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>>97617300
Rules/info/CYOA
https://rentry.org/uam5mkhv


>Egawa Taro/Rip Vandernail
https://rentry.org/mthziyxk
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97060437
>Arthur Wode
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97061682
>Necrolord Sephidrach
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062008
>Kimiko Yuki/Yaofan
https://rentry.co/hsinf97u
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062514
>Fathoms(Fifi)
https://rentry.co/rdkoz3rh
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063149
>Liam Cooke/Lovxl(Not a Support 3)
https://rentry.org/r3git2rc
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063756
>Ueto Mio/strawberrycake0923
https://rentry.org/5iiayh42
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97089806
>Nagisa Ito/Good Things Come
https://rentry.co/btk9ko6w
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97098741

>Writefags

>Mountain Wendigo Chain, Part 1! (Taro, Yulit, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Arthur, Yaofan)
https://rentry.org/7abfinx5
>Setup (Liam, Yaofan, References to others)
https://rentry.co/2u2ucyys
>Yaofan Intro? (Yaofan/Kimiko,Moth Thot)
https://rentry.co/wnwek6x9
>Hunting Lessons (Taro, Peredolia, Yaofan)
https://rentry.org/yv2vaygr
>Wendigo Chain Part 2 (Liam, Sephidrac, Taro, Yaofan.)
https://rentry.co/f4d6fwu8
>The Magic Of Learning (Liam, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Mio, Arthur cameo)
https://rentry.org/wmxx9tik
>Wendigo Chain, Part 3 (Egawa Taro, Arthur Wode, Yaofan, Liam Cooke, Necrolord Sephidrac, Fathoms, Ueto Mio, Nagisa Ito)
https://rentry.org/gdzox35y
>Every Branch on the way Down
https://rentry.co/gm9soi3x

>Relationships Charts

>Taro
https://rentry.org/v4ygpeib
>Liam
https://rentry.co/ruszvrz4
>Mio (End of the profile)
https://rentry.org/5iiayh42
>Nagisa
https://rentry.co/spxq5cnb
>Yaofan
https://rentry.co/vwn7fy9p
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>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6

>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.

Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r

>New Stuff:
>New Writefag:
>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)
https://rentry.org/62g2miaz

>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Former 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnaire
https://rentry.org/xudhyrnr
>Former 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n
>Classes Compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
old former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g
>Relationship charts
https://rentry.org/MHA_Charts
>Dorms Prompt
Dorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730
>Tiermaker:
https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969

>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077
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>>97617317
>SHIKETSU STUDENTS
>Hero Course
>1-D
>Koroma Kajō HN The Time-Loop Hero: Reset
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573
>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Trouble
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085
>Yagami Kirako HN Southpaw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059
>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Callous
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904
>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548
>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720
>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kid
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701
>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831
>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetrap
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250
>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protector
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590
>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scour
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050
>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771
>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Hero
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243
>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miracle
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093
>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyr
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834
>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410
>Fukuchi Arai HN Musō-ka
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805
>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925
>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwa
https://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w
>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshire
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176
>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooter
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244
>Tsuyoi Agnelli
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559
>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089

>1-E
>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729
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>>97617329
>2-D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337
>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769
>Hailey Chang HN Recoil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903
>Faith Kang HN Drone
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774
>Minerva Kim HN Spark
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766
>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094
>Edith Lee HN Arena
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782
>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995
>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)
https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu
>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909
>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305
>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778
>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624
>Runt HN Dust Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560
>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012
>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611
>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986
>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130
>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765
>Ian Takenaka HN Rush
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991
>Takara Tame HN Android
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336
>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Question
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085
>Rob Williams HN Velvet Worm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
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>>97617343
>2-E
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
>Noah Abrams HN Archangel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041
>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690
>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104
>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077
>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251
>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973
>Nayuki Kyoko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965
>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240
>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200
>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661
>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735
>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363
>Suki Yamada HN Sukeban
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713
>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433
>Other NPCs
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E

>3-D
>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068
>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401
>Masayoshi Keito HN Cricket
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742
>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcana
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432
>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdown
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617
>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knut
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659

>General Course
>2-A
>Satoru Tani
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217

>Support Course
>3-B
>Aura Curie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
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>>97617350
>SHIKETSU STAFF
>Pro Hero teachers
>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414
>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034
>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564
>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484
>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250
>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509
>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353
>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972
>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486
>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644
>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019
>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485

>Support Staff
>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597
>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416
>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288
>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135
>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666
>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431
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>>97617359
>PRO HEROES
>TOP #1
Endeavour
>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780
>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384
>TOP #4
Wash
>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494
>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsy
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632
>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063
>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkoro
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847
>TOP #9
Rosethorn
>TOP #10
Yamamoto
>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908
>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386
>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honoken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039
>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848
>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563
>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593
>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelength
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513
>Renji Kurokawa HN Mash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848
>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatch
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219
>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccine
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536
>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skyward
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835

>SUPPORTERS
>Rika Eichi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766
>Endless Horizons Ltd.
https://rentry.org/iptpr
>Holden Deckard
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931
>Brightly
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966
>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clear
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294
>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686
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>>97617371
>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS
>Horrific 5
>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340
>On Giết Năng VN Tether
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198
>Erika Murakami VN Nox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183
>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575
>Edmund Muller VN Mercury
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191

>Night Parade
>Cammy Link VN Karma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967
>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909
>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481
>Okane King VN Midas
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250
> ??? VN Maw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272
> ??? VN Bogey
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889
> Tomi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913
>Luccione
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415
>Recino R. Percutio
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385

>Wild Hunt
>Sandatsu Owari
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222
>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569
>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089
>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462
>Ookami Shizuka
https://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka
>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348

>VIGILANTES
>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005
>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069
>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353
>Rebecca Weber
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750
>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707
>Sasha Azanami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91080404
>Rui
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187
>Kaori Kaoru
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075
>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivore
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658
>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndrome
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356
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>>97617383
>CULTISTS
>The Red Finger
>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion
https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3
>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988
>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weasel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573

>REVOLUTIONARIES
>Legion
>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954

>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS
>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714
>Karuga Ito
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478
>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt
>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242
>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735
>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394
>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931
>Blank
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726
>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987
>Mammogar
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410
>Tomie
https://rentry.org/ddom6m82
>Suslik
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413
>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242
>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400
>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodoku
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241
>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless God
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436
>Mr. Therapist
https://rentry.org/638neg63
>Rescue Ray
https://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp
>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Dagger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719
>Doctor Ivon Kintobor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140
>Saki Fuma VN Replicant
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061
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>>97617395
>WRITEFAGS
>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo
>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)
https://rentry.org/gqgst77f
>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)
https://rentry.org/chdorkto
>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokin’ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5
>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique):
https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9
>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):
https://rentry.org/7evesekv
>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).
https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi
>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)
https://rentry.org/qqhxk757
>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)
https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i
>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)
https://rentry.org/rusiv6te
>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h
>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze
>Visa Enquiry
https://rentry.org/yvwhhh98
>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt
>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)
https://rentry.org/hvct5iab
>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)
https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde
>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)
https://rentry.org/iifohf9f
>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)
https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb
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>>97617405
>WRITEFAGS (Final)
>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):
https://rentry.org/a8um8793
>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)
https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu
>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)
https://rentry.org/o4mageo6
>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)
https://rentry.org/62g2miaz

For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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>>97617411
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https://rentry.org/martialartsheromcyoag

>Nao Sato, 'Smoke', stinky smoker hag (cute)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97491382
>Larry Newgate, 'Hold Bailey', I get the pun
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97491448
>Kasumi, 'Deadend', I wish she splattered MY head...
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97495030
>Lionel Henry "Leo" Buckingham the IIIrd, 'Lionheart', the man with a name I missed
https://rentry.org/ip55skmf
>King Laiota Drazil, HOLY SHIT DRACULA
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97495867
>Timm Danger, 'Belfry', where's da gabagool?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97497021
>Kiera Hailey, 'Comet', I ain't saying she's a gold digger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97497506
>Octocampus, experiment with daddy issues
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97500215
>Afterburner Model 03, 'Afty', leaden oil drinker
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97506787
>Vivian Irving and V, a girl and her cog
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97507133
>Glenn Atwater, 'Sword of Light', where he at? water
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97508128
>Kaya Stowst, 'Feldspar', I'm ROCKHARD!!!
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97509701
>Henry Powers, 'Portal Man', get a real job unc
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513091
>Meg the Shark, 'Jaws', calamari enjoyer
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513166
>Leif Ether, 'Phantom', In The End (Linkin Park)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513845
>Oinu Nuoi, experiment with daddy issues if he cute
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97515443
>Alois Emmerich Stenger, the Last Man Standing, "Gentlemen? Ve... are Nazis!"
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97518503
>Adam, pumping iron
https://rentry.org/uuqehema
>Gadzhimurad "бyйвoл" Magomedov
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97596181

>Writefags
lmfao why is this still here
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>>97617420
>Relationship Charts
Leo chart 1
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97499420
Leo quotes
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97516193
Feldspar quotes
https://rentry.org/e2b9k36k
Meg quotes
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97521339
Kasumi quote chart
https://rentry.org/zb3ossbk

>tiermaker
https://tiermaker.com/create/ultimate-question-hero-association-run-17629646

>Artfags
Leo's really tall in this one.
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97512917
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513134
MORTAL KOMBAT!!! (+ Belfry and Laiota quotes)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97515477
GODfry is so FUARKING cool
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97542127
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The Hidden Moon Village calls

>CYOA
https://imgchest.com/p/m9yxdobq64q
>RULES
https://rentry.org/6unsb3tn

>Momika, Momi with the Mikas
https://rentry.org/hsviqv5p
>Mona Kyo, put those grippers away
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97592567
>Sumio Fuchigami, damn blud have you tried adderall
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97598199
>Ayane Hasegawa, HAHA CRIPPLE
https://rentry.org/NarutoAcademyAyane
>Myorin, they see me Myorin, they hatin'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97594947
>Kosshi, I see London, I see France
https://rentry.org/7wutmc5x
>Kisui Shōmi, THE (INVISIBLE) JUDGE OF THE UNDERWORLD
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97596444
>Otanashi Hibiki, do you think he buys a lot of penut butter
https://rentry.org/5964ikmz
>Minoru Kanzaki
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97598345
>Nana Kozeni
https://rentry.org/mavvkh67
>Leigan
https://rentry.org/yx4zt937
>Taiki Nakano
https://rentry.org/TaikiNakano
>Koda Mine
https://rentry.org/w5d2ut3n
>Kurayami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97611857
>Aisuke Uzumaki
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97612078

>Writefags
>Simple Introductions (Nana, Kosshi, a hint of Momika)
https://rentry.org/u63edrps
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>>97617437
>Aisuke Uzumaki
kusobuild
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>>97617598
it is a little creepy to unironically write a ninja kid having grown adults literally feed off of him
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>>97617437
Here's the fixed build: https://rentry.org/g5fxrgce

>>97617598
what does this mean??
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>>97617676
Oh this is for Aisuke btw
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>>97617676
>what does this mean??
He's calling your build shit.
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>>97617650
Do you think Dogen is in the Epstein Scrolls?
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>>97617650
Is'n that a part of canon too? It was a girl I think.
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>>97617437
Nekomaru Kagetora
https://rentry.co/nekomaru1

Pretty sure I counted the points right. He's a tiger boy, and he's FAST AS FUCK BOIIIIIII. That's all you need to know. I'll probably answer the prompt from last thread after your first impressions
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>>97618366
Cool build. You have 10 more item points, everyone gets them. Or one free item, but most of the big guns that cost more than 10 points can't be taken for free so I don't know why the author even put that stipulation in there.
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>>97618425
I thought it was 2 item points??? I'm KRILLING myself. Well sure, lemme check what I wanna grab... considering he fights hand-to-hand, probably not weapons. Also these are 10 points ON TOP of the other two, right?
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>>97618288
i mean if it is part of canon then thats still a creepy part of canon
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>>97618425
I checked, because it was bothering me, and the only item more expensive than 10 points you can take for free is Chakra Armor MK2. Everything else either can't be taken for free, or has the stipulation that it can't be taken for free but costs 10 points so you can take anyway just by taking the points. So the free item option is a scam unless you want specifically Chakra Armor MK2.
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>>97618466
tracking items really isnt ever going to be all that relevant, especially since you ger like a whopping five whole kunai or a single smoke bomb or whatever. who cares? its just like tracking reagents in d&d, pointless bookkeeping.
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>>97618447
It's 2 item points from your rank, if you read the item section blurb everyone gets another 10 points regardless of rank.
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>>97618474
Ah. Makes sense. I think I might grab ration pills, training puppets and cash because Nekomaru's dad would probably give him some savings from prior mercenary jobs.
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>>97618473
That only goes for the mundane items, the unique items that can only be taken once can be pretty useful. The book and stone of Gelel, Enchanted Tools, the 7 legendary swords that are definitely more than 7, chakra armor. Random kunai and swords are useless but the section itself has some good stuff in it.
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>>97618464
What I meant is not that it isn't creepy, but that it's fitting for the setting.
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>>97618505
I know I wouldn't be using that particular bit of fluff as a pattern, but whatever gets your rocks off man this is 4chins I aint judging
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>>97618510
It's not my build. I'm just confused because I've seen way worse in other MPs, and it wasn't even fitting for the setting, but nobody bats an eye at those.
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>>97618425
Those 10 points can't be used to buy options that say they can't be chosen for free, right?
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>>97618528
They can, you just can't pick one of those as your free option.

