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The fifth ‘Cartoon Cartoons’ short is out:
https://youtu.be/RpqMR9ANuJo
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DANA SNYDER?!?
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Not watching all that. Any relation to Chubby Cheese?
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>>152599260
The expressions are fun.
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uncle grandpa if he rat
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>>152599345
It’s a Buttons’ Gamezone knockoff.
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>>152599260
Was this made by the guy that started adding gross close-ups in the spongebob cartoon?
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Kinda saved by making the Squidward a moody teen girl.
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>>152599454
I don’t think so. I don’t remember seeing his name in the credits.
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>>152599286
>>152599401
You mean Master Shake if he rat.
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>>152599472
She kinda looks like the current design of Juleka Couffaine from ‘Miraculous Ladybug’.
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>>152599260
Benson if he was a goth girl.
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>>152599260

Scratch if he where a rat
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>>152599260
I like it, of all the shorts so far this is the most "active" with funny visuals and character interactions (even if the characters are kinda generic archetypes).
7/10 in my book.
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>>152599565
>Scratch
Going to have to be more specific.
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>>152599260

>Gloria from Big City Greens and a Scratch the Ghost possesing Uncle Grandpa work at an Arcade

This was fun, i wish this one was picked up but i doubt it if since it got finished in 2023.
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>>152599260
7/10, I wonder how long the could keep the premise going but the sight gags were fun.
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>>152599260
We want the FNAF audience.
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>>152599683
So kids? I can't really fault them for that.
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>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Z9KqbxTYbM
>Dana Snyder, a tomboy, and Tom Kenny
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>>152599286
I love his voice so much. It's surprisingly versatile.
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>>152599260
No, I don't like it, but Cherry has pornable potential.
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Just finished it. Nothing really to write home about. There wasn't anything I'd call "bad" about it but it doesn't excel. The two main characters don't have that interesting of a dynamic beyond boss and employee, and while an annoying boss and beleaguered employee is classic, it just didn't feel too interesting here, even as a pure comedy show.

I feel it could use some extra wrinkle to it all, like maybe Buttons has a jealous brother who wants to take over the place and make it into fine dining but the will left it to Buttons. Just something to feed conflict and have a more deserving character get shit on throughout it.
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>>152599260
Uncle Grandpa tier shit
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>>152599698
Damn, forgot how hot that woman was. Should have some more porn.
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>>152599260
Honestly, this is the best Cartoons Cartoons short by far, the rest are beanmouth/LA tumblrslop, this one actually fucking wanted to be a silly cartoon, something that’s scarce in our modern industry

Sure this has a soft artstyle too but it gives me Aaron Springer vibes which I do find kinda charming
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>>152599683

The short didn't had any hot female animatronics tho
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Definitely the best of these Cartoon Cartoons so far.
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>>152599260
Wow it's an actual cartoon
Why oh why was this not greenlit already
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>>152599260
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=gW2X4nq1cgk
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This was alright. I think it's a little held back by having some of the generic "2010s CN" art decisions, but it at least tries to be wacky and fun and silly which is sorely missing these days.
Another short with zero series potential though, wondering what's the point of even making one of these things if it won't translate well to a show in any way,
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I love this fucking cartoon. Easily the best of the cartoon cartoons reboot so far.
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why does his head look like a condom
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>>152599260
never thought i’d see a cartoonist reference the current state of Chuck E. Cheese; usually they reference the stuff they had when they were kids
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>Finally
>A Cartoon that isn't ashamed of being fucking cartoony
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>>152600434
You can make the premise work, I doubt that it would *only* stick to the arcade.
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>>152599260
Very shouty, trying too hard with the faces, no need for Dana to put on an annoying version of his voice.
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>>152600625
i was thinking that too
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The interior of the maze was legit scary.
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>>152600977
Eh, the eye thing made me laugh.
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>>152600977
https://vimeo.com/814892087
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>>152601104
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Is there any chance this will become a full series? I enjoyed it a lot.
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>>152599401
>>152599825
Kinda true, but the girl holds the short together. People liked Billy and Mandy for Mandy and Grim.
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>>152601660
Unlikely but Cartoon Network needs to
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>>152599825
Uncle Grandpa was kino, fuck you
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>>152601660
Considering Warner ha been sitting on these for years, I assume they have little to no interest to do anything with them.
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Far and away the best short in this series so far. Been itching for some Aaron Springer/Don Martin style cartooning recently and this short has been at the top of my most anticipated.

