Thread #97630121
/mcyoag/ Multiplayer Choose Your Own Adventure General Anonymous 02/27/26(Fri)19:33:45 No.97630121 [Reply]▶
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>>97630121
>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6
>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.
Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r
>New Stuff:
>New Writefag:
>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)
https://rentry.org/62g2miaz
>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Former 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnaire
https://rentry.org/xudhyrnr
>Former 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n
>Classes Compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
old former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g
>Relationship charts
https://rentry.org/MHA_Charts
>Dorms Prompt
Dorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730
>Tiermaker:
https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969
>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077
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>>97630131
>SHIKETSU STUDENTS
>Hero Course
>1-D
>Koroma Kajō HN The Time-Loop Hero: Reset
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573
>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Trouble
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085
>Yagami Kirako HN Southpaw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059
>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Callous
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904
>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548
>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720
>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kid
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701
>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831
>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetrap
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250
>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protector
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590
>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scour
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050
>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771
>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Hero
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243
>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miracle
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093
>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyr
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834
>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410
>Fukuchi Arai HN Musō-ka
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805
>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925
>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwa
https://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w
>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshire
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176
>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooter
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244
>Tsuyoi Agnelli
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559
>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089
>1-E
>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729
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>>97630138
>2-D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337
>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769
>Hailey Chang HN Recoil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903
>Faith Kang HN Drone
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774
>Minerva Kim HN Spark
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766
>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094
>Edith Lee HN Arena
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782
>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995
>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)
https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu
>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909
>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305
>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778
>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624
>Runt HN Dust Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560
>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012
>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611
>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986
>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130
>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765
>Ian Takenaka HN Rush
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991
>Takara Tame HN Android
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336
>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Question
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085
>Rob Williams HN Velvet Worm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
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>>97630147
>2-E
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
>Noah Abrams HN Archangel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041
>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690
>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104
>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077
>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251
>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/916 85973
>Nayuki Kyoko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965
>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240
>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200
>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661
>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735
>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363
>Suki Yamada HN Sukeban
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713
>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433
>Other NPCs
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
>3-D
>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068
>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401
>Masayoshi Keito HN Cricket
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742
>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcana
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432
>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdown
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617
>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knut
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659
>General Course
>2-A
>Satoru Tani
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217
>Support Course
>3-B
>Aura Curie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
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>>97630161
>SHIKETSU STAFF
>Pro Hero teachers
>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414
>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034
>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564
>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484
>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250
>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509
>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353
>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972
>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486
>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644
>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019
>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485
>Support Staff
>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597
>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416
>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288
>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135
>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666
>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431
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>>97630168
>PRO HEROES
>TOP #1
Endeavour
>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780
>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384
>TOP #4
Wash
>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494
>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsy
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632
>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063
>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkoro
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847
>TOP #9
Rosethorn
>TOP #10
Yamamoto
>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908
>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386
>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honoken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039
>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848
>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563
>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593
>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelength
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513
>Renji Kurokawa HN Mash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848
>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatch
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219
>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccine
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536
>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skyward
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835
>SUPPORTERS
>Rika Eichi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766
>Endless Horizons Ltd.
https://rentry.org/iptpr
>Holden Deckard
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931
>Brightly
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966
>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clear
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294
>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686
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>>97630179
>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS
>Horrific 5
>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340
>On Giết Năng VN Tether
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198
>Erika Murakami VN Nox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183
>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575
>Edmund Muller VN Mercury
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191
>Night Parade
>Cammy Link VN Karma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967
>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909
>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481
>Okane King VN Midas
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250
> ??? VN Maw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272
> ??? VN Bogey
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889
> Tomi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913
>Luccione
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415
>Recino R. Percutio
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385
>Wild Hunt
>Sandatsu Owari
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222
>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569
>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089
>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462
>Ookami Shizuka
https://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka
>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348
>VIGILANTES
>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005
>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069
>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353
>Rebecca Weber
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750
>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707
>Sasha Azanami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91080404
>Rui
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187
>Kaori Kaoru
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075
>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivore
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658
>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndrome
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356
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>>97630185
>CULTISTS
>The Red Finger
>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion
https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3
>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988
>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weasel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573
>REVOLUTIONARIES
>Legion
>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954
>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS
>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714
>Karuga Ito
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478
>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt
>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242
>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735
>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394
>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931
>Blank
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726
>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987
>Mammogar
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410
>Tomie
https://rentry.org/ddom6m82
>Suslik
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413
>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242
>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400
>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodoku
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241
>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless God
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436
>Mr. Therapist
https://rentry.org/638neg63
>Rescue Ray
https://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp
>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Dagger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719
>Doctor Ivon Kintobor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140
>Saki Fuma VN Replicant
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061
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>>97630191
>WRITEFAGS
>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo
>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)
https://rentry.org/gqgst77f
>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)
https://rentry.org/chdorkto
>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokin’ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5
>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique):
https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9
>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):
https://rentry.org/7evesekv
>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).
https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi
>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)
https://rentry.org/qqhxk757
>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)
https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i
>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)
https://rentry.org/rusiv6te
>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h
>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze
>Visa Enquiry
https://rentry.org/yvwhhh98
>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt
>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)
https://rentry.org/hvct5iab
>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)
https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde
>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)
https://rentry.org/iifohf9f
>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)
https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb
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>>97630195
>WRITEFAGS (Final)
>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):
https://rentry.org/a8um8793
>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)
https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu
>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)
https://rentry.org/o4mageo6
>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)
https://rentry.org/62g2miaz
For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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Rules/info/CYOA
https://rentry.org/uam5mkhv
>Egawa Taro/Rip Vandernail
https://rentry.org/mthziyxk
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97060437
>Arthur Wode
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97061682
>Necrolord Sephidrach
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062008
>Kimiko Yuki/Yaofan
https://rentry.co/hsinf97u
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062514
>Fathoms(Fifi)
https://rentry.co/rdkoz3rh
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063149
>Liam Cooke/Lovxl(Not a Support 3)
https://rentry.org/r3git2rc
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063756
>Ueto Mio/strawberrycake0923
https://rentry.org/5iiayh42
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97089806
>Nagisa Ito/Good Things Come
https://rentry.co/btk9ko6w
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97098741
>Writefags
>Mountain Wendigo Chain, Part 1! (Taro, Yulit, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Arthur, Yaofan)
https://rentry.org/7abfinx5
>Setup (Liam, Yaofan, References to others)
https://rentry.co/2u2ucyys
>Yaofan Intro? (Yaofan/Kimiko,Moth Thot)
https://rentry.co/wnwek6x9
>Hunting Lessons (Taro, Peredolia, Yaofan)
https://rentry.org/yv2vaygr
>Wendigo Chain Part 2 (Liam, Sephidrac, Taro, Yaofan.)
https://rentry.co/f4d6fwu8
>The Magic Of Learning (Liam, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Mio, Arthur cameo)
https://rentry.org/wmxx9tik
>Wendigo Chain, Part 3 (Egawa Taro, Arthur Wode, Yaofan, Liam Cooke, Necrolord Sephidrac, Fathoms, Ueto Mio, Nagisa Ito)
https://rentry.org/gdzox35y
>Every Branch on the way Down
https://rentry.co/gm9soi3x
>Relationships Charts
>Taro
https://rentry.org/v4ygpeib
>Liam
https://rentry.co/ruszvrz4
>Mio (End of the profile)
https://rentry.org/5iiayh42
>Nagisa
https://rentry.co/spxq5cnb
>Yaofan
https://rentry.co/vwn7fy9p
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>>97630202
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https://rentry.org/martialartsheromcyoag
>Nao Sato, 'Smoke', stinky smoker hag (cute)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97491382
>Larry Newgate, 'Hold Bailey', I get the pun
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97491448
>Kasumi, 'Deadend', I wish she splattered MY head...
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97495030
>Lionel Henry "Leo" Buckingham the IIIrd, 'Lionheart', the man with a name I missed
https://rentry.org/ip55skmf
>King Laiota Drazil, HOLY SHIT DRACULA
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97495867
>Timm Danger, 'Belfry', where's da gabagool?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97497021
>Kiera Hailey, 'Comet', I ain't saying she's a gold digger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97497506
>Octocampus, experiment with daddy issues
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97500215
>Afterburner Model 03, 'Afty', leaden oil drinker
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97506787
>Vivian Irving and V, a girl and her cog
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97507133
>Glenn Atwater, 'Sword of Light', where he at? water
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97508128
>Kaya Stowst, 'Feldspar', I'm ROCKHARD!!!
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97509701
>Henry Powers, 'Portal Man', get a real job unc
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513091
>Meg the Shark, 'Jaws', calamari enjoyer
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513166
>Leif Ether, 'Phantom', In The End (Linkin Park)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513845
>Oinu Nuoi, experiment with daddy issues if he cute
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97515443
>Alois Emmerich Stenger, the Last Man Standing, "Gentlemen? Ve... are Nazis!"
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97518503
>Adam, pumping iron
https://rentry.org/uuqehema
>Gadzhimurad "бyйвoл" Magomedov
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97596181
>Writefags
lmfao why is this still here
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>>97630217
>Relationship Charts
Leo chart 1
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97499420
Leo quotes
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97516193
Feldspar quotes
https://rentry.org/e2b9k36k
Meg quotes
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97521339
Kasumi quote chart
https://rentry.org/zb3ossbk
>tiermaker
https://tiermaker.com/create/ultimate-question-hero-association-run-17 629646
>Artfags
Leo's really tall in this one.