E.g. you can spend 8 of your 12 starting points on a Stone of Gelel. The section is unfinished and Apo is presumably still working on the logic though so we're half-presuming your equipment list on vibes right now.
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>>97618528
They can, if you take the 10 points they are 10 points. It specifically says "You get 10 points OR one item for free" The 1o points have no stipulation on them, only the free item.
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>>97618528
>>97618533
>>97618538
Is there even a free thing that costs more than 10 points?
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>>97618533
Bad example, because the stone costs 10, but there are some items that say "can't be taken for free" that cost less than 10 points.
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>>97618547
See >>97618466
That's the only one.
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>>97618366
Minor nitpick but it'd just be Elemental Flicker. They could choose to use Wind or Swift (probably Swift) for it. You could also put Swift in the Chakra Natures as its technically a new element.
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>>97612945
>What was the first thing your character does when they make it to the village?
Nekomaru doesn’t bother anyone he shouldn’t… at first. He gets acquainted with his new living space, figures out where to get food, tries to avoid the suspicious eyes of people who notice his tiger-ness, and immediately finds secluded forest-y areas to hang out in. He wants to run around, get some fresh air and stay away from big masses of people.

>You may request another build of the same sex to become your roommate, otherwise it will be picked at random.
No preference, although I read up on Hibiki and I think they might get along. Ideally someone he can look up to, or someone as weird as him. I was thinking it’d be cool if he offered to be Hibiki’s “eyes” and they could work as a duo, might be cool but I don’t know if anyone is intending to room with Hibiki already

>What does your character do in their downtime?
Run around until he’s tired, train, maybe do feral things like fish with his claws or pull lighthearted pranks on townspeople if anyone looks at him weird.

>What vibe does your character give off as a first impression?
Weird, but intense. I mean, he’s a literal tiger boy. He doesn’t seem threatening, but those big eyes do give intense, yet empty stares. However, he may look cute to some. To anyone closer to his age, Nekomaru may seem a little unsettling, but not unfriendly.

>What is your character’s attitude within a classroom setting?
Nekomaru is ADHD incarnate. He can’t just stay put, and even if he’ll make an effort to sit down and shut up, he’ll be. constantly shifting in his seat or stimming somehow. The swing of his tail is his main tell.
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>>97618366
>Swift
>Body Flicker 3/Swift Flicker 2
>Physiology/Unarmed 3
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>>97618706
>In-character answers

>What is chakra?
“Papa says it’s like food for the soul. You can’t do anything on an empty stomach, so you can’t do jutsus without chakra, right?”

>Do you know of the 12 basic Hand Seals?
“Oh! I know tiger… dragon… snake is kinda similar, I think… monkey… ox?” Nekomaru tries to do rabbit, but finds it a little complex. “Uuuh… that’s as much as I remember right now.”

>What is a Nindō?
“Papa says it’s basically my reason for fighting, and that I’ll figure it out at some point.”

>What does it mean to be a Shinobi?
“Hmm… that’s tough. Papa works for a lot of different people, and they all want different things. Soooo… a strong guy that helps people with what they want? But that doesn’t feel too convincing to me right now.”

>>97618724
H-HAYAI!!!

>>97618650
I’m confused. So basically Swift is a new element? Or an evolution of Wind?
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>>97618744
>So basically Swift is a new element? Or an evolution of Wind?
It's both. Any Elemental KKG is technically a new Element built off the combination of others/evolution of an existing one.

For example, if you have Swift, you have Wind, Yang and Swift. If you have Scathe, you have Lightning, Fire, Wind and Scathe.
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>>97618775
Ah, makes sense. So you can use Flicker with either element. Yeah I’ll list it, minor semantic thing but it’s better if I know what that is
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>>97618775
Importantly with out rules this means that you never take, for example, Lightning Weapon. You take Elemental Weapon and can use any Element you have with it.
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>>97618366
If anyone is still collecting all the Shinobemon, here's one more for potential tier lists

>>97617437
He forgot to link to the OP last thread, but here's another build >>97611774
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>>97618824
Was working on Dogen so didn't link properly, the last one was a vibecheck. I'll be finishing up this thread.
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>>97618786
that's also just how the cyoa is no?
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>>97618842
Probably, we just made sure it was clear.
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Will we be fighting the pirate king after graduation?
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catfag ratfag and apebitch overlap too much
only one should remain
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I apologize for writing that. I was experiencing qi deviation
It won't happen again
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dubs and I write something tonight
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>>97618918
You faggots will not turn this into fucking One Piece
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>>97618971
speaking of
where's Isekai Tournament post
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Isekai Tournament
https://imgchest.com/p/xny86ajm24b

>Cobalt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97581231

>Sagittarius Riku
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97595535
https://rentry.co/gmn94tb3

>Saku Kirikami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97595796

>Eugene Canseliet (under revision)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97587070

>Lucas Walker
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97587439

>Harry Higuruma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97587677

>Six
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97607788

>Llewellyn Odyalutai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97609487

>Areas and Connections (outdated; update soon)
https://rentry.org/v9ioyuz8

>Journal
https://rentry.org/vahx9iv5

Rules so far:
>Power tier is Heavyweight
>Mode is Bounty/Negotiate to encourage PvE events but PvP (other tournament player) is still possible as killing someone grants you all of their points
>Builds are 'Team X' by default, with no limit on power type or members
>All team members can get a wish
>The 'Team Handicap' exists; as the amount of team members you have is higher, your growth is slowed
>You can sever from your team at any moment, gaining the maximum growth multiplier
>You can't become a team member again after severing yourself from your team
>Setting is a multiversal arena with many sectors with their own enemies based on different fictional works, each with unique bounties (Hueco Mundo sector with Hollows, Namek sector with Frieza Force soldiers)
>Hunt bounties for points, and then you can use the points to purchase goodies, such as furthering your knowledge in a power system
>Teammembers spawn away from each other, and have to group up
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>>97618425
I skipped over the item section completely because I thought we were ignoring it in general, but if we get 12 points for free then I guess I'll quickly update Nana's rentry. Katanas for fighting, sealing scrolls for hoarding, and money for summoning.
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>>97617437
Iwao Iwaishi
https://rentry.org/NarutoIwaoIwaishi

A very special little boy. Please be nice to him.
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>>97619615
Another nature enjoyer, and pretty much the complete opposite of Nekomaru in fighting style and concept. I think they could get along great, they could
form a little group with Hibiki or something
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>>97619615
we're really starting to veer away from the whole ninja thing now huh

going to be back to generic fantasy slop eventually
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>>97617437
>>97612945
>What was the first thing your character does when they make it to the village?
Iwao's from the village, although he lives on the outskirts. His father escorted him to the Academy. He'd introduce himself to the teacher and other kids as he was instructed, although he might also get distracted and go stare at birds or something like that.
>You may request another build of the same sex to become your roommate, otherwise it will be picked at random.
Random's fine.
>What does your character do in their downtime?
Watch animals, eat rocks, collect rocks, skip rocks, draw, eat crayons.
>What vibe does your character give off as a first impression?
"That's a rock. The rock moves? The rock talks?! Is this rock retarded? Although compared to other rocks..."
>What is your character’s attitude within a classroom setting?
He's trying to make friends, but he's awkward and unsmartestest.
>What is chakra?
...
>Do you know of the 12 basic Hand Seals?
I don't know what chakar is...
>What is a Nindō?
I saw papa craft a seal once. I tried to help but those are very small and hard to get right. I like stamping things with them. Do you like stamps?
>What does it mean to be a Shinobi?
Nindough? Is it a pastry?
>...
Look, a squirrel!
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>>97619653
A blind boy, a tiger and a rock walk into a bar sound like a start of a joke, but it could work.
>>97619679
Blame the Anon who encouraged me when I said I have a dumb idea. But to be fair, Naruto itself veered away from the whole ninja thing as it progressed.
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>>97617437
To my little nijjas:
You're still too green to have one yet, but what kind of special technique or super attack do you dream of being able to pull off in the future? When you imagine yourself as the big strong elite Jonin facing off against a horde of enemies or an equal foe, what do you pull out to put an end do the battle?

For our big nijjas:
Your new students come from all over the continent, with varying levels of skill and specialties. Do you have an aptitude test you're going to give out to the kids to see where they stand? What is it? Who do you think will excel, and who needs to brush up on their fundamentals?
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>>97619966
The Uzumaki are able to seal away Tailed Beasts so it'd be cool to have some giant threat or evil demon attempt to attack the village and have Aisuke just one-shot it by sealing it, once he's a jonin of course. Its also nice to think that Aisuke theoretically never has to kill anyone he encounters
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>>97619136
I completed the first "overhaul" of the areas in the rentry. I think I'm gonna take a break from it and move onto writefagging.
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>>97619966
Kisui's gonna pull this out
https://youtube.com/watch?v=J9N9LXT2syM&t=979 but made of fire, seaweed, and bryozoan goop.
...What? You said dream.
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>>97619966
Hibiki thinks that he should focus more on his specialty - getting better with Supersonic Scream and Concealment Arts, so he can spam it from stealth and incapacitate opponents from long range by using it through Hypersonic Mind Wave'd animals. He also really wants to learn Medical techniques, since those are the best chance of getting his vision back.

In reality, he'd probably be most effective if he invested more in Genjutsu - Bringer of Darkness would be really good with his skill set since it has no effect on him.

Depending on how good he gets with medical ninjutsu and if he grows up to be corrupt, he might try stealing a dojutsu from someone. I doubt that will happen since it would take a lot to push him into that kind of mindset, and most of the cast seems too kind to let him get that far.
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>>97617437
I just had a strange thought. With our forced equalizer balancing that makes techniques good only relative to our rank, is there even any real reason to have level 3 stuff? Does it really make a difference?
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>>97620413
It's minimal at best. As soon as we level up to C rank everything changes. It might take you 50 years to learn a high level technique though so you're better off getting it locked in early.
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>>97620413
You're better at it than the guy with 2 anon duh.
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>>97620413
progression never matters, were not going to play this or any other game long enough to level up

what you pick at build start is what you are so make it good
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>>97620439
Nah, just figure it out. Naruto learned Sage Mode in like 4 days because toads figured out a cheat method.
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>>97620366
I made the mistake of letting this play out. How many fucking versions of Obito do you need? And why does Itachi have 3 final moves?
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>>97620446
OH MY MAGIC TOAD OIL (that evaporates when it leaves the mountain)
OH MY MAGIC TOAD STICK (no villains ever use natural energy apparently so it's useless for everything but training)

Pain arc is what people call the peak of the series btw
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>>97620369
Already thinking about snatching the only pair of special eyes, damn.
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>>97620462
Do we even have someone with special eyes right now?
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>>97620457
wdym?
Tobi
Tobi (War)
Obito (Young)
Obito (White Zetsu)
Masked Man
Obito (Adult)
Obito (Jinchuriki)
are all very important and beloved characters
personally I'm upset we can't play as Tobi (Serious (Orange Mask)) outside of his awakening
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>>97620469
Just Kosshi I think, but I don't think half a Byakugan would be all that useful.
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>>97620469
Not really, they're expensive af.
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>>97620469
Only Kosshi
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>>97620457
Obito is the character with the most different forms/styles through the eras in the manga, surpassing even Naruto because of his different personas. Itachi also has like three different eras, Part 1, Part 2 and Edo Tensei.
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>>97620469
>
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>>97620477
Having one is always better than having none, and for blind boy it'd be a big upgrade from no sight.
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>>97620445
If this is true I don't see a reason to start as D rank kids.
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>>97620498
why doesn't he just ask a dying old person for donor eyes? this is Naruto and Rin transplanted a Sharingan in like 10 seconds in a cave WITHOUT a box of scraps
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>>97619966
>Nana
Doesn't have a very good grasp on what the average Jonin can actually do

>Horde
[Dual Blades of the Mountain Range]
Stabs her swords into the ground and makes a fissure that spans the battlefield as she drags up two giant earthen blades. Then it's just sweeping the hordes away with her giant weapons.

>Solo
[100 Billion Ryo Explosion]
Stabs her sword into the villain's chest and turns them into a water balloon of money, making them burst into a grand money rain. Not at all influence by a need for money.
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>>97620549
>[100 Billion Ryo Explosion]
Where does the money come from? Does she plan to learn alchemy?
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>>97620561
Takes a loan from her summons duh
She has to pay it back at 100% interest rate though...
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Who has cool and who is a certified dweeb (greater than 10 points of drawbacks)
Honorable mention in the very unlikely circumstance someone took cool with their 1 perk
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>>97620561
Mona will teach her the forbidden technique of the monkey sages
[Tax Evasion]
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>>97620561
Chakra! (She doesn't know how it works. If people can make elements and summon things with chakra, why not money?)

