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>What is /wng/ — Web Novel General?
A general for readers and authors involved or interested in the growing phenomenon of 'web novels', serialized English fiction posted to websites such as: Royal Road, Webnovel, Scribblehub, Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Spacebattles, HFY, various personal author websites, and more
>Why read web novels?
Not for prose or tight editing or deep themes, frankly. As a whole, web novels are infamous for content sprawl and pacing issues. If you enjoy having millions of words to sink your teeth into to get to know the world and characters, though, you may be interested. Keeping up with other readers on a weekly basis to discuss the story's events unfolding is another perk, in the same way discussing an ongoing TV show might be.
>Why write web novels?
Ease of access & potential for Patreon earnings. Many successful authors gain an audience on their website of choice and funnel their readers into a Patreon. See graphtreon.com/top-patreon-creators/writing for an idea of what some are earning.
Also, once an author has earned a fanbase, transitioning into an Amazon self-publishing career is several orders of magnitude easier than starting 'dry'.
>/wng/ authors.
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>Advice for Noobs!
##READ THE FOLLOWING BEFORE ASKING FOR HELP##
Running your story like the business it is:
www.royalroad.com/forums/thread/116847
On writing web serials:
alexanderwales.com/how-to-write-a-web-serial/
Sanderson's Writing Lectures 2025:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEUh_y1IFZY&list=PLSH_xM-KC3ZvzkfVo_Dl s0B5GiE2oMcLY
Recommended web novels
rentry.co/d2yvczro
Anon's guide to success
rentry.co/RRBasicGuide
FAQ
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>>25108013
you need to do something new, once you're done with what has become work. I suggest a new genre that you wouldn't have normally tackled previously. Myself, I didn't like isekai. But once I started writing in it, I fell in love with my story. Since I don't read much of it it will be different from everything else out there. or it will hearken back top more basic traditions it came out of. Either way it should be different. Finish what you're on, then take a break and do this.
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>>25108048
I have to do, at minimum, 2 books worth before I can take a break. The problem is I'm basically writing on autopilot and my brain is currently incapable of forming thoughts outside the outline. Still, maybe I should write something new regardless, but my brain has a really hard time handling multiple projects at once.
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We had only one (1) person who succeeded last thread at writing 1k. Sons, I am disappoint. Still, there are more opportunities before us. Such as now.
/wng/ Thread Quest #6:
Give some thought to whatever power system you have or are thinking of making.
Just about every WN has a power system of some sort. If done well, it adds to the story you want to tell and immerses readers further. You'll know it's done the job when you see comments theory crafting about what they would do with it themselves. Simple or complex, share what you have here.
Good luck, and have fun!
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>>25108179
Seconded. Originality is a lie. What you do is you steal brazenly, steal often, and stir it up a little. If you steal from 10 different things and then stir it together a bit, filter it through your own thoughts, you will end up with something "original"
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>>25108186
retard
inb4 muh inspect element, as if you were worthy of the effort
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>同人
I was curious. I looked it up what our asian friend was saying:
In Japan, a doujin is a group of people who share an interest, activity, or hobby. The word is sometimes translated into English as "clique", "fandom", "coterie", "society", or "circle". Wikipedia
basically stated, anon is pointing out that tina is now your group hobby. congrats seething anon. the asians are making fun of you now. Way to fire ass wipe.
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>>25108178
Well, you can start with what story you want to tell and go from there.
>>25108185
This is also good advice.
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>>25108121
>Give some thought to whatever power system you have or are thinking of making.
The power system is mana. The more mana you use the more amazing things you can do. Warriors mostly use mana internally to make themselves more physically capable. Mages mostly use mana to affect change on their surroundings through spells. There are those rare few that try to pursue both paths at once.They cripple their progress for marginal benefits.
Warriors can externalize their mana ("cast spells") by channeling it through weapons. Eg they can make their sword shoot out wind blades. Mages typically can't internalize their mana, but they can shield themselves with it to make them survive in a pinch.
Monsters use mana too to produce various effects.
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Would a cultivation novel set in india work? Instead of taoism, Confucianism and Buddhism the religions will be Hinduism, Jainism, Sikhism, and buddhism. The caste system would play a major role, I'm thinking of making the protagonist a caste that typically doesn't have access to cultivation, and there will be beggar-sect/underground resistance like organizations comprised solely of hijra or dalit
I'm not actually Indian but their culture fascinates me
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>>25107999
Lack of productivity is killing me. I feel like I must write a novelette of 10K words to prove I can tell a story with a beginning, middle, and ending.
That would be about 5 chapters if every chapter is around 2K words.
>Chapter 1: hook andintroduction of main cast
>Chapter 2: introduce supporting cast
>Chapter 3: dark twist
>Chapter 4: climax
>Chapter 5: epilogue
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>>25108457
>you could write shit
Yeah, you could.