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97512917
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513134
MORTAL KOMBAT!!! (+ Belfry and Laiota quotes)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97515477
GODfry is so FUARKING cool
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97542127
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The Hidden Moon Village calls
>CYOA
https://imgchest.com/p/m9yxdobq64q
>RULES
https://rentry.org/6unsb3tn
>Momika, Momi with the Mikas
https://rentry.org/hsviqv5p
>Mona Kyo, put those grippers away
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97592567
>Sumio Fuchigami, damn blud have you tried adderall
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97598199
>Ayane Hasegawa, HAHA CRIPPLE
https://rentry.org/NarutoAcademyAyane
>Myorin, they see me Myorin, they hatin'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97594947
>Kosshi, I see London, I see France
https://rentry.org/7wutmc5x
>Kisui Shōmi, THE (INVISIBLE) JUDGE OF THE UNDERWORLD
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97596444
>Otanashi Hibiki, do you think he buys a lot of penut butter
https://rentry.org/5964ikmz
>Minoru Kanzaki
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97598345
>Nana Kozeni
https://rentry.org/mavvkh67
>Leigan
https://rentry.org/yx4zt937
>Taiki Nakano
https://rentry.org/TaikiNakano
>Koda Mine
https://rentry.org/w5d2ut3n
>Kurayami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97611857
>Aisuke Uzumaki
https://rentry.org/g5fxrgce
>Nekomaru Kagetora
https://rentry.co/nekomaru1
>Iwao Iwaishi
https://rentry.org/NarutoIwaoIwaishi
>FoxAKA Hitomi Yūnaga
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97620911
>Natsume Saimoto
https://rentry.org/NatsumeSaimoto
>Dogen the Mystic
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97625009
>Writefags
>Simple Introductions (Nana, Kosshi, a hint of Momika)
https://rentry.org/u63edrps
>How to Score a Free Meal (Koda, Sumio)
https://pastebin.com/MQFbgTFk
>Sunsets on the Rising Moon (Suzaku, Dogen, Myorin, Momika, Mona, Sumio, Ayane, Kosshi, Kisui, Hibiki, Nana, Leigan, Taiki, Koda, Kurayami, Aisuke, Nekomaru and Iwao)
https://rentry.org/esseo5pc
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Isekai Tournament
https://imgchest.com/p/xny86ajm24b
>Cobalt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97581231
>Sagittarius Riku
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97595535
https://rentry.co/gmn94tb3
>Saku Kirikami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97595796
>Eugene Canseliet (under revision)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97587070
>Lucas Walker
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97587439
>Harry Higuruma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97587677
>Six
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97607788
>Llewellyn Odyalutai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97609487
>Areas and Connections (outdated; update soon)
https://rentry.org/v9ioyuz8
>Journal
https://rentry.org/vahx9iv5
Rules so far:
>Power tier is Heavyweight
>Mode is Bounty/Negotiate to encourage PvE events but PvP (other tournament player) is still possible as killing someone grants you all of their points
>Builds are 'Team X' by default, with no limit on power type or members
>All team members can get a wish
>The 'Team Handicap' exists; as the amount of team members you have is higher, your growth is slowed
>You can sever from your team at any moment, gaining the maximum growth multiplier
>You can't become a team member again after severing yourself from your team
>Setting is a multiversal arena with many sectors with their own enemies based on different fictional works, each with unique bounties (Hueco Mundo sector with Hollows, Namek sector with Frieza Force soldiers)
>Hunt bounties for points, and then you can use the points to purchase goodies, such as furthering your knowledge in a power system
>Teammembers spawn away from eac
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>>97630250
It may be better to have no nickname than to have one of those. It was also repeated many times that whoever is taking care of posting this doesn't want that responsibility, so be the change you want to see if you want nicknames.
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>>97630233
Just realized that Sensory Arts needs a specialization, so need to figure out what fits Ayane for hers.
Sight, Hearing and Chakra are the ones we most often see but do we think Touch would work to improve things like coordination, proprioception and orientation, especially with her puppet components? Might be something a little different than usual.
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>>97630233
>Voices in the Dark (Hibiki, Dogen)
https://rentry.org/ngbdw54i
Finished just in time for a new thread, nice. This takes place before the classroom writefag, maybe a day or two prior.
Not sure what I'll work on next - have we worked out the roommate situation? If so I'll probably start on that sometime soon. For now I'm gonna play Resident Evil 9, hopefully it's not ass.
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>>97630608
True but I'm more thinking something that fits her. Either Touch because she needs to feel her puppet components or Electroception because of her Lightning affinity seem to be the two that fit. Sight and Chakra always work but that's why I'm wondering for alternatives.
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>>97630607
>have we worked out the roommate situation?
So far our only proposed groups is this:
Leigan, Sumio, Aisuke
Hibiki, Koda
Kisui, Nekomaru
Taiji, Iwao
Ayane, Momika, Nana
Mona, Natsume
Kosshi, Kurayami
Anyone got any problems with this setup for the dorms? Afraid you're getting bunked with a future fraud? Don't be shy, let us know if you want any change
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>>97630648
True enough, at least one path for Ayane is going full Lightning Ninjutsu buffed by her Tools (electrified wire, lightning senbon, chidori-style cultist spike etc.) so electroception can be her pre-training before she learns how to create Lightning proper. Makes sense, thanks anon.
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>>97630233
To my nijjas big and small:
We've officially kicked off the school year! Now comes the question of what comes next. Are there any academy student level events you'd like to see happen? A class competition? A cultural festival in the Moon village? A school shooter? Teacher vs Teacher vs Teacher divide using the students as their pawns? Borochimaru showing up? Or do you want to kick things into high gear and get the student life over with ASAP?
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>>97631190
Teacher VS Teacher VS Teacher TRIPLE THREAT AT WRESTLEMANIA!!!!!
I actually wonder which teacher would win if they all got to draft the students into teams and let them all loose in the forest to see which team wins. It doesn’t even have to be a team fight, it can be something like capture the flag. Might make for a fun story
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>>97631415
I think we should wait for the teachers’ anons to determine who they’d like to draft, but also that kind of decision might take longer to form. It might take a couple of writefags. AND I SHOULD BE FINISHING UP MINE I’m like halfway through
Speaking of, can I get some more in-depth info about Myorin? As in, her personality. I’m trying to get all the characters to be in character (also I hope Nana doesn’t come off as too clingy. Would she feel jealous if Momika started talking to someone else for a while or is she just fine with not having Momika’s attention all the time?)
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>>97631190
I think the academy stage can have some potential for interesting stuff, so rushing it would be a bit of a waste. It also gives the kids some time to get to know eachother and make the teams later have some meaning to them instead of being rolled. I think the festival is a neat idea, as is the teacher competition. General learning stuff and SoL is also cool to see, this is a setup phase for relationships as far as I can see.I have some ideas for stuff with Leigan, and some of that is technically close to Borochimaru showing up I guess. The researchers would have some form of mad science like him. But maybe it's better if someone makes actual villain builds instead of resorting to NPCs, and my idea is a bit far away, it kinda needs a setup. For now it's a training/SoL piece, after the backstory.
>>97631415
If the kids get to choose I think almost nobody will choose team nin and gen, most would want to be in team tai just because the teacher treats them like people instead of test subjects/burdens or stress balls. Or everyone goes with Suzaku instead.
If the teachers get to choose they would probably pick someone good at what they teach, and maybe if Suzaku is part of it he would get the problem children? I think team tai would have a lot more people if we go with that.
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How much do you guys think a Jonin earns in a year for the Cold Hard Cash item? I wanted to know what I should be using as Nana's starting money.
>>97631482
>Would she feel jealous if Momika started talking to someone else for a while or is she just fine with not having Momika’s attention all the time?
Nana probably wouldn't be too jealous as long as she can reasonably believe that Momika is acting in the long con. Their whole student teacher connection was built on seeing Momika be charming and friendly with people in a way that got her money/favors/connections. It would take something different for Nana to get the idea of "does Sensei actually like this person?" and get the spark of jealousy she's never felt before. But Nana is very clingy in general, sticking by Momika's side whenever she can and being a little lackey to her.
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>>97631541
That is what I meant, some builds can change drastically with just one rank up. I guess it is pretty far away all things considered.
If we find a different progression method, unlikely as it is, then rank kinda become meaningless since we can just progress naturally instead.
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>>97631465
Should we consider things like Stealth, Subterfuge and Espionage as Genjutsu for this? My instincts tell me yes since Unarmed, Weapons etc. technically isn't Taijutsu (it's not Jutsu until there's chakra involved). Not that it matters too much anyway.
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>>97631482
>Speaking of, can I get some more in-depth info about Myorin?
Stuff came up, so I wasn't able to complete the build update with more details, so I'll just type out some points here.
She's tomboyish due to her strong Yang chakra, and a bit envious at times of more feminine women, but she's protest embarrassed if you tried to put her in a dress, and she won't give up martial training.
She spent most of her career as a mercenary. When she was younger, she aspired to rise up out of the ronin status into becoming a proper samurai, but it was not to be. She travelled a lot and is a well of knowledge about plenty of topics, but history and geography are her favourites because at their fire they describe different peoples and cultures.
A streak of bad luck and even worse decisions set her on a route of witnessing and committing some war crimes, and seeing friends die and betray each other. She was even forced to kill some of them herself. She drinks to forget about those times and her loneliness. She feels like she wasted her life, having nothing to show for it except her combat skills. The chance to teach is her chance to finally do something she could be proud of. In fact there are deeds she could be proud of in the past. Many innocent people owe their lives to her, but the pretender syndrome and other wrongdoings she's done cover that.
However, she will not show that inner turmoil to the kids, and will even try to hide it from other teachers. At the academy, she puts on the mask of a caring teacher, who's usually a bit aloof, but serious during combat instructions. TBF, the mask isn't even the right word. She is those things, but she uses the focus on them to hide that depressed side. She really enjoys working with children, and it helps soothe her maternal instincts.
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>>97631611
In the sense that they would be taught together? Stealth and Subterfuge are basic enough that everyone will learn it regardless of their focus, but I could see espionage as being more of a genjutsu class.
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>>97631508
>If the teachers get to choose they would probably pick someone good at what they teach
Go the opposite route. Let the builds string in your discipline get scooped up by other teachers. As the expert, you know what their weaknesses are and how to counter them. Teach your team the trick to do that.
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>>97631651
>it helps soothe her maternal instincts.
Luckily for you, the position of Nekomaru's mom is STILL OPEN!!!!
Jokes aside I kinda had a feeling this would be the case, but I wanted to portray her accurately so thanks for the details. How would she react if a student approached her outside of class, like Naruto with the teacher guy from the very start where they get ramen together?
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>>97631611
>since Unarmed, Weapons etc. technically isn't Taijutsu (it's not Jutsu until there's chakra involved
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taijutsu
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>>97631611
>it's not Jutsu until there's chakra involved
That's not really true. A jutsu is itself a technique and taijustu is specifically fundamentally hand-to-hand combat techniques. They can be enhanced with chakra but that isn't what defines then as taijustu.
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>>97631700
Fair enough. My misunderstanding.
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>>97631681
Depends on the kid and the situation. With some more confident ones, like Momika, she might tease them a bit first and play a bit tsun about how they're encroaching on he precious drinking time, but after that she'd spend the time with any kid that she thinks needs her. She doesn't really have much to do outside her job currently, so the kids would have to really start abusing her time for her to start refusing to spend extra time with them.
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>>97631554
>Jonin earns in a year
I don't know Naruto super well, but I'd imagine they're paid well. Have no clue what their salary would be like, but I wouldn't be surprised if it was like 5 million ryo for the year
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>And The Underclassmen Are Flashing Hot And Cool (Momika, Nana, Ayane, Hibiki, Kosshi)
https://rentry.org/2dpfkorh
took me almost 4 days for what was supposed to be a simple intro, I am unbelievably washed
going to sleep now, will answer prompts and fix anything written out of character when I wake up tomorrow
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>>97632301
Very nice, anon. It was a really good introduction for Momika You displayed her mix of charm, cunning, and care clearly. Dialogue flowed smoothly, and nobody felt out of character. Helping Nana recover from her fumble was cute, helping solidify their dynamic as the sensei and older sister
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>>97629056
Very solid, considering all the builds included who haven't really had any characterization yet. I'm liking Suzaku. He feels a bit like the straight man among the teachers, if that makes sense. I'm looking forward to your next piece with him
>>97630400
Sumio does not have the budget for this...
>>97630607
The writefags are really starting to roll in now. Hibiki was as I expected from how you described him, and I think those moments of him accidently revealing his insane background will be fun to see more of. I can't speak for Dogen anon (assuming that isn't also you), but I feel like you got his detached personality right. It's what I imagined at least. Based on his interaction with Hibiki, I wonder if he'll end up playing favorites with the students he finds most interesting.