Cherry a cutie.
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>>152599260
I thought that was her Peter Griffin looking chin at first and her nose ring was her mouth smiling.
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>>152599260
I like it. It's creative, it doesn't look cheap, and it's got a disgusting bluehair constantly suffering. I don't like the fact she's a main cast member, though.
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>>152599260
His head is a condom though…
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Just finished watching it, definitely enjoyed this one the most so far and it has the best art direction of the ones released. Feels like something I would've watched as a kid and have nostalgia for, and something I would actually watch as a young adult. Also laughed a decent amount of times.

Current ranking is
1.Button's Gamezone
2.A for Angel
3.Bird and Squirrel
4.Afternoon Super
5.Accordions Geoffrey and Mary Melodica
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>>152599260
I didn't want to get my hopes up seeing some actually funny drawings when I saw some stills of it, but I was relieved to see it was hilarious and full of great drawings and acting. My two points of critique are that the setting could be a bit of a limitation and that I hope there's more mainstay cast members than just the girl and the rat but this is exactly what cartoons need. For a pilot, it does an excellent job of getting right to the good stuff, no filler, no padding, just lots of jokes, funny drawings, and exploring the dynamic in the time they have.
>>152601749
Pete Browngardt is an executive producer on the show, actually! I've really come around to liking Uncle Grandpa and can see some of its energy in the pilot.
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>>152602697
As much as the nose ring and hair would normally put /co/ off, the archetype of character has always been popular on /co/ too and frequently been FOTMs. Hard to tell if she would have got lots of art or not had the show been picked up.
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>>152600434

>wondering what's the point of even making one of these things if it won't translate well to a show in any way,

Dude you can make a show out of this

>Button's trying to avoid the health and security inspector
>Cherry having a date and her bf suggests to eat at Button's Gamezone
>Button tries to make a new flavor for the Pizza
>Rival arcade with high technology arrives
>Button and Cherry try to handle a soccer/football team for celebratory pizza
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>>152599286
Paul Rugg would've been my personal choice. Before this came out all I heard when looking at Buttons was Gweelok's voice, but Dana isn't a bad choice either.
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>>152599260
Oh cool, Dana Snyder
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cherry has a big butt!
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>>152602998
Buttons gamezone is the only one I liked so far
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>>152602697
Yeah she’s cute, she’s probably lgbt though.
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>>152604720
Lesbians are the tightest.
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Well I liked it better than the rest, but that isn't saying much
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>>152602998
Why’d you put ‘Accordions Geoffrey & Mary Melodica’ at the bottom?
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>>152604966
I'm going off of memory as I've only watched it once and that was a few weeks ago.

I liked the style, it just kind of failed to work as a pilot for me. It was too short. It also kind of confused what the actual premise of the show would be, would it be a traveling band type of thing with various misadventures or what? The antagonists are now friends and casually hanging out with Mary. Are they part of the core band group now or are they one-offs for the pilot?

To me, it seemed like a cute stand alone one-off short was made and then had the world pilot slapped onto it at the last second.

Despite not caring for most of the designs, I at least somewhat get the premise of Afternoon Super. Each episode would be the Games Master messing with kids and setting up unique puzzles and challenges to overcome. It's also open to new villain showing up or more detailed origin of the power beam that shot the kids. I can also see the Game's Master having potential to be a fun character to watch.

