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The general thread for Manga / manga-styled comic-making, manga-style illustration and related comic work. That said, everyone is welcome here.
Support each other and talk about your work or the work of others that excites you. Inking, character design, paneling / layout, writing, planning, and other discussions are all welcome.
Post resources, questions, in-progress pages, breakdowns of other works, etc. If a work is not yours, credit the maker (unless it's fucking obvious like a full page of One Piece or something).
Thanks to everyone for making /mmg/ a level-headed and helpful place. Remember, drawing and making comics and manga are difficult endeavors, and we're all in this struggle together.
Previous thread: >>7917929
Some resources:
/asg/, our stylistic sister-thread series for those focused more on illustration >>>/ic/asg
Books:
Understanding Comics
https://e-hentai.org/g/2042453/83e7da6ed0/
Making Comics
https://annas-archive.org/md5/d55168f7579c1e23275d1fc9f0a2255d
Manga in Theory and Practice: The Craft of Creating Manga
https://annas-archive.org/md5/2877da11e2f852d220853e9944e6ea49
Story: Substance, Structure, Style and the Principles of Screenwriting
https://archive.org/details/RobertMcKeeStorypdf/
Even a Monkey Can Draw Manga
https://kupdf.net/download/even-a-monkey-can-draw-manga_58b9ca16e12e89 233badd376_pdf
The Shonen Jump Guide to Making Manga
https://mega.nz/file/i81imLpI#GcheJ9Jjk3lw1RE9nQWgL4RG4wEBNOcRmgA-iaU6 Wpg
Videos:
"Manga Senpai/Tokyo Name Tank", "SMAC! THE SILENT MANGA AUDITION COMMUNITY"
Habanero Scans: https://www.dailymotion.com/HabaneroScans/videos
Manben link can be found on archive.org on different pages separated by season: https://www.reddit.com/r/manga/comments/1bu9f0y/found_all_of_naoki_ura sawas_manben_and_manben_neo/
Urasawa Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCkIFOAoFm47XOAlJwTa6Ieg/videos
OP image is from Jormungand, Chapter 50.
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Other open comic publishers:
Dark Horse ( https://www.darkhorse.com )
>Dark Horse still welcomes your submissions, and all submissions will still be reviewed, just as they always have been.
>All unsolicited story/series proposals must have a full creative team on board. Writer-only proposals will not be reviewed.
Image comics ( https://imagecomics.com/ )
>Image Comics only publishes creator-owned material. They do not contract creators; they’re only interested in publishing original content for which you would retain all rights.
>Image Comics publishes creator-owned/creator-generated properties and THEY DON’T PAY PAGE RATES. Image takes a small flat fee off the books published, and it will be the responsibility of the creators to determine the division of the remaining pay between their creative team members.
Drawn and quarterly ( https://drawnandquarterly.com/ )
>Please email a low resolution PDF with at least 20 pages of comics and cover letter to submissions. Do not send dropbox links, scripts, or proposals. Please read our submissions FAQ.
Fantagraphics ( https://www.fantagraphics.com/ )
>submission page: https://www.fantagraphics.com/pages/faq
Top Shelf Productions ( https://www.topshelfcomix.com/ )
>Regarding submissions, we're easy. Just email us a download link of what you'd like us to review. NOTE: We cannot accept cover letters, plot synopses, or scripts unless they are accompanied by a minimum of 10-20 completed pages (i.e., fully inked and lettered comic book pages).
Additional publisher lists:
> https://jasonthibault.com/definitive-list-comic-publisher-submission-g uidelines/
> https://writingtipsoasis.com/best-independent-comic-book-publishers/
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Some western / indie publishers of Manga:
Saturday AM ( https://www.saturday-am.com/ )
> Digital indie magazine, seems to be on the up-and-up
> Open submissions for long-form series; also distributes series currently being published elsewhere.
> Regularly publishes one-shots, making it a good potential outlet for already-finished work.
Oni Press ( https://onipress.com/ )
> Technically indie, but at this point large enough by comic standards to be mentioned in the same breath as other publishers.
Antarctic Press ( https://antarctic-press.myshopify.com/ )
> Longtime large-indie publisher of OEL / manga-esque books.
> Seemingly taking submissions at present if https://antarctic-press.myshopify.com/pages/submissions is anything to go on.
Yen Press ( https://yenpress.com/ )
> Started out as a small indie publisher of original / Korean material, and has grown reasonably popular since.
> As of 2016, it is also one of the western arms of the Kadokawa Corporation, with Kadokawa owning a 51% stake.
> Editorial inquiries can apparently be sent to [email protected], however, they apparently are not open to new submissions at this time.
Viz Media / Viz Originals ( https://www.viz.com/originals )
> *The* western manga publisher.
> Currently in the exploratory stages of setting up an English label.
> Submissions are open and several books have been announced. However, progress on the label seems to be moving very slowly.
> Still might be worth a shot anyway.
Shrine Comics ( https://shrinecomics.com/ )
> Small indie manga publisher
> Seemingly attempting to make the transition to physical volumes
> Allows crossposting to other sites
Iconic Comics (https://www.iconiccomics.com/)
>A bit like Oni Press and Antarctic Press
>A small publisher with a focus on indie works with manga inspiration
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/mmg/'s very own anon-led anthology: /ic/onography
https://discord.gg/QYnFBves7V
https://forms.gle/d3a2Cwwd44sJYyqv9
(Anthology project is defunct but the discord is alive)
Additional community added Resources:
Mangafonts: https://mangafonts.carrd.co/
Hiro Mashima YT: https://www.youtube.com/@mashimaCh/videos
Ganmo, a job listing board for manga assistant work: https://ganmo.j-comi.co.jp/posts
How (You) can help /mmg/:
> Know about a contest or a publishing opportunity? TAG THE OP and post a link.
> Have a new resource? TAG THE OP and link / mention it for inclusion.
> Don't be a crab
> Have a link / DL for a mentioned resource? TAG THE OP and mention what you're supplying a link for.
> SCREENSHOT / PASTEBIN effort posts that help you for posterity.
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I can make one or two pages but I don't have the time and energy to make a full fledged chapter let alone a full fledged title. Just random separated pages. I already have characters and world building fleshed out and even had its own bible. Just no time and energy to pour it all in manga chapters. Just sporadic pages and panels episodes.
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Dekita..! The first chapter of Vedanomicon. I hope some of you like it. I'd be grateful for any critique or advice
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RT6wg6FHUn4tcobHKehd5hC83cl-ckdx/view ?usp=sharing
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I've been talking with friends about my writing process and getting feedback on the direction I'm going. These conversations tend to spark some kind of desire to write for them. They always say they wish they could be "trying this hard." I'm not doing anything radical, or difficult. I try to encourage them to start, or to pick up where they left off. but they really struggle to do so. Even friends who I consider more well read than me. Some of them have projects they've been conceptualizing since I started my comic 8 years ago. I wish I knew what to say, or how to help motivate them into really getting a project going.
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>>7927158
I can't go through the whole thing critiquing every panel and page, but I can say that you'd profit from more smaller panels. Take the very first page - it's supposed to be showing our protagonist (I assume) falling off of a really high height, but because of how the two panels are drawn, it shows the before and the after of them slipping off the building, but not the DURING. A small panel of their body sliding or a body part reaching out would be a big help. Also obligatory comment about the rough art - the lines are messy and while that can add to the aesthetic, sometimes it's hard to tell what's what, especially when it's specific, oddly shaped, small objects.
Very cool aesthetics, however. Reminds me of Hylics and the art of Serotines.