>>25108458
Keep us posted lazyboy, I'm sure it'll work out great.
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>>25108496
retard
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>>25108597
Survivorship bias. When a person succeeds at something, he begins to place excessive importance to the perceived factors behind his success, while disregarding all the cases where those factors didn't contribute to other people's performance.
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>>25108121
Equippable Skill System
Every monster possesses its own set of abilities. When you defeat a monster, there is a chance it will drop one of its abilities as a Skill Core, such as Fire Breath Lv.3 or Haste Lv.5. These cores can then be equipped and activated by the user.
However, users have a limited number of skill slots, so they must carefully decide which skills to equip, which to upgrade, which to sell, and which to fuse together to create stronger or entirely new skills.
Most people are born with one to three slots, with the potential to unlock an additional slot every fifteen levels. While leveling up does increase base stats like Strength or Defense, a single high-quality Skill Core can far surpass the benefits of years of grinding. Power isn’t determined by level alone, but by the strength and synergy of one’s build. A Level 1 player with three Lv.99 skills that complement each other perfectly could potentially defeat a Level 60 player who equips seven weak Lv.1 skills with zero synergy.
The main character could have a stupidly broken build like:
- Last Stand: Boosts all stats by 300% while at 1 HP
- Second Chance: Survive a fatal attack with 1 HP
- Suicide Bomber: Self-destruct to inflict extreme fire damage within a 100-meter radius
There could also be a secondary progression system focused on crafting and upgrading armor and weapons, each with their own slots, skills, and mechanics.
A system like this could potentially go on forever. Since I could take the Metroid approach and take away the MC’s skills at the start of every new arc, forcing him to pick himself back up with a new and exciting build that’s even more broken than the last. He could shift from being a tank to a healer, to a spy, to a puppet master, and more. I could even have him ping-pong between being an overpowered protag with cheat abilities and a weak underdog who has to fight for scraps.
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>>25108747
Of course, it fundamentally can't resemble TTRPG any more than TTRPG-based games can be truly faithful to TTRPG. Different formats demand different Systems Theory even if you start with the same Systems Concept.
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>>25108747
>the more you read/write it the more you realise it doesn't actually resemble videogames/ttrpgs that much.
As if that isn't glaringly obvious when the MC pulls a dozen skills out of his ass just for getting up from the bed in the morning. These writers have never heard the word "game balance"
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saw this one post describing Buddhism as a form of "Copeism religion", thoughts?
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Anybody thought about cross posting their works to novelpia. Seems like their expanding westwards, though I'm skeptical about this fund. Seems like the KR version of webnovel.
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>>25108951
Cultivation as a genre is extremely escapist, of course it's a fundamentally copeist genre.
"The system is rigged but I'll climb up and overturn the whole thing if I have to get my freedom" is a huge cope and very fitting for downtrodden chinese youth who read these novels.
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>>25108925
novelpia offered me a contract once to publish my shit on their platform, it was something like $80 advance and $50 for the next three months with the only demand that they made being that they had the most available free chapters & several premium chapters available
no demands not to have a patreon or the like, and they said that it'd be possible to delete the story if stubbing became necessary for amazon kindle
they also offered premium where you get some fraction of the money paid by all premium subscribers but at that point it'd be harder to stub and the like
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>established international payment services securely used by hundreds of millions of people around the world are totally worse than this rpgslop fansite operated by two literally whos
Are you fucking kidding me, retard?
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>>25108986
RR doesn't have a captive userbase. They haven't captured enough market share to be able to afford to be shitcunts and they don't have the predisposition to be shitcunts. Believe it or not the site wasn't created as some israeli ploy to capture the webnovel market, for once it really is a coincidence. So I don't think it'll go that way. People can always flee to webnovel or novelpia or just toss away serialization altogether and go full amazon.
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That's exactly why I don't think they're likely to fuck it up. So far, they've shown themselves to be fairly competent and of good character. Too busy to deal with small petty bullshit like discord cliques coordinating launches, sure.
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>>25108986
There is one Israeli that is the co-founder of RR. It's just some dude who likes SFF slop.
>>25108990
The Chinese that run webnovel.com deal with thousands of thirdworl authors and tens of thousands (if not more) of premium users so by this logic they're even more trustworthy than Royal Road. Why don't you go do business with them isntead?
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>>25109027
Yeah, I think the good ones get it right. Open world RPG with essentially unlimited progression.
I've tried to play a few TTRPGs that way and the problem you run into is that their economies are designed for maybe one upgraded ever and XP is mostly tied to narrative events.
It's definitely a niche to fill. Really only stuff like Elder Scrolls games comes close to the feeling, depsite most litrpgs being closer to the likes of mmos on the surface.