I've seen a few people point this out in the comment section of Mary's pilot. Accordions Geoffrey seems like it would work far better as shorts you would watch as bumpers during in between shows and commercial breaks rather than a full stand alone show.
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>>152605217
‘Cartoon Cartoons’ had two streams: pilots and interstitials. ‘Accordions Geoffrey & Mary Melodica’ was an interstitial.
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>>152599454
You gonna need to be specific here.
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>>152599260
>Shelby Young as Cherry
>In 2002, Young played Stephanie in the unaired pilot for LazyTown.
Very unexpected, given her voice in this.
Also, she's mostly credited as "additional voices" or "ADR work" in her wiki profile. She's like a journeyman VA.
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>>152603373
>The obligatory animatronics going rogue ep
>Trying to find new attractions for the gamezone
>Trying to pay the rent/mortgage/dealing with the landlord
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>>152603373
>>152605697

>Button makes him and Cherry get stuck in a videogame ala Tron
>Obligatory Pizza Delivery episode
>Episode about Button and Cherry trying to make annoying teenagers go away
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>>152605746
>Ratatouille/Ratatoing parody ep where Buttons controls Cherry so she can make the perfect Gamezone Pizza
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>>152605600
Somebody draw her dressed as Stephenie.
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>>152599260
This one was the best one yet
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>>152605875
>Not her and Buttons as Pizza Tower characters
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Gimme something saucy with Cherry, boss.
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>>152599260
it’s good for the crew’s sake after malicious keeping them hostage for so many years, but why aren’t they releasing the ones that actually looked good? (yes, they exist, shut up)
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>>152599454
creator worked on Tig n Seek, Cuphead, and Middlemost Post (honestly slightly surprised he never did any Waller/Ceccarelli-era spongebob work)
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Reminds me of that rejected Disney pilot about two dudes working on a arcade

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t7CTEyGzZrs&pp=ygUQbWVnYSBtZWdhIHdob29zaNIHCQmiCgGHKiGM7w%3D%3D
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>>152606844
Likewise
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>>152599454
You're talking about Robertryan Cory, and no he didn't work on this surprisingly
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>>152606844
Wow this just feels like a lame version of Regular Show.
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>>152599260
>>152601104
>>152606844
With the popularity of Children Entertainment As Horror in vidya, it's the perfect time for one of these cartoons to get greenlit.
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>>152602739
I see it...
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>>152607173
I'm so surprised there haven't been more studios trying to lean into the whole musty arcade/playground aesthetic besides horror movies, especially when liminal spaces and the Backrooms are so popular right now. You could so easily apply them in a comedy context like this pilot does and make considerable bank.
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>>152606423
A pantsless and shirtless horny Cherry teasing some dude by lifting her apron to reveal her goods (or panties)
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for archival purposes
>>152272682 A For Angel
>>152362433 Accordions Geoffrey & Mary Melodica
>>152437022 Afternoon Super
>>152518036 Bird & Squirrel
>>152599260 Buttons’ Gamezone
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>>152599554
So, are we going to have sex with the girl, or not?
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>>152599260
Makes me wish Baloobaloob's Fun Park got picked up.
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>>152606423
>>152608079
>>152608110
"Ugh, Buttons, do I have to take this table? All these guys are literally green and keep ogling me. And who the hell wears a suit at the arcade?"
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This and the one with the little devil girl are the only ones out of the batch that I could see being shows. I liked how Uncle Grandpa-esque this one was. Also, the dynamic here between Buttons and Cherry was cool and felt like there was some extra layers to it, which means it has more story potential emotionally than Uncle Grandpa did. There's a history to the characters that's appealing and believable. Cool art and gags, funny, snappy dialogue (which none of any of these have had), pacing was good, the show feels full. It feels ready to be a series. Enjoyed it.

>>152602998
>>152605217
I have about the same ranking. I think Angel and Buttons are about on par and there is a power gap between them and the other 3 for sure. I was bored out of my mind watching the bird one and Afternoon Super was just too 2018 to be made and succeed. Accordions Geoffrey was alright, but you guys are right that it would be better as bumpers than as a show. Only Angel and Buttons feel like realized things.

