File: 7921326.jpg (2.8 MB)
Previous Thread: >>7921326
If you are a beginner, please use the /beg/ general.
>>>/ic/beg
Post your current drawing here and give constructive critique to others! Don't take anything personal!
Please make sure your posted image is clear, downsized to around 2000 pixels wide, rotated to the correct orientation, and that any unused space is cropped.
If you want critique on a drawing from the previous thread, you can delete it there and repost in this one.
>/ic/ Resources/Reference/Downloads/Links:
>STICKY:
Completed: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Vm4IJpq0Mbvb-Krl5_mJ_m6TsC_qjsaN/view
New collaborative: https://hackmd.io/UMnZVhNITW-T2wZpHw6d0Q
w/ic/i: https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
>WHERE to get study materials
annas-archive.org
>>>/ic/artbook
>>>/ic/video
Showing all 30 replies.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
File: kritik.jpg (647.3 KB)
looking for harsh yet constructive critique on composition , values and chroms (anatomy is fucked as usual)
>>7957520
cool creature, could play bass+guitar same time
>>7957537
lovely, beauty mark connoseur
>>
>>
>>
File: cosmic.jpg (1.4 MB)
I'd like to get an opinion on this one, I like it personally but it's been met with very lukewarm reception, or at least not as good as I was hoping. What do you like/dislike about it?
>>
>>
>>7957780
Yeah, I had a feeling it was too simple. I've been exploring a more graphic design oriented path of digital art, but it's most likely too flat, with certain parts having very little depth, comparatively speaking.
>>
>>
>>
File: IMG_3649.jpg (2.9 MB)
>>7957687
I don’t think the anatomy is fucked, it’s the clothing that is, particularly over her right arm and the lower dress. But the drapery in general has very little rhyme or reason to it and the folds are confusing. The colors are also more than a bit garish but I respect the boldness. Maybe reel it in a bit?
This all being said, it’s a beautiful piece with a fantastic style, and I would absolutely hang it on my wall. I just realized she has a computer mouse, the juxtaposition of her antiquated clothing with that modern element is really fucking cool. I’d love to see more art in your style with that theme.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>7957687
Thank you, fellow connoisseur
>>7958339
>HOW
I set a reference photo to the side of my makeshift easel
Freehanded in a messy way with my charcoal sticks
Moved charcoal around with fingers and most importantly a KNEADED ERASER
I then used charcoal pencils to mark dark detail around the eyes
Left it alone for a day and then came back to add pastels (I used a small amount of hairspray as fixative on the charcoal)
I learned that its OK to try and get the likeness but its better to just interpret to your liking, I also pretty much ignored the color of the photo and used whatever I felt like
I suggest you give it a go!
Furthrer info: I made the charcoal sticks in my backyard and the pastels are an affordable mexican brand, as for the paper I used generic sketching paper from the chinese store.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>