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>>25108968
130 dollars for three months of work. doing everything you're told to do.
you could work one day a week at a gas station, asking of they want a pack of smokes with their fill up and make more cash than that. plenty of writing time left over.
just saying.
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>>25108580
working on their schtick. to put together a tony robbins style thing. its not your writing, its your lack of the business end of things. let my webinar teach you how to succeed doing what you're already doing. allow me to help you. here, watch me karate kick this board. now put all your money in that barrel over there. if its full, no matter. I got an empty barrel for you all ready to go. he's refining his grift-speak on us.
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>>25109138
When you pull a story from a platform because kindle unlimited demands exclusivity.
You leave a couple of chapters up (a stub) as like an advert.
Funny thing it that the exclusivity deal is time-limited but people rarely put them back because they see the free chapters as lost income.
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>>25108951
Daoism. Finding dao, studying dao, dao translates roughly as a way. That is what cultivation is.
From my personal understanding Buddhism and all that it encompases is one of many Daos.
Buddhism mythology is also often used in cultivation novels.
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>>25108925
>get 50,000,000 views
>make $500,000
I dont like Novelpia. Everything they say and do tells me they're desperate to expand their userbase as fast as possible. This sort of bullshit is going to get a lot of gullible writers, but not readers. I also don't like their exclusivity clauses. You publish something on Novelpia they own it forever. No thanks.
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>>25109271
that’s mostly because buddhism and daoism are practically indistinguishable at this point, since so many concepts belonging to each got blendered and mixed together sometime during the 1st century AD. aka, as soon as buddhism entered China it race-mixed with taoism, and their resulting mutt children is the daoism and chinese buddhism we’re familiar with.
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>>25109564
None of these.
WN read postapocalyptic and mediaeval-static. Which really both mean postapocalyptic since the Middle Ages literally rose out of the Roman ruins (often plundering old temples for columns to use in churches).
PALAEOLITHIC: Clan Of The Cave Bear sold among women, which made Jean Auel ridiculously rich. I don't know if anyone has touched it in the WN space but it seems they could.
BRONZE AGE: I'd like to think Bronze / Heroic / Egyptian New Kingdom has some traxion. Anatolia Story / Red River was a manga about being isekai'ed into the Hittite Empire. Haven't seen it much around the WN space, but I've seen it in literotica (because everyone wants to fuck the Egyptians' cat goddesses).
IRON AGE: in-effect means Biblical fanfic. Christians buy it.
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>>25108878
Maybe PoE is just really popular in Japan?
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>>25108408
10K words is still basically a short story length, so it's better to write the whole thing in one go without bothering with a fixed formula.
Maybe come up with a prompt like
- Just because I have a cheat skill doesn't mean I'm going to use it! The hero wants to play the game properly.
- After defeating the demon king, the villain, who's secretly a good guy all along, still has to pay for his crimes.
- After spending 100 years in the most dangerous dungeon, the returned Lv 999 archmage lacks common sense.
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I was thinking about how shit MTG is, how about going back to the roots of 'character summoned by an eldritch being to the battlefield and then discarded like trash afterwards'
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>>25109835
That's basically most "king and the princess summoned the hero but they're evil assholes who plan to betray them after they kill the demon king/the hero has a seemingly useless skill and gets kicked out of the palace.
Or the ones where the god(dess) that summons the hero is actually evil or they're retarded and cause the hero to suffer by sending them to the wrong world or giving them the wrong ability.
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>>25107999
>various personal author websites
Is anyone in here doing this?
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Nice. I'm actually doing it as we speak. I've never conceived of the story I'm telling as a "web novel," but I gradually became convinced I was going to have to at least initially release it online in sections, on a domain I totally controlled.
I had a buddy with experience in the publishing industry who told me the first book of the story just wasn't going to be a draw for agents and publishers. Not only is it long, it's weird, deliberately so. I made, and will continue to make, artistic choices that aren't initially what publishers will want. My thinking is that if I can attract some attention, maybe I can make them want it.
Also the story gradually gets very metaphysical, very spiritual, and very religious, which I know scares publishers off. But I knew I couldn't trust Substack, Royal Road, Wattpad, or AO3 to really be a home for such an odd work. I know it's odd, so my own website is where it's going to have to go, at least for a while.
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>by this logic they're even more trustworthy than Royal Road.
Well, clearly they are more trustworthy, since they've been in business for years and RR has not been for a day yet. They're also very open and direct about their terms, so you can't say you're being deceived if you knowingly agree to those terms. Is logic a completely alien concept to you, dumb goy?
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Weekly chapter review
Pale Lights (patreon) : bold move by Angharad , let's see if it works out.
Years of the Apocalypse (patreon) : War of the Prophets is a 'GO' . So far this final book is fire.