Also, Jesus Christ has it gotten insufferable just to post on here, what is this Spur shit.
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>>152608630
>>152608630
>This and the one with the little devil girl are the only ones out of the batch that I could see being shows.
This one has an actual plot. The other one had a vibe.
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>>152608079
not him but i thought i'd give it a whirl. hope it's good https://files.catbox.moe/cvpkcv.png
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>>152599260
The rat should have played the girl. I like the paint job.
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>>152609089
Woah based! Finally something good to come out of this.
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>>152609089
Got a gallery? I really liked this.
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>>152599260
Haha I knew I'd love this one
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>>152600434
>Another short with zero series potential though, wondering what's the point of even making one of these things if it won't translate well to a show in any way,
>>152605334
>‘Cartoon Cartoons’ had two streams: pilots and interstitials
Which are which?
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>>152601694
>People liked Billy and Mandy for Mandy and Grim.
Wrong. Maxwell Atoms himself said that Billy was the most popular character of the show amongst children, that's why the last couple of seasons mostly focus on Billy
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>>152609752
How'd he determine that? Did he speak to every fan?
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>>152609089
OG requestor here, thats damn good! Love the pose a lot. Thanks for fulfilling my request dude I appreciate it
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>>152609089
Nice, are you doing any other requests?
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>>152599345
Stinkin' hunk of muenster
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>>152609749
Make a guess.
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>>152610068
To be honest I have no clue what the artists were told to make based on the output so far, guess I’ll wait and see.
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>>152610182
A for Angel and Buttons are pilots, Accordions Geoffrey & Mary Melodica is an interstitial, Afternoon Super and Bird & Squirrel are pre-Cartoon Cartoons pilots that they didn't release until now
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>>152610188
Holy shit! I'm always unsure about whether new Simon art I find is actually new or I just never saw it before, but damn, this proves it! Simon walks among us!

Well done as usual, managing to keep the core model while enhancing it with amazing anatomy and exploring the personality properly.
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>>152610188
round bottomed women are my weakness...
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>>152609792
Yes. Guess you weren't a real fan but he came knocking on our door asking about it and I said Billy was my favorite and hope he gets more naked scenes. Glad he listened.
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>>152599740
>Cherry has pornable potential.
She's perfectly set-up for the "desperate for a dollar"/"needs some stress relief after a stressful work day" scenarios
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I'm just happy to see more styles based on Rat-Fink. Shit was everywhere when I was little, and I miss it.
>>152603373
>Button tries a variety of new pits (such as Lego, slime, and spiders) since kids keep stealing his balls
>Business guy buys pizzeria out, and runs it poorly to sell shares at a lower cost. Button and Cherry return to save the day.
>Button tries to run a fine dining establishment, but ends up miserable despite the truckloads of cash.
>Cherry crushes on another establishment's employee to Button's disgust. (Turns out he's a really advanced animatronic).
>Global warming is starting to affect the pizzeria's ecosystem once the AC unit dies
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>>152610390
>Wendy from Gravity Falls
>Jo from Kid Cosmic
>Frankie from Foster's Home
>Gloria from Big City Greens
>Enid from OK KO
>Stephanie from Moral Orel
>Mia from DUncanville
>Nikki from 6teen
>Reze from CSM
There's enough of them now for a wagiecore waifu chart.
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>>152609054
What's the plot?
>Rat and girl have to clean tube maze
>They get lost
>They break out somehow
Wow, riveting.
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>>152610588
>Scene setting
>Rising conflict
>Climax
>Resolution
Yes, it has actual plot structure. The others are almost completely exposition. Which is fine for a pitch. As anon >>152610265 has noted, they were not full pilots.
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>>152610648
>The others are almost completely exposition.
That's fine, they're pilots. And they all have plots. It's been weeks since I've watched them but here's two examples:
>Devil has hard time in devil school
>Goes to angel school, gets tested
>Stays in angel school

>Squirrel is overly cautious and avoids riding bike
>Bird tricks him into riding bike
>Squirrel now rides bike

