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This thread is for any and all /jp/-related original content. Writing, drawing, music, video games, if it's OC you can post it o' here.
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I was getting bored with the 5 by 5 collages, so I decided to try a 7 by 7 one for 48 images. I was getting kind of low on images to use by the end and the label text is too small in this format. With a 7 by 7 grid to increase the label size I'd have to mess with half grid spaces which would get extremely complicated or go for a 3 by 3 grid allocation which might make the text too big in comparison to the rest of the collage. 9 by 9 with a 3 by 3 text area might work for the text size but could make the images really small and with 72 images there might not be enough OC. Perhaps a 6 by 6 or 8 by 8 grid with a 2 by 2 text area would work better
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Which looks best to you?
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I think they all look bad, you can't really see any of the individual images and especially so in the thumbnail. I don't like the grids, stinks of communism. Just choose one drawing and move on like in past threads.
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Recent drawings
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Collages always feel like drama bait, at least thats what happens everywhere else i've seen them. You'll have to exclude someone eventually, or just include literally the entire thread and that just turns into pure noise for a thumbnail.
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And here's a transparent one for anyone who wants it.
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The finished kukulu from last thread now that we have a new one, happy to have seen everyone that made it! I'd include a catbox to the uncensored version if I could as well but catbox is having issues for me so here's a link to the canvas itself again for downloads: https://draw.kuku.lu/pchat.php?hash=937328340
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A 7x7 grid feels almost comical in its execution to me so I'm going to say that >>50675207 might be the best example for how the OP images could be moving forward.
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>my giant stupid shitscribble that I fucking swore I ERASED right there and noticeably half-done
GOD FUCKING DAMMIT, I hate my stupid fucking life. That was supposed to be the nerd emoji Rikako, but I realized I really didn't feel like drawing so I deleted it. Or I swore I did...
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What kind of body type would Youmu have as a swordswoman? I tried asking /xs/ but that board is dead. Reading online I think kendo practitioners said they get a lot of exercise in their calves, pectorals, and shoulders but most of those are normally covered by her clothes.
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I think I reached Nirvana
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foxy lady
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Honestly since threads have a forced 14 day lifetime, it's best to keep the OP as 5x5 as it used to be to get a good mix of output, variety, and visibility in the thumbnail.
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I drew this OS-tan in her natural environment to try and bribe a request on r/a/dio but time wasn't on my side.
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Here, one zappy ghost for you.
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I really like the Byakuren. Reminds me a lot of the Compact Youmu art style with more detail
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Thanks anons for all the support for the Keine game, I've made a lot of fixes and little improvements to the game. Not all of them but I'll be trying to work on them soon. I'm also working on the art for the Sukusuku version of the game.
Here's that Kogasa scribble that was requested by an anon!
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Study
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Here, your tigga, sir.
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Since winter is still going strong, here's skinny dipping Letty. Don't worry the water is fine!
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Enjoy your larger-than-average rabbit, sir.
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Enjoy this non-evil hermit, anon.
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Today's drawings
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Do you have pixiv and/or twitter?
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cute!!
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Hi /jp/, here is Parsley or perhaps Parsee because I got confused about their name but it kinda fits with the nature. Her eyes are green, hair of sunflower and her clothes are decent, the criss-cross resembles my fitting style before I got to see her. Not that I know much about her, it comes from 誰? If you know you know as well as having tomboy behavior. I remember some small bits she is related to curse? Ha.... may I find her at some point in darkness.
Fortune : bad luck
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>>50680569So are they packing down there?
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Who do you choose?
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Hi, yes, I'd like to request a return. I ordered the extra large and extra soft model mattress. While this model indeed is soft, it isn't your most softest models. In addition, the size of the mattress leaves a lot to be desired. I am a picky sleeper and can only sleep in the best luxurious of conditions. Please take this one back and bring me the proper mattress.In all seriousness, it looks damn good and would be really nice to sleep on
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why is this weird nigger speaking to me
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>>50686695
>Their legs are too long.
Just the way I like them
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It does stand out. The design is very neat but it really clashes with the fact that they either all wear same uniform (on the moon) or very simple clothes that aren't meant to be eye catching (Eagle Ravi). Both Reisens are probably the top moon rabbits being "pets" of some influential people and they still are pretty humble.