>>97620565
Debt counter: 201,000,000,000 ryo
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>>97620522
It goes against his faith.
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>>97620566
>STACIES
Momika
Mona
Nana

>CHADS
Kisui
Koda
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>>97620522
Maybe transplanting a Dojutsu (which are rare and no clan would be willing to 'donate' like that) is much, much easier than transplanting a normal eye? I don't remember if there was ever a non-dojutsu eye transplant in Naruto or Shippuden.
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>>97620573
She may awaken to the first Gold elemental nature in the ninjia world.
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>>97620609
alright now ship them
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>>97620642
>KING OF THE UNDERWORLD
Kisui
>QUEENS OF THE UNDERWORLD (by marriage to the king)
Momika
Mona
Nana
>KING OF THE KEK CHAIR
Koda
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>>97620612
That sounds very strange logically speaking, how a special eye with superpowers is easier to transplant than a normal one. But naruto's logic is very strange at best in general so maybe you are right.
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>>97620625
I think you can make gold with the Steel EKG
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>>97620612
I think the lack of it being shown has more to with the narrative. If anything, transplanting dojutsu so probably more of a pain than just popping in any old pair since dojutsu are constant and pretty hefty drain on anyone not of the proper bloodline.
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>>97620652
Nana tearfully shoves her hard earned gold nuggets into her mouth, praying it'll be worth it in the end
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>>97620612
I always thought transplanting Dojustu was relatively easy since they’re filled with chakra and near the end of the series obito and madara are popping them in their sockets like usbs in the middle of a battlefield, but they’re harder to maintain cause they constantly drain chakra if you’re not speshul enough. Thats 100% headcanon though, I have nothing to support it.
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>>97617437
Fox

>Land
Moon (Rice Fields (Moon (...))))

>Rank
B (+35)

>Perks
Prodigious
Skilled
Gifted
Cool (+1)

>Elements
Yin/Yang (-7)
Wind

>Basics
Weapon Arts: Swords^ (-2)
Subterfuge^ (-2)
Body Flicker^ (-2)
Transformation^ (-2)
Ninja Tools
Chakra Flow
Utility Jutsu

>Advanced
Weapon Style: Hazy Moon^^ (-4)
Illusory Arts^^ (-4)
Advanced Taijutsu^
Sensory Arts: Sight (-3)

>Hidden
Element Spear^
Body Control^

>Special Techniques
Rebirth Sword/Tenseiken (-10)
Requires Sensory + Illusion Arts, and Body Control
An unorthodox genjutsu technique for enhancing the user. Using time dilation, automated sensory processing, input filtering, and various other tricks, Tenseiken is meant to emulate and enhance ‘the zone’. In theory, the technique should trigger the peak of the user's fighting ability, letting a ninja quickly adapt to and even copy some jutsu. However, between the ridiculous complexity and horrific side effects, practicing it is nearly impossible. Tenseiken seems no closer to completion after all of Fox’s efforts, and a minute of even the most stable version still risks sensory shutdown and worse.

>Items
Katana (-2i)
Ration Pills (-3i)
Sleeping Pills (-3i)
Hidden Text: Getsugakure Genjutsu Scrolls (-5i)
Bingo Book disguised Tobirama x Madara doujin (-2i)
Training Weights (-1i)
Kunai (-1i)

As of this semester, Anbu unit Fox has been assigned to the Academy to teach shinobi tactics and genjutsu fundamentals, as well as assist in various other classes. The teachers see it as unwelcome oversight from the royal family, while the students wonder if they pissed it off somehow.

Because Fox is a bitch.

Her standards are crazy high, she’ll make you practice right thirty times for every one you get wrong, she’s brutal about being on time, she’ll always point out all of your tiny mistakes, and she’s waaay too kunai-happy for an academy teacher. Sage help you if you forget the homework.
What the hell did they do to deserve this?
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>>97620911
Hitomi Yūnaga wonders what the hell she did to deserve this.
Her success rate is, as always, impeccable. She wasn’t rude to any of the foreigners in months. Was it her slipping fundamentals? She had to cut practice down to six hours a night to fit in more research, but she’s so close to a breakthrough in her jutsu she can almost taste it. The last five monthly progress reports had been clear on this, so why now?

Being torn away from her responsibilities and training to lecture to people who prefer to stick kunai up their nose instead of into enemies has ruined her mood. That she’s been sent to the Getsugakure Academy, a place she escaped as fast as shinobily possible, has made it even worse. But a proper ninja doesn’t let their feelings get in the way of the mission. Hitomi will give these students the shinobi education she wished she had gotten, even if she has to drag them kicking, screaming, and sometimes bleeding to it. She can totally handle educating a bunch of toddlers with attitude. Right?

Hitomi is a loyal ninja of Getsugakure, descended from the original families that invented the Hazy Moon, and even as utterly decayed as they now are, she still holds their pride close to her heart. Their replacement by the new system of foreign mercenaries has her doubting the royal family, and the current plan of training shinobi and just sending them back has her doubting their sanity. But there’s nothing to do but preserve the art as best she can. She hopes to prove Getsugakure genjutsu still thrives... even if her experiments have almost nothing to do with those arts any more.

Also, minor note, she’s 14. Prodigies, man.
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>>97620911
needs cock correction
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>>97620920
>Also, minor note, she’s 14. Prodigies, man.
errrrrrm
*sweats, puts hand behind head*
sorry about that needs cock correction thing, haha! I don't want people to think I'm a diddy blud...
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>>97620919
>Also, minor note, she’s 14. Prodigies, man.
>B Rank
BRUTAL mogging...
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>>97620919
>fast as shinobily possible
heh
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>>97620911
Eyy bby want sum
>>97620934
nvm
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>>97619966
Nekomaru’s not very sure about how strong a Jonin actually is (and neither am I), but he’d like to learn the Reaver Claw technique, which his dad probably already knows. Also if someone told him about taijutsu he’d probably like to try that out in order to strengthen his body even more and GOTTA GO FAST even FASTER.

>>97620911
Oh hey, someone made the last master in the end. Cool, someone Nekomaru can probably look up to (he’s still gonna be a handful)

Actually, for the teachers, who are they gonna watch out for?
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>>97620973
>he’d like to learn the Reaver Claw technique, which his dad probably already knows.
Throwing this out here as a potential future connection between builds if you're interested, but one of Nana's summons is a big cat-esque intelligent spirit that knows how to use the Reaver Claw technique. If it would be workable, the summon could be the one to teach him. She'd just... warm Nekomaru that her summon charges a lot of money to do it.
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>>97620941
Don't worry, all the students will be A rank 13.
>but aren't some of them already
Doesn't matter.
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>>97621016
That’s a cool idea. Nekomaru *does* have a decent amount of cash laying around, so unless someone tells him that he can learn that in other ways, he’d probably fork a lot of it over if it means getting to be more like his dad. He *is* probably the youngest student at 11, at least without counting THE ROCK Iwai, so someone would have to teach him to be responsible with his money lol
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>>97619136
Isekai Tourners, what element or chakra nature do you think your character would be most associated with? Their TM compatability pool?
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>>97621075
I have no clue, but my isekvno build would beat the shit out of these ninja kids... full chunin exam sweep
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>>97621090
Kisui no diffs
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>>97621053
We got kids everywhere between 9 and 15, one that's 10, 15, or 20 depending on how you look at it, and one that was sealed away for who knows how long, and the slime who might be like 2 depending on what you count as their birth.
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>>97621099
I really like how crazy the ages got. It immediately gives the vibes of how abnormal the class is. Nta.
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>>97621075
Probably wind for Saku.
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>>97621099
What the FUARK???? I mean, as long as it’s understood that Nekomaru’s still somewhat childish I’m okay with that, he’s gonna be looking up to people like Momika I guess (and the teachers of course). Actually, how many characters have undisclosed ages?
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>>97621075
>Cobalt
For a chakra nature I'd probably say fire with a focus on yin release would probably be it because of 3000 Worlds and general warfare being part of his foundation, but his TM pool is a bunch of normal/psychic/dark type status moves.
>Jewel
I'm gonna say either earth or wind, simply because growl and sand attack are the first moves Eevees learn, but Eevees might have all 5 chakra natures. We'll go with just wind to be safe, but Monster means she probably can learn any without issue. TM pool is obvious.
>>97621110
Did you decide or mention where you want her starting area to be? I imagine JJKland.
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>>97621147
Actually upon further inspection the only "elemental" move Eevees actually learn via TM are Trailblaze and Mud-Slap, so in Naruto terms earth it is.
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>>97621147
Ye, JJKland.
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>>97621075
For Lucas probaly Yin and Yang for soul stuff, and maybe Lighting because of Discharge because it's the most destructive? Mirror would tecnically be Earth+Yin/Yang because that leads to a bunch of reflective/refracting materials, or ice.
For TMs I have no idea, maybe Ghost and either Dark or Psychic stuff, because of the soul stuff again. Plus a bunch of random moves like Reflect and Mirror Coat for Mirror Foundation and the big hitting moves like Hyper Beam, for Discharge. But I don't rememeber how many of these even are TMs.
Because of Discharge he could technically spam Hyper Beam, since at some point he gets 10 times less cooldowns.
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>>97621075
I've been mulling over ideas on different power system compatibilities/manifestations as I've slowly worked on an intro for Harry, although it is at a glacial pace as I've found myself mired in more and more unfortunate scenarios which I've been dealing with as they come. It's not all too bad, just some time sinks to take care of.

As to the prompt, Harry would gravitate towards Earth for its reliability regardless of if his natural affinity happens to land on it to shore up his defense and give options for battlefield control. I don't know exactly how TM pools work or what are within them, but Harry's natural typing would lean into Dark.

For the rest of the powersystems Harry only focuses on what techniques provide the most value for the least amount of investment necessary. For Dragonball something like the Kaioken would be out of his range of interest as it requires a significant journey to learn in, especially considering the Technique's inherent drawbacks, but Potential Unleashed would be up his alley as not only does it require getting his potential unlocked but its also extremely low cost of a transformation. He's not planning to just speedrun through the different zones, as there's plenty they can offer outside of their power systems, but he doesn't need much beyond the basics to get started, especially if he uses his Grimoire to fast track with personal study on his own. Investing too much time into one system might not net as much as moving on and using the saved time to develop multiple.

Been working out a Nen ability for him as well, but it's still in its rough stages since I already know I'm going to make him a Specialist. Not sure if Binding Vows can stack but thinking about how much I can play around with them since Harry can make Binding Vows for every power system.
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>>97621075
>Six
>Has the power that gives more powers and the foundation of 'random bullshit go'
Genuinely no idea, her abilities are guaranteed to be a complete mess of random options in the long run.

Ignoring the elephant in the room, Six is guaranteed to pick up physical abilities whenever she gets something new from Talent because of Strings. Combined with her monster origins, her traditional element is probably Earth.
By Naruto logic, she'd be strongly Yang aspected, which would naturally lead to Steel Release, I think. Iron threads are cool, so that works for me.

Her pokemon typing would definitely be Fighting/Dragon, with a focus on buff moves and big physical damage. Factoring in adaptation, though, it may as well be randomly selected with Sketch in there several times.

As for the other power systems, her magic crest gives her a big skill boost whenever she gains access to them, focused around physical stuff. So, naturally, she'd be stacking Kaio-ken x20, Eight Gates, Belly Drum, sacrificial enhancer Nen vows, Flowing Red Scale, and anything else to punch and kick really, really hard.
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>>97620462
More of a hypothetical to be honest - Hibiki is too much of a moralfag right now to steal any eyes, even from a bad guy.

>>97620522
I never watched Shippuden and didn't think it was that easy, to be honest. I thought it required either like a special eye, a really good medical ninja, or both. Might need to rework his backstory a bit, cause he probably wouldn't have gotten exiled if the biggest issue was sourcing an eyeball or two.
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>>97619136
Odyalutai Anon here, as much as I like the Glitch concept, I am kind of scratching my head about how to handle the supposedly random effects "fairly". Established game universes likely carry their noteworthy glitches, but anime is another matter. Any other Isekino Anons have input?


>>97621075
>Chakra: [ERROR]
Element and Yin/Yang probably shift around randomly every single time he casts something, checks his inventory, or really does much of anything.
>Type: ???
TM Pool is likely something similarly nonsensical, since he's kind of a human Missingno.; not all-encompassing like Mew, yet broader than it has any right to be, while leaving out simple things like Return. May even learn something other than what the TM was designed for.

>>97621245
Trawling through the list of TM locations for each generation on Bulbapedia yielded these for Dark-type moves:
Fling, Payback, Thief, Taunt, Torment, Snatch, Embargo, Dark Pulse, Hone Claws, Quash, Snarl, Brutal Swing, Foul Play, Beat Up, Fake Tears, Assurance, Crunch, Nasty Plot, Darkest Lariat, Throat Chop, Knock Off, and Lash Out.
Something to start from I suppose.

