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Last bread
>Twilight finally succeeds in making a clone.
>But she's a little bit, different.
>Not as smart, more extreme OCD, and a weird obsession with trauma gooning.
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Witness her birth here:
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And some of her escapades:
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How would (you) react to discovering weird clone that she keeps in the basement?
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I'm back.
Like I said... Pizza guy ALWAYS delivers.
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Would Tardilight overeat if exposed to a open source of food?
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Possible. Depends probably?
My personal headcanon is that her weight fluctuates alot depending on what her OCD & Goon flavor of the month is.
On average though she's probably extremely underweight and prioritizes gooning - trauma OCD spiralling over basic needs (like eating).
You could probably cause her to develop a binge eating disorder pretty easily though desu.
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>two months ago
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>>43170989
pls do not bully The Tard
she hates her name
Makes her coom
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Definitely traced this one a bit to get the anatomy down.
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Really love seeing everyone's contributons and lore building for Tardlight.
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Gentlemen, I never thought I’d see the day
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narcissism
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godspeed drawfren
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these look like new drawings, right? I don't recognize them from previous threads
her eyes are very cute, I really like the first one
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>>43171672
>hyper autistic giant failure
>stuttering spaggetti dropping overly nervous
>social retard
>they have nothing in common
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And of course misty also has a fetish for being traumatized and unchecked OCD manifesting as self destructive behaviour/gooning. Not to mention she's literally just always sweating from having a constant panic attack and hyper arousal.
Your schizophrenia intrigues me, mistyschizo
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Yeah they're fresh baked! Thanks for the feedback bro, really happy you like the first one.
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>Erhm it's different b-because it's her fetish!
You have mental retardation.
>Fl-flutterrape stops being Fluttershy because she has a fetish
No.
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>Be changeling #776.
>Finally manage to infiltrate the Ponyville library undetected. Nobody saw you go in, and the only way you're going to get spotted going out is while disguised as Twilight Sparkle.
>You WILL be the changeling drone that goes down in history as the one who took down the tactical brain of ponykind, and made way for an invasion like no other.
>Just have to find a spot to hide in first while you wait for nightfall. It's still day, and Twilight and that dragon of hers will come back and continue doing whatever it is ponies do in libraries.
>Empty shelf? Shockingly, there are none, and clearing out space to make one would be too noticeable. Balcony? Too much risk of being seen overhead or stumbled upon.
>While trotting around, ruminating on the options, you suddenly trip over something.
>Desperate wing flapping just barely prevents you from bashing your head against a shelf and knocking everything down.
>Taking a look back at the rug you were just standing on, you notice something protruding in the middle.
>Pushing it aside, you reveal a hatch.
>Part of you wonders why it was hidden in the first place, but it being hidden may mean the space it leads to is little utilized. What are the odds Twilight comes back and goes straight to open it up?
>As you open it up, a foul musty smell enters your spiracles, and you see a darkly lit staircase leading into a.. completely barren room.
>You're not sure why it smells like that, but it's not enough to deter you from entering. You're on a mission, and you will complete it by any means necessary.
>You step down through the hatch, shutting it on itself with the rug layered on top to hide your intrusion.
>With the basement enclosed, you're now able to hear your hoofsteps as you walk to the bottom.
>It's only once you're off the staircase, you hear something that you really should've noticed before.
>Sniffling.
>Your eyes hurriedly scan the room for the source of it, fangs bared ready to bite. There just had to be someone.. or something here that's going to give you away if you don't cocoon it before Twilight gets back home.
>You locate it in a shadowed corner. It looks like a pony, but you can barely make out any details, but they don't matter.
>All that matters is detaining it.
>You leap, wings fluttering loudly as you beeline straight towards it, jaws wide open. It turns to look at you, but you're too fast for it to act.
>Your fangs pierce into it, drawing blood and.. love.
>It's overwhelming. It's sweet. It's sickly sweet. It's impure. There's something wrong with it. You feel nauseous.
>The poison is still entering your brain. Colors enter your vision, and you seize up. You're on the floor and you've let go but it's still melting you.
>You're afraid, terrified. You just want it to stop.
>You shut your eyes as the figure you bit leans over you.
>You're not sure when you do, but you pass out.