>>97630591
I don't have a specific, useful suggestion, but I'm in the camp of trying to make something Touch-based. Especially if it leans into her puppet theme. That sounds cool.
>>97630706
I'm not really sure for Sumio. I don't think I've spent enough time with the characters to know what would make for the most interesting dynamics. There's potential for conflict with Aisuke, so that might work well. Just from my impression of Leigan, I feel like he and Sumio would interact basically like work colleagues. Like neither of them would go out of their way to become friends, but they wouldn't have any reason to take issue with one another either. I could be way off though.
I feel like a lot of these pairings are a bit "safe," in a way. For example, I'd probably make Nana room with someone other than Momika, so that she's forced to put herself out there on her own. Similarly, it seems more interesting to me if Ayane rooms with someone younger, so she's forced to face her feelings of inadequacy.
But it's possible the room situation isn't an interesting enough vehicle for exploring those concepts to warrant spending any more time on. Maybe we should just decide and move on with it kek
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>>97631190
>A class competition
>A cultural festival
These are solid. I think things like these make for easy ways to get to know the characters and establish soft dynamics before they end up getting split into teams and whatnot. Though I do think some sort of larger conflict might be ok to slowly start building towards. Maybe going on in the background among the adults, with Borochimaru types putting feelers out for now to scout out kids to potentially manipulate post graduation. Maybe even some Not!Anbu recruitment thrown in there.
Personally, I am looking to put Sumio in situations where he'll suffer serious consequences if he continues being a lazy bum.
>>97631651
>My Alcoholic Tomboy Teacher Can't be This Cute
>>97632301
I like these alternate POV style followup writefags. It's fun to anticipate how scenes from the previous one will unfold in between the new stuff. There were a few more characters here than I expected from the name, so that was a fun surprise. Nice job.
Unrelated, but reading through these made me realize Hoshigaki the shark dude has just been missing from the build list.
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>>97632301
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"So, how about it? We can go over any material you'd like... although it'll cost you extra if it's not school-related," she whispered
Momika, no! You can't prostitute yourself to other students! They're just kids!
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>>97633191
>to other students
It's a Hibiki exclusive offer. Since he's blind, he doesn't make her feel like a piece of meat, which means she's capable of being physically and emotionally vulnerable with him. He got that Daredevil rizz.
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>Daredevil rizz.
Well, I kinda get it...
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Question, what the fuck is a Kan’oke? I know Kisui talks to sea urchins and starfish, but I need to know if he’s gonna have any of those things out for my writefag. I’m trying to feature random characters for Nekomaru to talk to here and there, Momika and Nana already showed up
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>>97632808
>I feel like a lot of these pairings are a bit "safe," in a way.
I mean, the main reason I put the three you mentioned together was because they requested each other for dorm mates. If I was to ignore the requests altogether, then I'd have done something like putting Nana and Kurayami together for the gimmicks of forcing Nana out of her comfort zone and the humor of putting Kurayami with someone who is definitely greedy enough to want to cash in her bounty yet is unaware of its existence. But since the dorm mates requests was a thing, it felt kind of weird to just flat out ignore it.
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>>97633862
It seems like we're mostly doing the end of the Academy rather than all the way through. Most of the builds are around 12 and are capable of some advanced stuff already. We also had the Moon Academy implicitly collecting prodigies, geniuses and other eccentrics that others wouldn't teach so the precise power level is a little funky and more towards Genin than Students from what I can tell.
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>>97633914
I'm still in the basic planning stages of the writefag, but it's currently made up of Kisui, Sumio, Nana, and Nekomaru. They're almost all from fishing villages or have fishing as a hobby, with Sumio being the only exception because his anon threw in the idea and I thought he fit well enough. I might put in one more if I can find a good enough fit and I can picture their unique fishing style
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>>97634049
No need to rush yourself for my sake. I do have a couple of questions. I'm kind of assuming that Nekomaru and Kisue will end up as roommates, so how does he refer to Kisue as? One of his chuuni titles or by his real name or a Nekomaru original nickname? Also, how do you think Nekomaru would react if he thought someone in the competition was cheating?
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>>97634005
It was already brought up and was already told to fuck off. Or it was ignored.
>>97634050
I'm not sure what you mean by method but the description of spirit fire is the same as before. So is most other stuff. Some prices changed but that's it. There are also new cheat skills that are supposed to be on par with Realis Phrase because they cost the same but of the 3 only one is vaguely comparable and the other 2 are not worth 20 points.
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>>97634063
I didn’t think of him as someone to give people weird nicknames, but you gave me an idea. For the people he’s gotten to know a little, Nekomaru would add -nya to their name, even if he’s not constantly doing cat noises or anything. So Kisui would become Kisu-nya, Momika would be Mika-nya, Hibiki would be Hibi-nya, etc.
Nekomaru’s a claw fishing kinda guy, he just gets on the shallow end of the river and grabs fish with his hands and his reflexes. (Unless you’re having all of them fish with actual fishing rods, which would be okay)
And if someone were cheating, I think Nekomaru would call that out, but he’d be too engrossed in his own fishing to do anything about it. Someone more confrontational would probably have to deal with it
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>>97634119
To add to this, Nekomaru wouldn’t really understand Kisui’s chuuni-ness. He’d be mildly amused at best, but generally he’d be like “sure buddy, I have no idea what you just said”. Kinda funny to think that Kisui would be doing all this chuuni stuff and Nekomaru would just stare blankly in confusion. But I also think Nekomaru would see a kindred spirit, they’re both homesick people in need of company and guidance so they can help each other out where it counts
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>>97632301
Very nice, there's not much to say beyond what's already been said so I'll just be selfish and say I liked what you did with Ayane - specifically with how little she actually shows about herself without being actively deceptive and showing interest in others without really talking about herself. I've been struggling to tweak her build and personality to fit exactly as seen in this thread but this surprisingly helps.
>>97630607
Also very strong introduction that gives a really solid idea of Hibiki's backstory. I liked both him and the first real introduction we've had to Dogen.Is the Wolf actually The Singer? Or are you keeping that up your sleeve?
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>>97632808
>I don't have a specific, useful suggestion, but I'm in the camp of trying to make something Touch-based. Especially if it leans into her puppet theme. That sounds cool.
Some kind of Puppet Proxy might actually work, despite my insistence on Electroreception yesterday. It lets her use her puppet components better and might evolve into something interesting like having puppet eye-spies and the like. Importantly it feels like something she'd have already trained in her journey to overcome being a cripple, everything else I was looking at felt too soon.
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>>97634186
That was actually my first thought, but I thought it’d be too weird. It’s better for Nekomaru to point his need for maternal affection at someone like Myorin than *the* Mommyka herself
>>97634171
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>>97630233
Working on Dogen's introduction via a class at the moment, a lot of student introductions were covered in Momika/Myorin's writeups so I'll try and focus on the students that haven't had as much exposure yet, but it'll mostly be about introducing Dogen's lessons and how he teaches.
It may end up being a Part 2/3 business but he'll be doing a few basic tests; seeing how well the students can mould chakra, disperse it, change its nature, sense it, use paper to test their affinities, etc. He'll also be asking each of the students what their best ninjutsu is. Other than that there's going to be a lot of academic exams since he's speedrunning through the 6 years of the lower Academy years to make sure everyone is caught up. Expect a paper exam or three every month from him of increasing difficulty.
There'll eventually be 1 on 1 personalized tests with him pushing their best jutsu to their breaking point as just about his only interesting curriculum piece. So my questions for the thread are simple;
>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu? Best is subjective to the person.
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it? If so, do they use anything else as a cover?
>How do they show it to Dogen (he's letting them decide), any details like if it's tiring, if they're clever or blunt with it, how they feel when he inevitably looks unimpressed, etc.
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>>97634088
I'm going to be real with you, anon. Realis Phrase is overrated; most anons don't have the obsession needed to make it work. You're better of putting those 20 points into stat growth modifiers for the stats you're actually planning to grind
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>>97634276
Oh and I forgot to mention. Most importantly, if you want to keep your build's trump card hidden for some narrative reveal at somepoint, it's not necessary for us to spoil it by writing the scene. This is mostly for anons who don't want to keep it to their chest and to figure out where they're starting in writing.
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>>97634276
For Nekomaru it’s Swift Release and I guess Elemental Flicker too, I think he’d show it off by just dashing all over the classroom, shifting directions in mid-air, just general acrobatics displays and also concealing those movements with Wind chakra. I think that’s how it should work, right?
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>>97634324
Sure, something simple like that works. How much would Nekomaru be pushing himself? Burning through all of his energy in a few seconds to achieve maximum speed or keeping it sort of balanced to keep his energy up for a prolonged performance? Dogen is intentionally being extremely unhelpful with what the students should do because he's trying to figure out where their demeanour fits their ability to work on later.
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Nah, he would just using it with pretty regular ease. Like someone showing off a cool trick, nothing too tough. Nekomaru only locks in enough to push his jutsu to the limit when he’s angry, I.E. someone else’s hurt or the enemy took away Stripes-san. If Dogen heard about what taking away Stripes-san did for Myorin in the taijutsu test, and he’s feeling especially cruel, that’d bring out Nekomaru’s full speed, although he’d probably become aggressive too.
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>>97634276
Nana just got a heavy inclusion, but I'll answer anyway because I like prompts.
>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu? Best is subjective to the person.
If asked, Nana would choose Earth Weapon. In her opinion, her summons don't feel enough like her own power for her to consider summoning them as her own ninjutsu.
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it? If so, do they use anything else as a cover?
She wouldn't do it unless she was prompted do. Not because she was hiding it intentionally, wouldn't think she would need to. Just standing there until either Dogen or a classmate tells her, and she'd think "oh, that makes sense" and then do it.
>How do they show it to Dogen (he's letting them decide), any details like if it's tiring, if they're clever or blunt with it, how they feel when he inevitably looks unimpressed, etc.
Nana has only ever used the jutsu on her own katanas, which she didn't bring with her to school (I imagine that Myorin had them using practice swords for their taijutsu test, and that made her think that she could keep her katanas in her dorm room). But she isn't the kind of girl to ask the teacher for help, so she'd attempt to form swords from earth to poor results because she'd be basically winging it. Crumbly, blunt things that look closer to clubs than swords. She'd be struggling to keep them solid and would be incredibly embarrassed at struggling so much at what she just called her "best ninjutsu". Dogen's unimpressed look would only make it worse for her, and the jutsu would fall apart, then she would to make an escape back to her or Momika's seat without being told she's dismissed.
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Personally, I wouldn't mind if we decided that Nana wouldn't get to room with Momika, I was answering in character for the prompt. She'd be really upset about it, though.
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>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu? Best is subjective to the person.
Natsume's best jutsu is her Collapsing Star, the full power version of her black hole attack.
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it? If so, do they use anything else as a cover?
It's not that she's unwilling to show it off, it's that releasing a black hole jn the middle of a classroom is a really bad idea. She's also probably saving it fir a special occasion.
Instead, she would use Gravity Release, levitating everything and everyone in the room, and Teleportation, which while isn't actual teleportation, rapidly transports her target.
>How do they show it to Dogen (he's letting them decide), any details like if it's tiring, if they're clever or blunt with it, how they feel when he inevitably looks unimpressed, etc.