>>97621311
Since Six is kind-of-sort-of-not-really dummied out, I was thinking Llewellyn might have some sort of affinity for her. Was even thinking of an introductory writefag involving her stumbling into his magical realm and then him awkwardly explaining he can only change the signs he talks to her through while she's looking away before he manifests directly so they can speak face to face.
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>>97621506
>but anime is another matter
For those you'll probably need to look into anime games themselves. Another interpretation is taking a limitation of an ability, looking at bypassing the limitation, and then the consequences of that. Something like an exploit or rng manipulation to guarantee Black Flashes or gather natural energy for Senjutsu while moving. Of course, there should definitely be drawbacks; the risk of crashing, going OOBs for a period, or crippling himself in some other way. Basically, maximize high risk and high reward.
Finally, it also makes sense that against less glitchy things... he just can't exploit them as well. Go all in on making Acid Rain and Bad Eggs instead; no real harm in picking one power system to master. As long as he doesn't go solo, he has team members to shore up his weak spots for a reason.
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>>97621506
Could go with general stuff from corrupted video.
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>>97621075
Riku would probably be Lightning. Considering he doesn’t really have much in the way of hax, he’d probably like to pick up some genjutsu. I haven’t really decided a starting location yet, but I think I’ll say Stitched Lostbelts because it’s close enough to other locations where other people are and we can have some encounters going already.
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>>97619966
>Myorin
Splitting this in two based on subject
>Taijutsu
Three parts.
The first is essentially a warm-up and athleticism test, really just a bunch of physical exercises, running, lifting stuff etc.
The second part is the tough part, it's short (3m) individual sparrings against her. They are done in the order of how well the kids did in the first part, with those who did best going first. In a fight, you can make up with a good plan what you lack physically, so the order is a chance for the physically weaker students to gather the extra data to even out the playing field a bit. Myorin would keep it safe and give the kids a chance to show their moves, but she'd try to push them into giving it their all. The kids can use non-taijutsu skills, but she'll push into close range to force them to supplement it with taijutsu if they want to create openings for it.
Third part is discussing how the sparrings went. She wants to learn why kids fought the way they did, and what do they think they could do better. She's not planning to force kids to replicate her style of combat, and instead try to give them the tools that match their talents, so first she needs to learn what those talents are, and this is what that's for.
Since the test is mostly to get to know the kids, the whole point is to verify her initial assumptions, but based on her expert eye and seeing the kids walk-in, her ex-ante ranking is:
Mona > Kosshi > Nekomaru > Leigan > Iwao > Nana > Taiki > Kisui > Ayane > Aisuke > Momika > Koda > Sumio > Minoru > Kurayami > Otanashi
>Academics
A written test with increasingly difficult questions. Not aimed at enabling cheating. Otanashi gets an oral exam instead.
Ayane > Others > Iwao
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>>97619966
I actually have a killer move planned for Koda using what he currently has but I don't wanna spoil it in case I get the chance to use it.
For now, let's say a large scale destructive jutsu like kirin or stuff like that
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>>97619966
Ayane believes that combat is more a dance of little things, tiny advantages that add up to a simple crescendo made of previous steps rather than something big, flashy or overly prepared. Just about the most complex finishing move she aspires to is a Body Flicker into a precise attack like Raikiri/Chidori ala Elemental Flicker/Elemental Weapon, but that takes a lot of other skills like good Sensory, and extreme mastery of Body Flicker and the taijutsu skills needed for that level of precision.
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could a team of genins take on a jonin?
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>>97622360
No, even the weakest npc jonin could take down an entire team of genin
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>>97622380
but boruto's team took down a kara member
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>>97622360
The strongest Genin teams could probably sweep the weakest Jonin but at that point you're talking about 3 Rank Cs vs one Rank C who are only at their rank due to bureaucratic nonsense. In terms of averages it'd be monstrously difficult and require an extreme advantage.
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>>97622397
chunin level genin
we don't do that here
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>>97622360
https://youtu.be/qEKwnA1pxvw
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>>97622416
To be fair that's barely-genin Vs an elite Jonin. The average Genin with experience are stronger than the three there (except Sasuke who is built different at this time) and the average Jonin is much weaker than Kakashi.

Not to say the average Jonin wouldn't body Genin but the gap is fairly smaller than that fight specifically.
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How many builds do we have of each element?
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>>97622360
The way I always saw it is it takes a team of a Rank to semi-reliably, high-difficulty beat the next step up.

A team of Genin probably beat a single Chuunin. A team of Chuunin probably beat a single Jonin. A team of Jonin probably beat an Elite Jonin. A team of Elite Jonin probably beat a Kage. All of them struggle hard, lose 1-2 people and aren't guaranteed to win.

The numbers are exponential though, 9 Genin don't beat a Jonin because the Jonin is counting bodies from the first few seconds.
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>>97617437
>fire
momika
kisui
aisuke (+yinyang)
>water
Sumio (+yinyang)
Koda
Kurayami (+ Yin)
>wind
mona(+ yang)
myorin(+yang)
kosshi (+yang)
hibiki
>lightning
ayane
leigan
>earth
Nana (+yang)
Taiki
>God's specialest little boy
Kanzaki (Yin+Yang)
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>>97622483
New builds are
>Wind
Nekomaru (+Yang+Swift)
>Earth
Iwao (+Yang+Petrification)
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anyone wanna be in my introductory writefag?
just need 1 person
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>>97622553
Bro, you didn't even specify the MP.
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>>97622553
Who’s your build? Just to know who might work or not work
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>>97622554
>>97622557
yeah my bad
Koda from naruto
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>>97622563
I volunteer Sumio
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>>97622569
Sure that'll work
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>>97622563
I can offer Nekomaru, they’re the same age and cat/mouse could be a fun thing to do. No idea how you feel about that though, I usually write an introduction myself first and let anons work from there but if you’re up to the challenge, go for it
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>>97622570
Fuark. Well I could just write something myself then, when are we gonna get the final decisions on roommates?
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>>97622573
Sorry for this time, but the two could have fun interactions in the future
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>>97622577
It’s okay. Anon was just faster on the trigger but I can write something anyway. I think all the animal/nature guys can be friends, should be fun
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>>97621053
I will warn that Nana's summons whole gimmick is that they are all greedy bastards that charge exorbitantly (it's why Nana is extremely loathe to ever summon them). While the exact summon in question, Hichiru, is probably the one that's the most fair... that's only relative to the others. She still charges 50,000 ryo per hour, which (assuming 1 ryo=10 yen) would be about $3,200.

>>97622009
>A written test with increasingly difficult questions.
Nana wouldn't bring it up with Myorin, but Momika probably would. Nana would need an oral exam as well or she'll do terribly. Not because she's as dumb as a rock, but because she doesn't know how to read very well yet. Grew up in a poor fishing village until less than a year ago and the only one who could teach her anything since then was Momika, who might not be the best on that front and definitely didn't have enough time to really drill literacy into her skull.
Maybe Nana's literacy level would be a factor to lower her score, but not being able to answer most of the questions because of it would probably go against the point of the aptitude test.
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>>97622633
>it costs four hundred thousand Ryo to fire this ghost... for twelve seconds
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>>97619966
>You're still too green to have one yet, but what kind of special technique or super attack do you dream of being able to pull off in the future? When you imagine yourself as the big strong elite Jonin facing off against a horde of enemies or an equal foe, what do you pull out to put an end do the battle?
Iwao wants to fly, like a birdie. Attack? Ummm... Just hit harder? Throw more rocks and trees? Yes, throw more rocks and trees. Burry the horde of bad men under a rain of rocks and trees.
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>>97617437
Natsume Saimoto:

>Origin:
Redaku (Will of the Ancients)

>Rank
D (25 points, 1 perk, 5 jutsu)

>Perks
Unique Power (Awakened Gravity)

>Drawbacks:
Distinct Look (Birthmark Scar around abdomen) (+2)
Overconfidence (+5)
Sentimental Treasure (Gelel Stone) (+5)
Bad Habit (Overeating) (+4)


>Chakra Natures:
Lightning
Yin & Yang (-7)

>Basic:
Unarmed
Book Smarts (Physics)
Body Flicker
Hell Viewing
Utility Jutsu
Normal Skills: Stealth, Subterfuge, Ninja Tools, Espionage, Clone, Transformation, Substitution

>Advanced:
Advanced Fighting Style (Flashing Fist) (-3)

>Kekkei Genkais:
Awakened Gravity (-15)
Rokubaigan (-15)

>Equipment
Short Range Radio
Gelel Stone

https://rentry.org/NatsumeSaimoto

tl:dr: A young girl from Redaku almost entirely reliant upon powerful Kekkei Genkai to fight. Will almost definitely get humbled at some point.

I have 1 point of each type left over, but nothing really fit for the idea.
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>>97622009
>>97622633
Yeah, Nana would get an oral exam too, but the lack of literacy would be marked against her in this case, but that basically means it's just something to work on.
>>97622724
Adding this, the rankings would be:
>Taijutsu
Mona > Kosshi > Nekomaru > Leigan > Iwao > Nana > Taiki > Kisui > Redaku > Ayane > Aisuke > Momika > Koda > Sumio > Minoru > Kurayami > Otanashi
>Academics
Ayane > Redaku > Others > Nana > Iwao
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>>97622766
Goddamn, Redaku is not the name, Natsume is the name.
>>97622009
Adding this, the rankings would be:
>Taijutsu
Mona > Kosshi > Nekomaru > Leigan > Iwao > Nana > Taiki > Kisui > Natsume > Ayane > Aisuke > Momika > Koda > Sumio > Minoru > Kurayami > Otanashi
>Academics
Ayane > Natsume > Others > Nana > Iwao
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Actually, Adding this, the rankings would be:
>Taijutsu
Mona > Kosshi > Nekomaru > Leigan > Iwao > Nana > Taiki > Kisui > Redaku > Ayane > Aisuke > Momika > Koda > Sumio > Minoru > Kurayami > Otanashi
>Academics
Ayane > Redaku > Others > Nana > Iwao
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>>97622794
Wait, what did you change?
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>>97622806
nothing lmao
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>>97622724
>Bad Habit (Overeating)
Another future fat fuck added to the class
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>>97622724
The strongest has appeared
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>>97622633
Yeah I read about it sometime after we talked and I realised their prices aren’t actually very fair. Still, it could be a fun thing to do between Nana and Nekomaru. Actually, since she’s somewhat socially awkward, what would Nana’s first impression of Nekomaru be, since they’re both weird kids?

>>97622794
Nekomaru’s lived most of his life on the outskirts of Takigakure, so he doesn’t write often, but he can write. His handwriting sucks, though, and his ADHD is very notable so he struggles to put thoughts into words if the thoughts are too complex. Sometimes he says the first thing that comes to mind, too. But he’s not mentally slow, he just finds it hard to focus, if that helps paint a picture of his academics.
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>>97622829
Can't wait for someone to take overeating and super willpower for the easy points
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I haven't been through all the builds yet
Do we have any interesting fighting styles?
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>>97622829
Gotta eat big to get big
Leave humanity behind
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>>97622864
Fat girls best girls.
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>>97622852
Someone just posted a telekinetic with flight and teleportation (who pretty much does nothing else)
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>>97622836
Good, as long as you're aware. I'd imagine Nekomaru would be the one to approach her about it. Like Nana being told to demonstrate her summoning by a teacher for assessment (with the teacher having to front the cost), she picks one of her cheaper summons and it happens to be Hichiru.
Then they meet coincidentally at the same fishing spot and the supplemental training begins.

>Actually, since she’s somewhat socially awkward, what would Nana’s first impression of Nekomaru be, since they’re both weird kids?
Something like this
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>>97622901
Although can the Twelve Bastards charge people for other stuff, or would that just be added to Nana’s debt? I also don’t know how much money the Cold, Hard Cash item actually is
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>>97623004
>Although can the Twelve Bastards charge people for other stuff, or would that just be added to Nana’s debt?
Can't the other person just pay Nana and she pays that to the Twelve Bastards?
What's Moon Village's tax policy? Would this increase the VAT rate?
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>>97622901
Also I forgot to say this is a TRVTH NVKE and this is how I act with people who are more autistic than me

>>97623016
Nekomaru could realistically do that, although it’d probably be a huge chunk of his savings lol
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>>97623004
The idea was that they'd give Nana the money, and she'd pass it off to her summon like anon said.

I'm kind of torn between letting her being able to increase the debt like that. It would make her able to use them more "free"ly in a way, but it also feels like it takes away from the gimmick of having to pay them to work at all. She might just have to pay them up front to be summoned and do things, with the initial one billion debt being a part of the special one time signing "bonus".
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>>97623072
Well, not like she has that money on hand, right? I think the debt-raising adds to the drama, it makes every use of her summons more meaningful. And I’m sure it’ll be all the more satisfying when she’s a big ninja and she gets that debt paid off somehow
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>>97623089
I did throw cold hard cash into the build when I learned more about the items section, so she does have capital at the moment. It's everything she's earned while stealing and hustling with Momika prior to coming to Moon.

But having a debt & money counter to keep track of in writefags would be kind of fun actually. Like at the end of a fight, putting down the debt prior and post battle that carries through to the next fight. Or if she finishes a mission or does something else to earn money, her money count goes up (with the possibility of going down depending on what happens).
It's something Nana would definitely be mentally marking down every time she did anything with a summon.
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>>97623155
Oh, that makes sense. Would be cool to see that balance change with every writefag or build update, yeah.

I kinda wanna write something already, but I only barely know Naruto stuff and we just got started. I wonder what kind of small things I can write for Nekomaru

ALSO Isekaibros, how’s progress? Anyone writing anything?
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>>97623199
>ALSO Isekaibros, how’s progress? Anyone writing anything?
I will be, I have an important school thing coming up so I've been studying but after that's done I'm gonna write something.
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>>97621506
>Since Six is kind-of-sort-of-not-really dummied out, I was thinking Llewellyn might have some sort of affinity for her.
Sounds right to me. Her existence is semi-unstable, so a guy who specializes in glitches should be able to interact with her pretty well.
Those weird digital bits in my intro draft seem a little more appropriate now.