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>>7927220
This isnt to sound doomerish but you cant really "help" people with that kind of problem. Art is a process of discovery and some people will always fear taking that jump, but its almost always something that they need to get over on their own. Making a story almost always involve failures that the reader will never see in a final product(hopefully anyway) but to the person making it, it can be tiresome and not worth the effort in the moment. Like I myself was one of those fags who was like "I'm waiting to be good at art before I make my shit" but then by coincidence one of my college projects was to make a fake comic page, so I got pushed to make a fake manga page and thats what got me over the edge to actually start doing a real one.
Now technically there ARE things that YOU could do to get them over the edge and make it some sort of collaborative effort, but if they dont want the help then what more can you do? You can tell someone all the "right" answers on how to do this shit but some people need to figure out those answers on their own to "get it". Bringing a horse to water and all that.
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Sometimes people have limiting beliefs like "I need a fully realized plot outline before I can start working on the actual comic" or "I'm not good enough to make picture books about beefy men flying and punching because I can't write like the Brontë sisters" where it would take only 5 minutes of reflection for them to realize how stupid it is.
But it's impossible to say what exactly these people's hangup is without talking to them.
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I think it certainly does, people will stop reading things for the dumbest reasons.
I've got a decent chunk of returning readers always popping in around upload day is all that I need to know that people love it, so things are okay. Story will be getting into the more "disagreeable" content in about a year or two so we'll see how that goes since i've already had someone ooze into my comment section to be nasty about it. Ngl it's probably going to be hell.
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I have a couple dedicated readers, and a couple patrons paying to read ahead. my best update days get me good views, and my recent pages have been attracting readers to read everything. I wish I had more comments so I knew what readers were feeling during more than just the big moments. sometimes it feels like the readers are indifferent to whatever writing choices I make.
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Oi got ok views and had a small loyal audience. Cosmic Crush is pretty dead in the water, but I can't blame people because it's so long between updates. I'm atleast going to finish this first chapter I have penciled and then decide whether to continue or switch to drawing something new. Other ideas I have for an all ages soccer manga or a historic fantasy adventure set in Phoenicia and Byzantium that takes place in the same world as Oi.
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I'm not making fun of it, I'm saying it has appeal and it could become popular in the future so its not completely dead forever. And I realized I wrote crunch instead of crush haha because I'm currently eating.
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Eh I have the pages penciled so might as well finish chapter 1 as inking practice and so it's a complete one shot. People everywhere keep telling me it has appeal and they like the characters and concept but obviously it isn't connecting. I'll finish these pages while deciding what I want to draw next.
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>>7927158
easy to follow coherently in a incoherent world. props for that.
my thoughts in order as i see them:
page 3-4 little fella falling, then what goes into a black and white sequence, as it stands now it looks like these are unfinished pages. you need a b/w panel next to a coloured panel to tell us its a intentional, and with the b/w you should push your blacks more, as it looks now it looks crazy over exposed. which doesnt seem to line up with page 6's vibe
page 8, i think i'd like a whole panel of the weird face phone alone, its alien to us, but obviously not to gnome, i dont think i need his reaction, especially considering he immediently picks up the reciever, same with page 3, maybe panel 1/2 can be condensed, single shot of device "ive come to etc..etc." said off screen, phones response is what is important at this point. then you can swap focus to gnome when he says his iconic™ line: i am gnome. it gives it more gravity.
page 12 reads as sterile, like seeing an accountant, if this is intentional cool. if we are meant to feel something push the blob guys panels to make him seem more imposing, the gnome is very small comparatively. you do it page 14 panel 2, i dont see why ever shot of him cant be massive.
page 17 panel 1, could read better, blobs pose is kinda stilted, and the gnome could be more exaggerated, too far of to the left, rule of 3rds etc.
every time gnome like grazes him i dont really read it as that, i only know from the panels following. also i i'd like the laser to have more white in it (this is probably just me) but i picture the lightsaber effect, you could even push the dynamic lighting of it.
page 18, i want a long shot of the lazer curving behind him as he stands in front of it.
page 20-21. i get the idea, its like the cool samurai, death after impact moment. but i still dont understand what happened to him, as shown the laser very clearly misses.
page 21-22, does killing man open the butt portal? or is that just now-
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>part 2
his next destination to go to, if yes it does open portal, i want a more obvious transformation of dead bloody corpse turning into portal, if no, i want context of where this portal came from.
i can't tell if gnome is calling gun junk or the thing he just exploded junk. its also reading weird he ever 'holstered' the gun. i read it as him tossing it. but he has it later, he summons it or whatever, seems like he tosses it to just pick it up 5 pages later.
page 23, is it falling on him, i need a panel of him maybe him being small on the horizon and the big thing plummeting
as i said before is page 24 a scene change?
my eyes glaze over alittle in the following part, obviously we the viewer aren't meant to have context yet, and you get very surreal, my only comment is. with such otherworldly concepts i think you really REALLY need to push the absurdity.
31- does the gnome travel far to find the bug girl? all the headless things are point at him, as far as the horizon goes, but when he meets her, they are facing her. maybe an extreme long shot with these things as far as the eye can see, and him traveling through it, as he notices the clues.
back to us without context:
34- i dont know why he spares the bug, but i think there should be more emphasis on her lil sympathetic eyes, the story should slow here. just for a page or two, it feels like it wants to be more climactic not just a corner panel.
he tosses the gun again, if he had it the whole time it would be more impactful when he discards it here.
35- he obviously realises or discovers something. even if we dont get to know why yet, i want there to be a clue, as it reads now he is kinda just an agent of chaos meandering through the weird world, could he say something that can hook us to why his business is only NOW over?
37- panel 4 and 5 (the bug girl) could be compressed. it reads alittle disjointed because of the layout, it seems to sequential.
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ending is fine,
my final thoughts
its like eyerapingly colourful, my issue is so much detail is lost in just blobs of incoherent colour, it also struggles from looking like it was painted in microsoft paint,
you are depicting a real radically alien world then what we know, i'd love to see some more media or thought put into that. i want it to read as REALLY uncanny, so many times do i wish i saw like a hyper rendered 3d environment or claymation looking blob,
its really glossy, it lacks texture in rendering. everything is hard brush(low opacity) or airbrushed, it makes it look unfinished what should be uncanny reads as unappealing.
i think the lighting is the big issue in this, it really flat, really sterile and even lit, where shadows are used they are just blurry blobs,
i want some some definition, i want to know where something starts and where something ends.
-knight/chef sex guy
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cont.
the girl aint right. (bitches doth be crazy)
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look at your pages, and blur your eyes, thats what is taking focus, background trees and the guys hair. i get its gonna be coloured but the big black blobs are so consuming.
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Yeah thats true, I'll tone it down with the guys hair, and I'll try and find a way to draw the trees better. I'll try and find a middle ground between completely black trees, and detailed ones, cause I dont wanna keep having to put all this details into the trees, but I also dont want them to draw eyes into them. I spent awhile before in the scene in picrel drawing trees
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Ironically this is not far from the truth
The typical 2000's webcomic look is a style born from people who liked anime of the 80's and 90's. The big poofy hair, the vibrant colours, the wacky expressions. And so they copied it. I'm copying it too... but I'm very well aware of how bad these comics look. At best you can say they have soul, but you can never place them even remotely on the same level as what they're inspired by.
I think alot of is down to a few things.
Their colours are TOO vibrant, it's garish.
Their compositions are very sitcom etc, not cinematic.
Their lines are too lazy, they'll do things like drawing an arm that's going off screen but the lineweight will be such that it's clear they only drew it up to the border of the page, and not actually going off screen.
I want to, if possible, avoid looking like an 2000s webcomic and look more like the 80's/90's anime that inspired it
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cont
I think the biggest thing is the webcomic tendency to treat the art as symbols rather than something real.
