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First for hte boy, the myth, the legend, murky murky murky!

>>43284173
which story is mommy from?

>>43284270
Blackjack (gross!) has a hot mom

>>43284270
She's the best mare 99 has to offer.
Not that it would save you though.

When does it get good?

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>>43284529
When you start reading Murky

>>43284529
When Blackjack kicks Lancer in the balls.

i've only read the original fo:e but i'm actually having issues finishing Pink Eyes, it's too sad having to read about this depressing little kid.

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>>43284830
>Three wings of Mutiecorns
Yeah, they're fucked.

>>43284886
They actually are since they just struck a "deal" with the Goddess herself about exploring some stable full of enervation that the alicorns can't approach.

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>>43284173
>have you found anything interesting in-progress being worked on?
Yup
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1140036/what-happens-next
FoEbros we are so FUCKING back

>>43284529
It gets good later in the book, then when you go back to reread later it's good from the very start

21 chapters in and Little-pip implying that DJ Pony is closer to her than Calamity or Velvet ticks me off.

>>43285261
To be fair to Pip, they did just fuck.

>>43285261
Pip and Homage's romance is just the author's self insert wish fulfillment. Don't think too deep about it.

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Good afternoon Daisy is best mare

>>43285359
An odd spelling of 'Gin Rummy' but I'll accept it.

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>>43285369
Too good for this world
Too good for any of us

>>43285636
I kinda like her. Rummy is a fairly good mare in an unsalvageable situation.

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>>43284830
This is absolutely fine.
No, I'm not biased.

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>>43285903
She's a good mom

>>43286397
how can one pony be this adorable?

>>43284832
its peak. holy fuck.

>>43285978
Not wrong. Muties are peak.

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Finally finished reading the original Fallout Equestria. Now I can join the many, many critics in saying it's not great.

Biggest problem is kkat's choice to structure the story like a playthrough of a Bethesda Fallout game. This is a monumentally bad idea which other FoE fics fortunately do not emulate. Most of the story's problems are because of it: the main plot unfolding like a series of disconnected side quests, the pointless descriptions of looting locked containers and hacking terminals, the excessive combat scenes against 'NPC' enemies which don't matter because injuries can be healed immediately, etc.

But besides that, there's so many weird, awkward writing choices in FoE. Characters dying suddenly (Monterey Jack, Steelhooves) or right after being introduced (Nightseer). Littlepip's awkward, grating internal thoughts. Some scenes have way too much detail, and others have far too little. Certain world details are repeatedly explained and called out for seemingly no reason. Just so much awkward, awkward, awkward!

I don't regret reading it, and it was good for picking up some lore details I didn't know, but it definitely won't stick with me the way something like Murky did. The story really is deserving of a rewrite.

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>>43286718
Also I'm thoroughly onboard with the whole 'Book of Littlepip is Homage propaganda' idea, solely because of Pip's narration.

>I was seething with rage. These ponies were SICK and WRONG, and I was totally justified in killing them.

This is exactly the kind of line you'd insert into a story to justify all of Littlepip's actions for the NCR and Twilight Society.

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>>43286718
>Characters dying right after being introduced
>Nightseer
Genuinely the most confusing decision I've ever seen from a writing perspective. You don't just give a character unique identifiers, particularly when said character is a member of a species known for being a networked collective, and then just off them before you can do anything actually interesting with them beyond 'btw they're wearing Luna's bones' cus that's an easy way to get S1-era horsefags angry.

>>43286718
>>43284581
>cries and blubbers for another 30k words
>achieves a tiny something and then gets set back again far more
>is a slave for the 50th time
>glimmer makes a sexual comment
the bait lacks finesse nowadays
murky is the most flanderized boring ass shit ever created

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>>43286718
>Now I can join the many, many critics in saying it's not great.
>

>>43286869
>cus that's an easy way to get S1-era horsefags angry
It gets me angry to this very day. I'm glad she croaked on the spot.

>>43286718
When I read it I thought it was really good for something from 2011. Most fanfics from back then are really bad compared to today. But yeah, I noticed the prose and character writing seemed simplistic in it compared to Project Horizons, and so was the lore being simplistic.

Fallout Equestria seems like it's emulating MLP and Fallout, and the MLP part would be like keeping archetypal characters because that's how they are in the show and having moral lessons baked into the narrative, but Project Horizons is more like humans that are pony shaped. I like Project Horizons approach more, because it feels like there's a lot of stuff going on, like feels living a breathing.

This is also why FoE feels Littlepip centric, like the world revolves around the character and the themes.

>>43286971
Only one dot? Also what's going on in the room he guards so fiercely?

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"She asked for no pickles!"

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>>43287218
It could be anything, maybe his stash of grenades

>>43286869
Why does such a shit mare have to be so hot?

>>43287021
there are faster ways to say you stopped 5 chapters in

>>43287387
fair, all of that stops by chapter 6?
>An entire life of pain with scant little inspiration and reason to keep going. Years of loneliness and neglect. I was whining, failing to remember she had lost her entire life to the wasteland as well, but I didn't care. I wasn't being selfish, I just couldn't stop the outpouring of emotions.
>“Now...anypony here know any bucks or mares looking for a good time? It's been almost a week I've been cooped up sick without any 'relief,' y'know? I'm itchin' for a fixin' if’n you get me?”
you picked the best one gotta say, lighting the darkness was perhaps one of the most whiny fucking slogfest chapter
read a real book for adults

>>43287516
ok I admit I used a bit of an hyperbole there, it stops after "killing the salve" but even before that, there is character progression even with glimmer trough her relation with coral

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>>43287541
have a murky
love you anon

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Gettin' ready for crab time.

As this campaign has gone on, I've actually become kinda surprised I don't see more starbeast stuff. Star kaiju are rad as fuck, and they've been fun to adapt.

>>43287730
>A star crab
Oh shit. Thalassophobia mode enabled.

>>43287220
Worst taste in mares ever

>>43288164
Guess he has a masochist mindset.

Up.

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Marmalade, my beloved

>>43286869
I wish this image would show another mutiecorn in this pose. The perspective and the anatomy are top, but Nightseer ruins it.

>>43287730
Don't tell me the lights in the water are also parts of the sea monster.

>>43289174
They're mostly small pisces fish, which are endemic to the area and useful for making minor alchemical and magic inks. You can find them pretty much anywhere the waterworks run just because they like the confined spaces and have had two hundred years to infiltrate in from the ocean.

The two big lights on the east side of the bridge are my landmark for the cancer's presence. Party's convinced he's chasing them but he's actually pissed at and hunting down the pegasi gang that just set off a 'balefire bomb' further north in the city.

>>43286718
I agree with most of this except for steelhooves. I think the way he passes does a decent job at illustrating how sudden death can really be. you dont always get closure. i dunno.

>>43289855
Is that part of a story?

>>43289061
Second least deranged S99 fag.

>>43289855
Brutal.

>>43289597
Yeah, there was the obvious moment where he could have died instead, that being him almost dying in Stable 2 immediately after inspiring dozens of other Steel Rangers to splinter off alongside him, but Kkat didn't do this and instead killed him out of nowhere. Sometimes it's just way more realistic to just fucking die in a whimper than in a blaze of glory and I think that's what she was going for ucu

>>43291115
Never liked how she just got away with everything, just because she had a traumatic backstory.