100 Reigns : Simon got a ton of conspiracy info this reign in exchange for minimal level ups. I also love that he is becoming extremely competent and that we slowly see him maturing into the man he can be.
Player 0.4 : I should be alienated by the change of tropes by I got to admit that I like Not-Hagwards world so far.
Apocalypse Reborn : Things are going to well , waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Trial period :
One was Worthy : not bad but I have a feeling the author messed up the scaling of their rpg system. Keeping up with it for now.
Timelooping for Dummies : still too early to judge It's a rare thing to see somebody so deliberately stupid as the MC. The humor can be a bit cringe but I don't mind (for now).
RE: Knight : Not what it says on the tin. As I wrote in my review , "this is just the typical YA backpack-zombie-survival deal so far". If it doesn't get more original in the next few chapters I will drop it.
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>>25109728
>10K words is still basically a short story length
Wrong, it is classified as novelette.
>it's better to write the whole thing in one go
You guys write 10K words in one session?
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>>25110067
Not that Anon, but I had one incredible session about six years ago where I sat down and wrote more than 15,000 words without stopping. I've never been that productive before or since. It was amazing, I was like a machine, a soldier on a march.
Unfortunately it was fanfiction.
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>>25110074
Something about fanfic that makes it trivially easy to write huge amounts. Even if it's functionally mostly original and only uses some surface elements from the source work. Maybe I should use this. Write a fanfic, then go back and file off the serial numbers in editing.
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>>25110090
No. Don't. You can't do that. Fanfic is fanfic and original fiction is original fiction. They're different functions of reality, they operate on different organs of the mind. Even if you go back and file off the serial numbers of a fanfic, it will still BE a fanfic. Just like how Shades of Grey still feels like a fanfic despite all the names and places getting changed to make it original. You know it's a fanfic when you read it.
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>>25110093
It doesn't matter if anyone who reads it can tell that it's just "Battletech-with-cultivation because Mech Touch did it wrong", they will read it, they will pay, and I will not be legally liable because I made sure to remove the serial numbers
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>>25110152
I don't see why, it was well known at the time, he spoke about it somewhat regularly in public servers, both how much his whales were paying and how much he would write per day, something insane like 10k/day at max. It's not exactly "if you know it, the guy can tell who you are" type information. I know better than to talk about that kind of actually sensitive stuff.
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>>25110067
yes. I regularly might go 5k in one session. I've definitely had long 10k or more in one go but that was off work, schedule open, work all day and all night, sleep in next day. But if you sit down and its that kind of day you go with it if you can.
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>>25110054
just get a free forum site. easy. thread could be a book, every post a chapter. plus other forums on it could be for talking. your patreon pay piggies could come and get their special pictures, extra chaps, etc. Only pay piggies get access to extra forum, etc.
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>>25109957
>Anybody deal with Moonquill before? What rates did they offer you? Anything to look out for?
they used to list generic terms on their website not sure if they still do. I once submitted a chap but they never got back. they won't even reject you, lol. you have to figure it out yourself.
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>>25110316
>How do you guys come up with titles?
I either pick an important feature of the work and describe it abstractly or come up with a metaphor that describes the work as a whole.
I know one thing a lot of people do is steal random, possibly vaguely related to the story, song titles.
Or you can do the meme and describe the premise in a drawn out way, e.g. "Lily x Narcissus?!?: Love Blooming Between Split Personalities with a Video Exchange Diary"
Kinda tells you all that you need to know on the box.
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Oh, also use wordplay.
In the example title I gave, Lily, Narcissus, and Blooming are all flower terms, but they also directly relate to the plot.
Lily=Yuri=Lesbian and Narcissus=Narcissistic
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>>25110316
I tended to wait on book title. I wait for some motif or theme to seem to develop as I write. Maybe some phrase comes up a few times even if stated different ways. That way when the book is being read, you understand the title. I want the title to mean something as well as sound half cool. I've red books where the name was like that. something buried through the book somewhere. Its kind of cool when you reach the point you hit the title that way.
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i have those days. we all have those days. but i also have 2,3,4,5k or more days. you write through that shit. when i have a cool little movie in my head, i know its time to write. I know the cool scene I'm writing towards, and what comes after is obvious. I have some scenes that I'm not there yet and it bugs me so that keeps me plugging away. I'm excited like a little kid. I want to write that cool scene I keep seeing.
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>>25110346
>I've red books where the name was like that. something buried through the book somewhere
So have I but usually when writers do that it falls flat. I rarely have a "HE SAID THE THING!" moment. Not saying success is rare, just less common than failure.
If you really want to get tricksy with it, you can use an obscure word or phrase or double meaning or otherwise hide something in your title that a reader isn't going to instantly realize is relevant to the plot to reward clever/well read readers.
