Oh snap it's done? Long time coming amigo.
I'll check it out, aint been in the general for a while

Great work. I really really fuck with the style. Keeps the viewer engaged and tells a story without the need for dialogue. Keep it up

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>>7916956
After almost 3 years

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>>7916969
Thanks. I played a lot with visuals and panneling with Altarusia, I should say it was a very experimental work

Your artwork is really strong, and the story works well overall
I did find the flow of the text a bit difficult to follow at times, especially when the placement moves around quite a bit

>>7916980
Going off what he says, I felt the story flowed very well. Agreed on the text, it changes early on.
Not over doing the amount of panels on each page really helps the flow. It gets a lot done, but it doesnt feel too long at the same time

Just came along to echo what the other anons have said.

The story is engaging and cute but text bubble placement did have me wondering if I was meant to read left to right or right to left like a manga.

>>7916971
Very nice and moody piece.

>>7916980
>>7917034
>>7917938
I see, but are you guys seeing the same problem in the late chapters too? Or only in the begining?

cute style!

It's good, but too much exposition

don't quit your dayjob

>>7918117
Congrats you have already a hater, it must be good.

>>7918120
There is something endearing about the art; it reminds me of 00’s amateur webcomics. But, that’s just it; it’s clearly amateur. OP’s audience will always be limited with their current skill level, unless they win the lottery and ascend to meme status somehow.

>>7918123
>endearing
I dont know this word

>>7918131
it's how boomers say sovl

>>7918131
Fortunately we live in a world with abundant digital resources for learning the English language

>>7918136
>Fortunately we live
LOL

>>7917978
Much less in the latter chapters.

>>7918131
it's a nice way of saying it's not good.