Do remember that moon rabbits are for the most part slave race, which your OC certainly doesn't look like.
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Short jacket looks awesome. Echoing the other anon in that depictions of moon rabbits make them all out to be just another rabbit from the mass, meaning they don't stand out. Yours does when placed next to pretty much any I can recall, named ones included, which gives off the impression she would be a VERY important moon rabbit in some manner. If that's your intention, perfect! Otherwise, it's hard to imagine her being another mob rabbit.
Still reemphasizing she's cute tho.
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Also to add to my critique, her wearing tabard is also bit out of place since so far it was reserved only for some of the most powerful characters (sages).
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She's not supposed to be posh or anything like that, or at least it wasn't my intention. I tried to give her a sort-of pilot uniform, hence the jacket.
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There were some other variants too. I just picked this one because it looked neat, but I am extremely open for feedback.
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Cute! I have a moon rabbit OC too. And I also feel that the outfit on the right is the better design.
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Right literally looks like an Umamusume character if you shrink her ears. Right at least has an interesting look going with the baggy pants and moon belt.
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Skirt and the jacket clash a little bit, I think that's why I'm more partial to the left with the moon belt buckle.
Middle is neat but feels more like a dress she'd wear to a party at the SDM than her normal wear.
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In my defense the left one doesn't look like Touhou at all and the right one is very generic. Gonna have to iterate some more.
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I just copypasted the shoes from the right design. Needless to say, it's all WIP.
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Nta but why don't you try something like pic related
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That's not the vibe I'm going for.
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>Is she a main character or a background character?
Main antagonist, I guess.
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Oh cool, because if she was a background character then the jacket makes her stand out too much, a little bit on the boyish side too.
I like the middle one, but I think it's missing something.Bodysuit sexxxxxx
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What about a cape? Or a jacket cape like Murasa?
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There was a rumour in gensokyo during the middle of the night it is said that some ghastly voice would mourn in fright saying "chiiiiiii" "eeeeeee" "nnnnnnn" ever now and then. During inspection, there were bird feathers plucked out and some light and even deep scratches to the tree even to the top, capable of climbing high, unusually some place were dugged out, maybe to chase a small animal to their end, the fur was the evidence.
There was said some passerby saw the appearence from far away, two figure one is short and the other tall, when it looked in their way, former had surpass blood moon but the scarier part were the back, a piercing gaze that can kill from look. He couldn't keep it longer and fainted, but before going unconscious, running foosteps were breaking sticks and branches further and continue were the mourn of a ghost "ちぇーん~!?" no one understood what that mean't, suggested were calling of their ancestors or even someone they hated to curse. To this day the mystery is unsolved.
Behind the scene: When travelling, Chen gets distracted in the forest of any movement and upon grabbing she gets bored and founds another, while Ran was chasing after her albeit couldn't keep up, so had to maneuver and even destroy any obstruction whilst getting panic every minute of losing the sight of her.
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>>50688249
As someone who is incredibly autistic about this kind of thing in particular, I agree this design with the tabard makes her look *too* important
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The long pants variant doesn't look too Touhou, yeah there's characters with long pants like Seihou Yuuka but particularly Moon Rabbits have never been given long pants
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So if she's meant to be an antagonist but not that high ranking I'd go from the 6 sprite the 5th and 6th ones though I'm liking the third one with the red dress, i'd still rate that 6th most sprite my favourite (black pantyhoses are also not a typical Touhou thing so the white calf socks look better imo, getting the white in there works well with the colours... closest we ever got to pantyhose was DDC Sakuya and she could just have ZR)
Seiran and Ringo kinda showed that Moon Rabbit uniforms can have some uniqueness (though this is probably just cause Reisen had that professional looking outfit and the SSiB illustrator used that as a baseline for all the other moon rabbits)
I like the double belt and the cut in the skirt, evokes Toyohime's outfit without copying it directly. And the warmer colours (orange and red + brunette hair) make a nice contrast with Reisen (particularly thinking of her IN outfit and her SWR / Soku outfit with the blue skirt, although i'm pretty sure you went with ULiL Ps4 / AoCF Reisen who has the red skirt... Reisen's personality makes me think of colder colours so it fits (^ ^; )
Suppose if you ever wanted to do a test to see if the near final design works or not just try drawing it in ZUN's style
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You have a lot of cocksuckers here that suck you off because they know who you are, but I'll give it to you straight. She looks forgettable. Just a normal girl with brown hair and bunny ears... There's nothing unique about her that makes her stand out, just a plain, bland design. Although I strongly dislike modern vtumor-esque designs, where they just slap tons of shit all over their head/face and call it unique, this is the opposite of that where it's simply too bland. Bland characters work fine in certain settings, but she is just boring for something Touhou-related. No unique eyebrows, no unique hair, no unique eyes, her clothes are boring, no unique ears, nothing is unique about her. When you make an OC, you should be striving to make them be recognizable and unique while also keeping the design classy. For example, I give all my OCs unique eyebrows as a small sign to tell them apart. You draw every character with the exact same face and eyes as if you copy/pasted it, which does not work well for OC creation. Consider mixing up your style and stepping out of your comfort zone.
