>>831124 Truth is, I'm just not that talented. This was my first iteration. Hard to be consistent. I'll see if I can make her face rounder when I do future non mspaint detailed drawings.
I don't use much reference, so there is a lot of variation
>>831149 I freaking love Pepper Ann. Great VA too. It didn't consciously come into my brain when making this though. I should draw her though, in a different thread
>>831150 >I should draw her though, in a different thread On the cartoon board there is a namefag who is obsessed with pa, he's also a decent artist too. I admire his delightful autism, he draws so much of her. He also knows all pa lore concerning her origins. Sadly the thread he just had up died. He lives for other artists to draw her. >>>/co/153311781
>>831151 Oh wow. I've never posted on /co/ before, and I don't want to start since I've seen that drama spill into /ic/ but I will check out the thread, thanks! I'll probably post her on either of these art boards.
>>831153 I don't visit /ic/ often so I am unaware of any cross board drama. But try not to judge the negative actions of a few for representing an entire board, as you might deny yourself some positive experiences. I would advise to avoid the main draw thread there and stick to series/character focused threads only. If you happen to draw her I'll keep an eye out and post it over there if I happen to see a pa thread (unless you don't want that). May I ask what thread(s) you are on, on /ic?/
>>831155 I checked the thread out, and yeah he's really good at drawing her. While I think my art is probably a good fit there, I'll probably still just post here instead.
>>831160 >and yeah he's really good at drawing her. Yup, on top of being a fenatic, he manages to draw one of the most on model PA's I've ever seen, he really captures the style. You can find plenty of his threads if you search his name and 'op post' in Desuarchive in the /co/ area. He also likes the British cartoon Penny Crayon, which also features a slim, glasses wearing lead. >I'll probably still just post here instead As you wish.
Why is the girl tormenting these pikmin like creatures?
>>831161 Yeah it's like he could have drawn for the show. Its good, and he doesn't seem to fetishize like some others in the thread. >Why is the girl tormenting these pikmin like creatures? She's just carving initials into a tree, and they happened to be inside said tree.
It's hard to give context with 4 panels sometimes.
>>831162 >She's just carving initials into a tree, and they happened to be inside said tree. Oohhh, I see it now, kek. I think if it was in color I would have clued in faster that the tree was the main setting.
>>831466 Fair enough. I guess I could have drawn the Duck covered in blood to show she did it. She does get overpowered by larger goblins in the 11th comic I posted
>>831854 I'm grabbing my lockpicking it. In this case, wouldn't it have been a bit better to just do a larger third panel instead of sticking to the standard four? Same goes for strip 14 which would have been presented as one large picture.
>>831860 I'd argue at least half of these comics (including the ones I'm working on now) would benefit from more/different panels, and text. But I'm in too deep, and Im too stubborn to change from the handicap I've set for myself.
I have been contemplating doing a one shot though, or longer format and not a 1pixel brush.
>>831865 >But I'm in too deep, and Im too stubborn to change from the handicap I've set for myself. Haha, boy, do I ever know this feel. It sucks to fight against your own brain. There is an appeal to both ever changing panels and keeping it simple with the same ones, forcing you to work within the four walls you've created. I think for panel three, it would make more sense for her pupils to be inward (cross-eyed) since she is trying to focus on the insect, right?
>>831869 >I think for panel three, it would make more sense for her pupils to be inward (cross-eyed) since she is trying to focus on the insect, right? Not quite what I was going for.
She's dazed, hence the drooling mouth, because I was kinda going for those parasitic butterflys. Hence the skull, and his proboscis going in between her eyes. And his nutsack.
>>831871 Ooooh, I see. Sorry. Sometimes I have trouble deciphering what's happening. That might be a tiny problem that you need to fix, as a comic should be straightforward to understand without the author needing to explain it. However, I won't put it past myself that I am a dumbass, and possibly everyone else got it 'cept for me. Sometimes I feel like I have visual dyslexia. While I know you are keeping it simple with the style, there are times where I think color would help tell things apart. However if you want to keep it back and white, perhaps some shading/screentones/crosshatching/a few extra lines here and there might help convey settings, textures and face expressions.
>>831876 >deciphering what's happening Yeah, I'm going to work on making things more clear. Color might not be a bad idea. That's not a huge change in the format
>>831901 No, she was lighting cow farts earlier. But a cow alone, does not a burger make. >>831902 I didn't know this. I'll make sure not to send him this comic. Last thing I need is Stipe on my case again
>>831957 >>831954 Thank you. I actually liked drawing her, and had another sketched lined up which I'll probably finish next week. I'll probably post it on this boards cartoon thread
If you're the guy who linked >>831151 your stuff looks like you could have animated for the show. Really picture perfect
>>831964 He's got a thread up right now >>>/co/153598986 Sometimes he's the only one bumping then and they die off. Sometimes he gets lucky and a few of his threads take off past 300 posts and last a week.
>>832663 Thank you for the bump! I was drawing some other stuff on /vg/ but I'm working on the one shot right now, and I'll put in a few 4komas in the mean time. I've been busy