Where the characters details have become soo formalised that you can hardly draw them from another angle or with different lighting. Line A to Line B, and so on.
This goes along with the sitcom esque compositions, they'll always be drawn from the same viewing angle.
This is maybe fine for a comedic or political webcomic... but what it really lacks is a sense of realism.
In the anime that inspired alot of this style, despite their extreme stylistic details like giant spiky hair and pointy noises, they always maintain a sense of realism. That pointy nose has dimension to it. That spiky hair is real hair, it blows in the wind, it gets wet, etc.
And then the lighting and shot composition is always cinematic. There's hardly a colour palette for the characters, they'll be a different colour in every scene as the lighting dictates.
I think the key to success for me, with this style, is to embrace the same love for 80's/90's anime.... but just do it properly.
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>>7927472
I disagree with the other anons, I think Cosmic Crush has the potential to be very popular amongst women of that sort of tumblr type crowd.
You say it's dead in the water, but how can you even judge it? There isn't a single chapter made yet. It's not dead, it hasn't even been born yet.
You can consider it dead in the water after you've made like 10 chapters and have no views. But I don't think that will happen, I think it would be a hit.
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Since this is the first page of the new chapter, I tried to put extra effort into it.
One of my goals for this chapter is to make it interesting to someone who doesn't know who any of the characters are, so this chapter can feel like the start of a volume.
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I've made a fair bit of bonus art and some pages to flesh out certain parts more.
I'll post the version I'm going to submit to the contest tonight, since the deadline is looming.
After that I intend on doing deeper fixes and giving this thing the ending I actually wanted.
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>>7927946
You should be as close with your writer as humanely possible.
You're not doing two separate jobs here, you're both making a single work. There is writing to be told through art, and there is art to be shown through writing.
When making the plan for a chapter, you should both be making it together at the same time, either in a discord call or in person, going back and forth about how to produce it.
If the relationship is just "here's the story, get back to me next week with it drawn" you'll forever be at a disadvantage compared to people who either write and draw it themselves, and people who work together as a tight team.
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Also it should go without saying that since you're both making the comic, then your opinions hold as much weight as your partner's.
If one of you is saying "don't tell me how to write" or "don't tell me how to draw", Or you're drawing it but you don't really like the story, or the writer doesn't really like the art... this is a disaster, you won't make it.
You need to be on the same wavelength. What you make needs to be something that you both think is the best possible thing.
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>>7927946
Ideally a lot, but writers think their ideas are finished, that's why their seeking an artist. They think artists are like construction workers building their project to code. How dare you think you have a better idea than then? If its not his idea then what do you need him for?
They'll tell you what to change in your drawings to fit THEIR vision. Yes I'm overhating.
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>>7927777
I have to follow the quads of truth. I've thought of cutting my losses and quitting this project alot but people online and irl tell me to continue so I keep going. Oi took awhile to develop a fanbase too. I like what I have planned for the story going forward but atleast I know I need to finish the first chapter/oneshot. Even if it goes nowhere, I'll have something finished to show people and it's good practice and experience to improve my skills for future projects. Thanks for the encouragement.
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Thank you, I'm just happy to get new pages out after a long time making nothing and hope to continue the momentum.
>>7927782
I've only had bad experience working with publishers early in my career which is why I only self publish and sell my books on Amazon and at cons now. I could try to work with an indie publisher but those pay nothing. Pragmaticly i don't think my work is good enough yet + I don't have the connections to get published by a company that does pay like Scholastic or First second, plus being a straight white male editors at these companies publicly state they don't want to publish work of people of my demographics.
My main sellers are my 3 eyed cat comics like Purrvana and a Song of Mice and Fur. They're evergreen sellers and appeal to every demographic- the audience is people who like cats-bikers, tumblerinas, zoomers, stoners, art schoolers, gen alpha, menial reddit types and moms and grandmas all like and buy them. I'd probably have more success if I only drew funny animal comics.
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Penny Perez's design is basically an amalgam of the type of girl who buys my cat comics at conventions. 10+ years this type of girl with colored hair, weird baggy clothes and cat lady stoner/acid head lifestyles are my best customers. Fashion keeps changing through the years but these type of girls always show up to my table and keep buying cat comics. My friend who helps out at my table at shows realized early on that simply asking "do you like cats?" to girls with dyed hair and handing them a copy of Purrvana lead to an 80% chance of them buying a comic or print. Thank you rainbow haired stoner catlady girls for keeping me in business all these years.
Oi usually sells poorly at comic cons but outsells the cat books at anime cons.
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I'll have to keep that in mind if I ever get around to conventions. always alot of interesting people walking around.
Also shame about the publishers, I've heard alot of negative stuff about the publishing world, and them abusing their talent. Funny how this straight white male stuff works too. Managements still mainly straight white men, but all the new hires are ethnics as they have to fill out quotats (usually legally, or in order to secure gov contracts). Older white guys shut the door on us, they get to keep their jobs, and we get left out in the cold.
Anyway, maybe see if you have success in sexy animal comics instead
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I use Mixam (highest quality for small print runs, great customer support), printed in Taiwan for a large hardcover print run of Purrvana after softcover copies sold so well (actual books cost 5 cents each, customs, broker and shipping fees were insane) and Amazon printing (lowest quality but customers don't seem to care, hardcover are expensive but surprisinglt decent quality).
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I have to add with Amazon what I like about it is the black and white printing and paper quality most closely mirrors tankobon. Mixam is too nice when it comes to high quality paper and print quality if you want your finished book to look and feel like a tankobon. Mixam is better for high quality color printing. Amazon is cheapest but you have to upload it on the Amazon kdp program which is extremely annoying and finnicky, especially if you don't have any experience with print design.
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Finally got off my ass and finished the next chapter. It's up at www.readpristine.com if interested.
I've also been slowly working on an idea for a shorter chapter, unrelated to this main story, to get some more trad mileage going. Hope to do it all trad eventually, with the exception of screen tones.
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>>7927946
Depends on how collaborative the process is supposed to be. How much of a say do you think the writer should have on your art? If it's the writer's project and you're the hired help then I wouldn't stray any farther than suggesting potentially more fitting ideas for how the picture conveys the writing, when needed. If it's a joint effort then you should both be treating it as one project done by one unit instead of just "I do the writing, you do the drawing." I don't like having to draw as part of a team if I'm not a fan of the writing which is why I've learned enough to do my own writing, so if that's not the route you want to take then good luck.
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>>7927759
Glad you like, my main issue was the readability of the panels, used the black to direct the eyes to the important features, there's a lot of detail everywhere so the focus gets lost. In the future it may help with saving your stamina to block in the ink in first and then start adding hatching once you're satisfied with the solids.
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Majority of published works in Western countries don't sell more than a dozen copies. Those publishers survive on a handful of big hits that subsidize literally tens of thousands of others (plus many govt. grants). Getting printed is cheap and not a measure of success
You really think people are out there paying money for your picrel?
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they have to fuck soon. but ive just had her have a severe panic attack, and he is a pious dude, there is no realistic world in which they now have sex.
i've really ensured that no sex will happen in my porn comic. if they dont fuck i've failed at the literal only hurdle to step over, if they do fuck the writing feels like it takes a nosedive.
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>>7928320
Did you not go in with a plan on how they're going to fuck? My dude you had such an easy ramp with him cutting down those dudes in front of her. It was as easy as
>I've protected your honor my lady!
>Thank you sir knight, and now for your reward *fondles crotch*
Porn storytelling isn't too difficult, given people are willing to accept somewhat unrealistic progression for the sake of just getting to it already, but it does demand at least some level of forethought...