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Been hard at work trying to get the game ready for Steam Nextfest.
I'll be trying to finish up a lot of the improvements and requested characters so they're in the demo by then!
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EHHH fucking wrong, she's perfectly fine for something Touhou related. I've seen plenty of terrible OCs that absolutely do not get ZUN's design style at all and a spoonful of good ones that do, this is close to being in that spoon but needs some tweaks
>No unique eyebrows
What the actual fuck since when has ZUN ever designed a character with "unique eyebrows" same for eyes (aside from colour) and ears
This is a nothing critique, based on jack shit and likely scraped from the eternal crab bucket that is /ic/. Get out of /jp/
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I always just assumed that Seiran and Ringo dressed like that because they were on an infiltration mission and tried to dress more Earth like.
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That would be giga lame.
>>50693546
Well no need to be rude about it, I've never done character design before, so of course it's not going to be perfect. I haven't even decided if she should have pants or a skirt, let alone what details to add.
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There's something distinctly modern era 2hu about that left design, I'll give you that.
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Maybe this would be better. I actually felt like she's overdesigned.
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>I always just assumed that Seiran and Ringo dressed like that because they were on an infiltration mission and tried to dress more Earth like.
Nigga they were driving a giant enemy spider through Youkai mountain... I don't think the Lunarians have a good idea of stealth in that case
Also I don't think wearing a skirt with lunar cycle baubles and moon and stars on the hem is exactly subtle Seiran
Jokes aside, as I said. ZUN gave Reisen a blazer because it fit her as a character, it's professional looking. Then Aki Eda when doing the illustrations for SSiB literally only had Reisen to draw from so all the Moon Rabbits are wearing exact duplicates of *her* outfit, and it was only until LoLK that we'd have examples of literally any other Moon Rabbits' outfits to analyze. Seiran and Ringo are definitely less professional than Reisen so ZUN gave them their sort of pajama clothes to fit them
Now there could be plenty of explanations, Ringo is a rear position cushy job haver so her wearing casual clothes would definitely be alright and we caught Seiran on ""break"" so she could have been out of uniform. But then I'd ask you this, would you really rather give every moon rabbit character a 1-to-1 copy of Reisen's outfit like in SSiB?
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I've cited this before there was like one OC I saw whose design I liked because it used design elements taken from other ZUN characters (gradient hair, inner-pattern cape) as a way to make it look unique while still fitting with the design style of Touhou which is exactly what I look for in a Touhou OC, the guy commissioned that jo2n guy to draw it
I'm a big fan of the cape and tactical belt, since it plus the small badges suggests she's likely special forces especially since the cape reminds me a lot of WW1 Trench Raider outfits https://youtu.be/-zOTQtXR8Xw?t=42 (I'm also a /k/ommandoLite, sue me)
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>That would be giga lame.
You're the one that's being giga lame by not thinking outside the box, just because she wears the same blazer it doesn't mean she has to wear it the same way as every other moon rabbit. Whether we like it or not we know that the blazer is a part of the standard uniform for the moon rabbits, but we always see them with it completely buttoned up. You can have her wear it unbuttoned, tied around her waist, or even as a cape like Murasa does with her coat in SFW.