I think the best example of this I can think of off the top of my head is from the anime s-CRY-ed. The deuteragonist and frequent PoV character is literal scrying the fucking story.
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>>25109935
>Also the story gradually gets very metaphysical, very spiritual, and very religious, which I know scares publishers off. But I knew I couldn't trust Substack, Royal Road, Wattpad, or AO3 to really be a home for such an odd work. I know it's odd, so my own website is where it's going to have to go, at least for a while.
We're the same person. I'm doing my own website for the exact same thing, as well as to provide better support for different languages because my primary audience isn't in the US or Europe.
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One month has passed since the end of FFF-Class 'Unlucky Antagonist.'
What's your opinion now that the dust has settled?
I'm doing a polishing and fuck if I did a great job.
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Enjoy
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/119783/fff-class-unlucky-antagonist- villains-origin-story/chapter/25130 66/martial-critique-part-eight-stan d-alone
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Author notes, based or cringe?
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Is "I Became an Evolving Space Monster" peak?
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Pic related is peak. Web novel world would be a very different place (a much worse place) without it.
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>>25108325
Poisonous insects raised in their own bodies by the diabological southern barbarians of the miao tribe.
>>25108390
Trains would be too unbalanced and hygene too.
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Has anyone here actually tried to create a gu by putting a bunch of insects in a jar and letting them fight it out/each other until the sole survivor contains all the distilled venom of all the others?
Might do it as a weekend activity with my nephews.
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I'm creatively bankrupt. All my ideas are from maladaptive daydreaming and reading fandom wikis for media and IPs I haven't even consumed.
Gonna spend the next 6 months not writing anything and actually consooming media so I have quality grist for the mill.
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>>25112115
Are you me? I've been thinking I should consume more media because of how I've been struggling to write lately. It's a balancing act of slurping from the stagnant pond of RR and watching shit versus writing
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>>25112120
You can use AI for more things than writing. It's preaty good at creating and curating lists and suggesting creative input.
Also visitng TV-tropes will help more than consuming random slop.
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>>25112120
I sincerely hope your [insert name of this condition here] isn't as bad as mine. I haven't consistently consoomed media in a long time because I'm so stuck in my own head. I'm not even doomscrolling on social media or playing games though I unironically think I should do more of the latter. I'm just holding onto fantasies I've been wallowing in since I was a teen. Godspeed, anon.
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>TV-tropes
still not ideal as I'm already all too familiar with this mode of quasi-consooming via several degrees of separation and abstraction
but I'll look into your suggestion for curating input
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>>25112125
AI's suggestions are retarded and only tell you what you definitely shouldn't do, unless you want to be predictable as fuck and ridiculed by everyone. The results will be even worse if you start taking notes from fucking TVtropes
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>>25112212
I always find it amusing how much people hate on AI. I find it hard to comprehend how people are incapable of getting value out of AI. Can it one shot write your novel? Of course not. If you try you end up with: >>25111325
But that's not all you can use AI for. You can spitball ideas, ask for suggestions, mix up your prompts with crazy shit, explore new ideas that would take too long to figure out on your own. There are many things you can do with AI that can help you write a better story. Want to know how much farmland a city needs in your fantasy world to feed itself? Ask the AI. It doesn't have to be perfect, but it will likely give you an answer that's more reasonable than "there are no farms around the city" (which is a common thing in fantasy stories).
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>>25112139
>I'm just holding onto fantasies I've been wallowing in since I was a teen.
I'd like to respond to this general sentiment rather than your particular situation.
I think the best way to deal with this is to learn to write badly. Specifically learn to accept that you're going to write badly and do it anyway.
Personally, I had a half dozen story ideas that I liked before I started writing. I deliberately set them all aside and came up with something derivative and simple that I knew I could write badly without getting overly upset at the monstrosity I knew my hands would create and people would criticize. This helped me get the mechanics of writing down (actually putting out words everyday, where to put my energy drink cans, etc) and build the good habits.
I wound up writing about five books worth of bad to mid material before I even attempted writing one of my "good" ideas, which turned out to be shit actually upon looking at it but some of it was salvageable. I wound up writing, rewriting, and doing some narrative editing that was painful but in the end the story was much the better for it.
Also in the end I found that nobody IRL reads anyway, so having "written five books" is entirely a social status play at this point, and me warning people that they're not great comes off as humble bragging which ironically makes me seem more authentic, despite actually being authentic. So even those first five bad books can be useful to one's "author career" beyond just honing one's craft. One just shouldn't put too much of oneself into one's work until one is more competent and has some experience under one's belt.
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>>25112224
>I always find it amusing how much people hate on AI.