But also, just what exactly is the core fantasy of the sexual encounter you're planning here? Is it supposed to be the power fantasy knight in shining armor saving the princess and being rewarded with sex? Genuinely asking.
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>You really think people are out there paying money for your picrel?
Not that anon, but I always wonder how these people get these kinds of books out in bookstores. The publisher has to know this crap isn't gonna sell, yet it's available for purchase via store distribution.
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yes of course.
the base plot is damsel in distress, fucks knight.
but i wanted to avoid the trope of near sexual assault/trauma girl feels 'empty' then fucks the guy that saves her.
So i started developing their character more so they had a better chemistry and kinda tapped into a shared ptsd/trauma bond angle, and to establish that the porn got pushed back further and further. now we are at the point that i feel like the tension is its highest and they SHOULD fuck, and the characters are giving me no indication they should.
>just what exactly is the core fantasy of the sexual encounter
woman in time where women are kept submissive, being modern day slutty submissive, cant fix herself so wants to fix ptsd old knight.
i'll work through it, im just whinging.
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My brother in Christ just do what comes naturally man. If your instinct was to do something more dramatic and serious just go with it. Something that started out as being a hentai but actually developing into something more happens all the time, hell theres plenty of stories like that from japan all the time. Like off the top of my head I think of this anime: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=buqibQSTVEY
And off the top of my head Dont Tease Me Nagataro was just a hentai premise but turned into high school romance crap.
Dont fight what you got going cause you intended for something else originally, just go with the flow cause any solution to jam in your original intention will just come off as awkward.
Plus, there are solutions, the most obvious one(which will now require more work that you werent planning Im aware) is an epilogue. Wrap up however you see fit, and revisit these characters in another time and place. Like there are actual manga artists out their after they wrap up their stories they go on and make "official" hentai after everything is wrapped up.
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>>7928343
>but i wanted to avoid the trope of near sexual assault/trauma girl feels 'empty' then fucks the guy that saves her.
The issue here is that you still went with all the setup for this angle anyway, but didn't actually use it. So now it reads like it isn't supposed to be porn because we got to the part where the porn happens, but no porn happened.
Now that you've established that they aren't going to fuck just like that, you need a new ramp into a porn scene. You could use a mental breakdown as a ramp into a porn scene (she's not thinking straight/acting against her better judgement) but there's three issues with that:
1. getting fucked by a hot crazy chick is a different fantasy from the white knight fantasy
2. you've depicted it too seriously to the point where it would read more like a dark and gritty rape scene rather than fap material
and 3. the knight guy has been established to not be the type to go along with this anyway.
You've written yourself into a corner. This is what planning is for, to avoid writing yourself into corners like this.
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Still refining this bullshit. Previous iteration had no limitations or costs for the powers. I boasted a lot about matching themes with the system but the previous versions had no duality to it. There was no line between what the heroes and villains were doing when that's supposed to be important for my story.
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>>7928338
Nepotism, 9 times out of 10. They're somebody rich person's niece, daughter in law, stepdaughter, etc who wants to be a writer instead of getting a real job. For bigger things that actually get pushed / marketed, it's almost always a propaganda project out of Langley or Patterson or something.
That's true of pretty much the entire entertainment industry in the West, less so in Japan because they don't get the same amount of tax subsidies to be able to tell customers to fuck off (yet).
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>>7928363
Depends on the publisher. But generally speaking, to my knowledge, the very most basic thing a publisher is looking for is exclusive distribution rights. That is to say, they don't want to be competing with anybody to sell the same book, including the author themselves.
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>>7928338
first world countries have subsidaries and programs that help people publish things to enrich libraries and bookstores, even the crap stuff because I guess theres always some value in stories, even mid ones.
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>>7928360
Oh no, I get that(in concept anyway have never drawn smut) but thats why I said its gonna be extra work. Granted the situation would require pages on reflection and introspection rather then an actual plot progressing, but yeah it would be another chapters worth of work
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>>7928338
>The publisher has to know this crap isn't gonna sell
I dare say they know better than you what sells and what doesn't.
When you look into different industries and get the actual data on what people pay for, it's always disappointing.
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>>7928058
I'm not Pristine anon, but this is what I mean when I say it seems odd that people don't seem to read or leave comments on other anons' completed work (in terms of a full chapter being made and published) anymore.
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fan art porn thing I'm doing super super slowly
>>7928053
>I've also been slowly working on an idea for a shorter chapter, unrelated to this main story
Honestly I felt like the chapter you posted here could have been 2, 20 page chapters instead of 1, 40 page chapter. I wish there was more black fill to shade the tones too. sometimes the tones in the hair can be a bit flat. this is just personal preference though.
besides nitpicks. Pristine is probably my favorite thing from /mmg/ next to quickdraw. I like how you handle far away background elements. It's crazy how at a glace the objects that are only hatched in feel so solid and complete. the second half of the chapter felt really dramatic and interesting
>>7928709
I was caught up to ch3, I just hadn't read 4 til this morning. I tend to not have much to say on others work.
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>>7928709
I chalk it up to most internet users now being the "I want TV" crowd, they're habituated to scrolling and being given things to look at as opposed to seeking it out or engaging with it.
I think I do have a lot to say and I don't see how you couldn't. The story aspect feels good and is nailed down tight. He's got the sauce, and there's no understating how important that is because it made for a good first chapter, but there's things about it that need more time in the oven. If I had to name a problem it would be that chapter two starts to feel smothering, and if I had to think of a reason for this it might be caused by being overly generous with telling the reader everything about these monsters out of the gate.
It needs more candy trails?
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>>7928320
Honestly get rid of the "He doesnt see me, im alone" line and just make the God doesnt see me part the sole dialogue/much bigger. That line has so much impact that you're kind of watering down by adding more stuff
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>>7928058
Glad you enjoyed it! I'm just happy I finally got to put a bow on this chapter and can call it done
>>7928709
I'm realizing that I'm not much better myself. I'll try to leave more comments whenever I feel like I have something to add when people post updates
>>7928750
Thanks! I'm always experimenting a bit with how to draw backgrounds. It's always a question of drawing just enough details so it reads well at a glance. Saves a bunch of time too. For me the tricky part tends to be knowing when to stop and where to leave open space on the page to give the eyes some rest
>>7928776
Thank you for reading. In hindsight I absolutely agree when it comes to chapter 2. It ended up dumping a lot of information on the viewer, stuff that would have been better off shown as the story progresses. I'll chalk it up to the fact that I'm very much an amateur when it comes to writing, so I'm bound to walk into some traps there. I hope to keep improving my storytelling over the coming chapters tho
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>>7928944
One thing with the writing and info dumping is you don't always need the reader to understand exactly what is going on as soon as it happens, if it's understood well enough in the context of the moment from effects and reactions then you can save the details for later so as not to clutter a moment with exposition. I had to learn this with my own opening chapters too, there's not enough room to introduce everything at once so I've been dripfeeding it through actions and conversations as I go along, I think it works well enough so long as later explanations are consistent with what was seen and the story/character interactions have been enjoyable enough that potential readers don't mind being a bit out of the loop for a while.
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no complaints, except some of the writing/dialogue
the character seem to have a tendency to repeat the same thing a few times. "it'd be in your best interest if-" stood out to me the most. we can establish the vibe "dont fuck with us" in the opening confrontation.
a good example is pages 204-206
protagonist has drawn the full attention of villian, he throws axe to sidekick, implying "he needs to sort this out first, you do the chore of dealing with girl on stump" he then says "as for you" as if his attention was elsewhere and now hes returning back to his second most important task. but we just established that the villian is fully occupied with protagonist last page.