They have as much of a plot as this one, bonus points for being less randumb.
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>>152610328
That or he just follows all the companies’ social media outlets.
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>>152609089
>>152610188
Absolutely blessed, thank you anon and Simon.
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>>152610564
How about Nat from ‘Sunny Side Down’?
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Requesting Buttons having Cherry dress as a clown for some little beasts birthday party.
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>>152599454
I can kind of see where the resemblance comes from. This does reminds me of modern SpongeBob in a way.
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>>152606844
Even for how derivative and nonsensical this one was, I wasn't expecting to like it so much
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>>152610464
>Global warming is starting to affect the pizzeria's ecosystem once the AC unit dies
That one in particular makes me laugh for some reason.
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>>152612247
Well it does take place in Florida
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>>152612426
>Arcade is torn apart by hurricanes, twisters, snowstorms and the northern lights.
>The whole plot is resolved by them getting a new AC
>"But won't this make the global warming effects even worse?"
>"Sure, but at least not in this arcade!"
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>>152607173

FNAF cartoon when? Fucking Among Us and Duolingo got ones before them.
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>>152599260
This was hilarious, I'm actually worried the shorts program will have peaked here
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>>152612470

>"Sure, but at least not in this arcade!"

It's something that Dana Snyder would say
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>>152612608
>>152612470
In hindsight a snappier 'Sure, but not in this arcade' would work better.
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It's flawed, and Cherry-as-foil is the problem. Cherry's appearance (and that of all of the other humans seen, really) is too grotesque. They fit in perfectly with the Gamezone, which makes the Gamezone less grotesque than it is intended to be. Similarly, Cherry doesn't have the dignity required to be a funny punching bag. It undercuts your straight man to have them pulling more ugly mugs than the literal rat. I think you'd need to slap in a bright-eyed new hire that gets ground down under the joint mismanagement of Buttons and Cherry if you wanted to get a series out of it.
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BTS artwork from the crew

https://www.instagram.com/p/DVJfPjmld6j/
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>>152613071
Nice
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>>152609875
np
>>152609928
suggestions? if you're fine with sketches like that
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>>152599260
Close enough, welcome back uncle grandpa
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>>152612929
>I think you'd need to slap in a bright-eyed new hire that gets ground down under the joint mismanagement of Buttons and Cherry if you wanted to get a series out of it.
The problem with that idea is that a character like that would be a yes-man to Buttons (Cherry may be the manger but Buttons is her boss)
>Buttons and Cherry dealing with birthday parties
>Buttons wanting to make the kids birthday dreams come true and cherry being forced to come along for the ride

>Buttons and Cherry find a civilization under the ballpit

>The Gamezone is being renovated
>Buttons turns Cherry's apartment into a temporary Gamezone
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The designs are shit, the overly animated scenes are a cheap pop for animation buffs and ren and stimpy did this far better. Gross out cartoons dont last as they shouldn't. This will be another episodic slop which people will forget after it ends.
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>>152613784
Cherry giving some lucky guy a sloppy toppy and titfuck combo
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>>152612477

You can tell the person who drew this was a huge Helluva Boss/Hazbin Hotel
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>>152614153
>Crossover ep
>Buttons wants/tries to enslave Uncle Grandpa and friends so they become new attractions for the Gamezone (and eat Pizza Steve)
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bump
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So would you watch a full show of this?
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>>152609990
YA YA YA