>him awkwardly explaining he can only change the signs he talks to her through while she's looking away before he manifests directly so they can speak face to face.
If you want to play it for humor, Six is practically illiterate as of her escape, and would probably not get a lot of what Llwellyn tells or shows her. Her knowledge base is "super high level virology textbooks" and literally nothing else.

>>97623199
I've been putting together a draft for Six's introduction to Raccoon City, but I'm a wagecel posting on company time so it'll be a weekend thing at best.
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>>97622397
Most of Kara is actually not comprised of ninja, I think literally the only memeber who can perform traditional ninjutsu is Kashin Koji. Plus it was mostly Borushiki doing the heavy lifting
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>>97622407
Objectively, a lot of the builds are essentially Chunin tier.
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>>97621099
Speaking of, here's the current update on that

And here's the current repository of all the faces for any tier list aspirants
https://imgchest.com/p/na7knz23b78
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>>97622569
Thanks for the shoutout, brother. Who's your build? I'm planning to write something small this weekend, so I'll try to include them.
>>97622563
And Koda of course.
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>>97623588
Dogen is 40. Currently busy but will be finishing up his build proper tonight.
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>>97623588
Aisuke is supposed to be physically 11 or 12, altho I'm not sure what time period this is supposed to be in and how far away the The Second Great Ninja War was so depending on that he might technically be like 20 or 30 since he was sealed away for a good bit
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>>97623685
We haven't specified it, so what would work best for you?
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>>97623742
12 is fine for Aisuke, as for the timeframe, the period OG Naruto starts in is fine, Kakashi's era could be cool too
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>>97623685
I'll use Leigan as the base example and use Aisuke's physical age for the list

I'll also change Kurayami if we find out how old the girl was before being turned to ooze and if they continue aging
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>>97623780
friendships?
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>>97619966
Kosshi doesn't really have such thoughts, and she'd be perfectly content if she never had to fight. Following that, she'd prefers to end fights quickly and with little pomp. I imagine she'd continue as normal while mixing in an ash bone to make sure the next blow is fatal. Alternatively, giant skeleton mech, but that's certainly not something she'd regularly employ.
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>>97623788
I'll make a relationship chart for Aisuke but I want to finish a writefag first
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>>97623780
needs a 35 year old academy student
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>>97623859
The eternal preschooler
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>>97623859
but he looks like a 17 year old male model
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>>97623883
I've never seen such a young shinobi
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>>97617437
Here's the Koda and Sumio writefag. Not my best work but I'm kind of rusty.
https://pastebin.com/MQFbgTFk
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>>97624155
>I'm kind of rusty
>pastebin
Now that's oldschool
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>>97623780
What do you MEAN we have 9 and 7 year olds??? Where the FUCK is Ninja CPS?!

>>97624155
Pastebin? Damn, that's curious. Gonna give it a read in a sec

I'm more proud of this piece, the first one was kinda rushed ngl
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>>97623685
>he might technically be like 20 or 30
Ah, I didn't realize the Uzumaki clan got wiped out so long ago in our timeline. I'll probably have to do something different with Sumio's family history than what I've been thinking of then. If the timeline could work out though, then Aisuke would likely hate Sumio after hearing his family name (for reasons I've been ironing out). Though I could just do something different if need be.
>>97624155
Oh, that was fast. I'll read it tonight after work along with the one from Nana anon.
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>>97624284
Apparently anons felt like elementary school children were somehow capable of going off on their own to be ninjas.
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>>97624291
Honestly I'm really not sure how long ago it was, we could just say it happened somewhat recently. But in the actual Naruto story it happened a few decades ago
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>>97624293
Blame Kishimoto. Solo King graduated the academy at six, and Kakashi managed it at five. Eight year old genins running around shanking people is canon.
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>>97624284
>>97624293
I feel like you haven't watched Naruto.
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>>97624321
DINGDINGDINGDING!!! I've been talking about that for like, 2 threads! I'm only watching it right now!
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>>97624293
Some of our genin have already killed people. You fellas forget that it's a setting where child soldiers are the norm.
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>>97624314
Yeah, for some reason I was thinking we were starting earlier in the timeline. I don't really remember why I had that impression kek
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>>97624347
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/H89KJsYB3Ys
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>>97623780
>I'll also change Kurayami if we find out how old the girl was before being turned to ooze, and if they continue aging
She was 8 when it happened, and yes, she'll keep aging
>>97623616
It was me, he felt like the more fitting answer
>>97619966
I realized that it was literally just this while trying to describe it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WFE9NUWAEec
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Can we decide on the dorms? Since some people are gonna get random partners
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>>97624320
>>97624321
>>97624347
I guess I legally have to accept this, but I do not like it. It really stretches the "child" part of child soldier.

Even African unga bungas pressed into service usually need to be at least physically capable of holding the ak47 theyre given and understanding why and how to use it rather than wander off to look at butterflies or play in the mud, so there is a certain minimum age.
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>>97624389
While they're internally random there's not reason to not externally determine based on what we believe to be most interesting.
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>>97624389
Let's compile the preferences first.
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>>97624321
That grown adult is 12 while his Middle form is 14? How did he get physically older while reversing in age?
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>>97624389
>Boys' preferences
Koda: No preference
Kisui: No preference
Taiki: No preference
Hibiki: No preference IC, has ideas for Koda or Taiki OOC
Leigan: No preference IC, Aisuke or Sumio OOC
Sumio: Someone who isn't a night owl
Aisuke: Sumio
Nekomaru: No preference IC, maybe Hibiki OOC
Iwao: No preference

>Girls' preferences
Ayane: Momika
Momika: Nana
Kurayami: No preference
Mona: No preference
Nana: Momika
Kosshi: Someone who isn't bothersome
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>>97624406
Have you considered those African child soldiers are chakraless bums?
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>>97624434
To be fair, character preferences aren't the same as anon preferences. It could be fun to pair up people who wouldn't want to room together.
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>>97624406
Irl kids don't have access to chakra or special bloodline powers, and learning how to fight isn't part of the curriculum along with their abcs.
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>>97624420
nah, that's just his image as an adult, i just grabbed the first sort of compile image i found
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>>97624456
>>97624436
I guess.
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>>97624434
How many people per room are we doing? There are 9 boys and 6 girls. 3 person rooms for all? 3 for boys, 2 for girls? 2 for all except for one 3 or 1 person room for boys?
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>>97624464
Your math is off
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>>97624470
Where?
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>>97624464
Natsume hasn't answered yet, so it's 7 girls currently
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>>97624483
Oh, I went by Anon's list. Are we pairing up one boy with one girl then?
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>>97624490
alright which boy is gay
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>>97624493
Kisui
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>>97624490
Ain't no way. Just either give a lucky kid on each side no roommate, or put 3 to one dorm room on each side

>>97624493
Kisui but that doesn't matter
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>>97624493
Dunno about him being gay, but Iwao seems to have that Ken physique going on for him.
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>>97624504
We could also just leave one person without a roommate until someone else makes a matching build?
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>>97624493
Kisui
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I just realised his image in the tiermaker looks nothing like his description lmao. I could offer to draw something more accurate if his anon wants that
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>>97624493
Anyone BUT Kisui*
*he hasn't gotten his Naruto**
**yet
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>>97624508
Kind of depends on whether the teachers wanted the dorms just to be a place for the students to stay because almost all of them don't come from Moon, or if they wanted to promote stronger bonds via forced cohabitation because these kids have no village loyalty. If it's the latter, we could do two 3 person rooms and have one move out when a new matching build shows up.
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>>97617437
>>97611774
Is he excluded because the build isn't complete or did the threadslave miss him?
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>>97624558
Both.
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>>97624536
It might not matter for this but there's also a matter of security. Dogen will be keeping various barriers and seals about the school grounds, mostly low-end stuff and not to spy on the kids, but may have a preference for putting particularly unstable ones in more warded sections.

Naturally he's either intentionally or accidentally left holes in the security system for sneaky students to work around if it ever comes to that/people want to write it but still. People trying to spy on the kids in their home or infiltrate their dreams or whatever are getting hardwalled by some decently impressive seals.

>>97624558
Yeah both.
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>>97624613
Would Dogen be going out to recruit some of the students, or is he exclusively a teacher? Drafting Hibiki's introduction post and would rather use one of the teachers than a nameless NPC.
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>>97622670
If nobody teaches the rock to fly then I will. He deserves to be free.
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>>97624660
He's less interested in the students and more in his job and research work but there's definitely a world where he was told to collect someone or noticed them during his travels so that could work for Hibiki, yes. This would work particularly well with his encounter with the flute-demon, as Dogen himself studies, hunts, exorcises, binds and occasionally talks/makes deals with evil spirits. The rebuild actually has him with Cursed Spirit Manipulation so he has some bound.
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>>97617437
>Taijutsubros got the only nice teacher
Punchtards won so hard
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>>97624669
If he has the dosh, then Nana has a summon that's basically a giant golem that's mastered Weight Control
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>>97624613
If security is a big focus, then having one 3 person dorm room would make more sense than letting a child live by themself. It would also help clear up some complicated groupings like with Ayane and Nana both wanting to room with Momika, or Aisuke and Leigan wanting to room with Sumio. If we put those groups together, then most of the other kids can be decided however we want since only Hibiki and Nekomaru have any kind of real preference outside of those six.
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>>97624698
Myorin seems to be pretty chill, Fox is admittedly a bitch, Dogen seems to be a little crazy… huh? I thought we had 3 before Fox, am I retarded?
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>>97624787
>I thought we had 3 before Fox, am I retarded?
There was a semi NPC homeroom teacher mentioned for the introduction writefag that anon is working on. Anons liked the idea and there was a promise of fleshing them out a bit more than just faceless NPC but there was never a real build for it, and I don't think one is in the works either. Or you are thinking about the proposed but never made husband of Myorin that was suppoed to be her opposite and teach nijutsu, Dogen kinda took that spot.
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>>97624805
I think it’s just that I heard mentions of only needing one genjutsu teacher and I got the impression that there were 3, for an eventual total of 4. I think I was just being retarded.

I hope Fox and Dogen won’t be too cruel with some of the kids lol, I wonder how that’s gonna go
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>>97624805
Does she still have a ninjutsu husband in the background or is she a stale christmas cake?
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>>97624878
Seems she got pussy blocked and is now a lonely hag.
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>>97624874
>I wonder how that’s gonna go
Orochimaru and Hiruzen, except they just get jumped by half of them.
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>>97624874
Dogen was intended to be more apathetic/disinterested than cruel, with Fox about as class-failing cruel teacher fodder stories I'm considering pulling back on that with Dogen a little bit to give us the three styles of teaching.

Myorin as the most nurturing and kind of the three.
Dogen as the disinterested academic who's there because it's his job.
Fox as the nightmare teacher who's taking their insecurities out on the students.

We accidentally thought in perfect sync too. The Taijutsu Samurai Warrior, Ninjutsu Monk Wizard and Genjutsu Shinobi Assassin.
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>>97624874
Technically we could have more teachers, for eventual teams too, so it's not like we are put of spots for them. But we do have one per major discipline now, and the NPC homeroom teacher. I think the anon making the writefag said that he would use an actual build if someone made a proper homeroom teacher, but I may be remembering wrong.
>>97624878
I don't think that was answered but there are no mentions of one in the build itself.
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>>97624892
*clam jammed
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>>97620911
>>97624613
Does Dogen teach any non-ninja topics like Myorin does with history and geography? I know Fox assists with other classes, but is there any non-ninja stuff she takes the lead on?
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>>97620911
I just realized, she's trying to remake the sharingan without special eyes.
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>>97624915
Dogen is probably responsible for all things mystical. From Chakra and Jutsu theory itself to religion, philosophy, spiritualism, occultism and how to deal with things like curses, evil spirits and undead. In fact, he teaches the academic side of these things - particularly jutsu and chakra theory - more actively than techniques themselves and the less intelligent/academic students might chafe under the massive amount of paper study compared to Myrorin and Fox's more active task teaching methods.
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>>97624925
She does have special eyes though
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>>97624943
She does?
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>>97624943 (me)
This was going to lead into a joke but I forgot she was 14
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>>97624943
Where? Because they are not in the build. In fact for a "proud bloodline" she is lacking any KKGs.
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>>97624951
>She got another one
This is canon to me
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>>97624969
What is canon? That everyone forgets she's 14?
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>>97624978
Yeah
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we need a timeskip
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>>97624985
the mp just started
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>>97624985
powerfag calm your tits
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>>97617437
Minor build update and locking it in properly for the threadslaves. A little tired today so I'll post a rentry as well that'll be updated with all the lore as I work.

By popular (one guy) demand I took Restriction Curse and used some free points to give him some Cursed/Demon summons. He's also less evil now and more just apathetic to give Fox room to be the nightmare of the three.