"you little shit!"
throws axe (cool opportunity to trick viewer into thinking it was at a hero, then bait switch into comical panel of it being at his pal)
"finish the job"
towers over protagonist.
"i have to deal with this" (but i honestly think nothing needs be said, its implied in the paneling.)
It also feels overly wordy and abit clunky, you are showing enough you can lose some of the tell. Characters starting or finishing sentences with; 'besides' or 'but' when they aren't part of run on sentences.
and just watch your grammar in places, some stick out real bad.
> "Then why is someone calling for help?"
> "What, so you're just gonna (going to) leave her here?"
> "Besides, its not like she'll be going very far in that condition."
obviously none of this needs actioning, just stuff to consider in the future.
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>>7928944
>For me the tricky part tends to be knowing when to stop and where to leave open space on the page to give the eyes some rest
same.
>>7928885
girls like ms dorothy who canonically get treated as ugly interest me. they deserve attention too.
>>7928915
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>>7929163
not him, but its mainly childhood experiences that make you into different stuff isn't it?
I sorta wonder how much you should be creating stuff with fetishes in them, cause repeatedly making something could make you more and more into it.
Like my comic, I'm going back and forth between adding a kink of mine into it (not saying fetish cause im not obsessed with it), adding it would actually make sense for the story, but I dont wanna make it be seen as goonery, or continually draw it, and then become more into it
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>>7929145
I trend toward drawing women who are touch starved or want attention and milf characters tend to fit that. fat unconfident women aswell.
can't really explain liking larger women on it's own, i just like them bigger.
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>>7929173
it's just something you particularly like sexually
sure, weirder ones might have external causes going back to some childhood experience, but all he's expressing here is a preference for chubby adult women. this isn't even a fetish, it's just a standard preference. shit man, it's more natural than liking skinny chicks, for millenia fat chicks were a sign of great wealth and excess, it shouldn't surprise you at all that some dudes find that attractive.
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>>7929035
I appreciate you taking the time to give feedback. It's interesting that I'm overly wordy at times. I'm probably underestimating the reader a bit there and end up explicitly adding stuff in dialogue that could be extracted by just looking at the drawings. I get that the amount of text "needed" on a given page or in a scene varies a lot, but I often feel like I "need" to have a certain amount of it. Hopefully more practice writing will do me good here. At least I'm getting more aware of it when I get feedback like this, thanks
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Even slop manga by jp authors have good, detailed backgrounds. So does everyone just have 3d models of every backdrop imaginable and converting it into line with csp, and that I'm wasting all this time hand drawing worse versions of it
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>>7929362
unfortunately, yes.
Old mangaka drew over photos, and that still took skill so the backgroudns were nice. But now you can draw over 3d models and a lot of times it looks ass so you can definitely get away with tracing photos. There's a learning curve but its worth it.
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>>7929331
I think this goes to show that rape and sex just doesnt mix no matter how much porn addicts would leave you to believe and that rape - which just ends up as rape for the sake of having rape 95% of the time- is infact NOT a sign a sign of deep, intelligent nor mature writing. You can easily depict the dept of human cruelty without ever stooping low to resort to sexual violence to do so. Rape is truely a fetish for absolute losers and I hope you remember that going forward.
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>>7929425
Rape has no function outside of extreme sadism, and thus is exclusively for losers. "Muh realism" is cope for lazy ass writting and all it did was sabotage the goal of anon story and ruin the tone of the story which was supposed to be steamy sex. Anon should unironically spend less time trying to entertain porn addicted losers like yourself and leave 4chan.
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>>7929428
no one was getting raped in my comic? the only reason they aren't fucking right now is it stopped making sense for the characters in their current situation at the current time.
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>>7929439
OP isn't a woman and this story isn't written for women. The last post about you enjoying rape because woman deserves to suffer was far more honest than you back peddling to poorly parrotly studies that can't even decide if its 31% or 60% percent of women even has these fantasy to begin with just to reinforce your loser worldview. Anyway, leaving this conversation before I catch your infection kek
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>>7929439
This raises a slightly related topic that I sometimes think about, how this kind of stuff nobody really blinks an eye at when it's not comics, but then it's suddenly a big deal if it's in a comic or a drawing.
>violence or sex as a subject matter in a movie
>very little other than some different rating changes, things like The Thing and Blue is the Warmest Color are considered ok
>violence or sex as a subject matter in music
>lol, lmao even - barring warnings about "explicit content" nobody has ever given a single shit about this
>violence or sex in regular printed literature
>completely acceptable, nobody even blinks an eye, you can have grandma totter on down and check out the newest stuff if she wanted to at the local library
>violence or sex in a videogame
>violence clearly accepted what with things like Mortal Kombat, and you can get H-games from Steam and elsewhere easily, the only real wall is that blatantly adult things are not publicly accessible on some markets (Google store, Apple store, etc)
>violence or sex for a comic
>what the fuck anon, you're drawing this kind of stuff? what are you, some kind of sick fuck? there is no redeeming value in this, why on earth would you ever do such a thing? Jesus christ this needs to be hidden behind 2923482572457 censors and user settings if anybody is gonna be able to see this, wtf man. I know I just got off of playing Doom and watching a zombie movie, but this drawing you've made of a monster eating somebody, that has to have a guro tag bro, etc etc etc etc etc etc
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Okay /ic/ long time lurker first time caller. Ive had this sprawling idea for a comic, yada yada whatever. The thing is, Im learning the fundamentals, Loomis, blocking, whatnot a good deal before even attempting anything stylized like manga/VN stuff, which would probably be my end goal. My question is, do you ever stop learning the fundamentals, or do you eventually just incorporate learning illustration on top of it? Drawing portraits for every single panel seems awful and very time consuming tbqh
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>>7929559
>do you ever stop learning the fundamentals
Not really, but there definitely is some point where you learned enough to basically be able to draw anything you want.
The problem with the fundamentals is, that when you only get them slightly wrong, it can ruin your whole image. It's like the foundation of a house. When the foundation is wrong, it doesn't matter how awesome the rest of the house looks, because it will crumble anyway. You are basically just polishing a turd at this point.
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I guess what im wondering is when are you good enough to where you dont really need to sit there and sketch out every little detail to be consistently good. For example, i used to watch Nanashi (Nagatoto guy) stream and ofc hes not sketching out the loomis head, frame, etc every single panel. When do people get to that specific threshold, how do you tell?
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>>7929574
I think it's better to learn the thing you want to do by doing it rather than always portioning out your learning and your goal solely as separate aspects.
>how can you tell?
Personal satisfaction.
Is the finished product what you want? Are you Happy? Are you confident in what you've made? If yes then it's good enough, or if it isn't then it's a matter of course correcting until your creations align with your vision.
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hi anons, lurker here
I have roughly 40 pages of a super hero parody comic complete, drawn traditional and scanned to my computer but have hit a roadblock so I'm looking for help.
I wanted to print out a couple copies using mixam (or something similar) to get momentum back into the project and see how it looks before the "final" version. the original pages were drawn at B4 (about 10 inch by 14 inch) and I've exported them into a pdf but want the printed book to be digest/tankoban size (about 5x8). However, when I upload to mixam it either doesn't accept the pdf size or distorts the page/changes the bleed and margins and I can't seem to readjust using their online editor.
I'm using clip studio (ipad pro) and procreate. Is there a way to batch resize all these pages to fit closer to print size?
If any self published/printing anons could help it would be really appreciated. I don't want to have to copy/paste all 40 pages into a new doc with different dimensions if there's a more efficient way of doing this.
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>>7929604
For mixam you need each image to be the proper size, and account for margins and bleed in the original files. There's no way to batch redo them all unless you are working in indesign or a similar program and export the whole thing as a single PDF.