I always find it disturbing how low IQ and socially maladjusted people turn AI into a turing test and fail it with gusto, treating an overgrown statistical word-guesser like it's a sentient being that actually thinks and can provide useful/reliable/correct output in anyway other than probabilistically.
An intelligent person wouldn't get any use out of "being right almost 80% of the time!", and a socially well-adjusted person wouldn't get their social/emotional needs met by a chatbot.
Personally I think the literature community (writers, critics, readers, professors) need to be way, way more harsh on any author or writer of any kind who gets caught using AI in any capacity (temporary covers don't count). Getting caught using AI even once needs to be career ending, a life-long black mark or red letter(s) that warns everyone ever after not to trust anything that person puts out. If we don't gatekeep the posers they'll overwhelm us even worse than the marxists did last century.
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>>25112224
Of course you can't see anything wrong with it, because you're a total NPC yourself without any taste or creativity, focusing on retarded, meaningless things.
>how much farmland a city needs in your fantasy world to feed itself?
Who gives a shit?
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>>25107999
>The murder of the Great King prompted the beginning of two decades of civil war. Countless pretenders rose to make their mark on the world. When it finally looked like the bloodrain had had its fill, a new storm erupted. In a moment of desperation, a defeated usurper opened the gates of the kingdom. A barbarian horde swept through the realm like a plague. The few untouched settlements found themselves torched.
I guess that's as good a way to start a story as any.
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>>25112534
Completely skippable chapter.
>entirely trans ideology/fantasy nonsense
>hmmm this guy is struggling, how can this be made to be about the main character?!
Sure enough, author-san found a way.
>everyone comes out looking a bit like an asshole except the MC
>completely glossed over the incredibly impropriety of borrowing company property to crossdress at work
>absolutely zero lawyering and zero superheroing
I want to give the story a 0.5 star rating but can't be assed to use my alt account and "catch up" reading there.
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>>25112764
i found it amazing that they managed to make a statement that magically transitioned peoples are just as trans as everyone else. Which is, uh, something that may or may not be an argument in certain subcultures, I guess?
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>>25112771
>24 frames per second man
>twice
>curses are all jobbers and completely irrelevant as threats at all times
>muh eyes and limitless energy
>muh limitless energy and OP shikigami
>muh reverse curse healing technique
>muh not having curse energy actually makes me the strongest
>muh helicopter hair
>muh fingers
>muh bodyswapping
>muh immortality
>WITH THIS TREASURE I SUMMON
The power system is in fact shit. I can't actually think of a worse one off the top of my head. The story is carried entirely by fights which are drawn more like storyboard sketches than anything actually legible, so the anime is needed to clean it up and make it presentable.
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>>25112774
The whole thing was an incoherent mess which is exactly what you'd expect from mentally ill people.
>crossdressing at work is necessary actually
>casual abuses of power at the firm are okay because the MC is a mary sue
>the entire concept of being trans is all confused (as you said, a magical actual complete transition either does or doesn't count, it's not clear!)
>transition is treated like a ritual or sacrament
>apparently there's a "community" and what the "community" thinks is supposed to matter
>also the issue of sex and attraction is totally hand-waived with the MC being "asexual, I guess" just so the author doesn't have to deal with any of that bag of worms
It's ACTUALLY completely unnecessary for the narrative of the story so far to have this arc with the intern. MC's trans backstory is ALMOST entirely unnecessary, except that there's family drama that spills over into the lawyering and the superhero stuff.
It also makes me sad because this is exactly the kind of fiction that should be burned, because it's the gateway to grooming impressionable youth into contagious mental illness. And it's largely unnecessary. None of this shit HAS to be in the story.
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>>25112827
correction, i gave the wrong number
ajazz ak820, that's the one i got
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>>25112859
>any point
>just want to
We need something in the OP/FAQ to address this sentiment.
What are your expectations for this? You can do anything you want but depending on how off-meta you are, you may only ever get a negligible number readers which in turn means any efforts to monetise your work through the usual web fic pipeline won't result in meaningful shekels. If you're just doing this for fun then none of that matters, and nor do your concerns. Any notion of "should I...", "can I...", etc would be meaningless.
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>>25112391
>Who gives a shit?
Everybody that wants the world building in their novel to not be trash.
>Of course you can't see anything wrong with it, because you're a total NPC yourself without any taste or creativity, focusing on retarded, meaningless things.
I guess you're just too stupid to understand.
>>25112316
>An intelligent person wouldn't get any use out of "being right almost 80% of the time!", and a socially well-adjusted person wouldn't get their social/emotional needs met by a chatbot.
You are clueless. A lot echnology works on probabilities. Lots of engineering effort is used to make such systems reliable.
Also wtf is this schizo rambling about getting social validation from AI. Where do you see that topic even being discussed?