>Name
Dogen the Mystic

>Village
Land of the Moon / Will of Frost

>Rank
A

>Perks
Genius
Knowledge
Soulbound Power

>Drawbacks
Bad Habit (Curse Overuse)
Restriction Curse (Yang Restriction, Jujutsu Specialty)
Sentimental Treasure (Book/Stone of Gelel)

>Chakra Nature
Earth
Yin

>Basic Jutsu
Chakra Flow 2
Book Smarts (Mysticism/Occultism/Spiritualism) 3
Espionage 2
Scroll Arts 2
Special Skill (Prayer) 3
Unarmed Combat 2
Utility Jutsu 2

>Advanced Jutsu
Barrier Arts 2
Communication Arts 2
Curse Arts 3
Medical Arts 2
Nullification Arts (Jujutsu) 2
Ritual Arts 2
Sealing Arts 2
Sensory Arts (Chakra) 2
Summoning Arts 2

>Hidden Jutsu
Activation Barrier 2 (*Custom, Defensive Activation Fist Branch)
Activation Fist 2

>Secret Special Jutsu
Cursed Spirit Manipulation

>Equipment
Book of Gelel
Stone of Gelel

>Rentry
https://rentry.org/MoonAcademyDogen
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>>97624999
I think it's the guy that didn't want to write 12 years old kids doing stuff. Or one of the guys that doesn't want to play D ranks.
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>>97625009
>By popular (one guy) demand I took Restriction Curse
Are monks in Narutoverse celibate? Can he get shipped with Myorin now?
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>>97625013
>I think it's the guy that didn't want to write 12 years old kids doing stuff.
Nah I just made Ayane a little older than the others with an excuse to feel more comfortable but it ended up working better than expected concept wise.
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>>97625013
>doesn't want to make a child soldier because he can't write one
>doesn't want to make an adult because he wants to leech inclusion from the mp's core premise
>doesn't want to make an older student because it might imply his build lacks talent
The academy run filters frauds and wankers yet again
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>>97625027
To be honest age is really the least of her concerns with this class. Some of her classmates don't even have a stable age.
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>>97625035
>doesn't want to make an older student because it might imply his build lacks talent
Why would it imply that? There are many other reasons to get admitted later, lack of talent is just a single option out of many.
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>>97625022
Ex-monk, it's not all there yet but I'm calling back to the Shimogakure Great Library from last run with him being a monk from there exiled for going too deep into the cursejuice instead of divine/sage arts. Probably had a heated debate with a certain ancient fox lady before storming out [special]and stealing a Book of Gelel.[/spoiler]
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>>97625049
My phone betrays me, how embarrassing. Good call for me to go to sleep though, absolutely losing it here.
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>>97624896
Sorry to tell you but right now I have no idea who those are. I’m like on episode 3

>>97624900
I guess that makes sense. One doesn’t care, one is evil, and the last is the nice teacher. They even each other out. I hope Myorin will be nice to Nekomaru’s ADHD ass lol

>>97624902
That’s true, we’re gonna need team leaders eventually
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>>97625074
>I hope Myorin will be nice to Nekomaru’s ADHD ass lol
Considering she's a 34-year-old lonely lady, and he's a cat, I think they'll get along just fine.
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>>97625074
Nekomaru might honestly adapt well to Fox, or as well as you can, if he's full ADHD, given she's probably about extreme active pushing (unsure but that's the vibe I got). Dogen is going to be The Great Filter for attentionlets/studylets.
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>>97625092
>Dogen is going to be The Great Filter for attentionlets/studylets.
Can a monk teach a rock to meditate?
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>>97625100
If anyone can it's Special Skill 3 (Prayer) man.
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>>97625092
Damn, I guess that makes sense. Basically his deal is Nekomaru finds it hard to stay put, he needs to run around and vent some energy. He’s good at fighting and exercise for that reason, but if he’s asked to sit down and keep focus he might struggle a bit. Although I was thinking Genjutsu might be what he struggles with most, since he has like… none of it

>>97625084
Nekomaru’s not exactly dumb, or an uninterested student, but between his difficulty focusing and not being very good at essays or retaining information he might suffer under Dogen, yeah. I can see that
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>>97625147
I think both of those ended up going to the first guy but I forgot the joke. Someone make her husband as a build and save Myorin from that grim feline fate!
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>>97622009
>based on her expert eye and seeing the kids walk-in, her ex-ante ranking is:
I don't get this list, what are they being judged on?
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>>97625168
Their taijutsu skills, duh.
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>>97625181
Then why are people with no tajutsu on top of the list?
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>>97617437
Why does Koda only have 3 basics?
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>>97625192
Are you reading the list properly?
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>>97625168
>>97625181
Pretty sure that’s also just her first impressions of them anyway, if her tests were actually part of a writefag the results might be different, right? At least I think so

>>97625192
I think it’s less how much taijutsu they already know and more their eventual aptitude for taijutsu and combat in general. One would think the kids that already fight well will also do well with taijutsu even if they’re not using it yet
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>>97625199
My build took them.
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>>97625201
Mona has taijutsu with no listed level, so it's assumed to be 1, and monkey body but I'm not sure how much that counts for pure taijutsu. Kosshi also has no listed level. Nekomaru has no taijutsu, tiger body, less than Mona because it's not awakened. Leigan has taijutsu 2, and enhnaced body, also not sure how that works for pure tiajutsu but it's a big boost to base stats. Iwao has taijutsu 3.
This order doesn't seem to make much sense if taijutsu is the only criteria.
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>>97624527
Sounds good to me if you want to. Unfortunately due to my circumstances I don't know if it would be right accepting your good will due to the transgressions I've comitted against you... a cur like me does not deserve your aid!
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>>97625247
>transgressions
What transgressions? You’ve never done anything to me, dawg. It would be good if I drew this guy for you, a net positive for the MP, and you’re just one guy so people won’t start asking me to draw faceclaims for them en masse or anything like that

>>97625238
Which is why I’m saying it has more to do with taijutsu aptitude, present or potential, and general combat prowess. Nekomaru is so high up, I assume, by virtue of his combat techniques and also sheer speed because of Swift, but Mona and Kosshi are actually versed in taijutsu and they’re also level-headed fighters without obvious emotional weaknesses. Take away Stripes-san from Nekomaru and he goes nuts, hell Myorin could be the first one to teach him that lesson
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>>97625247
ayup that's Tetsuya anon
sup fraudy, how was fraudcamp
get any pyrite stars for your macaroni art
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>>97625281
He didn't want to tell you but Kisui was secretly the one who struck down Nekomaru's mother during childbirth
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>>97625308
M-MASAKA!!!1!1!

>>97625288
>>97625247
OOOOH so THAT’S what you meant by transgressions. Meh, it’s not your fault that you lost interest in JITE and I remained hopeful that you’d come back to write, that last part’s on me. And JITE’s passed, anyway. No use crying over spilled milk, but if anything I’m glad you’re in this one. Let’s just try to have fun this time around (assuming you ARE Tetsuyanon)
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>>97625327
>>97625288
actually it's because anon blew 100 loads to Fifi and her fat fish thighs
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>>97625347
I think anon should stick to male characters. Whenever he makes a girl the thread seems to regress a couple evolutionary stages.
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>>97625347
Is there any character we've ever made that's reasonably received a hundred loads in their honour? Genuinely, morbidly curious. Last time it was Hamari and Sen for Naruto, right?
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>>97625238
As the one that made the ranking, there were a couple more elements I took under consideration.
First, look at how the test is structured. It's not just pure taijutsu, it's also the ability to study the opponent, in particular for those of less physical buffs.
It's also more of a close quarter combat ranking than strictly pure taijutsu. Physical kekkei genkai, gravity enhancements and other techniques that could help in such a situation would help move up the ranking, especially that while Myorin believes that all the kids should become proficient in taijutsu, for some of them it will only play a supportive role to their other skills.
Another factor is drawbacks. Since analysing the opponent, forming a tactical plan, and handling pressure were also part of the test, mental drawbacks dragged multiple characters lower than they otherwise would have been. Sometimes this didn't go from build itself, but from character description.
How complicated the technique is. This was more of a tie-breaker, in particular in case of Kosshi. These are kids who are just starting out, so some techniques are more difficult to use at this stage than others. Kosshi wouldn't have had that much time to get used to her awakened byakugan, while Mona's altered physique is something she grew up with.
Overall, the ranking is how they'd rank in close combat in this situation, but also more of a sorting through "with this kid we're polishing their talent because this is where they'll shine", through "the kid knows something, and will use it regularly, but this is not their main focus, let's keep it in mind when training them" to "this kid lacks the basics, we need to fix that, so they aren't defenceless up close and get a chance if it gets to that".
But also >>97625205 those are first impressions. They could change, although they probably aren't far off from how the initial test would go (the trope where an expert swordsman sees someone and instantly knows how the battle would go).
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>>97625356
I only jerk to my own builds, I wouldn't do anon's daughter like that, I respect him to much.
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>>97625372
>Jerks it to his own daughter
Anon...
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>>97625372
What a freak
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>>97625347
Nani?! Kowtow 17 gorillion times and I may preserve your dantian, cur!

>>97625354
Really? I don’t think anyone was gooning over Kaoru and she existed for like 4 months. And Twinkle was arguably one of the most popular MHBW builds. I avoided making a girl this time around because I didn’t want to repeat tropes during yet another school MP though, maybe wait 2 months before I make a new goonbait character or something

>>97625359
Yeah I was onto something, then. Nekomaru never learned proper taijutsu but I guess Swift, raw speed and martial arts bumped him up as I thought. Taijutsu is probably one of the first things I want to have him learn though, that’s just gonna be an even bigger boost to his overall physicals
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>>97625372
>anon doesn't respect himself enough to not jerk to HIS daughters
Kino?
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>>97625386
I wasn't convinced Kaoru was assigned female at birth tbf
Maybe in 30 years after a couple pregnancies she'd develop a curve
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>>97625356
I've personally spilled 100 for
>Mio
>Vera
>Marjukka
>Ai
currently working on Momika tributes
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>>97625401
/mcyoag/'s weakest gooner.
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>>97625398
Honestly I’m not mad about that. It was my intention to make her look extremely bland anyway. Maybe with like a 2 year JITE time skip she would’ve grown a little more but now you’re just making me sad about JITE so just save your lotion for Towerslop or something if the wrestler build I had in mind doesn’t work out

>>97625401
I mean, hard to argue against THE Mai Shiranui.
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you know you didn't have to share that, right?
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>>97625418
Anon I don’t think the Naruto MP has existed long enough for someone to drop 100 loads to Momika
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>>97625418
Be grateful that anon could take the time to post instead of jerking it. It means there's some humanity left.
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>>97625427
Believe it
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>>97625427
https://youtube.com/watch?v=VcJ7BfsFPm0
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>>97625428
He could be posting with one hand and split screening
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>Isekai Tournament has no goonable builds
Ugggggggggggh... who am I supposed to rapepost about...?
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>>97625430
GOD FUCKING DAMNIT HE’S ON THEME AND EVERYTHING

Okay we should probably go back to actual Naruto discussion ngl

>>97625435
WOOOOAAAAH
LIVIN’ ON A PRAAAAYER
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>>97625435
WOAAHHHHH
WE'RE HALFWAY THERE
WOAHHHHH
LIVIN ON A PRAYER
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>>97624874
>I hope Fox and Dogen won’t be too cruel with some of the kids
Average classroom experience with her.

>>97624915
>I know Fox assists with other classes, but is there any non-ninja stuff she takes the lead on?
I feel like she's in an awkward place of being behind physically and mentally compared to the other two teachers, so if you don't need a ninja perspective specifically, you would just pick one of them and they'd do it better.
I could see her covering more mundane ninja stuff though, like ninja village politics, mission structures, how to make a living off of mission paychecks, dealing with PTSD instead of deciding to destroy the world. Y'know, the boring stuff.

>>97624925
Yeah, absolutely. I was thinking about how to make a cool self-buff with just pure genjutsu, and you just end up with the sharingan.

Every other cool genjutsu concept is also the sharingan.
Subtle mind control? Shisui.
Instant-loss-2koma illusions? Itachi.
Crazy time dilation effects? Also Itachi.
Unbeatable super genjutsu that beats everything no matter what? Izanami.
The holy grail of genjutsu, making your illusions real? Izanagi.
Making a fucking parallel universe? Obito did that apparently, in filler.
Genjutsuing the entire planet? Hey there, Madara.

The entire field of genjutsu is spending years working out how to do shit Uchihas can do by accident.