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>A desperate need to breath forces you awake, senses slowly coming back to you as your body twitches.
>Eyes opening, you see the entity that caused you to collapse standing over you, hooves on both sides of you.
>With the illumination of your eyes you're now able to see it for what it truly is.
>It's Twilight Fucking Sparkle.
>She flinches, you flinch. You're horrified by the circumstances, and strangely so is she.
>Your mouth hangs open as you process how truly fucked you are and have been the whole time-
>Something splashes onto you and she shudders. It reeks of the same corrosive, system-destroying love that entered you before.
>If you had tear ducts, you would cry.
>Fortunately, she's there to cry for the both of you, shameful tears staining her face and dropping down onto you.
>You really wish you were anyone but changeling #776.
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Jesus Christ, anon
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>>43171902
>Untards Twi
Is it possible to learn this power?
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>tardlight's public gooning has escalated to her looking at traumatically extreme fetish porn in public.
>She's constantly on the verge of having a nervous breakdown during this, but can't bring herself to stop.
>She's always JUST about to get caught looking at what she is.
>But keeps comically JUST 'getting away' with it.
>Ponies already think of twilight as the town masturbator so it's kind of accepted...though not well liked.
>Until Tardlight finally slips up.
>Somepony bumps into her while she's clopping.
>Causes her to drop her doujin/novel/etc.
>Of course it opens up to the most graphic, deplorable and depraved content within possible.
>Tardlight's heart falls through her chest.
>There are audible gasps.
>"Is she...."
>"Oh dear Equestria!"
>"I'm going to be sick.."
>The voices swell around her, ponies mystified and understandably perturbed.
>Tardlight wanted trauma and she's getting it.
>Stuttering, trying to explain herself, but can't articulate anything. Too brain fried from spiked cortisol levels.
>She can't help it.
>She's so upset
>So horny.
>She's full on bawling.
>Fluids are everywhere.
>Shocked murmurs turn into angry yells, she's forcibly thrown out of wherever she is.
>It's a long, painful walk all the way home.
>This isn't the first time tardlight has made Real Twilight's friends concerned.
>But it is the worst.
>Tardlight spends all her time possible trying to hide and wish everything is gonna just go away.
>She knows that they won't.
>She knows it's gonna be bad.
>She doesn't want it. Not at all.
>But god, it turns her on so much.
>Days lost in a masturbatory fugue in the basement.
>Many knocks at the door, Tardlight answers none of them.
>She can feel the other shoe getting ready to drop.
>Twilight eventually home.
>Putting groceries away.
>Knock happens again.
>Twilight forcibly escorted out of home.
>It's the royal guards.
>Twilight gets into MAJOR, serious trouble because of Tardlight.
>Spike temporarily removed from her custody while they assess if she's safe.
>It's a few days before Tardy sees Twilight again.
>When she's done, she's in more trouble than she can possibly imagine.
>Twilight completely loses her mind.
>Revokes every privilege you can imagine.
>Twilight is crying, screaming, embarrassed.
>Tardlight cums four times during her emotional battery.
>Tardlight keeps shaking afterwards whenever she sees Twilight.
>Tardlight is addicted to every minute of her own traumatic misery.
>Who else but tardlight!
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>Twilight is crying, screaming, embarrassed.
>Tardlight cums four times during her emotional battery.
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I don't think Twilight will ever be allowed back wherever that was. Kind of sounds like a book store, maybe she was hiding between the shelves. She'll need to go out of town for new books now. Having to travel further and further out as word starts to spread. This will give Tardlight more time to get into trouble. For short journeys I could see Twi locking Tard in the basement, at least at the start. But she can only keep her in there for so long. After a while ponies might start to wonder what the noises are coming from Twilight's basement. And Spike is only able to cover so much.
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I can't imagine what Tardlight's "love" would even taste like to a Changeling.
Here's what she loves:
>self-harm
>gooning
>being treated like shit>the game
then you imagine tasting all of that.
nasty
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>reads the first line
10/10 already?
damn anon
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you can see in the comic that he's clearly hitting her in her soft spot. it's like a reset button
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why everything gotta try to be a general now man
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We're all fapping to ponies. God hates us.
Praise Celestia instead.
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PLEASE be careful with the plushie....its a bit retarded
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[1/?]