If you're still so adamant about not having a 1:1 replica of the blazer then you could also try adorning it with things like unit badges or other military cosmetics to differentiate her a bit from other rabbits or to assign her to a specific rank/division of the lunar army.
If this were some random touhou girl you'd be able to do what you want, but since you want her to be a moon rabbit soldier I think you're falling into the trap of giving yourself too much freedom in an already-established universe. The canon is there, either use it or do it a disservice.
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And yet none of the protags (except Reisen obvs) recognized them as moon rabbits at a glance. No point in arguing about this really, it's just up to interpretation.
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You can't assume it's the only uniform they ever wear, and also that they haven't designed new uniforms since Reisen last served 50-something years ago.
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>she should stand out more I believe
True, but I want to avoid her being obviously evil like Seymour from FFX or having that donut steel effect that a lot of OCs have. It's not ideal, but I don't mind her being a bit bland if that's what it takes.
>What exactly are you going for here?
In short, a stranded pilot who made a deal with the devil to survive.
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They ARE cute, that is true
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>read the mangas
You are referring to a single manga and ignoring the actual game made by the creator of the series
also found this quote by ZUN in Who's Who
"Tewi is dressed in a similar manner to Seiran, but it seems that she may have imitated the moon rabbits' sense of fashion. "
So yes this is a Moon Rabbit outfit
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>donut steel effect
You won't please everybody (demoralization fags aside) as some people just will never accept an OC no matter what, so I'd say not to worry too hard. Focus on making it look congruous with the rest of the characters (not necessarily "bland")
>A stranded pilot who made a deal with the devil to survive
Well if she's a pilot then that could show up in her design more, though the jacket as is, is quite pilot-y and the black undersuit you're going for does work then in that case so ignore previous ramblings about pantyhoses
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Understandable
>In short, a stranded pilot who made a deal with the devil to survive.
Oh so she's a pilot cool, I thought she was a fighter because of her boyish looking design, why don't you give her a helmet and have her visor partially open so you can see her eyes a bit (adds to the cute factor, if you are ok with that) and maybe wear a jumpsuit since she's on the job, the color could be a bright one instead of plain olive since she's from space and all of that, also makes her "stand out" without doing too much.
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She looks action-ready, but more for a race than combat. While not very touhou-ish, I do like it on it's own.
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I actually went ahead and drew a small doodle about what I wrote here since I had the idea in my mind.
Maybe something like this? The suit could be orange instead and her hair darker, the helmet could remain closed so she looks more "evil" or she could have light eyes because they have technology or something.
I don't know if this could help you brainstorm some ideas.
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Helmet is a bit too modern like something a fursona of a Lockheed Martin employee would have howver that outfit is perfect looks militaristic but with a Touhou feminine charm
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again for all my complaining about SSiB uniform design I love these goobers with their Spaceballs helmets
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Moon 2hu designs the rules seem to be:
Pick one bright color and another that's close in the color wheel for vibrant colors
Other colors should be unsaturated/"dull" like white, black, gray, brown, beige...
Extra yellow is allowed usually for moon/stars. And a bit of red usually for eyes.
No green. Maybe because it's the color most associated with live/nature. So carrot pins are at best, for bunnies on Earth.
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Really depends on what you want. The jacket fits a lot, now that I know she's a pilot.
If you want something that only makes her stand out in-game but not complicate the design you can give her portrait an aura like the one of final bosses in EoSD/PCB/IN. But maybe that's too obvious evil?
If you want to make her feel more /k/ommando or rough long pants and/or boots can increase that feeling.
If you want her haughty/prideful you can use the first design and maybe make her tied hair look more like a crown, even if she isn't noble.
You can consider what you want to stand out the first time someone sees her and if you want some detail that people will probably notice once they know her story( like her having some tiny part of her clothes being torn, maybe a burn mark on her jacket or having her eyes be a bit "odd" because devil deal and so on).
Maybe doing the overworld sprites can help deciding what looks better, since those are simpler than portraits and probably going to be shown in game more time.
Maybe this post is more confusing than helpful though...
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Gradient hair for a character from the moon feels weird. Unless she got it when or after settling on Earth I guess.
It's also one of those things that we have just because a single character has it.
So it's pretty weird to say what's really okay for a character. Even Okuu was the 2overdesigned4Touhou character back then.