>>97624962
That's intended. Her prized heritage is... an advanced technique.
Originally her family's influence was supposed to be 'well-balanced yin/yang affinities but smaller than average pools', but that's not even really worth mentioning desu.
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>>97625449
>>97625450
BON JOVImind...
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>>97625452
heh
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>>97625446
Higuruma is right there
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>>97625476
But is he raping or being raped...?
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>>97625481
Both
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>>97625481
Depends on if the other party is male or female.
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>>97625386
Martial arts fall under Taijutsu. The Advanced Taijutsu technique is just physical buffs which he in a way gets to through an alternative route by using his KKG. He lost to Kosshi due to his childishness (yes, he'd get the plushie taken away from him during the test, it'd be returned after, Myorin will feel bad about this later and it'll be another reason to get drunk) and her having more experience with martial arts. He beat Leigan due to the latter's mountain of drawbacks. Getting their buttons pushed is part of the test, and that kid has a lot of buttons to push. Both are firmly in the "close combat is their focus, just need their talents polished" camp, though.
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>>97625520
I mean, if she wants the kids to go all out, that’s how you make Nekomaru go all out. And also that’s how you make him hyper-focused on causing damage and he ends up making tactical mistakes. But hey, as long as Myorin apologises to him anyway, she might still be the teacher Nekomaru likes the most. Sorely lacking a mother figure will do that for you too Now I kinda wanna see this test in writing, NGL. Do you have any intention of doing so? If not, I could give it a go
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>>97625549
I feel like if I write that, I'd have to do so for all the builds, and that's a bit of a tall order for me right now. Especially with how we haven't had the builds truly present their skills yet. For now I'm just working on updating the build a bit to expand on the backstory, personality etc and writing a short intro.
So you can give it a go if you want, sure.
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>>97625579
Honestly if you put the effort in, that would be a great way to tackle a relationship chart, kinda like Chizi’s really long writefag that also doubled as a relationship chart. But I know that would probably be a huge undertaking, so I’ll just take the test as something for my Nekomaru introductory writefag. Although I’ll try to pepper in some fights from other people too, why not
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>>97625592
>Although I’ll try to pepper in some fights from other people too, why not
Makes me wonder who our fightfags are. I think Kisui might be our biggest one.
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>>97625601
By virtue of generally seeking out exercise Nekomaru is okay with fighting, but he doesn't really like long, drawn-out fights. He sees it more as a hunt. I don't know if that would qualify, he wouldn't turn down a fight with someone but it'd be more like a challenge and he's not going to enjoy fighting for fighting's sake, Nekomaru would want to end things fast
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>>97625359
I see, it's a pretty detailed grading system. It makes more sense after knowing the logic behind it.
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>>97624434
>Leigan, Sumio, Aisuke
mostly requested grouping
>Hibiki, Koda
halfway requested grouping
>Kisui, Nekomaru
Kisui would mald if his roommate showed him up, so it being someone who is also younger is really funny, and Nekomaru did the best in the tai test out of the boys
>Taiji, Iwao
unga bunga

>Ayane, Momika, Nana
mostly requested grouping
>Mona, Natsume
privileged arrogant child forced to room with filthy monkey that mogs her in tai
>Kosshi, Kurayami
somewhat leftovers because their more interesting pairs were already taken
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>>97625035
That all the build progress at the same rate implies that they collectively lack talent.
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>>97625677
14 Anbu chan brutally showed up the other builds anyway
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>>97625386
>And Twinkle was arguably one of the most popular MHBW builds
you don't believe this
also it's not saying much if you do
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>>97625452
>dealing with PTSD instead of deciding to destroy the world. Y'know, the boring stuff.
I feel like that will be needed for at least a couple builds, and the year hasn't even started.
I also feel like she's the worst teacher for it because chances are she's gonna be the cause of the PTSD in the first place. You need to be liked to connect with the students.
>The entire field of genjutsu is spending years working out how to do shit Uchihas can do by accident.
That makes me very worried for any kid that ends up with a sharingan, she doesn't look like someone that would take it well if confronted with it.
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>>97625685
NTA he's right
I only remember her and Cunnydrew
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>>97625670
If this is the idea, I'm definitely gonna have to come up with a character design for Kisui. I'll try to get started quick
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>>97625683
Not yet. There are builds below that age that might catch up. And on the other side of the spectrum, we don't know when the other teacher builds reached B rank and when/if she'll reach A.
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>>97625704
>and when/if she'll reach A.
She seems at a bottleneck until she manages to make the sharinotgun.
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>>97625645
Glad I coul help clear it up. I could try to explain some ranks which seem unclear, but possibly tomorrow.
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>>97625601
What does it take to be one?
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>>97625698
It's AN idea, but I'm not king of mcyoag unfortunately so people can give their own groupings ideas
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>>97625359
>Kosshi wouldn't have had that much time to get used to her awakened byakugan
Aren't you just born with it? It takes training to activate IIRC, but there's not any reason to assume that was a recent afaik if she was already being taught gentle fist.
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>>97625683
My build's making jonin by 13, actually.
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>>97625728
I think it was a pretty understandable explanaition. Even if the pushing buttons part of the test seems like a very dangerous part of it, I guess it's fine if Myorin is ready to intervene at a moment's notice.
I don't think we have any unstable kids anymore, so that makes it a little better.
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>>97625750
>Aren't you just born with it?
Nta but not always. The sharingan needs to be awakened somehow, so it's fair to assume other special eyes also can take time to manifest.
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>>97625761
She's the one sparring with them, so at most she'll just incapacitate the kid if it seems like they might injure themself or others. The third stage discussion is also a chance to try to clear up the situation.
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>>97625731
I'd say actively eager to pick fights not as training but as a way to show up your peers. That's the Bejita way at least. Goku going "WOOOW YOU'RE PRETTY STRONG I'M GETTING EXCITED LET'S TRAIN" counts too but on a lesser level. Despite that he's arguably a more degenerate fightfag than Bejita though.
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>>97625781
>She's the one sparring with them
I forgot about that part for a moment, I thought it was sparring between the students. This makes a lot more sense.
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>>97625774
I know the sharigan needs a trigger., but I'm pretty sure the byakugan explicitly doesn't need anything besides training to use, with aptitude to do so being the bottleneck rather than needing awaken it in the first place.
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>>97625794
I guess my character doesn't count then. getting stronger for a reason is different than training for training's sake.
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>>97625808
Gotta get those Otsutsuki jollies for the Tenseigan tho
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>>97625843
I think it depends moreso on if they'd want to seriously fight the other students or not honestly
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>>97625750
Yeah, I meant that activation here. The one where they animate it with veins popping. I'd assume they don't do that from birth, and I'm half convinced there was some subplot about this, but I may be misremembering. Maybe in Boruto with Naruto's daughter? I'd assume she activated it first a couple years ago based on upgraded Gentle Fist, and this seems like a technique with a high skill floor. It wasn't a major factor, but it did help break the tie there, together with her being reluctant to use shikotsumyaku.
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>>97625854
Isn't her dual bloodline specifically to build up towards that?
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>>97625876
Yeah. Might just need a quick trip to an Uchiha or Senju mass grave, just to be sure.
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>>97625854
Not in the cyoa tho, you just need the base byakugan.
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>>97625804
The others get to watch, but no sparring between them will come later during classes. The third stage discussions are done in private.
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>>97625916
*but no, sparring between them will come later during classes.
Lost a comma there
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>>97617437
Would Inherited Rival work in reverse? As in instead of being someone that has beef with you because of your friend it's you having beef with someone because they are bothering your friend?
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>>97625998
Sure but because it's reverse you have to give them your perk
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>>97625998
no, it's your prerogative so it doesn't count
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Who's got the best talk-no-jutsu?
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>>97626193
I nominate Nana.
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>>97626236
Thanks for the vote of confidence, but she's got the no-talk-jutsu.
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>>97626193
Charisma > Attractive > Cool > No drawbacks > No relevant drawbacks >>>> schizo/ragetard/etc drawbacks
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>>97626193
Like all things, the answer is Kisui.
>Strongest?
>Coolest?
>Most relevant?
>Most diplomatic?
>Gayest?
>Fattest?
Kisui.
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>>97626299
>>Cool > No drawbacks
anon these are the exact same
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>>97626309
You can take drawbacks and dump a perk on cool albeit
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>>97626299
There's room for fluctuation with self nerfs like making a shy character, but seems about right
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Did we clarify that the drawbackless cool only gives 1 point like its supposed to?
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>>97626334
It gives 111 points
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>>97626338
This but it's 110 invisible plot points. They determine how powerful your build actually is.
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>>97626300
>Gayest?
>Fattest?
Momikow erasure
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>>97626360
Mommykow belongs to my shota self insert thoughever
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>>97626376
Hibiki... you're not winning againt Wana
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>>97626376
She doesn't deserve to be in Sumio's harem
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>>97625742
I kinda like it, personally. Anyone else has ideas for roommate distribution?
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>>97626299
I tried adding a little more nuance, but still feels really off
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>>97625670
>>Kosshi, Kurayami
Might be leftovers, but it kinda works with them both being suspicious of others and putting on a more affable facade.
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>>97626457
>"cool" row
I agree Fox, Nana, Koda and Kisui are some of our most charismatic builds and have the best Talk-No-Jutsu
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>>97626457
>"Cool"
Fox and Kisui are our heroes albeit?
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>>97626457
DESU, I feel like distinct look on its own isn't that relevant. It's not an inherently negative thing, it's just something that makes you stand out. Maybe it could compound with other stuff but it's not good or bad on its own.
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I need a strength tier list
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>>97625074
>no idea who those are
In short, student shows up years later to merc his teacher and destroy everything he loves.
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>>97626457
You're right, this is weird
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>>97626522
why spoil it nigga
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>>97626512
My build is the weakest
>>97626511
Anon hates yt girls and can't imagine one having charisma
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>>97626534
My threshold for spoilers is having actual context. I personally don't care if someone says a thing happened, and the stuff surrounding their fight is a lot more important than the fight itself.
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>>97626511
It's a drawback for a reason. You look weird.
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>>97626549
Nta but you don't look weird, you look "distinctive" it's in the name. It's only worth 2 points, it doesn't make ugly or unsociable, it makes you stand out, which is bad for a ninjia but not necessarily for social life.
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>>97626511
I originally had a somewhat relevant tier between no relevant and pretty relevant, with distinct look and old scars in there. I decided to get rid of it because Ayane deserves better than to be lumped with Kosshi. Distinct goes down because either they look really fucking weird (Taiki was banished from his village because of how he looked) or are a huge bitch so they aren't charming nobody
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>>97626569
>Taiki was banished from his village because of how he looked
Him wanking it to being a full on mutant doesn't change what it actually. It gives having bushy eyebrows as an example.
>are a huge bitch
It doesn't say this at all.
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>>97626567
Anon the only time this is realistically going to come up is in this dumb tierlist. Distinct = abnormal = weird. Regular people will trust you less, even if you're autistic and think the world shouldn't work that way, it does.
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>>97626580
Sakura wants to hurl at the though of Lee being into her. Everyone calls him weird because of his bushy eyebrows. It's actually a dramatic disadvantage to his charisma in part 1.
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>>97626591
>trust you less
No, they might not take you seriously initially or make fun of you.
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>>97626608
Which affects ethos. You're less persuasive.
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>>97626600
Sakura thinks being an orphan makes you a subhuman beast albeit.
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>>97626620
She's right
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>>97626620
She wasn't wrong. Uchiggers and their curse of hatred and what not, and Naruto was fond of giving old men boners.
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>>97626620
Supports my point
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>>97626624
>>97626630
Real and valid. Which kids are getting bullied their dead parent skill issue?
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>>97626641
Just Nekomaru. Say can we get a hot Junko build? Just wondering.
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>>97626648
Junko will be a main antagonist in Isekino.
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>>97626648
Junko Enoshima? Anons aren't ready for despair maxing
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>>97626648
Is an orphan really an orphan if he still has one living parent?

>>97626648
>>97626651
>>97626652
That's because you don't know about Mukuro Ikusaba. The 16th ninja hidden inside this school. The one they call the Ultimate This Pear. Watch out for her.
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>>97612945
>What was the first thing your character does when they make it to the village?
First thing Natsume does is go to her new room. She immediately thinks it's too small and cramped, but has no choice but to make do. Once she's got her stuff in, she takes a look around the village, both by walking around as well as flying.

>You may request another build of the same sex to become your roommate, otherwise it will be picked at random.
A roommate?! You mean I have to share this tiny space? HMPH. Wait, there's a chance for one to myself?
I don't know the other builds too well yet, so random for Natsume for the time being.

>What does your character do in their downtime?
Training to keep her promise, eating sweets because they're yummy, exploring from the sky, figuring out the social network of the Moon Village.

>What vibe does your character give off as a first impression?
The term "kusogaki" comes to mind. She has a smug aura about her.

>What is your character’s attitude within a classroom setting?
At first, she doesn't like it. She preferred the private tutors. Over a couple of weeks, she becomes something of a teacher's pet, in no small part thanks to being able to remember pretty much everything.

Teacher Questions - Answer as if your character were asked these questions in class:

>What is chakra?
"The combination of one's physical and spiritual energy, though it can take on other forms. One such example would be senjutsu chakra, which involves the merging of standard chakra with nature energy." (<taken almost verbatim from a textbook.)

>Do you know of the 12 basic Hand Seals?
"Rat, Ox, Tiger, Hare, Dragon, Snake, Horse, Ram, Monkey, Bird, Dog, Boar. These form the foundation of most jutsu." (Another textbook answer.)

>What is a Nindō?
"The rules by which a ninja lives."

>What does it mean to be a Shinobi?
"Uhh..."

