>>7885765
that sounds sick. please God learn how to actually write if you haven't already. don't fumble this idea.

>>7885765
Read Reverend Insanity.

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>>7885765
you can do it, aniki

Death Racing is a mood

Sounds like Wacky Racers and Death Race 2000 with all the fun sucked out of them. Sorry, just my boomer-ass opinion

>>7885765
Sounds like a fun plot. Make it happen.

>>7885765
I'm starting to think "forgotten by God" is taken literally, like your story has a supernatural angle to it
would be a nice element to your story though

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>>7885765
>What would you do
i dont know... haha...
do you have more art?

>>7885765
I would remind myself I will never be Japanese

>>7885765
A race war?

>>7887624
more like a war race

>>7886277
aww hey, i completely forgot to check the post.

i think i have pretty good ideas for the story, but i guess i'm just lazy

>>7886682
i was thinking the exact same thing, edgy Wacky Races

>>7886285
ANIKI, ANIKI, ANIKI

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>>7887575
yeah, i do

>>7887577
i'm Argentinian, which is worse

>>7887564
it has sci-fi and paranormal stuff, so yeah, i guess you are right

>>7888048
sweet
>>7888046
better than being chilean

>>7888046
it seems like south americans and western europeans love making comics

>>7888053
because we want money to get out of our countries

>>7888042
learn about lineweight and drop the aliased memecrutch

>>7888059
>memecrutch

the what

>>7888060
shitty noise to hide the shortcomings of the lineart the same way chromatic aberration is elsewhere
your panels will look like badly upscaled unreadable shit

>>7888062
it needs to look like shit, that's the whole point

but that image is just a concept art, it should look much more detailed like the artwork above

>>7888066
it's not about detail, it's about noise
more detail makes the noise worse because you can't tell what the fuck you're looking at
ink like a normal person, drop the aliasing
>le it needs to look like shit
fuck off, retard

>>7888070
i'll make it shittier

>>7888042
>aliased linework
Ultrabased.
>>7888059
>>7888062
Cringe. Hard pixel lines aren't going to be hiding anything, retard. As a matter of fact, aliased lines are by definition kind of the diametric opposite of "noisy", so you're not only a faggot, you're also completely factually incorrect. The OP image is aliased too and that has proper lineweight.

One thing to take away from this, though, OP- you're going to need to export your images in a lossless format, because jpeg artifacts really mess with hard lines and solid colors.

>>7888081
i really don't mind desu, i like the low quality and imperfection

my very first digital drawings used to look like shit to, though i improved with time. i never got used to higher resolutions, so i recently decided to embrace the Game Boy ass image quality

>>7885765
>What would you do
I'd break out with my sick kung-fu skills and beat up all the bad guys and save all the ladies and then kiss them, it'd be so cool.

>>7888088
cool

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>>7888081
There's a difference between hard crisp lines and aliasing, retard. Aliasing is by definition noise distortion, literally the same as "jpeg artifacts", you worthless dumb nigger. It's not actual pixel input, it's a meme brush mapping to arbitrary blocks which is why it looks like SHIT

>>7888042
wonder if she has a dedicated car or she shuffles between many

>>7885765
>>7888042
Lovely, I wish you luck

>>7888110
every character should have at least a couple of vehicles depending on the situation and circuit

she starts with a Honda Africa Twin bike (with other name) for example

>>7888042
I think you should work on drawing the boots better , looks a bit awkward in the foot and heel area

>>7888126
yeah, maybe

>>7888107
you can express these arguments without sounding like a 14 year old who just discovered 4chan, stop trying so hard.

>>7888042
>tranime

>>7885765
No thanks Gippity-chan

>>7886284
Not the OP, but I read it, why did you say that? It has nothing to do with the post?

>>7888081
it looks like shit

>>7888042
Sexy as fuck

>>7888042
>Posts work and the no draws come out with asinine crab advice

Keep on drawing, brother

>>7888342
good

>>7888353
thx

>>7888107
Even so, the brush still behaves like a hard pixel brush and thus still doesn't obfuscate anything. Your complaints are those of visual fidelity, not the brush itself being a crutch to hide a lack of linework skill.

>>7885765
Wasnt that the same premise as that shitty Death Race movie with Statham
Learn originality slop eater

>>7888942
Surely you mean Stallone and it's a classic.

>>7888942
it's inspired on a videogame, lol

>>7888744
ding ding ding ding!

I'm trash at lineart

>>7888961
literally who?

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>>7889429
the man himself

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>>7889429
I mean yeah, he's not as big as Carradine but he did get his name on the poster.

>>7888942
I'm sure you probably watch anime, and are probably on your hundredth school setting harem slop, or is it your isekai slop, etc. etc. all while unironically typing that comment.
Originality or quality, to a lot of you faggots, means a 'made in japan' tag.

That aside, the idea of a race where you kill each other is cool, and can be done in plenty of different ways. Is Twisted Metal and Carmageddon also Death Race rip offs?.. well, maybe they are actually are?... anyway, my point still stands.

>>7889767
NTA, but I don't know if the same people watching modern isekai anime and the people who know old Roger Corman films have to a ton of crossover. You could have called out horror slasher flicks, that would have hit where it hurts.

The death race concept is just enough of a thing where the influences are known, but it's not enough of a thing where no one bats an eye at yet another one to add to the pile. OP should just do it, if it's good it'll shut us boomers up.

>>7889767
Carmageddon literally had car designs ripped from the film, it was a homage and wasn't even trying to hide it.

>>7889774
gotta love niches where making your spin on it is the big fun of it

>>7889781
>it was a homage and wasn't even trying to hide it.
Does having a homage make it unoriginal slop?

>>7889787
Yeah, but it inherently attracts the kind of people (me). What can't help but point out, "THIS IS LIKE X, AND Y, WITH A LITTLE BIT OF Z ADDED IN", just ignore us. We don't get to talk to people about our interests often so we sperg out when presented with the opportunity.

>>7889797
I feel you, man

>>7889797
I always thought creatives crying about such comments were being kind of stupid.
One, you have people sincerely engaging with your work.
Two, If they accurately guessed the influences, shouldn't you be happy that you're emulating them so well?
Three, if they're wrong and had never heard of those things, shouldn't you be happy to see what they're talking about, as a possible reference for your work going forward?
Or, if they annoy you, just scroll past them. Most comment are vapid, empty, basically overdone memes, at this point. Just scroll past them.

Don't depreciate yourself that much OP, just try following the advice above as rule of thumb when making this comic

DESU, if an anon wants to give a sincere critique of your work, they wouldn't be throwing out buzzwords and slurs.

>>7889856
how tf did desu turn into DESU

>>7889856
>>7889860
Zoomer newfag-kun...

>>7889811
meh, i really don't care about that kind of comments, because being "original" is like trying to invent a new color

the only way of making something "original" is taking an existing concept and adding your own twist and style

(and yeah, I literally described what's the meaning of inspiration and why genres in media exists)

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>>7890510
oh yeah, forgot to add, if you want some inspo for your setting, I would consider checking out the car-related artwork from Gregory Fromenteau

wishing you luck

>>7892153
woah, that's cool

thanks

>>7892877
No probs, I know it's more Sci-fi focused, but I'm sure you can snuck in some fantasy elements in it for your setting/worldbuilding

anything to flesh out your future work