>Audience flies into screen
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>>152615169
>Buttons tries to pull a space jam with his wagies
>Uncle Grandpa is a literal Chaos God with a super robot and Giant Realistic Flying Tiger on his side so he immediately wins and destroys the GameZone
>Out of his kindness Uncle G rebuilds it,but only with the deal he and his posse gets to go for free for eternity
>This accidentally solves Buttons' desire
Wholesome
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>>152616220
sure why not
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>>152616235
>It ends with Buttons giving a terrifyingly murderous grin to Pizza Steve
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>>152615055
hope it's alright https://files.catbox.moe/jjfvf1.png
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>>152616823
finna bust
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>>152616823
Hell yeah it is! Thanks man
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>>152616220
Most assuredly.
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Cherry a cute
https://files.catbox.moe/o2ef3k.png
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>>152608081
Wait? They're releasing these in alphabetical order? What a random-ass decision. And they're only at B? How deep does this disney vault go?
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>>152616823
All she needs now is a creampie to fill her up
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>>152609089
>>152610188
>>152616823
>>152618234
SEXO
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>>152599371
she's a bit saggy for someone her age.
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>>152618234
>>152618792
Damn nice, anon.
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imagine a footjob from her super long size 15 clown feet haha
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>>152599740
>purple haired disgruntled wagie
GET THIS WOMAN A SHOTA, STAT
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>>152599260
Cute background character.
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>>152618278
There's at least 26 shorts/interstitials in this program alone, and if you add the shorts from the previous iteration of the shorts program that nudges it just over 30. Only 15 videos on the official playlist for CC though, hoping they upload more soon. Would hate for this to end with them not uploading all of them proper.
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>>152618721
All the better to motorboat
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this was actually pretty alright. better than the other shit posted here recently.
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>>152599260
I liked it, is the most cartoom ass cartoon I've seen in a while.
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>>152614713
>This will be another episodic slop which people will forget after it ends.
this is not gonna be a show
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>>152614713
>namefag
>trip fag
Opinion utterly discarded
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>>152606844
>>152599260
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AsLFOzbrEh4 another one
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>>152610564
Pleasantly surprised anyone remembers Jo/Kid Cosmic. I understand the pacing pretty much got wrecked after season 1 but it was fun in some parts.
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>>152618721
a funny boob drawing in a CN product in the big 26... maybe it isn't over guys
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Jaded clown girl having a literal rat for a boss. There's a joke there somewhere.
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>>152619594

Next one is Badass Babies i think. The creator of that one did a AMA in 4chan a few years ago
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>>152618792
Zamn
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Chuck E. Cheese and all of it's knock offs are a thing of the past that'll never return. I wonder if kids give a shit when they see how fun Chuck E. Cheese used to be for kids.
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>>152621912
i don't think kids think anything besides "omg a fnaf reference!"
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>>152621912
“great, another millennial rubbing his cool 90’s childhood in my face”
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>>152622326
I associate Chucky Cheese and Showbiz Pizza more with X'ers, although that shooting did mark the end of millenials.
In hindsight, it's kind of weird how many culture-defining shootings happened in Colorado.
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Fan art from Puig's old board partner on The Cuphead Show
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>>152600314
>Florida
Of course.
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>>152612477

No matter the style, every artist will make Roxanne Wolf hot.
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>>152622892
>That dress with those clown shoes.
Really goes to show shoes make the man (or lady in this case).
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>>152613071
Based
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>>152620141
It was created by Craig
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Cherry looks like a clown.
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>>152622892
cute boobies
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>>152614376
>When Cherry takes a well deserved spa day, Buttons hires a temp manager to fill in for her, but the temp end up creating a huge disaster that buttons has to interrupt Cherry from her relaxing spa day to save the day.
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>>152616220
Nah. It's fine as a short. It's overall fine.
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>>152616220
>YES
>YES
>OH GOD
>YES
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Any chance is still gets picked as an actual show? Seem some people saying these shorts are quite old but i dont see why they would publish them if they have no intention of ever greenlighting at least one
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>>152616220
No
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>>152622892
fancy dress and casual shoes is a sexo combo
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>>152599260
Ok that was...actually amazing.
Love the darker undertones and creepy imaginery of mixed media.
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>>152622892
>choker
Chef's kiss.
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>>152623504
Her nose ring turned her nose red.
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>>152599260
pretty fun comedy cartoon
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Interesting.
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>>152611257
i like that image, the old spongebob isn't pissed off for no reason.
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>>152619206
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>>152610464
>Business guy buys pizzeria out, and runs it poorly to sell shares at a lower cost. Button and Cherry return to save the day.
Expanded the idea
>Business guy tries to buys pizzeria out
>Buttons refuses
>Business guy makes side offer to Cherry
>Business guy succeeds
>The new Gamezone is neutered/dull/souless/Calarts
>Cherry likes it at first, but then becomes bored
>Buttons with Cherry take back the Gamezone
>Cherry apologises to Buttons for betraying him
>Buttons says "Don't worry, you'll make up for it someway" with a cartoonishly deformed/sinister grin
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I don't like Cherry's design. It's too circular. The cartoon tries its best to go loose and zany which I appreciate but it's still held back by CN's pipeline.
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>>152627541
Not everything has to be goonbait
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>>152627558
I agree, but that's not my issue here. All I'm saying is that there are still remnants of a corpo-mandated stlye here.
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>>152627117
Someone remove her shoes.
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>>152619587
She reminds me of something Robert Crumb would draw. It is the pants and shoes.
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>>152619418
That's oddly specific. How many times has it happened before?
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>>152627827
Silly cute background girl, that isn't how you hold a slice of pizza. She's such a rebel.
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>>152627956
At least three
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>>152599260
I liked the Duck Amuck reference.
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>>152628583
Gloria, Jo and who else?
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>>152630252
I forgot about Jo.
Then it's four
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>>152599260
This was genuinely enjoyable. Good concept, good jokes, good use of Dana Snyder, and good FOTM material with Cherry. I'd definitely watch more if it were ever greenlit for a full series.

