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It's better to post your art in existing threads, instead of making a new one. Keep that in mind for next time. You could put this one in /salt/.
Now, just to clarify, this could be blind leading the blind, since I'm not the best at anatomy myself lol, but here's sume stuff I noticed.
1. The ribcage, boobs and collarbones don't seem alligned well. Actually, the collarbones and boobs match, it's just the lines at the bottom indicating ribs are in a bit of an odd position.
2. The hand on the pillow looks a bit silly, like it's inflated or something. Also, the fingers are a bit too short.
3. The belt doesn't really have volume, it shares its outer line with the rest of her body. You could make it look more 3d, either by showing how it lays on the skin and making it stick out a bit more, or by making it dig into the skin a bit (which could help with the sexy effect you're going for).
4. I don't know if this was your intention, but she looks really, really long. Especially in the legs. If that's what you're going on, it's fine, but if not, look up some proportion guides.
5. The bottom of the image is taken up by whatver red surface she's laying on. I think you could crop that, so she would be more in the middle. Not to mention, it's a similar shade to her hair and eyes, making them stand out less.