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>>7929448
>The last post about you enjoying rape because woman deserves to suffer was far more honest than you back peddling to poorly parrotly studies that can't even decide if its 31% or 60% percent of women even has these fantasy to begin with just to reinforce
NTA.You're schizoing, this is the only post I made about it.
>>7929439
The romantasy genre on booktok is booming because those books appeal to the female rape fetish. See also 50 Shades of Grey book sales.
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>>7929449
Anon, it's simply based on how juvenile the medium is considered by the general consensus.
Movies, music, literature and now even video games are considered "adult" media and thus adult topics are fine.
Comics are still considered "kids" media, despite the audience for them being overwhelmingly adults for 30 years now, and so adult content is not acceptable. Cartoons only get a pass if it's a sitcom, if it treats subject matter seriously then it can only feature adult content if it is also highly Jewish and intentionally disgust-provoking.
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>>7929673
50 Shades of Grey became the highest selling books ever for a reason. Women have degenerate fetishes just like men. The most popular porn for women is gangbang scenes and rape porn. Romantic books are popular because girls are mega coomers.
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>>7929747
>The most popular porn for women is gangbang scenes and rape porn.
They're not.
>Romantic books are popular because girls are mega coomers.
Girls like sappy romance dramas. "Chick flicks" are an entire genre for a reason.
>50 Shades of Grey became the highest selling books ever for a reason.
The guy is rich and washes his ass
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>>7929750
>Girls like sappy romance dramas. "Chick flicks" are an entire genre for a reason.
You know nothing about booktok or romantasy do you? Your entire post reads like you're an incel whiteknighting for women who make fun of you.
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>>7929424
It is impossible to love without agreeing to love and to be loved. Unfortunately, I haven't really seen many series, let alone manga. that actually talks about sex in any profound level either. Mostly because most mangakas don't have a sex life. The closest I can think of is the manga of Tsukihime.
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>>7929770
My experiences with women teach me that they don't actually want love, especially as they grow older. All my friends and family who have successful marriages got married young to their high school sweetheart. Women are just so disappointing to me.
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>>7929777
If I was fat or ugly women wouldn't approach me. I just get really disappointed when I pick their brains out just to find nothing there. Even the "spiritual" ones are very narcissistic and trapped in their own ego.
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>>7929770
>not wanting to be raped means being an innocent sex-negative prude
If you interacted with women, you would know that they find booktok slop hilarious. The only people not in on the joke are losers like you who need to project their rape fantasies onto others just to avoid smelling yourselves
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>>7929772
>I haven't really seen many series, let alone manga. that actually talks about sex in any profound level either.
Nana is good if this is what you want. If not profound atleast it's an honest example of how women think about sex and hypergamy.
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>>7929783
>If you interacted with women, you would know that they find booktok slop hilarious.
They're all obsessed with 4th wing and A Court of Thorns and Roses-books that have sold millions of copies which are full of explicit sex scenes and essentiallyare porn for women. They call sex scenes 'spicy' and openly talk about their love of their porn books in public.
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>>7929681
>intentionally disgust-provoking
I am trying to vaguely think of adult oriented western animation that doesn't look intentionally vomit inducing and the nicest thing I can think of at the moment (and its not even nice looking either, objectively speaking) is Bojack. Maybe Archer. Everything else just goes downhill even more from there.
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>>7929790
They get off of enthusiastic sex where all the man can think about is her, even if it's rape. Women without a push to have kids become extremely narcissistic.
>>7929791
I'll check it out. Does the woman show any amount of remorse or acknowledgement of her own decisions being the reason why she's in the mess? Otherwise I'm going to hate reading it.
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>>7929797
Sex is beautiful if it's the act of two souls merging into one stream of consciousness and the physicality plays an important role in developing that. You won't see anything talk about sex like that though so it sucks to see.
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>>7929798
>I'll check it out. Does the woman show any amount of remorse or acknowledgement of her own decisions being the reason why she's in the mess? Otherwise I'm going to hate reading it.
Yeh there's two women. They both fuck around and dick around the nice guys to get with rich emotionally unstable assholes who cheat on them, while acknowledging what massive sluts they are. The anime is good too.
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>>7929792
What studies are you talking about? You seem to have done a lot of research on this. I'm simply looking at book sales of rape porn books, popularity of rape porn shows like Outlander and Handmaiden's Tale, and I listen to what they say when we're all drunk and high at parties together.
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>>7929803
There is delusion and then there is next level delusion. Women care mostly about foreplay than the physical act of sex themselves, and in that I can relate to them. However, they want all the attention to be on them, and that I can't relate to. You can live in delusion if you want, but women aren't as pragmatic as you choose to believe.
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>>7929820
The only person deluding themselves here is you. You don't want to have sex with a human being, you just want to use their bodies to masturbate. Women are generally turned off by that because sex is an invested interaction between human beings, not just using each other as a tool to cum, which often means that only the man gets off.
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>>7929805
>Men get off to visual cues
Elected rape on firm at best and recording themselves raping their own children at worst.
V.S.
>Women get off to emotional scenarios with long buildup
Healthy relationships that last far beyond the initial sexual encounter. Where's the degeneracy in that again? I'm told that women are """"just as bad"""" as men but the comparison rarely seems comparable.
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>>7929828
I want to have sex with a conscious soul. Women block that off by being so self-absorbed. There's a reason why men consume manga and visual stimulus about fantasizing that a woman loves them without needing to work for it and why women consume books about how they want a man that's so focused on her he ends up abusing her in the process.
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>>7929851
I'm not into loli, most men aren't. One of the most searched terms on Pornhub is milf. Most men are desperate to be loved and to have the love they received (or wish they did) as a child while women seek being an object of desire that's the center of attention. I wish women were into lovey dovey romance, man, but they just aren't. We're messed up in the head but obsession is a problem women don't want to fix, just channel into them.
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>>7929854
Look like you didn't even look at your own study kek
>sample size of 355 woman
>has fantasy 4 (four) times a YEAR
>one of the citations is literally fanfiction in 2004
Meanwhile in reality, here's a far more earnest overview of womens' taste in erotic media.
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>>7929870
I don't know because I only read romance or hentai about being loved. Isekaislop about being surrounded by women who love you simply for existing is a booming industry while romantasy about monster and rape is most popular for women.
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>>7929873
Both sexes are suffering from extreme sex deprivation because we've let media replace sexual intimacy. Also no I want to lift an amazonian woman and eat her out while she massages my scalp and brushes on my ear, faggot.
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>>7929875
Mangakas producing hentai aren't normal people. Why the hell are you people drawing art for porn anyways? I stopped browsing here because of how much that pissed me off. It takes years of talent and skill to make something and all you fuckers waste it on drawing tits.
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>>7929865
>no breakdown between gender only the sexual binary
How much of this studies is poisoned by unironic trannies kek
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>Isekaislop about being surrounded by women who love you simply for existing is a booming industry for men and trannies while romantasy about monster and rape is most popular for men and trannies.
cleared this up for you.
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>>7929886
My female coworker literally just read a book about some priest who has a secret obsession with abusing women and was talking about it to her other female coworkers. Just talk to women dude it's really not that difficult.
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>fuck yea I love rape! Here's my rape comic everybody! I love that we all make rape comics!
>rape is based because women hate it!
>actually women like rape so it's ok that we love rape!
>actually it's us who hate rape, women love it!
>actually, we're both the same!
>actually I don't even go here!
dumb ass niggers
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>>7929902
Women don't like getting raped but they like fantasizing about being the prized possession so much that they would commit a crime, such as rape, to get her. Is this something you are able to understand or do I need to use simpler words?