As above, levitating everything in the room, possibly pinning against the ceiling if she didn't get the praise the believes she deserves. She might show off the forcefield as well, to demonstrate how untouchable she is.
Thanks to her eyes, she has excellent control over her chakra (able to see chakra + slow motion + able to see at the microscopic level) so even grandiose displays are not that exhausting.
When she doesn't get adulations for how amazing she is, she'd pout and sulking at her desk.
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>>97630706
Sounds good for Hibiki. I'm fine with anyone for him really, but Koda feels like someone he'd mesh well with. It'd be funny to have Hibiki's Owl just freaking Koda and Eeki the fuck out.
>>97631190
A culture festival or some similar celebration at the end of the 'academy arc' would be fun. And a Three Houses style teacher war using the students would be cool (even though the Taijutsu chads sweep). Other than that, I think a classroom writefag where the students try to figure out what their Nindo is would be a really good opportunity for characterization.
>>97632301
Great work! Really good characterization for all the builds involved, and I especially like the relationship between Nana and Momika.
>>97634183They're the same, though Hibiki doesn't know and she won't reveal it anytime soon. Might have more about her later on, depending on how I feel like building Hibiki when we progress.
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>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu?
Hibiki would say its Hypersonic Mind Waves. It's one of his Clan's Hidden Techniques, it's really versatile, and he's got a lot of experience and talent with it.
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it? If so, do they use anything else as a cover?
He'd show it when asked - the only thing he's reluctant to use is Supersonic Scream, and that's only because it could hurt someone.
>How do they show it to Dogen (he's letting them decide), any details like if it's tiring, if they're clever or blunt with it, how they feel when he inevitably looks unimpressed, etc.
Likely calling over specific animals from outside the class and ordering them to do tricks, find and bring him specific things, or follow/spy on someone. Possibly uses Sound Style to show the more versatile applications like attacks through the animals or using them as bait/distractions.
He's pretty proud of it and would look a bit disappointed when Dogen isn't impressed.
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>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu? Best is subjective to the person.
For Koda right now, it'd be summoning since it's the cornerstone of his style. It's used for offense, diversions, defense, recon, genjutsu, poisoning , company and more.
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it? If so, do they use anything else as a cover?
Sure. He's here to learn and no one back home acknowledge it so it'd mean a lot to Koda to get pointers on it from a human and not a rat.
>How do they show it to Dogen (he's letting them decide), any details like if it's tiring, if they're clever or blunt with it, how they feel when he inevitably looks unimpressed, etc.
Depends how he asks. If it's entirely up to Koda, he'll just list the uses he has in mind one by one until he's stopped or he's gone through them all. Though if he gets the feeling the person he's talking to isn't really interested he'd probably stop.
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>>97630607
Nice work, anons!
>>97631190
Cultural festival sounds nice. I would like to see some dormitory shenanigans at the least before we move on from the academy, so I'm not in a rush.
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>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu?
Elemental Illusion, not only because it's her highest level technique, but it also because it benefits from another technique, her special skill.
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it? If so, do they use anything else as a cover?
It depends on how early she gets called and who shows up before her.
>called early or hasn't seen many impressive jutsu
Goes all out with Elemental Illusion to impress some students or motivate others to reveal their cards and show her up.
>called late or has already seen a lot of impressive jutsu
Regular Illusory Arts, no need to compete with the kekkers or reveal her hand.
>if the questioning is 1 on 1 and no one is watching
Elemental Illusion
>How do they show it to Dogen (he's letting them decide)
If she's using Elemental Illusion, then dancing. Makes sure enough windows are open so she can fan out the smell of burning by the end. Since the classroom floor/desks/chairs are wooden, she keeps the flames close to herself during the performance, not leaving a single scorch mark on her surroundings, but ending up dripping with sweat by the end of things. Anyone caught in it will feel like they're suffering from an intense fever, unable to move their aching bodies or breathe properly. At the same time, they'll feel desperately cold and won't registering the flames as deadly hazards, but sources of warmth. The trick is that she can tone their sensitivity up and down from warm hug to burning alive.
If she's using regular Illusory Arts, then a sight-based genjutsu will do. Since Dogen is the main target, she will try to show any of the teaching materials he brought bursting into flames without warning it's an illusion beforehand.
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I want these two to go one right after the other. Very good and poor showings both met with equal dismissiveness
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Too many links gets counted as spam I think and they cut down the number a lot from what it used to be
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Short piece for Harry's intro. Been struggling to try and get back into writing but pieces that aren't mostly self contained and rambling haven't ever been my strong suit. At the very least it is proof that I'm not dead.
>Harry's Intro:
https://rentry.org/er5d7kbm
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Mostly based off vibes, partially based off investments, lumped a lot of the stealth stuff with Genjutsu. Isn't based off what they can do but rather their focus.
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Damn, messed that crop up hard, didn't even notice. Sorting by elements next because sometimes it's fun to see these spreads.
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>>97633925
If everyone is some kind of super prodigy or genius, then if anons are progress hungry by the end of the academy arc maybe we could push to C rank after graduation? It depends on how long we're all in the academy, but if it's 3 years of targeted teaching then I don't think it'd be that strange to be a step ahead of normal genin
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Getting awfully breezy in the classroom.
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>>97635546
I was thinking it'd be better to have a timeskip at some point
that way anons who want to change characters have a way to do so, we can remove those who no longer have a purpose and perhaps introduce new threats or the like
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>>97635546
I'm unsure what the original anon was thinking but we put our ages at basically the end of the academy, I doubt we'll be in it for very long, or if we are it'll be a different model than the Leaf and we go to Ninja College instead of the Child Soldier Nexus.
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>>97635636
Well you see anon you've fallen for my genjutsu where I was pretending to be retarded the entire time, aha. I am absolutely not half asleep and messing simple things up, that's impossible.Aisuke is technically Dark but this is about the five primary elements.
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Membranipora_membranacea
Kan'oke can't actually speak or do anything but act effectively like Kidaichu for Aburame, not yet anyway. It's part of Kisui's lonliness; he has "so many" friends but they aren't actually effective friends lmao.
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I like that idea a lot.
>>97634276
>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu? Best is subjective to the person.
"Coffin Style: Burning Retribution Jutsu!"
It's just Substitution combined with burning Kelp-Paper and goop to avoid an attack and leave his enemies in sticky burning kelp.
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it? If so, do they use anything else as a cover?
Of COURSE he's going to show it off.
>How do they show it to Dogen (he's letting them decide), any details like if it's tiring, if they're clever or blunt with it, how they feel when he inevitably looks unimpressed, etc.
Dogen's choice if he wants to be the volunteer...
Anyway he malds a little when Dogen is unimpressed.
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>>97635256
Nice intro, anon! Three days is an interesting amount of training time and works for me as a good "buffer"; I think having Cobalt & Jewel meeting up with Harry would be fun after I post my intro. What do you see him doing next? Or I can just post a draft and see how you feel about it.
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Colony. It's like a net layered over and over itself when just sitting in the water filled gourd to not dry up, but stretches out into the normal net shape to cover kelp when in use.
Kisui essentially taught it to use Fire Style, so it can light itself on fire without issue... probably. In an actual drawn out fight Kan'oke drying itself out may be an issue.
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He's mainly traveling further into the center of the zone, looking to link up with Saku as I imagined her attacks to be widespread and the most noticeable anomaly for innate powers being used, though if he encountered with Cobalt and Jewel he'd quickly figure out they're another player from their appearance.
I don't particular think he'll be busy with anything specifically as he's mostly taking it as it comes, with only just now a clear path opening up for him to investigate, so feel free to do what you will, though he'll probably be involved in dispatching other sorcerers or cursed spirits on his way over just due to the nature of the area and actively accepting fights for personal growth.
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>>97635698
Speaking of our students, can someone explain to me how the noncanon physiologys work?
We only have two examples on the cyoa so its hard for me to picture what the monkey or tiger ones be like.
And how a upgraded one (Monkey) compares to a baseline one (Tiger)
I forget if we have others.
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>>97633742
Yeah, I didn't mean to criticize. I think it's fine as is, I was just giving my two cents.
>>97634193
Yeah, that sounds cool and easy to expand upon as she gets stronger.
>it feels like something she'd have already trained in her journey to overcome being a cripple, everything else I was looking at felt too soon.
Yeah, I've been trying to keep that in mind as well with Sumio. I made a future version of the build after my first D rank draft, and then worked backwards from that to something that makes sense to me narratively for him at an academy level. I didn't want to give him too much at the jump. He's gonna have to work for certain techniques and jutsus. That said, it's entirely possible that the future build will look different in the end based on how the narrative of the MP as a whole progresses. Hell, he could even die kek.
>>97634276
I'll answer this when I'm no longer phonefagging.
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>>97635859
I'll hit you with the same question as the others. How would Sumio react if he thought someone else was cheating in the fishing contest?
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Yeah, sure thing.
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>>97635875
YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH
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>>97635875
It kinda depends on the context of the contest, but I think he'd feel the stakes are too low to warrant cheating himself. His water style would probably make it an easy W, but that would defeat the point of fishing to him. It's meant to be an excuse to relax.
Depending on how and why the person cheated, he'd either think they're missing the point, or that they must need the win a lot more than he does. Either way, he'd just shrug it off.
I can imagine a scenario where he doesn't take the competition seriously while everyone else does, and he's considered the odd/incompetent one for not simply making a current to force the fish towards him. Something like that would be funny.
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>>97635824
I'll also say that given those are the benefits of a baseline physiology I won't be mad if Mona-anon does crazier stuff.
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>>97635704
Oh okay, and all of that is in the gourd? Yeah makes sense, I was gonna include Kisui in my writefag so I can keep going now. Thanks
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lol forgot to answer this
>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu? Best is subjective to the person.
Her Chimera Technique, I'm treating her slime ekg as part of it, so that's the part she'll show off
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it? If so, do they use anything else as a cover?
She doesn't see a point in hiding it since she should still be assuming that the village already knows, why else would they bother setting a trap like this
>How do they show it to Dogen (he's letting them decide), any details like if it's tiring, if they're clever or blunt with it,
Are there dummies to demonstrate with? She'll do this regardless, but she'll look less crazy/thoughtless if she's not randomly shooting ooze on the floor. She'll start with the basics: sticky glue slime, spraying acidic slime, and sliding around on the floor after spraying slippery slime on it.
>how they feel when he inevitably looks unimpressed, etc.
She'll get baited into going for the crowd pleaser, teleporting to catch a random bird and a random rat(or something else, as long as it's not something people would find cute), and fusing them together right in front of him.
>if it's tiring
These are all basic uses of her kit(she's not that practiced with the advanced stuff, the cons of her build being 80% kekkai genkai stuff and lorewise being on the move all the time), so they shouldn't tire her out that much.