>Personally I think the literature community (writers, critics, readers, professors) need to be way, way more harsh on any author or writer of any kind who gets caught using AI in any capacity (temporary covers don't count).
The only people that matter in this group are the readers. Critics and professors can fuck off back into their bubble.
Ultimately I am glad that so many people in the writing community are vehemently against AI. They are self-sabotaging and decreasing their own chances of success. All you have to do to outcompete most of them is not be retarded like them and use the tools at your disposal.
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This might be a retarded question (I am nearly certain it is) but did Japan ever do cultivation novel parodies or is it only browns who got obsessed with MTL'd webfics and then went on to write their own super cool cultivation winnies?
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>>25113056
>Japanese don't write
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>>25113069
Japanese write? Can you give me some recs? Something that's not conscious stream, 1st person pov, female protag or harem/smut/teen drama ?
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>>25113078
Huh?
>>25113079
That depends on your tastes but there are hundreds of translated light novels at this point.
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>>25113078
>being a shithead who doesn't proofread posts and responds with vitriol when his typo is humorously pointed out
We got an AI user here, folks.
>>25112957
This is cope. Seething, even.
AI users are shit. Anyone who would make himself a reverse centaur is less than human.
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>>25113115
>basic requirements such as his
They're not requirements, they're a matter of taste.
First person POV, stream of conscious, female protag, and harem/teen/smut drama are all extremely popular narrative devices/frames or topics.
Spice and Wolf meets the requirements, btw. But he'll refuse to read it.
>no see I meant no drama at all hurrrrrr I want to read Japanese Asimov's Foundation series ACTUALLY hah gotcha
It's disingenuous to "ask for recs" as part of making a point. Such a person isn't actually asking for recommendations, and they're just planning to shit on anything they're offered. It's effectively trolling even if the poster is actually sincere due to sheer stupidity.
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>>25108696
That sounds really neat. Kind of like making a skill stealing system that everyone can participate in. That suicide bomb ability could be tweaked to do the self damage first to get to 1hp range so that it boosts the attack.
Looks good with plenty of room to explore wherever you take the plot.
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>>25113124
Spice and Wolf
Log Horizon
Hell Mode, I guess. Although it's not that great, but there's a lot of content and it's not first person POV
The Magician Who Rose from Failure
Altina the Sword Princess (MC is male)
The Magic in this Other World is Too Far Behind
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>>25113139
>No, I meant what I said.
>Japanese don't write
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>>25113093
>My tastes are: no conscious stream, no 1st person pov, no female protag, no harem/smut/teen drama
Doesn't this mean you basically don't read winnies at all? The last one is more rare on RR but the rest exclude everything on RS right now doesn't it?
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>>25113194
I can do it for him to save him some time.
>>25113148
>furshit, Japan
>SAO clone
>worse litRPG than DCC and also harem
>harem
>harem
>harem
Source: I copied the names into google + "novel updates" and checked the tags.
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>>25113197
>harem
Is >>25113200 harem?
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>>25113200
nyaa.si
>>25113197
Do you think you're cool? Do you think you just won the conversation?
Actual l**dit behavior.
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What should I read next? I'm thinking My Evil Stepson System, My Stepmom Is A Vampire & Her Entire Bloodline Wants To Breed Me, SSS rank Mother-In-Law to an Invincible Family, Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?, Transmigrated As An SSS Ranked MILF Overlord, God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem, The Isekai Milf harem!, Hunting MILFs in a Trash Eroge, Extra's Life: MILFs Won't Leave the Incubus Alone, MILF Paradise System, SSS-Class MILFs And Their Yandere Daughters, I Want Them All!, Extra: Yandere Milfs Obsessed with me!, NTR: Milf Fantasy Isekai, My Milf System, My Class? MILF Hunter. My Rank? SSS. My Problem? Too Many Wives., Milf Note, Milf Hunting System: Becoming A Milf Hunter After Transmigration, MILF Hunting in Underworld, Milf Hunter: Seducing And Taming Beauties, Milf Hunter in Another World, Leveling Up by Seducing Milfs, In Another World, All Milfs Will Be Mine, After saving milfs, they all want to own me, or GILF Hunter.
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>>25113038
>This might be a retarded question (I am nearly certain it is) but did Japan ever do cultivation novel parodies
It's been known to happen.
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>>25112973
That's true, but that wasn't the discussion in the thread.
>>25113038
Does Dragon Ball count?
>>25113079
Overlord?
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>>25113430
I'm a little bit through it. Fun so far.
https://kemono.cr/patreon/user/5429305/post/150379309
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>>25113747
wuxia is terrible, why would anyone waste time with it
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>>25113534
The writing is good, but the whole skill/scaling system makes little sense, the MC has too much plot armor (or rather, for such a popular game, it's unlikely the MC is the only one to figure out the little things), and the love interest sucks (seriously, a SEA cripple?)
