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I took this photo with my phone, then edited with Lightroom Mobile. Is good? Or should I improve something? Im newbie
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>>4500652
proof that even with an eye for composition phones are bad
it looks crispy, blotchy and harsh. kinda sad ngl. ive shot with nicer phones and went to a cheap shit iphone se because even the best phone cameras look like ken rockwell grabbed a sony PNS and edited his jpegs in luminar neo and perfectly cleaner.
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>>4500652
the turn of the road is too centered, should be a bit off to the left I think (rule of third type offset)
the lower elevation area on the left of the road is too visually dominant while being too close to the edge of the picture
the camera is too low (too close to the road, because you were standing at a place that was lower than the road)
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>>4500866
The issue isn't digital (at least not at that resolution) but the AI and shitty oversharpening used in phones. Their sensors are also smaller than micro four turds which makes the issue even worse since all that post-processing does all the heavy lifting.
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>>4500652
This is a cool photo. The quality sucks because it is a phone photo. The composition is alright, I think it would look more balanced if you cropped the empty space on the left side of the last tree. The colors are gaudy but it's nice you had a vision as a beginner.
There is nothing else to say about your photo, it is a random photo of a road. It is pointless to spend too much time on it. Instead, study the masters, find concepts you want to explore, and most importantly go take more.
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It's an ok photo, but that's all there is to say.
There is nothing that makes this picture interesting. Think of it this way: nowadays people can entretain themselves with a million different things on and off the internet, and sadly don't have the attention span to endure a 30 second video. Why would anyone look twice at a picture of a road? The scene, the composition, the colors are good, but there is nothing that makes this stand out, there is no story being told. What if a deer was crossing the road? A cyclist? What if you framed this through a clearing in the leaves? What if it was taken from an unusual angle?
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