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mmh, that's not impressing anyone
might need to mix in a bat and a frog
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I don’t know if you had other ideas for Nekomaru, but I was picturing some DnB to show his speed
https://youtu.be/Lyi2tT3tiPU?si=0p7h1JhaIcg24WTq
https://youtu.be/LSnLqbdgqQg?si=rU-Ge-ayBFt_e0Iu This one probably only works when he’s mad (honestly I prefer listening to the full Heat Haze Shadow mix, 1st and 2nd)
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>>97636705
I was planning on using mostly japanese sounding themes since it's naruto. Maybe this one for Nekomaru? https://youtu.be/ZE6EZLotITc
>>97636716
You could use Mai's theme from sf6 but that'd be too easy. I'd go with https://youtu.be/Y7JGeqRaHgo
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>>97636533
I don't have one for Leigan. I'm not sure what would even fit but it's probably edgy.I kinda have one for if/when things for wrong.
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Feel free to try, it's going to be better than mine probably.
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>>97636743
I think getting overly fixated on things that sound Japanese might be an issue for selecting these things, but I can recommend this guy and his bajillion high quality Japanese-style VGM covers
https://youtu.be/OfSsyMcIfI4?si=9tmNPACLZpMmwcc1 (this kinda works for Nekomaru too, maybe in a more dramatic kind of situation? All of this is just fuel for writefags anyway)
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>>97636771
Reading through his backstory again, I'm thinking this could work https://youtu.be/UBuQwb-L6ss
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>>97636801
It's pretty fitting, I like the vibe.It's also kinda funny since I did consider giving him the sharingan at some point, I wanted to give him some custom corrupted eye, but maybe keeping his eye strange but with no powers is better.
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>Just from my impression of Leigan, I feel like he and Sumio would interact basically like work colleagues.
You're not that off, but Leigan is trying to understand the whole teamwork thing, and despite himself he will get attached at some point. Also simply seeing Sumio being lazy and still alive will be a very strange experience for him that will make him relax more in the long run.Aisuke would be a strange and complex ordeal, but it wouldn't be aggression, at least it wouldn't be malice, let's put it that way.
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Kisui-anon! I bring you a SKETCH! Do you like it? Do you not like it? I can change things from here if you want
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Oh okay, I thought green would work because it would make his hair look like algae. Also I try to avoid full black or white in my art, I'm gonna render this with lineart and shit and everything so I'll make his hair a darker shade of green to compensate
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>>97636852
How about this for Nana? https://youtu.be/sBUWLMbuTgo I admit I kinda struggle with her
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>>97634276
May as well anser this for Leigan since he's technically supposed to be a hybrid.
>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu? Best is subjective to the person.
I'm not sure what counts as ninjutsu precisely but probably Rupture Slash. He's working on other applications with what the curriculum is, like eventually Element Blade/Spear but for now that's the only combat applicable one. If Dogen tells him that doesn't count then he will fall back to what he calls cantrips, which is Utility Jutsus, a lot of shiny lights and some arcs of lighting with almost no punch. Unless the chains count, that's his most stand out feature in general.
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it?
Dogen is a professor, and very similar to the researchers he's used to, so he sees no reason to hide what he can do. He can't get better if he doesn't know what he's doing wrong.
>How do they show it to Dogen
Either a lot of slashes with his chains in quick succession for Rupture Slash, or combining small lights to create a flashbang with utility. He wouldn't be hurt by a mild reaction, or even no reaction at all, the best he could hope for was silent scribbling before so even a single comment would take him by surprise
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It's more intense than I expected to be honest. I get what you mean with struggling with her, I'm also having trouble and she's my build. Thanks for the theme though! I'm going to keep looking for something that satisfies me (even though I should be writing).
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Can I ask how cheesy or chuuni-esque Kisui is? I have this idea where he asks Nekomaru for his name and he says "state your name to the court!", you know, like a judge. But this might be a midge too far so I dunno
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Okay good, I was going really cheesy already. Here's an excerpt“GAH!!!” The fishy classmate recoiled, before recomposing himself. His only visible amber eye gleamed with an overwhelming, yet unserious darkness. “How DARE you sneak up to the Judge of the Underworld, cur?!”Nekomaru tilted his head in confusion. “The what of the what?”“The Judge of the Underworld!” The boy repeated himself. “‘Tis I, Kisui Shomi! Sneaking up on the Judge himself carries a sentence of one quintillion years sealed under the waves, I shall have you know!”
I'm gonna keep going like this if it's good
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>>97637324
Hmm.
Drop the caps and it's good. He wouldn't enunciate words like that or use as many exclamation marks out of combat. The problem is he thinks he's actually being cool and slick and brooding, you see. So full chuuni but he's taking it serious. He'd say more "hehs" too and wouldn't use tis. He's so casual... he's cool.
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>>97634276
I'll probably hold off on anything too big and crazy for now with Sumio. Plus, I think it's more fitting if his choice is a kinda lazy technique, even if it does showcase his skill well.
>What does your build consider their best ninjutsu? Best is subjective to the person.
Water Style: Water Ball Jutsu. It's the first elemental jutsu he taught himself, and therefore the one he has practiced the most.
>Is your build willing to show it off to Dogen or do they want to hide it? If so, do they use anything else as a cover?
It's no secret. When keeping it to a small size, he can perform the jutsu almost mindlessly while bored, which is fairly often. He has mastered it to the point that he can cast it without hand signs and freely change its size and shape, alter its density, increase and decrease its spin, etc.
>How do they show it to Dogen (he's letting them decide), any details like if it's tiring, if they're clever or blunt with it, how they feel when he inevitably looks unimpressed, etc.
Sumio essentially has a checklist in his head of what he expects a ninjutsu instructor to be looking for, and is mostly correct in these assumptions. He'll basically be putting on a show, displaying his mastery of the technique. He finds the jutsu fun and easy to perform, so he won't be paying too much mind to Dogen's unimpressed expression, assuming that eventually one of the things he tries will change it. Once he gets to the end having checked every box, he'll be confused as to why Dogen still isn't impressed by the kid putting in zero effort to challenge himself.
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Does it? I remeber hand signs beaing a thing only in the earlier parts of the anime. Naruto definitely needed the whole "Cat's claw" movement to make the Rasengan but none of the characters good at it did. The Chidori is just Sasuke dragging his hand in random surfaces, which I'm pretty sure is for dramatic effect rather than necessity. Hell Naruto just starts spawning clones without moving at all later in the series.
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>It happens all the time in the series.
Not really no? Even later on, naruto needs hand signs for his signature jutsu, the shadow clone. In the final fight with sasuke, there's a section where sasuke is just not letting him weave the sign thus preventing him from casting the jutsu.
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>his signature jutsu, the shadow clone
> In the final fight with sasuke
Anon, what series are you talking about? Because Naruto's signiature stops being the clones real fast and the final fight with Sasuke has a lot more going on that clones too.
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Anon I hope you realise your argument isn't a rebuttal at all. It's literally naruto's most used jutsu in the series and it's what he relies on and uses to win the final fight.
>the final fight with Sasuke has a lot more going on that clones too.
How does that adress my point at all? What even is that argument?
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In that same fight they both cast jutsu without hand signs. For most of Shippuden Sasuke is using a single hand sign or less for like all his jutsu. This isn't some unknown concept, either. It's just how the setting works, even if they are inconsistent with it in anime fight choreography.
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NTA, but him using seals for that doesn't really address that it's shown that skilled users can condense techniques to one or none. All it shows is that Naruto specifically required seals to use that technique.
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>In that same fight they both cast jutsu without hand signs
No they don't except for rasengan and eye jutsus. If naruto can do it without the signs why would the author focus on it here?
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Nta, in that very fight, several times, I just rewatched it. Sasuke spits fireball without any signs several times, Naruto creates several Rasengans just by will, and clones appear out of thin air even with no hand signs. Also the Chidori.
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Sasuke spits fireball with the signs he made with naruto's hands or when he is dodging the chakra hands. Rasengan has always been a jutsu that does not require signs.
> and clones appear out of thin air even with no hand signs
No they don't. He always weaves the signs.
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Chidori does seem to be the only exception in the series of a jutsu not needing signs as it's mastered. But it's pretty much the only example tied to a single character with the most busted eyes in the series so I have issues with extrapolating an entire lore rule out of it.
Anyway I seem to be in the minority so if no one else has an issue with it I'll relent.
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>No they don't except for rasengan and eye jutsus
Sasuke uses a fire style jutsu without even his usual single hand sign.
And in that panel, he's saying the technique is a weakness because it symbolizes how lonely he is. It's not because he has to use a hand sign to perform it. And being able to use a jutsu without hand signs doesn't mean it's never useful to do so. It still helps you focus your chakra.
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As far as canon goes, Samurai are a good example. They use jutsu, but never a single handsign. Not sure if this is because they're using an older system that predates modern ninjutsu, or just because their jutsu are a lot less complex. Either way the general rule of thumb is that handsigns are a way to simplify complex jutsus. Very simple jutsu like the basics are easy to learn how to do without handsigns. Most taijutsu leaning jutsu are simpler and easier to do without handsigns. Otherwise you need a mix of raw genius, specialization, and years of experience to go without handsigns, and the biggest most complex jutsu might be impossible to use without handsigns.
Realistically the kids who aren't even genin yet probably shouldn't be doing it since it is an advanced thing, but just doing it isn't setting breaking.
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The fireball jutsu works the same way. It actually has a lot of hand signs, but Sasuke usually just uses a single one in Shippuden. He and Itachi use them all in their fight because they're locking in/it looks cool.
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I dunno what to tell you man. I literally watched the fight and saw sasuke weave the signs. It's even in the manga. Same with naruto and the entire sequence that focuses on him not being able to use clones because sasuke prevents him. Even went back to check the manga and sasuke still needs signs for the fireball.
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>>97637672
Real answer is obviously that it was just a plothole made by lazy writing. If I had to try and defend it with in-world logic I would say that maybe his dead arms fucked up the circulation of chakra. I.E. even if he can move his chakra without handsigns, his chakra still needs to pass through his arms for 99% of jutsu and he has no control over his arms so any jutsu he tries to do would just go out of control once it reaches his arms.
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I was thinking Talented + yin nature + the technique being fully maxed out would be enough to justify it. And since water ball isn't technically a canon jutsu anyways.
Also, I didn't mean that Sumio could do it signless when it's full size. Just that he can perform it easily and manipulate it more when he reduces the size enough. I was imagining something like palm or basketball size when I wrote that reply. More that he's practiced it so much that he can make it his own thing. I don't think it's so crazy compared to what some of the other builds can do, but I can dial it back for now if anons take issue with it.
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NTA but here https://youtu.be/NNv2RHR62Rs?list=RDNNv2RHR62Rs
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More than either of you have written in the past month btw
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>The Awakening (Leigan)
https://rentry.org/rcxtdxtb
Short backstory piece. A bit experimental honestly, the whole middle part isn't even remembered by Leigan other than bits and pieces.The complex was chainless when Leigan woke up, since I assume the other chains would disappear when he passed out, other than the permanent ones on his back. It's supposed to be strange and chaotic but there is an explaination I was just not sure where to put it or if it's even needed.
Not the last of his backstory, other flashbacks will happen in other pieces.
Now I can finish catching up.
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I hopefully didn't forget anything else. I should stop posting this stuff when sleep deprived but it just lines up that way a lot.
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NTA but here https://youtu.be/gKIJ69UyTqw?list=RDgKIJ69UyTqw
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>>97639050
Mcyoag is like having sex with handsome men( all anons are handsome) but then there is masturbating which is the opposite of an orgy.