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>>25113799
It's about the theme. Wuxia theme is terrible, setting in wuxia may be fantasy, it may have power progression, but the theme generally is some uninteresting low energy crap tailored for npcs. The majority of western trad books are like that, they may have good prose, good worldbuilding etc, but their themes are mostly about mundane npc things. It's dull and uninteresting.
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>>25113839
Can you be more specific?
"Theme" is a pretty vague and imprecise term nowadays that people use when referring to everything from motifs to a perceived moral message the author is trying to impart.
>>25113845
Unless the bait is overwhelmingly obvious, I think it's helpful to give detractors the benefit of the doubt. I am interested in genuine criticisms.
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See pic related, it's more or less what I meant by it.
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>>25113872
What themes purportedly common to wuxia have you identified, and find mundane and uninteresting? What are examples of themes/works/genres that you find compelling? And just to be sure, are you aware that wuxia and xianxia are different things?
>>25113880
yes but any resulting exchange may still be interesting (or at least amusing) and spark further discussions from more serious anons with whatever material gets dredged up in the process
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>>25113747
Define progress. I'm pretty steady at the moment, I suppose. I coasted on people asking me for shoutouts for a solid month or so but now I'm gonna have to go back to asking people for shoutouts myself. Unfortunate but it is what it is.
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>>25113920
I think it varies. I don't have any hard evidence backing this up or anything but I'm pretty sure I wouldn't have hit RS without shoutout swaps. It's probably not strictly necessary but it does seem to help.
Swapping shoutouts with a guy with 5 followers or whatever probably isn't going to help me all that much, but I just think of those shoutout swaps as paying it forward.
>>25113932
>Are you getting much feedback?
2.5k followers and at least a couple of messages that aren't just "tftc" on most chapters. Maybe that sounds like a lot but it really isn't compared to some of the numbers others pull.
If you'll allow me to give a tip, I'd actually caution against backlogging way too much. I spent a year procrastinating and writing and I haven't stopped writing since, which means that I'm now 135 chapters ahead of even the Patreon version. I probably should've realized it myself earlier but having that much of a backlog does remove one of the strengths of the staggered releases, in that you can course-correct if necessary.
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>>25113961
There was no argument or further elaboration on what counts for boring or interesting themes. Merely stating something is boring isn't an argument.
Whatever has happened so far is ironic, but neither valid nor invalid.
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>>25113965
I don't know if I can put hard numbers on it like that. It depends on how fast you can put together a chapter and what your update schedule is like. As a rule of thumb, in my personal opinion between two weeks to a month of backlog seems like it ought to be enough once the story's gotten started.
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>>25113839
>The majority of western trad books are like that, they may have good prose, good worldbuilding etc, but their themes are mostly about mundane npc things. It's dull and uninteresting.
yes. you come off as highbrow and extra cool by shitting on western stuff. stay edgy my friend.
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mitka.net/ahalfbreed
a story of 35 chapters i wrote about a half breed
here's chapter 1
When I think of my parents bed
I think of white skin with black fur
supple curves with gaunt jaw
nails that grope without defense
and law humiliated by a beast.
And this heart, hammering…it hurts!
Big beast heart, heart too big for me!
Pale white skin, skin too soft for me!
Pollution by the strong! Bitter apples!
Mom, I want to taste their sweetness
and shun meat…please, just don’t kill
another hare for me. One day, I’ll learn
to love bitterness, and cast aside
My nature!
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>>25113727
He's obsessed.
>>25115257
Where?
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>>25115510
Final arc of Dragon's Bloodline. Genuinely the dumbest bullshit I've ever seen. Around the time the kingdom building started the series went off the rails, but the final arc was just complete edgy nonsense. Half the plotlines get dropped. Several major characters basically fall out of the plot. The MC teams up with the villains because of a natural disaster. Best girl dies for the stupidest fucking diabolo ex machina reason. Our Earth gets destroyed by the MC in a berserk rage. MC turns into an emotionless hermit.
I cannot stress enough that this was the worst book I've ever finished.
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There used to be this one series on RR with a very webnovel.com type cover art, as in the protagonist in MMO-style armor with a shiny title. I think he had red hair.
It was around 3.5* by the time it was finished and the final chapter was just the MC's full, unabridged character sheet. It was around 6000 words of buffs resistances titles abilities etc. This was around 2021.
It was deleted from RR at some point and I'm just posting here to try and see if anyone is old enough to remember.
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>>25115716
>I don't want the story to be an excuse for themes. Theme should emerge from plot,
From the readers perspective it should but as an author you will still need to plan for it, unless you are one of the nu authors who just vibe out 50 chapters a day.
>but theme should build around theme.
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