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yes...
maybe....
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yeah so I found this today and went a bit crazy and anyway have some art of this pathetic wet creature
I love her and hope to read more about her terrible experiences
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>be Tardlight
>You """"escaped"""" from your cozy basement a few months ago.
>By which you mean you got abducted by Anonymous.
>He won't let you leave HIS home.
>'the board' he calls it.
>It's a decently sized, abandoned boat in the middle of bum-fuck nowhere he renovated.
>It's a lot like your old basement, so that's nice!
>A beer bottle collides at you.
>"WORST PONY IN THE BOARD!"
>Better than you could've hoped.
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>Another week.
>Still a slave.
>Oh yeah, you're also here with several other mares he's abducted into his demented lair.
>"Why won't you do anything?" Asks berry punch, her eyes downcast. "Aren't you supposed to be an element of harmony?"
>Ohdearcelestia.wav
Unnh I....I'm sorry ...
>Berry cries.
>You'll never be as good as the original twilight
>Your thighs are dripping.
>"Why won't you! You ..are you ...oh...get-get away from me!" She looks like she's gonna vomit.
>You're crying and apologizing over and over again.
>Anon just shakes his head before he escorts Derpy away to his rape chamber.
>Spend the rest of the night clopping.
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>Days pass
>Anon keeps threatening to 'delete' you from his 'board'.
>"I SWEAR TO Christ. You fucking FEMOID, I will SELL you to a factory that tests shampoos!"
>He slaps you upside your head and storms off
Sorry, Anon...
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>Anon is raping every mare BUT you.
>Keeps screaming about how you're like. "Real femoid"
>No clue what that means.
>But every time he rejects you, its like a knife through your pussy to the heart.
>You're so horny all the time.
>He wants you to do chores today.
>Try to sweep
>Sweeping is easy
>You're sweating more than normal as you try to use your magic to maneuver a broom.
>Don't really use your magic much these days except masturbating....so it's a bit shit.
>The sleep deprivation probably isn't helping either.
>Or the brain fog
>What were you doing again?
>Uh..
>Oh right you were thinking about what Anon might do to you.
>Thoughts are racing in your head.
>You're crying.
>This is normal.
>You're also leaking fluids everywhere.
>This is also normal.
>Walk into a wall.
>Ow
>Back to work.
>Walk into one of the many rape slaves, knocking both of you over.
>You're apologizing but she just looks at you.
>Like she's staring through you.
>Mutter another apology for cumming on her.
>"Tardlight..." She says disgusted.
>Cum again
>Wander off
>Walk into another wall
>Break portrait
>Anon puts you into a rubbish bin later in front of every pony and keeps screaming 'TRASH BELONGS IN THE GARBAGE CAN. TRASH BELONGS IN THE GARBAGE BIN.'
>Not allowed out until the next morning.
>Shaking, drenched in cum and sweat and tears, he pulls you out by your mane.
>That gets some of the rape slaves laughing.
>You're at the bottom rung of the board hierarchy
>"Worst. Femoid. Ever." anon shakes his head, dropping you.
>You hope you never leave the board.
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>Anon is raping every mare BUT you.
I cry everytim
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Yeah so I ended up getting out the tablet and doing this properly instead of just on my phone. Enjoy <3
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what a sweetheart. she just proves that all ponies deserve love, even if they're retarded
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Requesting some art of this
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/43036810/#q43041538
Need to see cult glimmer trying to handle Tardlight
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>I've never done a green before
well you already can draw. maybe you could draw a green, or write a picture
we're all tarded here nigga, sky's the limit
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/r/
Tardlight eagerly receiving a package from the mailpony, who is completely unaware of the extremely degenerate contents (It's the next issue of Tardlight's clop material, no stores in Ponyville will carry it so she has to mail order it).
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>Twilight has to go out of town to put out some fires with Celestia that Tardlight has started.
>She forgot that her parents were going to come to visit.
>Tardlight opens the door.
>She really doesn't want to embarrass Twilight again, but dear Celestia is it such a traumatic situation.
What are the odds that Tardlight doesn't cream herself in front of Twilight's parents?
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...I'm really going to need to stop getting carried away with these.