Sex is when you include others in your writefag and everyone benefits, masturbating is when you only include your own build. What is the fun in participating in an orgy if youre just going to masturbate
In summary: i cannot really join the mp right now since i am busy wageslaving but i will try to buy a laptop so i can continue hanging out with anons and not rot all day.
I mean No offense to those who only includw theirs thoughbeit
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Any recent news from the locally sourced CYOA authors? marak anon? tower chud? city anon?
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Does anyone want to have their writefag converted into an audiobook just to see how it turns out?
I don't have anything but ideas right now so it might no work. I was thinking of getting different voices for the narrator and characters to make it feel almost like an audio drama.
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>>97639303
Yes and then we would have good relationship with another goddess, maybe a goddess of luck and theyd be like sisters. Then i would like to have a chef in the familia and then a former noble and an actual noble but he is fat and has a bad attitude so we must correct him. Then we would make character cards for our characters and a familia roster with a background for the familia. Itll be so much fun anon
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>>97639363
To be clear it can be rage at not being there and having to listen to anons brag about how cool their MP was, or being there but missing out on the most memorable parts, so anons are reminiscing about every character but yours
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>>97639415
Something something duality
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>>97639050
This has always been true. Its why every adventure is composed of two to three anons writing endlessly about their OCs, and a handful of frauds who don't know what to do, don't have time to do it if they did, and don't feel engaged by the guy writing 30 pages by himself, about himself, alone in the corner.
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>>97639445
Except for this shameless voyuer >>97639449 who likes to watch people masturbate in the corner
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>>97639455
I mean I just wanna respect what anons put effort into.
It was a neat little flashback, not that hard to read through. Would've liked to see a little more personality from Leigan but I at least know what his deal is now, so yeah it was a cool read
>>97639470
Me too, me too. I tried hard to keep it going but I couldn't do that forever. It's dead now. We live with the consequences of our actions
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>>97639493
Nah, JITE had its 4 month (or so) run. I wanted to do more, but at some point I was demotivated, and so was everyone else. Kohakuanon, Momoanon and I weren't enough to sustain everything. It had its time. I'd still like to finish that thing I was trying to write, but at this point I'd just finish it and keep it to myself for the closure factor because I realised people might not like it as much as I initially thought they would. Oh well, Naruto exists now, and Isekai Tournament too. I'm trying to write for both right now
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>RULES
just be a good sport :P
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only vibes with minimal thought
ranked within their tiers as well
kisui was in huge behind leigan until i saw the new pic
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>>97639809
Can we change Kisui's image to the new art I drew? Can we also change Nekomaru's image to this? I think this piece came out better than the first one but it's not necessary
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>>97639751
It is what it is. If the local schizos had left it alone, nostalgia and an update probably would have been enough to give it a chance. But after repeatedly dragging it through the mud, the nostalgia is mostly gone and the name is too tainted for anons to care about an update. Even the anons who would be open to it in spite of that likely aren't willing to get invested in something that'll just get drowned out in malicious shitposting until it dies an early death.
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>>97639835
nekomaru after borochimaru recruits kisui and they have a timeskip
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>>97639835
He's still short, thoughbeit. Even in my WIP writefag, he's shown as short. No need to move him up, he should be like Kid Goku height and when puberty hits it'll hit like a truck
>>97639859
I might have to take inspiration from this. Thanks anon
>>97639866
Orochimaru more like BOREochimaru (the Will of the Hero is too much for Nekomaru to want to go with him)
>>97639878
Are we actually gonna get a time skip at all?
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>>97639928
based, yurifags need to be put down
only yaoi harems can prosper here
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>>97639945
nigga deleted because of an extra only like it was the thing stopping his post from being taken seriously
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>>97639947
Yeah, I get you, "straight as a spaghetti noodle"
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yaoi harems are the future
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Sometimes, while shitposting, I worry that everyone can easily identify which builds are mine and connect my shitposting to them
Then I remember it doesn't matter, and carry on
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>>97639877
I don't really see it happening with any of them apart from Fox. Momika is a bit too smart to be taken advantage of like that, and she doesn't really want power from what we have seen so far, and Nana is too attached to her sensei so she wouldn't just disappear for power, maybe for money but not something vague.
Leigan and Kurayami are both escaped experiments with trust issues, the last thing they would want is to end up back in the hands some mad scientist, they are also both too paranoid for it even if it manifests differently. Also Kurayami seems to want fun rather than power, and Leigan is more focused on survival.
Fox instead may just get desperate enough if her fake sharingan technique makes no progress, especially if one of the kids awakens one and shows her up. Hell, Natsume is already halfway there.
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>>97639310
>tower chud?
I only work on Towerslop when I dislike and don't care to write for the current MPs, I'm selfish like that. In other words I was continuing to work on it until recently.
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Actually not me.
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>>97640171
fuark...
quick question though, how advanced is the technology in the less obvious settings? tower magica says it's 203X, but what about great guild, the default tower, etc? are they renaissance adjacent? early medieval? late medieval? mish mash where there's plate armor but no gunpowder weapons?
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>>97640208
Honestly I don't know? I guess these are the vibes I have for each
>The Tower (Default)
>Great Guild
>Expedition Society
Plate armor, firearms, no electricity but decently high medical knowhow. So maybe 1600-1700? Dunno if that's not fantastical feeling enough for anons.
>Gods' Game
>Tower Magica
>New World Tall Order
Contemporary, Gods' Game has a higher sci-fi vibe than the others though.
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Striped Like A Tiger! My Name is Nekomaru! (Nekomaru, Momika, Nana, Suzaku, Kisui, Myorin, minor appearances from Iwao, Koda, Ayane, Kosshi and Natsume)
https://rentry.co/wp6smxor
I didn't want to just write a Nekomaru solo piece, so I tried to put in a few extra people for this POV intro. You're free to make me kowtow 14 gorillion times AND cripple my dantian if I fucked up anyone's characterisation.
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>>97640651
Nah in all honesty what really hit me like crack was that all of the things people were saying at the time sounded pretty funny. The other day I was watching this anime called Hell's Paradise and it slowly hit me that it was loosely based on cultivation elements, so now cultivation is a little internal shitpost in my head. Also TBF Martial Path died too soon for me, I would've liked to see it continue
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>>97637916
Nice intro/prologue anon, although the line breaks were spaced a little awkwardly imo. It's hard to explain but I feel like if you saved the first skip to after the destruction and cutting to the figures above the rubble, it would have flowed better.
>>97640638
Good stuff! The budding connection between Nekomaru and Myorin was the highlight for me. I can also see the influence your Naruto binge is having in your fight scenes, but you kept the side comments snappy and worked them as characterization for each commenter, and the choreography was easy to keep up with, so I'd say it's a positive influence. For build specific feedback, Momika was in character, so your dantian is safe for now. After seeing how he uses nicknames on people he warms up to, she would start calling him Nyanko/Nyanko-chan to plant the idea that the feeling's mutual.
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>>97640638
Well, I feel like you're gonna have to kowtow... The test wasn't structured how I intended for it to be, and what I based the rankings on... In particular, the first stage was about testing all around athleticism, not only speed, and the second stage also wasn't supposed to put limits on what the students can use. I believe that was stated clearly in the prompt response given:
>a bunch of physical exercises, running, lifting stuff etc
>The kids can use non-taijutsu skills
She tested them to align her curriculum for them better, and I feel like this skews the vibe of what she plans to teach them, as that'd include weapon arts, and using taijutsu to setup their other skills. At this stage, she most certainly would want to see their weapon skills if they have them. Her not using her weapons would be excusable, but limiting what the kids can do just goes against the whole idea. Part of this likely stems from taking too many shortcuts, like wanting Nekomaru to go first in the second stage, and getting rid of the plushie immediately, but this could also be because you're greatly underestimating how vast the difference between the teachers and the kids is at this stage, and thus what she can safely allow them to do. This shouldn't be a point where the kids could threaten an A ranker with their skills whatsoever. I wouldn't bet on Nekomaru matching Myorin even in his trump card of speed given the rank difference and her skills, but if we assume she doesn't use active self-buffs in favour of Flicker, which isn't her speciality, then alright. However, the mention of light bruises and scratches even potentially having an effect on her with her Resilient Regeneration gives me a sneaking suspicion you didn't read into her build that well...
But the art is cool, and beyond that, which admittedly might feel like a lot, I like it.
Ironically, this writefag does feel a bit like that dead bird gift. I appreciate the sentiment, but the execution leaves a lot to be desired.
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>>97641297
>Ironically, this writefag does feel a bit like that dead bird gift. I appreciate the sentiment, but the execution leaves a lot to be desired.
lol
A lot of this can also be chalked up to my very limited Naruto experience. I really do NOT know what the power level is, so I was trying to make it sound like I was downplaying the impact of things to make it clear that Myorin *is* far ahead of everyone else, but I really can't tell what the difference is yet. I have like, less than 10 episodes down man
Okay, I am a guy that plays ball. What do I fix? Because frankly I value emotional writing more than anything else, but I won't let you be dissatisfied with this stuff and potentially make other anons mad too. Ehem ehem, wi-fi JITEs. Give me your instructions and I will post a proper V2, if that's what you and everyone else wants.
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Oh I'll also say that I was cross-referencing the Sunset story while I was writing this and that one only had the racing part, which was what I wanted to focus on for the plot beat of Nekomaru having to pace himself. One would think that with my heavy use of elipsis here, other parts of the test also happened, right? Maybe it wasn't clear, but I thought these stories were supposed to be POVs. I'm sure characters who are more related to strength will show off their other skills in other parts of the physical test, but what was relevant to Nekomaru was speed, so I only showed the laps around the training yard for that reason. It's not like Suzaku's homeroom class was only spent on introductions for a whole hour, was it?
I'll also ALSO say that the part with Nekomaru going first in the test wasn't done randomly. I know you said you wanted the characters to go in order of the most physically dependent first and the trickiest ones later, so that the latter can pick up on tricks. My logic was, Nekomaru is highly dependent on his speed and he doesn't have crazy genjutsu or anything, so I thought it'd make sense for him to go first. I guess I could've also asked you first, but it's a small detail that I can easily change.
>Her not using her weapons would be excusable, but limiting what the kids can do just goes against the whole idea.
I mean one would think a *taijutsu* test would be about *taijutsu*, right? But I see what you mean. Again, small detail. I can change that and have the fight just start a little more chill without Myorin taking away Stripes-san from the bat. That'd be okay
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>Best
Techniques derived from her bloodlines are her most potent, and Kosshi somewhat begrudgingly acknowledges this. Otherwise, she's fond of her Hair Control.
>Showing
She considers showing off the Byakugan's sensory abilities mostly pointless since they're well-know, and will state as much.
It's possible the teachers may be aware of her Shikotsumyaku, and it's rarity makes it mor worth showing, but she won't if there's any kind of audience. She's keeping it as under wraps as possible and isn't keen on revealing it to anyone who doesn't know already.
She has no qualms about doing a trick with her hair.
>Details
General Approach: doesn't see it as a chance to shock and impress since she's not interested in drawing attention in the first place and thinks of it as just another assignment. A lacking reaction would even be something of a relief to her. Use comes easily.