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>>7929905
Japan is all about selling your soul and most of these people worship it. You won't find soulful sex because they aren't even aware of the concept. Again, closest I could find is Tsukihime which still isn't perfect but it shows the difference between rape and mutual love.
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>>7929905
>Where are all the unconditional love comics from /mmg/?
Mine has this, but the plot where I'm at isn't ready for it yet. Also, everyone seems to be really angry about sex right now so I'm just gonna wait for a new thread before posting an update.
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>>7929915
If you introduce sex into your series early you are lying. Sex is at the climax of the relationship and requires intense non-sexual intimate experiences. Sex shouldn't be until half way through the story at earliest.
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>>7929929
That process is how children are made. There is a desire for a man and a woman to get closer to join each other but in this world it is limited to the flesh. It is the closest thing to unity with each other we will get on this world but it has been reduced to mere pleasure through years of propaganda and birth control removing the central aspect of it which is forging a body for a new soul.
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>>7929933
Are you aware of lesbian statistics with domestic violence? Women consume mostly through books so you have to look at romantasy, the most popular selling fiction genre in the world, and what they sell. Lastly, the second one literally says possession.
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>>7929928
I went off of the suggestions from the last thread mostly, adding new scenes. Some reactions, a new dream sequence. Obligatory accidental peeping, that kind of thing.
I intend on redrawing some iffy pages now that I'm no longer under a deadline and sharpening things, I'll post more about it when I get going.
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Thanks :D
This whole thing has convinced me to try and contact an agent once I polish this thing up to proficiency. There is a comic collective in my town, so I might be able to get something self published at the very least.
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>>7929940
Honestly my comic looks like complete shit but also attracted overseas attention just through luck. I don't really like how yours just seems to be fetish material but I would never wish for someone to fall, especially since I'm in a similar boat to you.
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>>7929944
>Women don't like getting raped but they like fantasizing about being the prized possession so much that they would commit a crime, such as rape, to get her
I literally don't know how to talk to someone who can't see the connection between this and domestic violence. Lesbian relationships are extreme in their power dynamics. Go share your cookie with the transgender "woman".
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>>7929688
no, the usa loves sexualization, has a love-hate relationship with violence and hates actual sex, its considered extremely transgressive for there to be any nudity, but borderline fetish stuff makes it way to kid's media all the time, meanwhile blood is a no no on anything for people under 16 but the moment you reach the threshold you can immediately jump into the most perverted torture porn imaginable
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>fetishized sex
You can't have a fetish for sex retard you can only have a fetish in a sexual relationship. Anyways sex isn't for everyone and don't have sex with a woman you can't trust to be the mother of your kids. Hating sex is only slightly less stupid than being obsessed with it but hating on something is also an obsession. Everything in life has meaning and sex definitely does and if you understand the meaning you will appreciate more and hate it when it is abused.
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>>7929980
Nta but you're dumb because you're conflating actual rape with fantastical rape. Women want the same rape as male masos, for it to be from some really hot person who won't do much more than what you're comfortable with and in a situation that makes it sexier somehow.
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>>7929969
Sex is objectively ugly and everyone who's had it says it's no big deal. It's just a convenient way to release urges and people wouldn't even have kids if they didn't have the hedonistic incentive of getting off. It's not special or beautiful, it's mundane and dirty.
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>>7930007
Jesus takes all the pussy. He also lies a lot, and writes almost all the cuckolding. To trick us. It’s just confusing because he’s both the men and the women involved, he clones himself. And, he also creates conscious humans who look almost exactly the same as his clones. Seriously it’s like this.
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>get good enough to make things look the way I want them to when I draw, making me feel like the best artist ever
>look at other people's work, it's several times better than anything I will ever make
>go back to drawing, feel like I'm the best artist who ever lived
From what I can tell of artist mentality this means I'm mentally ill and have gone completely off the deep end since I don't hate myself enough anymore
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>h-h-hi guys, this is my first time coming into the manga making general, i made a little comic that i wanted to s-share with everybody he-
>SHUT THE FUCK UP ANON, WE'RE BUSY SCREAMING OVER WHETHER WOMEN LOVE PORN
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>>7929969
>Everything in life has meaning
Lol
>sex definitely does
Lmao even
Why are romantic, emotional people like this anon so delusional?
Is it low IQ? Lack of historical knowledge? Study of esoteric, spiritual fields?
This person unironically believe that sex is a combination of souls instead of the act of procreation that almost all animals do.
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>>7930198
This thread has edgy atheists, white knights, transgender white knights, and gooners. The only thing they have in common is that they all get pissy when you mention spirituality despite literally every great artist believing in some sort of immaterial realm beyond this. Yes, even most Japanese today.
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>>7929604
Oh fuck are you like me and used the default Kadokawa preset in CSP? Nah listen motherfucker you can do what this guy said >>7929614
But lets say you want to work on a new page for the comic right after right? So for fucking manga Tankobon this is the canvas size that you need to work in if you want to keep it large.You got to the Edit menu and change the Canvas size(or make a new page with this size)
Width-8.95
Height-13.21
If you used the Kadokawa preset that accounts for the bleed area it will cut off pretty much where those border areas end
THEN this is what you do
>Edit menu
>Change Image Resolution
Here you can change it to the typical Tankobon size(including bleeds) to
Width-5.25
Height-7.75
And then it will scale down your image, but proportionally so you dont get any weird stretching or whatever. It took me a while to figure out what was the exact to number that I needed to get the 5.25X7.75 number cause if your original canvas was off by an extra .1 inch or whatever it wouldnt scale proportionally, but if your canvas is 8.95X13.21, you can change the value and get 5.25X7.75 EXACTLY. Not 5.26X7.80, not 5.50X7.70, or what the fuck ever, but EXACTLY 5.25X7.75
I remember figuring it out and believe me I was PISSED cause I had to go back and change each page's canvas size and THEN have to change the Image Resolution right after BUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTT I didnt have to scale the art which would have been actual hell. If you do it my way you are gonna have to take like 2 hours out of your day MINIMUM to change each page, but once you do, you will never have to change shit again cause now you KNOW
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>>7930227
Yeah, nodraws that are afraid to start, but still want to see whats going on and check out the people who are doing something.
If yuo're reading this and this is you... just start. When you're old you're gonna wish you spent your life drawing things for yourself instead of waiting until you were allowed to.
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>>7927153
I had this same issue, I make shorts that tie together into 1 larger anthology style "story" about my o.c.s and thier world
>>7927315
I have no audience, its like 2 people. But im building socials to smear my bs all over the web
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>>7929865
Women don't watch porn on the scale of men. What you're looking at is a sample from a porn site (with self-reported gender as well, which we all know a porn site is going to be infested with trannies) and not the general population. Your sample is biased from the start toward degenerates.
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>>7930466
Romantic books and fan fiction are porn for women. Women don't get turned on visually like men do. They get off on emotion and self inserting in to sex scenes in their lit porn books, which they refer to as 'spicy scenes' in their colloquial language with eachother.
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How would you feel if you stopped drawing your manga yourself and just became the "ideas guy" while someone else did the work? I actually hate drawing, but I can't pay someone else to do it and I don't want some faggot artist taking credits for the story and ideas that *I* came up with. So I go and draw things myself.
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>>7930576
I wouldn't enjoy it since it's not my art. Art is as important to a manga/comic/whateverothersequentialartbullshit as words in a book. It's what sticks with people. Characters in a book work because of the specific way they're written, down to the exact words they use in dialogue, NOT just because of the ideas they present. In the same way, the reason we make manga is because it can express ideas in a way words can't. I don't want someone else drawing my ideas because how they're drawn is part of my ideas.
