>>7907905
i think it is fine how it is

autism

why is this board such shit now

>>7907930
projection

>>7907930
that's what you get for enabling middle school drama wars for more than a decade

>>7907942
Whats wrong

>>7907905
It's a perfectly good comic if you want a comedic tone
Just polish the style while keeping it simple

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>>7907905
It's just kinda boring. It's a blog post in comic form.
There's a lot of ways you could have made it more visually interesting; The name of the old joint and all that text, it's all a big nothing burger. It doesn't actually capture the vibe of those kinds of places the way an illustration of it would. It doesn't have to be an amazing illustration, bu this is one of those spots where and image can say a lot more than words.
The slop joint stuff is a bit on the nose, but it's probably fine.

>>7908060
Fair enoguh

everything

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>>7908272
I mean, E for effort F for fucking retarded. You seem witty and clever maybe you can come up with something now.

>>7907905
confusing dialog layout

>>7907905
only use text for important stuff that can't be expressed visually. why not draw her generosity instead of explaining it? perhaps find a way of visually connecting the location instead writing "i will visit there" and "it was closed years ago".

>>7908440
Show me your vision

>>7908440
Ok

>>7908683
No

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>>7907905
she's built for OPs cock

>>7911571
Hot

>>7907930
it was always like this but i swear it was more active a year or so ago

>>7911652
>the drawing board was more active in the aftermath of the lockdowns when people took up hobbies before wagecucking slowly snuffed that out
you don't say

>>7911571
shes like 45 now

>>7911707
ripe fruits taste best

Bump

bump

>>7907905
Reddit spacing for readability:

first thing, the eyes focus on the white space in the first panel, terrible composition, white space is supposed to frame what you drew not the other way around

The depth in the first panel is so fucked, he has a giant thought bubble but also thoughts outside of his own thought bubble? the fuck is happening. Way too much info in one panel

Its not clear if that woman in the chain restaurant is the same as the one hes thinking about or if shes not, make it obvious one way or the other

The whole comic is just upsetting and sad and not even in a beautiful way but more of a "why did you show me this you fucking nigger".

>>7911971

thanks dude

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>>7907905
i can't tell what the point of the comic is
if you're trying to make it funny you need a better punchline than funny faces
if you're trying to make it sad you need to present everything less ironically

>>7912172
idk

>>7912597
Idk

>>7907905
>Whats wrong with my comic?
You can't draw.

>>7914842
Ok