>>152599286
>"See? Kids love pizza. And they love squalor."
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So they can make funny Uncle Grandpa style cartoons still, they just consciously choose not to.
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>>152632136
Probably because everyone hated Uncle Grandpa when it came out.
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Is buttons supposed to be a dickhead? His head thing looks like a condom. Coupled with his ears makes like a dick and balls silhouette.

He never seemed cruel or rude just negligent.
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>>152599260
I feel kinda like this by not being able to like intentionally ugly cartoons.
I get there's artistry to it, I get that it takes effort, I get that cartoons should be cartoony and not just traditionally pretty and appealing, but, this shit is just SO fucking UGLY, makes me feel like a fake cartoon fan.
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>>152599941
Looks like Basil Wolverton and i agree, this is the sort of shit that would actually show up on 2010s CN.
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>>152600434
It's basically the Spongebob Krusty Krab sections but the boss is both Spongebob and Krabs. It could work.
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>>152632347
> Coupled with his ears makes like a dick and balls silhouette.
His ears are... something else.
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>>152632787
I don’t like it either. It draws attention to the storyboard animatic
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>>152622892
Source?
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Bump and pump Cherry's rump
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>>152618234
>>152618792
>>152618234
Someone post these on the collection
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>>152634732
nicklauerart on Instagram.
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>>152631185
>These Scorpions are beyond gay
I can totally see Buttons pull a Spirit Journey Formation Anniversary
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Thanks for the super detailed frame.
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>>152637609
>Puss In Boots 2.png
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>>152637609
good to know canon eye color
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>>152607173
The problem with that is where do you even take a FNAF cartoon? Would it be an unironic attempt at an in universe kids cartoon? Would it be animated goosebumps? Would it be a Gravity Falls knockoff? There's so many routes you can take and all of them can easily go wrong.
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>>152638902
>where do you even take a FNAF cartoon?
Make it a light hearted made for vhs movie parody that the restaurant would sell when it was still open
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>>152621208
post the thread i wanna read it
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I want to put my button on Cherry's gamezone if you know what i mean
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>>152641008
You're saying you wanna pop her Cherry?
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>>152638902