Shikotsumyaku: The way she's learned to use it is inherently brutish since it's partially modeled after her father's kenjutsu, but she's still smart about using it defensively and offensively.
Hair Control: She'd do something like shooting needles of hair at where a dummy's tenketsu would be.
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>>97641438
That's not true anon, if I didn't like Myorin I wouldn't waste a whole writefag on her. I just don't know much about Naruto, so the power level discrepancy is easy to explain and I'm still new to writing fights in that verse or showing people off very well outside of my own guy
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Man now I feel bad. I know another anon said those were nitpicks but I really didn't want to mess this up, I'll fix it if it would make for a better story
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Shouldn't I try to write something that everyone's happy with, though? If one anon is dissatisfied with how I treated their character I'm gonna want to fix it
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>>97641438
trvke
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>>97641484
It's nothing you did lmao.
>>97641472
More like some faggot posted the most insufferable shit ever and people are calling him out
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>>97641484
nta, but just focus on what you'd want. Would you want a thread where everyone always says nice things about everyone, or a thread where people are rewarded for voicing their discomfort when they feel it. There's no wrong answer per se. Just depends on what you want the thread to be like.
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would you rather have a thread where your effort is respected and people try to meet you in the middle or would you rather have a thread where everyone calls what you do dogshit over autistic nitpicks and then hits you with snide bullshit like
>I like the art, but the writefag's like a cat bringing a dead bird :)
>try and read my build next time mmkay?
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>>97641535
I do think people should be able to stand for what they believe in. It's just that I feel like my newcomer status when it comes to Naruto leading to things like this made me feel kinda bad, but if you guys think the writefag was fine I guess I can chill. I just wanted to avoid a wi-fi JITEs situation where a lot of people dislike the writefag's execution or inconsistencies and the writer does nothing about it
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You know, initially I wanted to take that comment in stride but it *is* kinda shitty to say. What the fuck?
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>>97641572
Kaoru anon's too much of an herbivore to really complain albeit-
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oh nevermind, I stand corrected
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So there are 3 main issues, and two of them can be patched with minor tweaks, example ways to do so, I'll list below. It may seem nitpicky, and maybe I'm overreading into it, but some details here alter the overall perception imo.
1. Limiting first part to the speed. The other elements, don't need to be shown, but one sentence as is excluded them:
> I’ll be calling up the fastest people first
Remove the speed from the order here, and just call it "most athletic" or something like that, and instead mention Nekomaru's speed when his name is called.
2. The no weapon or items clause. Remove that bit. You can throw in a part that they can bring whatever they want, but she might use them against them if you want foreshadowing. Then have her take the plushie from him once the sparring starts, possibly after an awkward first couple seconds where Nekomaru's social anxiety makes him unsure what to do.
3. The rank difference. There is a similar scenario inside the first 10 episodes actually, Kakashi's bell test: https://youtu.be/DIlVyL2AZCM?t=145 This one is likely the part that'd requires most rewrites, and my advice will be the vaguest. Rather than describing how Nekomaru puts Myorin on backfoot, at this point she's the one fully in control. She's essentially pushing him into and letting him display his skills, so she can assess him, and also give him a taste of what facing a shinobi is like. Hype up his talents, like his speed and natural instincts, but don't focus on how facing them is an issue for her. The part about the Resilient Regeneration is that it's a passive regen which in seconds fixes minor injuries, which is what he can inflict at this stage at most. Rather than a problem for her, you can use it as another way for her to let him display his skills. She can tank his attacks, so let him attack her.
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Since my response was slow, and you might have changed your mind, I'll understand, but I think shitposters are running wild rn.
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I'll admit, I don't like confrontation. But when someone else said it, it made me realise how much of a shitty comment that is. I like Myorin as a character, and I want to keep writing a heartfelt connection between her and Nekomaru, but I'm not gonna take this shit, anon.
Yeah I think I was a little too nice, in retrospect. I offered to rewrite an entire writefag after my efforts were compared to a dead fucking bird. Fuck that shit, I'm not gonna take this going forward. I can either work together with an anon to fix understandable discrepancies with respect, or you can go kick rocks. I appreciate the changes list, but you calling everyone who's pointing out your disrespect "shitposters" is also bullshit.
I'll go over this, and I'll see what little changes I can do, but I want you to listen to >>97641623 and understand that I actually put some fucking effort into writing, not just art. I know my art is pretty to look at, but my effort isn't a fucking dead bird
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>>97641615
that's also the thing, the writefag wasn't even yours
all this vicious white-knighting when the writer himself wasn't that offended is just weird. I promise you anon is a big boy who can take care of himself
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>>97641635
If you post a response on a public image board and I have a problem with it because it sounds like its coming from a massive faggot I'm gonna make fun of it
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>people are gaslighting Kaoru anon into being offended
I've been found out...
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Anons I can make my own decisions. I'm happy to collaborate with Myorin-anon as long as he respects me, I just don't want to get any sass for it (also I'm gonna have to recontextualise A LOT of the fight scene to make Myorin seem a lot more in control if I actually do this)
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I'm not offended, I just realised I shouldn't take the initial smarmyness. I can't just be a doormat
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NTA but surprisingly well. I'm glacially slow so don't expect anything for a long time (it'll be worse now that we're doing Nart), but progress is still going steady.
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>>97641632
If the dead bird was brought out of nowhere, I'd get the feeling of being disrespected, but given the context of the writefag's ending, I'd assume the not fully serious use of the expression would be clear, and for that reason, the use of it not inappropriate. The motivation for it, which would be my criticism of the issues I've mentioned itself, is in my opinion warranted, and as such can't be constituted as disrespect either. However, if you prefer to not receive any in the future, I'll try to keep it in mind.
I'm not calling everyone a shitposter, but at least to me, it's pretty obvious a fair bit of them did show up between my two posts, and continue to after.
As such, no, I won't apologize, as it would be currently insincere.
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If Myorin-anon chooses to understand that his comments were kinda shitty to me I'll be happy to meet him half-way with his demands. But I want to hear it from him. I'm trying to watch WWE right now
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I think standing up for myself isn't necessarily cringe anon, I'm not gonna take some shit after spending 3-4 days on a writefag
>>97641734
Look man, I got why you said that, but it's the kind of thing that, ironically enough, is also not a good thing to say when someone's spent a few days to give you free art of your OC and feature your OC prominently in a story that took them a few days to write. You may think I didn't think enough about Myorin, but I did. I like her. And I also think that if you used that specific jokey comparison to sum up my thoughts about the writefag, you clearly didn't bring in enough respect compared to the intent I placed on writing and drawing.
Here's what we're gonna do: I'll change the things that I find easiest to change, but I'm not gonna rewrite the entire fight to make Myorin seem 100% in control all the time (because also that's like... not very good for drama, at least in my mind). The details about the nature of the test, the rules and the order of the people being brought in are fair game, but I won't exert myself further than that when the respect isn't entirely mutual in this situation.
That said, I have nothing against you and I hope we can both move past this moving forward because I do really like Myorin as a character and I want to keep writing about her.
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>>97641761
I genuinely think you need to grow up.
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>>97641771
I don't see how acknowledging that I spent time to draw someone else's character entirely for free and demanding a little respect for it from that person after my writefag was compared to a dead bird is glorifying myself
>>97641775
A person that just wants to not get shat on with a smile I guess
I think I'm just gonna watch WWE and come back to this later. No point in losing sleep over this
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>>97641809
very organic posts Myorin anon
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>>97641816
Nah we've had a ton of decent conversation over the past few days, it's just easy to remember this kind of stuff because it boils the blood a little. It's also easy for legitimate posters and shitposters to catch each other in the crossfire so sometimes leaves really sour grapes.
This is probably going to be brought up a few times over the next few threads, the best move is to not acknowledge it. What's needed to have been said has been said.
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>>97641829
Welcome to 4chan as a whole. As soon as you hit people hard enough, they just deflect like >>97641767
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>>97634276
Dogenanon here, damn that's a lot of responses. I'll be saving all of these for later, there's a Part 1 to get through before touching any of this, and some of them may need to be quick-fire, but I'll try my best to catch them all.
Some questions have turned up so to answer them;
>Dogen would be creating a barrier/seal around himself and the user so they can show off as much as they want without threatening the others, it'll be in an open gymnasium area to not damage anything precious
>He'd be more than willing to make the barrier opaque/immune to sensory intrusion if people wanted to hide theirs, he doesn't agree with it but recognizes he's teaching shinobi, not monks, and some shinobi live by keeping their best techniques hidden
>He'll be willing to supply any materials the person needs to show their technique - dummies, himself as a target, tools, etc. (though Nana forgetting to ask for swords might work for the scene)
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I don't expect anyone in a 4channel general to be well adjusted socially so can you guys at least keep it goal oriented? call each other dogshit and dead bird all you want but this could have been settle with a simple
>yo faggot can you change this
>yes/no, you whiny bitch
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>>97641764
>not very good for drama
Nta, but I think you are exagerating a bit if you think a test done by a professional teacher several ranks up from a kid that barely knows what he's doing needs drama. That's not really applicable in this situation.
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>>97641764
I don't think one really "chooses" to understand, but I indeed do not truly understand the "shittiness" of my stance yet. If I did, I'd apologize, but I unfortunately currently still don't, and I don't plan to make a habit of apologizing when I don't believe I'm in the wrong, so unless you explain it better some other time, I won't do it.
While effort itself is admirable, the results matter, and for me, in this case, those weren't good. You say you thought enough about the character, if so, then I can't quite understand why you altered those first two points I've mentioned from the way the test was described in the prompt, and ignored one of her core skills.
As for control of the fight, I guess that's preferences, but I don't believe Kakashi's bell test would benefit from making the teacher struggle in it (a minor spoiler for Naruto:especially considering that it'd lessen the effect when it's rerun in Shippuden, similarly here, if they were to spar in the future, this lessens the ability to display Nekomaru's progress.)
Reading the writefag, I liked parts of it (but didn't go into detail on those much, partially due to char limit, partially just my nature, I could expand on it some day if you want), but the issues mentioned left a sour aftertaste.
Especially since in your initial post you invited criticism in a humorous way:
>You're free to make me kowtow 14 gorillion times AND cripple my dantian if I fucked up anyone's characterisation.
I'm surprised that you got offended afterwards when it was provided.
I didn't expect you to provide rewrites, but then you offered to do so, so I provided my input as you requested. You most certainly don't have to do the rewrites if you don't want to.
And just in case, these were my only posts in this discussion: >>97641297 >>97641603 >>97641734. I feel like other Anons interjecting might alter how you view my stance.
I'm gonna go now too. Have fun watching WWE.
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>>97641962
>and I don't plan to make a habit of apologizing when I don't believe I'm in the wrong, so unless you explain it better some other time, I won't do it.
this should help clear things up for you >>97641553
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>>97641990
trvke, that alienated me a little bit too
I get what he meant but the play isn't "you shouldn't spit on me BECAUSE I'm a drawfag" it's "you shouldn't spit on me because that makes you come off as an insufferable bitch"
>>97641995
you don't?
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>>97641995
What else is there?