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She was originally trying to make a proper clone of herself to impress Celestia, but something went wrong and she came out all tarded. Since Tardlight embarrassed Twilight in front of Celestia she does her best to hide her away. Cloning is highly illegal in Equestria, but Celestia looked the other way for Twilight since she was her student. The whole event did strain Twi and Celestia's relationship though.
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She has really got to stop subjecting her perverted desires onto the local mail carriers <3
that's probably enough drawing for today, I've been doing this all day and while its been fun I can't do this all the time :p
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I love it so much
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0 probably
Without a tard Wrangler, she is doomed every chance she gets like this
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Ok well here's a green, first 200 words here, the whole 1k in the link :p
https://ponepaste.org/11855
>Be Starlight Glimmer.
>In Our Town, doing the rounds checking in with everypony.
>You had unmarked a new friend a week ago and they're still causing you issues.
>Normally a single day in the re-education home would be enough for even the toughest of cases but even after restricting food and sleep things hadn't improved.
"Double Diamond, how is our guest this morning?"
>"Oh Starlight good morning! We're not sure, we took turns banging pots outside the door to keep her from having any of those nightmares you told us about but she's still just been whimpering when we listen at the window."
"I see. Well I'll go check in with Sugarbelle to get our new guest's breakfast and then we can all see if she's ready to join her new friends."
>Internally you force yourself to stop from grinding your teeth and growling.
>When you first stumbled across the famed princess's student trembling in the train station bathroom while picking up supplies with other townsfolk to build a new cottage you had been delighted at the opportunity, and a few quick words had been enough to get the meek creature to come along.
>Really you should have left her.
>She had been nothing but trouble, you really we're sure what Celestia saw in her.
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>Tardlight squirts during her unmarking
lmao even. Starlight will never break this one.Line 22 has two separate lines of green on it. Pointing this out so you can fix it if you decide to post the rest itt.I feel like you missed a golden opportunity by not naming this green 'Our Tard'.
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yeah I was giggling to myself while writing that out
>line 22
yeah I'll add that to the list of other little mistakes I noticed only after finalizing the post since I wrote it up in another program and then had to redo the formatting when I dumped it into ponepaste :x
wish I could take it down and remake it with the issues fixed but the old one would still be up, might still do it just for proper archival and have it attached to my account for future stuff.
>Our Tard
yeah that would have been perfect
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What kind of trouble do you think she got herself into this time
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Holy shit this Twilight is great. Really activates the ol' amygdala.
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realized what was missing on this and improved it (slightly)
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Well if she hasnt sound proofed it.... i kinda imagine its something like
>"Hey twilight, do you ever hear anything kinda...weird?"
>"Like what?"
>"Well, I don't hear it all the time but...squishing noises, I guess."
>"Oh...um..."
>"And moaning!"
>"That's...that's just the pipes, girls! Nothing to worry about, really. Golden Oaks is really old so there's alot of improvements that need to be made on the er...infrastructure. "
>"Well, shoot girl, iffn' yer dang pipes are the problem Y'could've asked me! I'd be more'n happy to help. I can plug up any leaky pipe anywhere, anytime. I can fix a squirter back to normal!"
>"Uhm..thank you Apple Jack.....I'm sure you could....."
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This has been stuck in my head all day.
>Tardlight is shakily walking through town
>Barely able to stay standing
>Brain fog
>Constantly on the brink of cumming
>Bumps into Anon
>Collapses to the ground
>"Oh, noooo, I'm so sorry! Please don't yell at me, or abuse me, or correct me with rape! (Please do)"
Don't worry about it.
>"I've fallen, and I'm completely defenseless right now! You could rape or kidnap me and I wouldn't be able to fight back!"
Don't worry, I won't.
>"Oh, I've made such a fool of myself! You probably think that I'm a disgusting gooner creep with a extreme fetish like rape."
>Anon blushes
It's... actually a surprisingly common fetish. I'm sure that someday, you'll marry a stallion and make him very happy.
>"What about you? Surely I'm turning you off or otherwise creeping you out or disgusting you."
>Tardlight is still blushing, but has almost stopped shaking and creaming herself
Nah, I don't have anything against you. I just like human women, not ponies.
>Tardlight's pupils go heart-shaped as she cums her brains out in public