Just adapt Security Breach's story into a mini-series ala Infinity Train S1 and put the endings of the game as voting.
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>>152638902
Make a serious horror comic on a freddy pizzeria and have it be loosely based on the books. Its really not that hard, i can even already picture it in my head, you just need to get one of them IDW/dark horse artists that do licensed stuff to do it.
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>>152641101

made for boop
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>>152632787
I don't dislike "ugly" cartoons, but I kind of feel you. There is something off about how digital this is imo. The creator wants it to be reminiscent of counter-culture punk designs ala >>152613071, but having detailed grime in every shot doesn't work as well as it should because it's undercut by the extremely clean-looking linework and paint bucket tool color scheme. I still find the grease stains and hairy carpet shots unnerving, but not to the extent of feeling exaggerated. It just looks like we're spending time with the scraggly characters in an otherwise clean and cutesy world. I think this is an intentional clash of ideas, to make cartoonier moments pop, but idk, even if there's intent it only barely works.
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>>152627653
I'd prefer beanmouth toons if they took visual cues from the classics like this one does. Everything's super rounded, so lean into that and make everything look a bit volumetric, balloony and 30s styled than chibi gag manga styled.
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>>152643970
>Everything's super rounded, so lean into that and make everything look a bit volumetric
This is more an animation issue than a design issue at this point. Cartoons just need to move more, turn more, twist more, instead of just moving in a straight line at a level camera shot all the time.
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>>152599371
It looks like a typical generic cartoon in the generic animation sweatshop style, but it gets the Felix Colegrave dial turned up every few seconds before going back to normal. I'd rather just have a cartoon that commits to looking like a Benadryl nightmare 100% of the time, or at least uses the style shifts more strategically instead of constantly peppering them in so neither feels like the default.
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>>152644808
Move, turn, twist!
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>>152646324
Bop it!
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>>152599260
this was pretty funny, but I'm still on the fence with the artstyle
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Bamp
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>>152599260
Test
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>>152647318
Johnny Test?
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>>152616220
It grew on me so sure as a casual watcher
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>>152599260
Not bad. I wouldn't watch it, but I'm not the target audience.
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>>152599260
Uncle Grandpa?
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>>152599260
Fun stuff. I feel like I've seen this style before but can't quite figure out where.
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>>152644808
I feel like a lot of issues with frame by frame productions stem from how over half of modern cartoons are rig animated. The traditional animation pipeline has kind of been left to rot and nobody knows how to do nice looking animation timing/X-sheets outside of people like Genndy T who actually had to learn that stuff or actually got to animate things rather than just storyboard.
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>>152621208
Alphabetically, if we're already at Bu- and the previous short started with Bi-, I don't think we're gonna see that pilot.
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>>152649807
Retard
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>Playlist is stuck at 15 videos
Yeah a lot of these pilots will stay in the vaults
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>>152650711
>>152606844

>mfw you don't care about Paramount buying Time Warner because they were never going to greenlight this anyway
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>>152616220
It feels like it works better as a short, but I wouldn't say no to maybe 1 season.
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>>152599698
the arcade design for the MC is so cute
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>>152610188
I love this nigga like you wouldn't believe
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is there a chance of anything getting greenlit while the merger is happening?
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>>152648118
Who this
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>>152652121
There's generally no incentive for a tv executive to revive a project from a previous regime. If it fails, he gets blamed. If it succeeds, the former exec gets the credit.
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>>152652317
Another pilot in this thread.
>>152606844
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>>152634923
>>152648118
Lovely sketches. I don't know if it's the brush or if you use a dark grey instead of black for the lines but it's very pleasant.
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>>152652361
I wonder if the cartoon cartoons have a chance because its really up to the new execs to greenlight it at this point since everything is on pause until its all merged
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>>152652603
execs don't even watch cartoons. expect nothing but baby shows and/or reboots from here out.
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>>152634923
Deserves more (you)'s
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>>152599260
Too gross. I like cartoony. But why make it look so disgusting.
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>>152654266
>i like cartoony
>"too gross"
You dont like cartoony
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>>152654328
cartoony drawing =/= cartoony animation
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>>152654266
I don't mind gross, but this is probably why it didn't get picked up. That and the obvious phallic design of Buttons.
Some people just press their luck a little too hard.
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>>152654402
In the original pitch art he had a joystick for a nipple, and pre-pitch he was known as Nipples the Rat. Could've been weirder.
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>>152654545
How good were the nipples?
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>>152654545
Well, I certainly admire their spirit. Probably should have been an AS pitch.

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