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>>97930067
He should have Skulk instead of Menace

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>>97930067
Ass. Absolutely abysmal card. 5 mana for a shit body and 4 more mana for an even shittier draw every turn? Homelands tier of bad creature.

>>97930067
Change the second one to
>When this creature enters or attacks, investigate.

>>97930067
>Rouge
Consider ending yourself instead.

>>97935086
like i said I'm retarded. fix this gay as shit for me so I'm not laughed out of my pod

>>97935520
thanks queen

>>97935920
What bracket is your pod?
What kind of synergies do you want in the deck?

The card you've posted is kind of a generic 'goodstuff' card (but actually is a generic 'midstuff' card because it's pretty weak) and I don't really follow the intended flavor. Nothing about the design screams 'Batman' to me.

Batman is known for a few things:
1) Preptime
2) Gadgets
3) Detective work (sort of)
4) Dark and brooding

Assuming you don't want him to be specifically tailored to a strategy that your deck will be using. Consider something like:

1WUB
Vigilance, Hexproof
Batman cannot be blocked except by black and artifact creatures.
Whenever Batman deals combat damage to a player, you may exile a non-creature card (change this to instant/sorcery or artifact if you want to lean into artifact or spellslinger) from your hand with mana value X or less where X is the amount of damage dealt to that player. That card becomes plotted.
T:Batman Connives.
1/4

Adjust stats how you want. I think it works best when you encourage the use of auras, anthems, or equpment to pump his power but modern JotC design would force a way for him to increase his own power without needing any synergistic cards because modern JotC is a bunch of idiots designing a game for actual retards.

>>97930067
I like the stun mechanic but I think it should also prevent Batman from dealing lethal damage to them. I'd personally do a mono black identity for Batman but I know WotC themselves have pretty much given up on color identity as a flavor concept.

I'm going to piggyback here.

Hows this

Dude McMan

Legendary Dude

1/4

At the end of your turn, all untapped dudes you control get a +1/+1 counter.

Remove a +1/+1 counter from target Dude; it gains Flying or Double Strike until end of turn.

Remove two +1/+1 counters from target dude; tap target creature and put a stun counter on it.

>>97936023
Generally speaking, any complex character from another franchise/universe would be 4 color minimum and generally 5 color. The idea that Batman would be monoblack is ridiculous.
Black is about ambition, selfishness, and personal benefit. You can make an argument that Batman operating outside the law and inspiring fear in criminals is black but his core identity is probably equal parts white (order, law, justice) and blue (detective work, thinking/planning, gadgets). I could see WB as the best two color option for him with UB as a solid second place but I think OP got it correct with WUB.

>>97930067
Unironically the new prepare mechanic seems like a good fit.

>>97936072
1GRW, forgot to say

>>97936072
Does this card have a mana cost?
Fucking around with +1/+1 counters (in particular, removing them as a cost) is something I think of as an artifact/colorless effect but it if tied to a color combination it is almost definitely UG because of counters moving around being a very OG Simic kind of thing.

Double strike is much more powerful than flying and is generally costed to illustrate that. The last ability would almost never be activated because it is a weaker effect than double strike and probably a weaker effect than flying as well.

I think the card you've designed is probably a WUG card that you could get away with being just WG if you flavored it properly. 1/4 is an odd statline for it.

I'll throw my idea in for consideration:

Silly Putty Man
1GWR

During your upkeep, choose a form. Silly Putty Man gains those abilities until your next upkeep:

Destroyer Form (First Strike and Deathtouch)

Iron Form (Hexproof, Indestructible, Defender)

Assault Form (+2/+0 and Trample)

4/4

>>97936165
Make it pay 2 to transform. Or do a color paring (GW for Iron, RG for assault, etc).