "problematic" to haemonculi coven
>when they know everything about Telaria's nature, they realised that she and her worshippers have psychic bonds that could be still active even after their betrayment, and if they want to break her, they must use Laeckhairiya and her "flock"
>meanwhile, Maeldrazor and Laeckhairiya are trying to instill a new faith into their sororitas. Despite their relative success, incubi from some nearest shrine only laugh at these mon'keigh larpers, but Khaine's statues in the incubi's shrine begun to glow a little brighter
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>>9174178
>haemonculi arrive at Maeldrazor's arena and after blackmailing him with some kind of increased and uncontrolled psychic activity around the cult's arena, offer him a deal: for his resourses and moneys they in addition to optimizing the Sororitas' devices, they also create single point for receiving this activity, forcing it to be turned into suffering
>Maeldrazor agreed to pay half and that he would take future creation for himself, hinting to haemonculi that they too could be punished by the Supreme Overlord for bringing a warp abomination into the Dark city
>a mixture of prayers with twisted rituals of saint's invoking, waves of mental and physical torture, mixing saint's soul with tortured and twisted sororitas' souls, and implanting a Khaine's melted artifact that haemonculi found in iconoclast’s mound into saint's blood replaced the energy of faith in saint's soul with something darker
>in the end she's transformed into a four-armed pain engine named Te'Zarkh'Khaenar Zar that generating psychic terror energy from her daughters' "prayers" and/or her own pain.She became the embodiment of agony and madness, and her suffering could heal deldars even in the depths of the Eye of Terror
>One of Maeldrazor's favorite tactics is to throw Te'Zarkh'Khaenar Zar into battle against loyal sororitas, especially if haemonculi implant a sphere containing a portion of former Telaria's untouched soul, when they want to harvest living saint's despair for their own experiments
>incubi of that nearest shrine were very angry when this monster was first introduced on the arena, and they challenged Maeldrazor and pain engine by suddenly attacking the cult's arena. Only one hierarch managed to escape from that carnage and return to his shrine, only to die on its stairs, looking at the laughing, naked, pale skinned eldar with blood on his hand, who watched his failure from afar
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>>9173977
>preventing insemination
wrong
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>>9168094
Finally found time to read these two again. They are pretty similar in premise, but the diffenrece is damn great
>A Man's Ruin
Context exists, but is completly wasted. The fight should be more intense, and the contrast between the two sides is completly wasted
The male protag starts as completly unimpressive wet rat, and is so at the end of fic. Female protag is borderline animalistic with no real motivation or reason for being attracted towards the man
Sex just happens, and it's only "forced" vaginal insertion and kissing. Nothing that a man wouldn't really enjoy
Violence is poorly detailed, and man is somehow able to hold multiple erections despite bleeding out heavily
>A Yoke of Scale and Shadow
The context, even if it's AoS, is well set - decadent gladiatorial combat fits the theme and characters well
There is ideological difference between the two partners, who are both thinking and feeling entities
Instead of being spared and 'winning', the man actually loses something, even if it's not elaborated what happens to him after
Sex is denying and humiliating towards the man, instead of being merely 'forced' consensual struggle snuggle

Of course, there is difference in length, and writing date, but the latter is simply so much better executed version of femdom snake sex. Even if I wanted to like the earlier more
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>>9174185
don't suppose they'd also consider tapping that pain engine?
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>>9174309
>pic
god i love witch elves so much. They're so rad. Hamwarmer fantasy is such a fun setting, too bad the tabletop is such a slog for a brainlet like me.
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>>9174405
Obviously yes, under vaginal stimulators for a single mate or for anyone who dares to claim her en masse, for example. But you probably realise that this tall woman needs a corresponding partner. Grotesques, other pain engines, maybe dinos from maiden worlds. If Maeldrazor annoys his fellow craftworlder kin enough, they might send a metal daemon to meet his newfound "daughters"
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>>9174693
The perfect woman...
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WHF porn animations soon
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>>9174309
That doesn't mean I hate the latter fic, in fact, I'd vastly prefer its setting and set-up. I'd say that the narrative could be adjusted in several ways.
>Lenghten the set-up, and detail Emil's life a little more. He shouldn't understand everything that's going on, but have at least cursory knowledge what Dark Elves are
>Name and describe his comrades (and maybe some officers) somewhat, if only to make the loss sting harder
>Describe the battle scene a little more, and give empire & Emil's unit little success before their formation breaks - still propably thanks to Medusa's attack, which shouldn't be wholly magical too. It's a perfect chance to describe her physical superiority
>Make Emil a better runner. Have him run further, maybe to village and show dark elves despoiling the area. He could meet some civilians who recognise him as soldier, and refuse to help him, cursing his cowardice
>Medusa can be kept as feral, but give her some sort of PoV segment while hunting for her prey.
>Give her some reason to single Emil out and spare him for her gaze. Maybe he's particularly pretty boy - or simply resistant to her gaze. Or maybe, when they locked eyes amidst slaughter, she recognised lust in his eyes too
>Do not go for vaginal at start. Medusa should instead wrangle Emil around, using her larger size. Lift her body up in air, pull of his pants, treat him little like she didn't remeber what dick looks like, have one of hair-snakes remember and swallow it for a moment - which would make her remember how the deed is done. Maybe even some butt stuff, a medusa has a fitting tail for that
>Emil's internal monologue is fine, but it shouldn't be left as purely internal. Continue where fic left off, and have beastmaster escort medusa and Emil black to black arc, where other captured prisoners can look upon him with disdain, thinking he intentionally surrendered and mock him
>Medusa also has powers over blood, so that could be useful in forcing erection
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>>9174880
Cute halfling
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>>9175494
Just fyi
Former = first
Latter = second (later)
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>>9174216
>Iyanden
..Yeah, they do need to repopulate something fierce.
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>>9175817
Kayleth is from Alaitoc though, and Ronahn from Ulthwe I believe.
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>>9175823
In my defense, I don't know the characters. The colours on the armour are Iyanden neon yellow and blue for both. Still neat art, even if preggo stuff isn't my thing.

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