>>97619966
>super attack
"Take the attraction and overlay it with the repulsion, creating inescapable destruction."
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>>97626673
>Is an orphan really an orphan if he still has one living parent?
Technically yes. You are orphaned of that parent. Of course nobody uses that term but it's correct.
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>>97626703
Fair enough. Bully me instead for being a hack and going for a quick and easy dead parent drama
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>>97626641
There are technicalities so I might have put someone somewhere they don't belong. Sumio is in idk but it's not looking good for him with his home village

>>97626735
You're but the tip of the iceberg
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>>97626741
Forgot to say I included abandoned children, not just ones with dead parents in the orphan section
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>>97626741
Kisui's parents are alive anon.
U-Unless... w-what did you do to them?
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>>97626757
Anon was REALLY hungry. Please understand.
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>>97626757
His bio says he was sold to the village. I took it as abandoned but if not then he's good
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>>97626741
Half the class bullies the other half of the class over being orphans?
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>>97626741
You need to have parents in the first place to be an orphan. Leigan is a mutant freak grown in a vat. Unless you count the researchers that made him as his "parents" then he actually does have a couple still around, he didn't kill them all, some escaped.
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>>97626771
Mostly just Kosshi bullying everyone else. The single parent havers get bullied half as much. The absentee parent havers are absent bullies and only join in when their parents are in town to back them up.
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>>97626782
I legit almost had a never had parents tier
I decided it wasn't worth trying to figure out if Kurayami counted as an orphan or never having parents
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>>97626771
It's 6 to 10, if anything it should be the orphans that bully the parent havers for not being dedicated enough. If you still have family you are not 100% free to do whatever it takes.
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>>97626801
>I decided it wasn't worth trying to figure out if Kurayami counted as an orphan or never having parents
It depends on how much of the personality of the girl survived the merge. If there is still a bit of girl in there she counts as an orphan, otherwise she is full mutant freak because it means she just took her form and is still just the ooze.
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>>97626813
Actually, do we know if her parents are dead? As far as we know she only killed the girl and there is a couple of grieving parents out there.
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>>97626801
>>97626813
Personality-wise Kurayami is like 80% Keiko, mostly because she was the only party that had an actual identity at the time of the merge.
>>97626820
They're alive, they just don't consider Kurayami to be Keiko. It's part of why she isn't still calling herself that.
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>>97626840
>Personality-wise Kurayami is like 80% Keiko
I see, interesting. That explains some things.
>They're alive
I somehow expected that. I'm not sure if it's more or less fucked up than the alternative.
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>>97626741
The real reason Kosshi doesn't want be friends with em.
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>>97626936
She can smell the parentlessness on them
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Are you writefagging? Do you plan on writefagging? What do you want to write about? Is there anything you want to do or to have happen that isn't writefagging?
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>>97627045
I was thinking about writefagging, but I don't really know what I should be writing about in Naruto land since we're just starting out.
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>>97627045
I contemplating some kind of intro and will probably do something for when rooming is settled.
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>>97627045
>Are you writefagging?
Not at the moment.
>Do you plan on writefagging?
Yes.
>What do you want to write about?
Isekai Tournament...
>Is there anything you want to do or to have happen that isn't writefagging?
I'm just gonna wait to see what happens in Naruto. Gotta wait for the right time y'know.

Besides Resident Evil comes out in like 40 minutes lmfao, you think I'm gonna be posting here?
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>>97627045
I'm working on the backstory. I'm trying really hard to not be too edgy.
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>>97627089
Good luck Sumio
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>>97627086
Based. I'll also be going silent to for RE9.
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>>97627045
>Are you writefagging?
already did
>Do you plan on writefagging
yeah
>What do you want to write about?
fights. I wanna write fights
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>>97627121
based re enjoyers
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>>97627045
I'm waiting for class stuff to start so all the kids are introduced to each other.
After that, if I still like my idea, then a goofy super powered fishing contest between Nana, Nekomaru, and possibly Kisui
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>>97627125
Who are you going to write Nana/Sumio utterly dominating, king?
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>>97625199
Yeah I'm gonna fix that
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>>97627152
They'll be jobbing to my character of course
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>>97627045
I'm working on Hibiki's introduction post - riding on a ship with Dogen to Getsugakure, with the teacher being a bit interested in Hibiki's flute until he realizes it's kind of garbage and tells the kid not to use it as a crutch.

It's pretty much done, but I haven't really written since martial path so I'm spending a lot of time editing it so I cringe less at the dialogue. Will probably post it sometime tomorrow.

After rooming/the classroom introduction writefag comes out, I want to try writing about Hibiki exploring the market with a classmate, who either saves him wasting his money on scams or tries to scam him themselves. I also want to write some fights eventually, since I think I do better with those than most other stuff.
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>>97624155
Finally got to read this, and it was fun. I like the stinky rat boy. All things considered, Sumio seemed pretty unbothered by the strange interaction kek
>>97617437
>Simple Introductions (Nana, Kosshi, a hint of Momika)
Short and sweet, truthfully. I too am an awkward character first impression connoisseur, so I found this quite charming.
.>>97622009
Did you count yang affinity in this? I don't imagine it'd really affect Sumio's relative ranking either way, since half the cast has yang affinity as well and we have plenty of taijutsu heavy builds. But I did picture him having some natural aptitude for it if he ever actually put in the effort. I think that'd make him a frustrating student.

It probably helps with his academic score more, since all he has to do is answer questions instead of actually exerting himself. Having an intuitive grasp of taijutsu concepts is likely enough to coast and do well enough on those sections at just academy level of difficulty, and anything involving ninjutsu concepts is just free points. He might be ranked pretty high academically actually, though obviously behind Genius/Book Smarts builds. Maybe behind Prodigious builds too, since the wider talent spread may go further at this level of difficulty.
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>>97625452
KEK
>>97626420
He can't yet handle allat. It seems like just yesterday girls had cooties, and now he has to pretend to be unphased by full-on teenage girls. It's exhausting.
>>97626741
Both parents are dead.
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>>97627045
I plan to this weekend. Probably just a walk to school or something in class to better iron out Sumio's characterization, while also taking a stab at not flanderizing some of the other builds.
>>97627095
Not me. My idea is more tragic than edgy.
>>97627143
Sumio might be a good pick as well. It's a pretty relaxing activity.
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>>97627278
>>97627282
>>97627290
>>97627296
Welcome home anon
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>>97627306
They felt a lot more like spam than if 4chan hadn't made me break up my original post, but oh well.
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>>97627318
There is a limit to both characters and linked posts now. I don't know what the limit is but I remember when it was introduced because we had to change all the OP posts.
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who's the weakest besides mamiko?
I'm thinking hibiki or koda
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>>97627368
Fox will get crushed by each of them
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>>97627368
Fox. Bout to learn what real prodigies look like.
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>>97627368
Lmfao retarded taijutsufag
Hibiki and Koda are cultured ninjutsu enjoyers that could take you down from a mile away
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>>97627410
No, that would be Sumio and Kisui.
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>>97627421
>SHITmio
No deep reserves, barely any taijutsu skill, jutsus are just water shit
He's low tier and can get speedblitezed by taijutsufags and outranged by the others
>Hisui
He's like 80% a taijutsufag
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>>97627430
Underlings of the Underworld, execute this man.
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>>97627368
Yeah those two are probably the weakest. Ironically though, they're the best at doing actual ninja shit - best stealth, best information gathering, can control animals, deliver messages, and reliably assassinate people from long distances without being discovered.
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>>97627290
I'll see if I can get Sumio in too. I picked the others because they're from fishing villages and/or fish as a hobby. Sumio joining because he assumes a fishing contest would be relaxing and quiet would be funny.
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>>97627278
Yang was a factor, but a minor one. He's below Koda because while the latter doesn't have Yang, he has upgraded unarmed combat, basic advanced taijutsu, and isn't lazy. I imagine Sumio wouldn't do great on physical exercise part due to no buffs beyond that Yang, but mainly due to his laziness and not taking this seriously. This would earn him a latter spot for the second round, but he'd likely waste the opportunity to observe and make a plan, again due to his laziness, and then get punished for it.
And Myorin doesn't follow Academy curriculum. There is no level you can coast at. She's going to push you as far as she think you can go, remembering that different people will need to commit a different amount of their time and energy to studying taijutsu (she's not the type of teacher that claims her subject is the most important). While the least talented kids will graduate her course at a basic academy level, the super taijutsu prodigies will be pushed to train far above that. As A rank, she could likely even train Jonin in the matters of taijutsu, and if she had some Kakakashi tier kid in her class, he'd receive Jonin level instructions.
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I kinda wanna make a power tier list now
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Rolled 11 (1d16)

>>97627602
Put my build in this place
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Rolled 1 (1d1)

>>97627602
Put my build in this place.
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JUST FORM THE FUCKING TEAMS ALREADY
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>>97627808
Teams are far off yet. This is an academy not a genin run.
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>>97627045
I plan to write for both. For Isekai Tournament, I’m just kinda confused as to what to expect, so I’m trying to figure out the tone and what I should be doing before I get to writing.

For Naruto, uuuuuh I only watched a couple of episodes but I was planning to use Myorin’s test as a Nekomaru intro. I think I’ll get to that first
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>>97627885
I was planning on using Myorin for some physical training in the class writefag, did you want me to just use the homeroom sensei instead since its their first day and let you write for Myorin?
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>>97628386
I mean, is there any reason why we can’t both write for Myorin? I wanted to write something with the combat tests specifically, since I had already kinda discussed that with her anon a little bit. I don’t think you’re stepping on my toes or anything, unless you don’t want me to write for Myorin for some reason
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>>97628417
Nah its cool
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>>97627296
He looks so done.
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>>97617437
Sunsets on the Rising Moon (Suzaku, Dogen, Myorin, Momika, Mona, Sumio, Ayane, Kosshi, Kisui, Hibiki, Nana, Leigan, Taiki, Koda, Kurayami, Aisuke, Nekomaru and Iwao)
https://rentry.org/esseo5pc

Accompanying music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bK9p_p3yURY

This took a lot longer than I expected so I didn't cover a couple topics I wanted to touch on, like the welcoming ceremony, downtime and the dormitory assignments. Altho I saw a couple of anons in the threads trying to put people together in dorms so if you'd like to sort that out by yourselves, more power to you. Feel free to write your character's POV or touch on some of the topics above. Also I saw a bunch of people join in kind of late so apologies if you didn’t get a mention. I'll post the next prompt soon, hope you all enjoy!
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>>97629056
We AI generating writefags now?
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>>97629148
Only some of the rough draft was Ai, mostly just to streamline my ideas. I got burned out from writing big time the last time around and my main goal for this game is to get these out rather wait a billion years. I do this shit for free so if you're looking for some sort of apology you can kiss my ass
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I intended for Iwao to start out small (like he's shorter than the classmate average because of his hunch) and grow huge later with rank-ups. Also, speak in a more childlike and less threatening manner. But I guess I underspecified it, so that's on me. I'll say he tried to look more mature and temporarily increased his size for the first day with petrification, and the nerves made him sound rougher than usually. He'll remember to say "please" and "thank you" the next time.
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>>97629056
Strong start, easy to read and a pretty solid insight into Suzaku this early (we didn't get his build yet, right?). My only real issue is Dogen, though it might be my fault for not communicating it until now, is less of a flustered person and more scowling/cold, the scene between him and Iwao works, but he's more likely to death glare than crash out. It's a lot of scenes condensed into a minimal space but I did like the brief descriptions of the town, I personally over-detail my writefags so it's nice to see one with a solid, easy to read, simple flow to get the points across.
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>>97629148
Welcome to the future, adapt or get run over cause it ain't going anywhere.
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>>97629325
Ah I see, with his Enchanted Tool being a tree I figured he'd have to be huge to lug it around, and altho he means well his low voice and size would intimidate people anyways. But yeah this explanation works

>>97629326
I might tweak his responses to be more scowling and Iwao to be a bit more childlike but I thought comedically his shouting was appropriate for a giant rock golem intruding in his study
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>>97629403
Yeah fair it's no issue for Comedy Mode. I'll write a Ninjutsu 101 relatively soon and finish up Dogen's Rentry so I can better show his vibes on action. Regardless, good stuff anon.
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>>97629056
No, Suzaku-sensei! She's only 15! Don't look!
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>>97629532
Thanks! And to answer your question earlier, there's no build for Suzaku yet since it wasn't important for the story but I'll probably whip one up pretty soon
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Who even is Suzaku?
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>>97629403
Oh and by the way, when I mentioned crafting a seal here >>97619694, I meant hanko https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seals_in_the_Sinosphere but I guess Iwao's father doing some sculptures works too.
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>>97629775
The sacred vermillion bird guardian of summer.
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>>97629056
>Suzaku
Wow, an incredible coincidence
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>>97629056
A very serviceable introduction, if not somewhat cheesy at the end. I assume we're good to write whatever class stuff we want now. Are you doing a Sen anon and going to lead group stuff like this in the future, or should we start plotting the school arc until graduation?
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>>97629905
Even assuming anon is willing, we probably shouldn't repeat the mistakes of the past by putting it all on one anon.
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UOOOOOOOHHH I'M WRITING
I'll try to keep this one short
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>>97630017
me too anon
me too
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>>97630121
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>>97630121
Hogs, it's that time again. Roll on out to the next thread.
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>>97629056
Cool intro, interesting combination of of the answers given and surprisingly detailed homeroom teacher. He kinda completes the roster, adding the sensei that focuses on the problem children.
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>>97627430
You aren't prepared for water-based artillery
>>97627469
Looking forward to it. It kinda makes sense anyways, since he's from the coast. I just hadn't thought of it before you mentioned your writefag.
>>97627563
>His secret plan of coasting by in the boring taijutsu class is foiled by having an attentive and responsive teacher
Brutal
>>97629056
Mega based. Will read in several hours after work.

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