>>97642004
In general if he just went "just respect me, ok?" it would have been fine. No need to bring anything else up.
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>>97639471
Time to catch up.
>Would've liked to see a little more personality from Leigan
Fair, it was less of an intro and more of a falshback so it wouldn't have been accurate tho. His personality changed a lot from back then, he used to not talk at all.
>>97640064
Thanks, I always worry I'm making things too confusing, at least it's readable.
>>97640548
Many of the kids escaped because they were farther from the epicenter, Leigan is fully convinced he killed them all just because he didn't know how many there were in the first place. It's been like 5 years so it's not as bad now but it still weights on him, he feels particularly bad about the fact he didn't even know who they were.It was an unexpected feedback loop that nobody was prepared for, the chains absorb chakra, more chains are made, the chains search for more chakra, repeat. The reaction ended when there was no more chakra, which is also why the complex didn't explode like the researchers said it would, Leigan drained the main power supply, that's where most of the chains came from.
>>97641158
>the line breaks were spaced a little awkwardly imo.
I was worried about that, and you're probably right, but I was trying to put a sharp divide between what Leigan was there for and what he wasn't there for. Like a fever dream, it's supposed to be out of place, but I didn't know how out of place I should have put it.
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Okay I'm done watching WWE, surprisingly the Elimination Chamber ending was decent. WrestleMania might be okay after all this year
>>97642004
Well it's not that I demand respect *because* I draw, if I didn't I'd like to be respected too. But Myorin-anon specifically outlined that he liked the drawing so I felt like I was being taken for granted there, like my writefags can be disrespected but you'll still compliment me for my art? Still I hope you get that I didn't mean it that way anon
>I'm surprised that you got offended afterwards when it was provided.
That's not because of the criticisms and more because I felt disrespected, anon. I'm still happy to work with you. As per the shittiness of the situation, basically I just felt like the way you said things was shitty. Like, you were even joking about the dead bird thing and initially I didn't think much of it but I realised you were being very unserious about something you could've been more understanding about.
Anyway, thanks for the advice about Kakashi's test I think. As I said, I'll do the rewrites that I find easiest to do, because as much as I wanted to stand up for myself I'm also not gonna be so much of a meathead as to not meet you half-way.
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>>97642084
I'm at least having Cobalt and Harry meetup next writefag after I put the finishing touches on my cringeslop.
I know Riku anon said that he would start at the Stitched Lostbelt, but would he mind if I just had him start in Cursed Tokyo if he isn't in the middle of writing anything? Or have him enter it even if he started in SL. Saku would probably be there too, and then we can move over to Midgar and Raccoon City to pick up the others. Not sure if Llewellyn anon said where he was.
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>>97630274
I just had a thought, how do you get to the Isekai Badlands? Because from how the map is made there are clear "bridges" to go places, but none connect to the badlands. Do you just jump off? If so how do you get back?
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>>97640638
I'll put in my thoughts for Nana, which I'd say were pretty good! I do like the slight unearned bitterness she has towards Nekomaru. The tiny nitpick with that is that I'd imagine she'd need more than just the first introduction to get there, but she'd definitely find him particularly annoying and embarrassing to watch not that long after he shows his normal energetic and socially oblivious self. I dig the small hint of a rivalry (one-sided, but still) building. I'll shift around her attitude more on that in my own writefag, which I am procrastinating too much on.
>>97641855
>though Nana forgetting to ask for swords might work for the scene
It's in character for her! She doesn't raise her hand in class when she has questions, she doesn't think to ask for help from teachers, and so she wouldn't ask for swords to work on her jutsu. She'd have imagined that Dogen wanted her to make earth swords from scratch and would make a fool of herself trying to do an application of the jutsu she's never tried before.
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>>97642102
I don't know if that's a good or a bad thing. I'm gonna assume good because winning a battle is a good thing most of the time. Uuuuh I don't know anon there's no point in getting mad at people over the internet when I can just explain myself
>>97642106
I'd feel a little eh about everyone starting in the same place, but honestly? I feel a little lost about how to start my own Isekai train. Go ahead with that, I'd appreciate that little head start to get me going right after.
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>>97642106
>I'm at least having Cobalt and Harry meetup
Good to know.
> and then we can move over to Midgar and Raccoon City to pick up the others
That kinda lines up with what I assumed for Lucas too, he doesn't even know there is a tournament until he fullfills a bounty by chance or runs into a team member.
>Not sure if Llewellyn anon said where he was.
I vaguely remember a conversation of meeting up with Six, so maybe Racoon City. But is he really anywhere? With his power I think it's more likely to find him by falling out of bounds and getting caught up in his domain.Which now that I think about it would be a strangely easy thing to do for Lucas, with mirror powers and all.
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If you're around Koda anon, are you working on anything right now? I'm thinking about starting on my next writefag in a few days (Hibiki and Koda move into their room, introduce themselves to each other, have some issues with housing Hibiki's Owl and Eeki in the same room, maybe something with Sumio since he and Koda already met), but if you're working on something I'd rather wait till it's out so I can get some more examples of his dialogue/how he acts around his classmates.
Also if you're already writing the dorm piece feel free, I haven't started yet so it won't affect me.
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>>97642071
I got distracted watching someone else play through RE9...when will one of our builds fight a Tyrant and blow it up with a rocket launcher while spitting a one liner...
But I'm working on a smaller initial thoughts chart for each build and probably going to just bring in the threat analysis/matchup thing I made before into it as well.
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>>97642228
Genuinely excuses.Its like one point and you get two for our rank ontop of the 10/one free item.
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>>97642229
>spoilerProbably never because all of them have way stronger attacks than a mere rocket launcher. Other than Cobalt, but he has the Monster Eevee.
As for one liners I guess Harry, Cobalt and Lucas would be likely to do that. Six feels more like the unrestrained shittalking type and Riku seems more respectful? Glitch man and The Doctor are more silent.
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>>97642267
Riku’s all about le honour and le pride. He’s the kind of guy to risk it all on one move even if it may kill him. That’s because they do that all the time in Saint Seiya, they’re like “don’t do the Super Mega Punch of Death, it’ll take up all your energy! You’ll die!” and both guys will be like “I’ll use my Ultra Hyper Punch of Doom too! We’ll BOTH put it all on the line!” and then both guys will still be alive with magic bullshit 3 episode later like nothing happened
I’d like to add that I made some changes to the Nekomaru intro as Myorin-anon detailed. I didn’t change too much of the main fight because I’d have to do far too many things but I listened to the criticisms. I hope most of all is well nowp
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>>97642267That's easy enough, everyone knows that all Resident Evil bosses are only inconvenienced and mutate from damage, only able to be put down with their conceptual weakness to heavy munitions.Speaking of the Doc, is he even still around. I don't recall them talking about their starting zone or even coming back to update their build.
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>>97642289
>Riku’s all about le honour and le pride.
Glad to see I read him right.
>and then both guys will still be alive with magic bullshit 3 episode later like nothing happened
Ah yes, I remember that. It was such a strange anime.I kinda want to read the manga now.
Does Riku have metaknowledge?
>>97642291
>spoiler 1Of course, scripted fights are probably part of the challenge. Kinda defeats the point of having powers but it is in the spirit of the bounty hunter. If we are talking conceptual then Riku and Lucas are literally made for this, that's what the Discharge foundation resonates with.
>spoiler 2He may have given up, or switched to naruto. Maybe he's just busy.
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>>97642321
It's up to you, the cyoa is pretty flexible. It depends on what kind of person you want Riku to be before the tournament, what he watched and liked doing. Considering his choice of powers it makes sense he at least know Saint Seiya since he had to target it for Context Out to take effect, the rest is just up to what you would consider interesting. There are no real rules against how much metaknowledge a character should have, and it's kinda the incentive of picking Drop In instead of Extra.
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>>97642344
>it's kinda the incentive of picking Drop In instead of Extra
NTA but every origin has metaknowledge, or at the very least knows that they are a tournament contestant with the options they chose, if they didn't choose Amnesia. The other stuff just decides what state you drop into the match as. Drop-In's benefit, besides the bonus point, is that unlike the other origins where people have knowledge of you through fabricated memories or body snatching, you are a complete ghost to this world, only coming into it and existing right when the Tournament starts.
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>>97642368
I thought we were using Extra as the native option for this run? Someone already talked about it.If that's not the case it would have a pretty big effect on Lucas. My assumption was that it would be total Amnesia because he has no memories of his life in the world and being a native he would have no memories of the modern world either. The amnesia drawback otherwise doesn't touch the rest of the memories, only the ones related to the tournament.
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>>97642390
If it was, it must've not made it onto the rules, and I'm not sure how many people were choosing Drop-In/Extra with that in mind as I think it was mostly considering the free point or access to a local power system from the start.I don't think anyone is going to be against Lucas being extra forgetful though. Not like people are going to grab their pitchforks for making a drawback being even more impactful.
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>>97642161
I'm not really working on anything right now so go ahead
Just a slight modification I'd make. Although Koda often has Eeki with him, he's not there 100% of the time since he remains a summoning. But looking forward to seeing your piece
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What sort of hierarchy exists in Naruto?
Do we have noble families, royalty, and a warrior class?
Can anyone use chakra, or just those born with the spark for magic?
What sorts of gods, afterlife, and religions exist?
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>>97643082
>What sort of hierarchy exists in Naruto? Do we have noble families, royalty, and a warrior class?
Noble clans are functionally that. It's Daimyo > Kage > Ninjas > Normies. 5 main nations have a daimyo. Normie nations have no daimyo, their kage is effectively their ruler.
>Can anyone use chakra, or just those born with the spark for magic?
Everybody.
>What sorts of gods, afterlife, and religions exist?
You go to the pure land when you die.
>but what if I was evil-
You go to the pure land when you die. Magic ninjas can summon your spirit at will btw. Fuck you.
Cults exist to Gods like Jashin, who may or may not exist.
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>>97643082
Countries have daimyo. Land of the Moon apparently has a king instead. Village heads are essentially military generals, but a daimyo from one country can and will hire from villages outside their country. A village is also generally run by a council and not just the head. Clans generally satisfy the roles of nobles and shinobis as a whole are a warrior class.
Everyone inherently has access to it, but use requires training and not everyone is guaranteed to have any real talent for it even then.
There's the Shinigami and the Pure Land. There are monks, shrines, priestess, etc. so you can assume shinto and Buddhist type stuff but religion isn't really touched on beyond Jashin cult stuff. Sage of Six Paths is essentially ninja Buddha but generally talked about as a mythical figure/something to aspire and not depicted as being worshipped.
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>>97642071
>Llewellyn
I'm still around, just busy with real life. I would like to write something though. Upon further thought, I've realized he's a shoe-in for starting in Athletic Pantheon. All those classic glitches to snatch up... even if he doesn't remember that now.
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>>97642344
I think he wouldn’t know about everything, so at most Saint Seiya, maybe Pokémon and DBZ, he wasn’t a super weeb so he didn’t know much else. I envision the person Riku was before the tournament as someone who didn’t have much to live for, maybe he was in an orphanage most of his life and never got adopted, or some kind of correctional facility. Either way, someone who would embrace Truck-kun and choose not to come back.
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