A lot of people said that Clownpi, Heca and Chimatan don't look like real 2hus when their games released.
So what is "OK" for a 2hu design might change in the next game.
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imo I would have free ear helmets if any at all. Maybe some flying goggles like those used for old uncovered planes to sell the plane feel (and they would be cuter imo).
Not a big fan for ears covering helmets like that I have to say, and they make it look like an animal with pointy ears.
>light eyes because they have technology or something.
Moon rabbits feel like they could make a Terminator with shades impression with just their red eyes imo.
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Kamaitachi and an Arcanel/Querubin? Or did you perhaps draw before even thinking anything at all?
They look pretty good imo
The fist one has weird lance shape though
The second has vague legwear (well vague details are kind of ZUN-like I guess)
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Considering too overdesigned/basic in Touhou is pretty funny considering the variations of designs. I've once heard someone saying that Rumia felt like: "she had a too simple design for Touhou"
In this pic the colors clash imo.
I would either make her skirt frills white. Or revert to the previous colors and maybe test different colors on the ribbon. Maybe having the hat-veil of a different color than the mobcap could also look good.
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Your artstyle is so cute it warms my heart whenever I see a new picture from you.
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Oh, I like the outfit, but the helmet is very out of place. Plus, I feel the helmet is the first thing a pilot would ditch after getting stranded, so it makes little sense for her to still be wearing it.
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>like her having some tiny part of her clothes being torn, maybe a burn mark on her jacket
That's actually what I plan to do! Just still need to finish the basic outfit first.
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Sure, but as soon as I changed the color to orange it started looking like something else entirely.
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Maybe her hair should be orange instead >>50688249
And with that design
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Add a single wing to the left of the moon on the patch that she has, I think it'd work really well as an air force logo for the moonies because it'd also double as a Sagume reference and Sagume's single wing feels like something the moonies would take pride in since she's a higher-up.
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Ah we have a winner here, though I agree going full orange just makes her look like a mechanic so step back a bit
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I'm quite a fan of this suggestion
My own idea would be, although I know she's a pilot with presumably a Lunarian fightership. I want to suggest giving her one of those lunar veils Reisen II used, both as a neat callback but also it should give her a more boss-like silhouette (and she can easily toss it aside for a fight)
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Lunar_Veil
https://youtu.be/wEv7YzFfTFE?t=21
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Symposium_of_Post-mysticism/Kakashi_Spi rit_News_3
Something neato about Touhou lore is how consistent it is with the Celestial Maidens of Heaven, Dragon Palace Messengers and Lunarians all use the same kind of veils for flight (and in Iku's case fight)
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Haha, that makes her look like a really old timey WWI pilot. It's not a bad look, but it's too old fashioned.
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Too tiny for pixel art. I'll add it on her back, thanks for the idea.
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>Ah we have a winner here
Ehh. The silhouette just doesn't do it for me, so I want her to at least have a skirt or the old jacket to spice it up. Also with the jacket her primary color changes, so that's a consideration also.
>I want to suggest giving her one of those lunar veils Reisen II used
It'll help with the silhouette for sure, but it doesn't really make sense for her to have it. I guess you can justify it by saying it can be used in a similar manner to a parachute in case of mayday, thus implying every lunar pilot is issued one.
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Damn can't actually choose between the two which one I prefer, I think we're closing on the final designs
>but it doesn't really make sense for her to have it.
Yeahhh I was thinking that too (^ ^; )
Two ideas would be
-Pilots are issued one as last resorts because canonically Lunar Veil flight is the most boring and time consuming method of *interplanetary* travel but using it in atmosphere is perfectly fine and perhaps a straight upgrade for the average rabbit.
-She's using it to augment herself in combat, like taking some energy away from flying so she can use it to fight or just ripping off Iku's use of her veil by using it like magical girl combat ribbons
Or maybe she didn't even bring one at all maybe she has just straight up stolen Reisen's old one she used to escape to Earth in the first place (though maybe it doesn't work so well because Eirin tore a piece off to stick to the SDM rocket)
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>but it's too old fashioned.
Cmon it's a good idea! and totally fits >>50694710
The jacket + skirt looks more like a fighter than a pilot at least that's what I think.
If the jacket has to stay in at least make it a bit bigger since she looks like Future Trunks here.