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>>7930579
>I don't want someone else drawing my ideas because how they're drawn is part of my ideas
Yes. That's how I feel about it too. There's also a bit of ego into play. I don't want people saying "He would never had done this without someone else doing the hard work". Which is why I think a hybrid approach would be best: write the story, draw the sketches, concept arts, and important scenes yourself, then leave the rest to someone else.
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>>7930580
I have bookshelves full of sketchbooks, loose papers filled with designs, canvasses etc. Drawing to me is like breathing. I have so many images to put down.
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>>7930581
I see where you're coming from - being more an art director, where you do the "key frames" yourself and let other people fill in for the "in betweens" which are less important. That works really well for a piece of animation, but I think for a manga, I'd probably want to do a partnership with someone. It would elevate our art if we worked together on "the important stuff."
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>>7930594
I'm not that good at writing for real. I've tried. People said I write scenes as if they were a police report (picrel is a 3 y.o script based on the same story I'm using for my manga). I'm only good at coming up with story ideas. And when I think of those stories and scenes I think of them as an audiovisual media, not as a book.
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>>7930600
Put some polish into it and you can make a decent noir. Or anything really. There are infinitely more resources and people to help out with writing than drawing, especially comics. You're not going to get good at anything without practice.
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>>7930570
I wish I could. I actually have a couple of stories I really wouldn't mind passing off to another artist and at this point it'd be a total relief to take my hands off the wheel for once. Maybe it's just having enough time and attention given to things that this point where I'm kinda knowing what I can freely detatch myself from for the sake of something new being created. I'm just one person with limited time and energy, there are clearly things I care a lot about, and things I care less about, but still would like to see life breathed into by another artist who might even be a more suitable choice for that project.
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>>7930617
If you're able to get it working then whatever works. Reading regular books is pretty easy and you need to read history and other topics if you want to be smarter than an NPC. I find most mangas pretty bad and getting it working outside of Japan is pretty much impossible.
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>>7930570
>feel if you stopped drawing your manga yourself and just became the "ideas guy" while someone else did the work?
I enjoy the drawing, but if I somehow had the chance to get Murata'd I would not complain at all. It's not like I'm just typing in the text into an email and not seeing anything until the final product. I would still be heavily involved in the storyboarding part at the very least.
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>>7930823
I think the second page's first panel could use a background, because it would be the only shot showing the long road they came from and will be a horizon level shot which hasn't been used yet for a background on these pages. In my opinion landscape panels can be given a ton of depth if you draw the expanse behind them.
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Westerners are the only ones truly obsessed with only doing 40% or less of the work for a comic because their culture focuses more on job efficiency than cultivating one's passion. The only thing that really matters to them is money.
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>>7931030
"Japan work culture" he says. Motherfucker my editor works like 6 hours a day. Comics take an insane amount of work, what country you're talking about is irrelevant. If you work on your comic a sane amount then it takes forever to finish and release. That's the simple fact.
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>>7931053
Just the photos is pretty lazy. You should draw a silly-looking mascot character into them. Then the text gets hard to read with the sometimes low contrast, so maybe put it into thought bubbles of the aforementioned character.
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>>7931081
i'm not sure what you are expecting from us or this board, this space doesn't really resonate with the kind of self mastabatory outsider art somewhat over glorified and DEFINITELY over represented in modern galleries and artshows.
Naïve art is built upon intent and sincerity, it really relies on knowing the person behind the artist, and their story. we know your story, it reads as teenage sadboi energy, not sincerity. nothing you are saying hasnt already been said, by someone louder and better at saying it.
the photos aren't strong enough to stand on their own. so the text is added, the text isnt poignant enough to justify being said.
if this comic is your means to self medicate a mental illness through self expression who am I to poo poo it, pop off king. i just think it sticks out like a sore thumb by how obvious and predictable it is.
this came out way more biting then I intended. but i think if you want to be taken as seriously as this comic is asking us to. you need to dig way deeper.
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>>7931043
Don't listen to the assholes. They are right about some of the things they say, but there is no need to be so toxic about it. /ic/fags will be /ic/fags. The texts are a bit crude, and the art is also beg but I think it's good enough for what you're trying to do. If you're just trying to put a feeling out there and don't care much about building an audience with this, then go ahead and do your thing. There will always be people to appreciate it.
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>>7930900
Yeah just added one and it looks better, I didn't cause some of the manga and comics i've been using as reference barely have backgrounds, but I guess the characters weren't that big in that panel, so theres free space
>>7930948
I am thanks, did that at the start of the year, lotts of the tips here helped
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>>7931574
When you ask what people think it's an invitation for anyone to say anything. This general isn't a fenced in gated community, any random person can say what they want and that's inevitable.
I think the moody black and white photography and the comic's cartoony style don't connect. Maybe this is the reason people aren't taking it seriously? It could also be that the people on this board think of autobiographical works to be more navel-gazing when they make no efforts to entertain.
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This thread has been a shitshow. Remember the best thing to do is not respond to things you dont want to perpetuate. It may seem counterintuitive but people who do dumb shit do it for dopamine and when you deprive them of attention that they get bored and move somewhere else
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>>7931559
I think you're a bad faith concern troll trying to derail the thread either because it was your comic and you're mad we didn't like it or because you want to use the reaction to the comic to stir up trouble just for kicks.
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I'm starting to think that I should always update my comic as two page spreads. sometimes I have pages that aren't great as a single update. this upcoming one especially doesn't work without the next. id hate to have to wait a week to understand this page.
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I can't imagine doing it solo pages. the pacing feels like it should be in blocks of a spread rather then individual, it really feels like a negative side effect from digital manga making.
I love the idea of putting suspense or reveals behind a page turn, i think subconciously its hard not to accidently see whats coming ahead in the peripheral. the physicality of having to turn a page is really interesting and i wish was explored more.
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>>7931542
What constitutes a background or not is pretty hard to figure out for me but one thing I think seems to be a reliable rule is to show different angles of a location to help complete a picture in the reader's mind. A wide shot or a shot showing what it looks like behind the characters can add so much if it was never shown. Unless the background is NOT important, but in this case I think where they are is important to add to the atmosphere of what's about to happen.
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>>7931672
I used to draw/upload pages individually unless it was a 2 page spread but last chapter I started drawing on combined canvases, it's really sped up my drawing, and it's led to me pacing my comic differently. I'm just at the point where they work better as spreads.
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wow, people are surely talking.
the reason I went IRL photos is because of this little chapter introduction i saw in the manga "man without talent".
I already have chapter introductions drawn normally, but I like the idea
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>>7931797
The reason I don't like it, is because regardless of whether it's considered "art" or not. It's not the art that I care about. I care about drawings. If drawings are ever considered "not art" then I will stop caring about art, because what's important to me is drawing. To me, this kind of modern art means nothing.
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>>7931797
Ignore the haters, follow your dreams. Maybe photos with text on them will resonate with others too. Or perhaps I'm a crab trying to stunt your growth. Or maybe I'm right, and if you let critics stop you from exploring your passions, you'll never reach your full potential.
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>>7931797
I know the saying goes "great artists steal" but what they don't tell you is those thieves know what they're doing and why what they're stealing works. If you believe in your decision, stick with it. If it was a half-hearted measure you threw in just for the novelty, don't expect accolades.
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>>7931797
The advice you got about blending the phoros with drawings can work. I think if you draw things into the backgrounds it will be a lot more interesting. People post comics and manga here for feedback on how to make it better, not to gather fans, so you're going to get responses from people thinking you can do better.
When people say the pictures are lame, they're not saying "give up" like the rest of /ic/ would.
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