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Delivering this Yuugi for the anon who asked for it!
I just patched the Keine's Expanding Class game demo on steam, and I've added everyone's requests to it. I'll post gifs of the requested images in the thread overtime.
This should probably be the last patch before the Steam Nextfest event starts, so hopefully it's good and there's no horrible bugs or problems that will ruin it for everyone!
If anyone is feeling nice enough to play test it for any bugs, I'd be much appreciated. I promise that if you give any feedback I'll draw a scribble of your character doing what you want and put them into the game!
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I'm finally testing it myself and everything plays fine and I'm not seeing any clear bugs so far, I guess there's a few small quality of life things I can think of that you can try out.
>simple way to just skip through the dialogue at the very start (idk i know you can just spam click but I think holding space to zoom through instructions if you really don't wanna read them is good)
>when you finish a stage you're brought to a main menu that's just wood and notes, the menu could have a Keine on it (maybe even scribbled on the wood, changing with how expanded her tits are?)
>option to just skip straight to the next day would be cool if you wanna keep up a flow and not bother with the menus
>maybe having some kind of shortcut in the stage/day menu to bring up controls quick if you forget them (can just be mapped to Tab or something)
As for features in the full game maybe you could allow unlockable outfits for Keine, maybe with accompanying backgrounds (like getting a bikini + a background with some characters at the misty lake- school trip I guess, maybe a towel & you're at a hot spring, and so on, maybe a different pose depending on the school trip), or just leave that for a future update of the game or cheap DLC or something.
I suppose I'm just thinking mobile-brained (I was actually thinking about fruit ninja originally since it's also kind of a simple game) but maybe even more feedback from the game if you're on a roll, like building up "rank" next to Keine's head or something, and maybe Keine having some expressive anime-like emanata, color changes around the face or momentary aura or something to make it really stand out that her tits are expanding.
Maybe if you spam click hint too much in a row (with intent) then she could change pose to lean over to you and tell you to pull yourself together, with frontal cleavage of course.Draw me Ibaraki-douji!
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The UI is really nice. Honestly really well laid out and the graphics are cute. I felt the difficulty scaled well. Someone who browses pixiv could probably beat easy and you definitely have to play the games to beat the more difficult settings.
One nitpick is that when you complete a day you only have the choice to go back to the "main menu." To me this doesn't make the most sense as you go to the day selection screen instead of the "play and options" screen which is what I think most people would consider to be the "main menu." The first time I completed a day, I thought I was about to get booted from my playthrough.
I think that you should rename this button to "day selection." When you complete a day, it would also be nice if there was an additional button that allows you to just immediately go into the next day rather than being forced back to the day selection screen every time.very well endowed Momiji (Aya would be jealous)
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Thank you for the feedback kind anons, it's really appreciated. Playtesting is hard and a different view point is so helpful.
The comments on being sent to the main menu are good, I think I will rename it to day select as mentioned. Maybe I'll add some cute scribbles to it too off tot he sides (It does look a little empty in the demo but the space will be used up in the full version as you play more!)
As for skipping text and such, you can actually press escape (Or start) to skip dialogue but this is a failure of me not showing that you can skip it! So I could add a prompt to show that it's possible.
Thank you for the feedback, and I promise to draw your requests! They will be in the game + I will post them here when I can.
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yume fanart 1/2
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Pretty cool.
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New art folder dump when
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Right before Steam Nextfest I rushed to push out a patch that lets you click on Keine's boobs on the title screen to make them bounce. It was definitely worth it.
Also Yuuma delivery for the anon who requested it!
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Screw it, I'm way overthinking it, I'll just settle on this look.
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>she looks like Future Trunks here
I can see it kinda. I made the lower part of her jacket look torn off to imply there's more to her uniform without actually changing it much.
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Even though I don't have enough time to draw any anxiety or annoyance at not having that time is all alleviated when I draw frog so everyone should draw frog no matter how much time they have
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Recent drawings
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Touhou (except for the traditional art): https://litter.catbox.moe/m6u5uadudvnk0bly.rar
Traditional: https://litter.catbox.moe/v5fzoqwy8neoxxco.rar
Everything else: https://litter.catbox.moe/hpkn3y8vd5z3am9k.rar
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A fourth OC. Feedback appreciated, and I also suggest you make your own. This is fun.
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Many thanks as always
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I think adornating one or all horns with a bow or a flower pattern would make her look more touhou-ish since all 2hus with horns kind of follow that rule
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>>50702769
Where would one even find them? Only one I know about is this kit for the sunflower fairy.
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Pointed a gun at her. She just used her ability to destroy anything to kill him without the slightest effort at all. Those doodles were really vaguely inspired by what I saw last night.
Last night I was watching footage of what's going on with the cartels in Mexico, and it paradoxically made things seem less scary. The cartel sicarios would wave guns around, set cars on fire, fire into the air, and that was about it. They were too cowardly to actually kill civilians. For some reason, I got the strange feeling that they had only mediocre life forces. Like without their magic tools called firearms they'd be helpless, even I could kill one or two easily. The footage gave me the impression that at the end of the day they're only human, and not particularly strong ones at that.
That's not the only time I've gotten a weak or strong impression of someone's life force. In an unrelated incident I saw a video of a retired boxer take the place of a hostage who was held up by a man with a knife, and the former boxer proceeded to knock the knifeman unconscious. For some reason, I got the impression that the knifeman had a pathetically weak life force. I wonder what causes these strange impressions.
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>>50702591
I dig it and looks plausible as a Touhou design, good thinking with the tearing on the jacket. Pleases the lore nerds without compromising on your design
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>>50703519
There are lots of cool new ones on booth. For second hand you can look at Suruga-ya, Yahoo Auctions, and Mercari.
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Today's drawings
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Made a Touhou OC for fun.
She's based off of the Sakasakubi
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nice.
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she's cute, i like her.
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Nearly forgot to post this here.
Satori and Orin come to steal Marisa's magic ring.
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I have an OC I designed a while back, I think I did post her here before but my memory is hazy. I really want to design more of these American-themed youkai...
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My first time playing with acrylic paint markers, it was fun.
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I drew keiki while on a road trip
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I was surprised to see how little costume swap these two have
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>>50708171
Hot, nice boobs and figure. And I dig the cute chibi style.
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Looks cool.
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Skinny hag
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Reimu has figured out a bold new solution to years of poverty caused by insufficient donations.
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Lyrica and Lily, excited for the coming of Spring.
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ive been seeing that Keine game pop up on my timeline several times now with lots of fanfare around it. might be a bit too early for celebrations but still congrats on the new found popularity before it's official release KeineDev!
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Breaking news: We have just confirmed reports that a mass smooching is taking place in the human village. The Scarlet Police say they are on their way to intervene immediately but they have not yet arrived. Individuals within the area are advised to stay indoors and hide from the smoocher at all costs.
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Some experiments I did the other day to try and figure out what when wrong
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>>50716200 >>50709530
I decided to draw your art with my style since I'm bored. I got lazy with the bottom part, I hope you don't mind. Also the right shoulder is quite difficult to understand so the anatomy is not correct.
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If Ran looks at me like that, my face will be a tomato and my heartbeat like the engine of Toyota.
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i haven't draw big merry in a while but there's a trend to do so now so i went ahead
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>>50715130
Thank you very much anon! It's gotten way more attention than I expected. I'm trying my absolute hardest to make sure I deliver everything to everyone's expectations! I apologize for not being as active here since I'm busy trying to implement absolutely everything as best as I can.
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Sounds like a good time.
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these are really hard to draw on
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Drew our board-tan.
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Indulged in another brief sequence drawing, this time just being the classic Alice height/size growth trope but with Marisa there too. Thought it'd also be funny to include her is all.
Apologies in advance for the semi-obnoxious image size on this one as well (big image ahead): https://files.catbox.moe/8lywro.jpg
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Thanks by the way, I haven't watched that guy in ages but I can definitely still see the similarities too.
>>50693638
I like the girl on the left a lot and how she seems semi-feral but in a cutesy way, the tussled hair full of twigs was a good touch too. Is her right arm just wrapped in that cloth like it's bandages?
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>>50698127
Glad you delivered on my request in spite of my feeback being sort of nitpicky. Speaking of, I tried the newest version of the game and for what it is it felt very polished.
>>50708171
This is really good! Fucking saved.